PROMPT #487- SLANG WORDS AND ODD PHRASES FROM YOUR DAY


Today we’ll play with the words we use. Where normally we adhere to the king’s English, sometimes words go off course in a weird or slang sort of way. Maybe there’s a word or phrase you use that fits that bill. Write a slang based poem.

WALT’S WORDS

SAY THE MAGIC WORDS

A poetic word magician
performing freaky feats of fiction.
amazing magic micro poetry,
ponderous prose prestidigitation,
pulling rare bits from my hat,
tricks and gags, and all of that.
Alliterative illusions illustrated here,
as I make slang based limericks appear.
Literary magic, that’s my schtick,
You can choose my words, take your pick.


© Walter J Wojtanik - 2024

MARIE’S SLANGUAGE

Closet Disco Queen

I was a band nerd.
Not a rah rah. Not a geek.
And not a surfer.

That wasn’t my bag.
But I liked walkin’ the beach
and catchin’ some rays.

I wasn’t a drag,
but not all show and no go.
Like, can you dig it?

I was no brick house.
If I stuck out my tongue, I
looked like a zipper.

Not a dancin’ queen.
Didn’t have the moves, ya know?
(Just keepin’ it real.)

© Marie Elena Good 2024

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Responses

  1. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    THE OLD COCKNEY

    I once knew a bloke who was broke;
    he would bum all the fags he could smoke.
    But the blighter had style:
    he would leave with a smile
    in a lorry he’d trimmed in baroque.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      HA! Good one, Bill! 

      Interesting side note: My maiden name is Fagnano (pronounced fun-yawn-oh}. My dad was called Fag when he was young, and it stuck for most friends and family. His nieces and nephews called him Uncle Fag. Even his doctor called him Uncle Fag. :D Most nowadays only know this term as it referred to gay people, and don’t know it was originally a reference to cigarette butts (or cigarettes). 

      Fun poem!!

    2. janetrcarnahan Avatar
      janetrcarnahan

      A fun read, William, I always enjoy your limericks!

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      I enjoyed reading this, William.

  2. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Marie, this is so different for you, I fell down laughing. Wonderful!

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Thanks, Bill! It was fun to write!

  3. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Anybody who can plant “prestidigitation” in the garden is a word magician indeed.. Bravo, Walt.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Indeed! And I had to look it up. ;) Great poem, Pard!

  4. Daniel Paicopulos Avatar
    Daniel Paicopulos

    Young and Foolish

    Recalling when I’d pull an all-nighter,

    thinking this might make me appear brighter,

    but it it was all just a joke,

    and at test time I’d choke,

    a still-stupid, tired young blighter.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      First I have to say I’m so thankful to be able to see you out here. Having no connection on FB and Messenger is such a bummer. :( 

      This poem is a testament to many back then, I’m sure. Well written, friend. Please take care!

      1.  Avatar
        Anonymous

        I have actually made it back but in a very limited manner, restricting my information and restricting who can see me. Trying to set up two factor sign in as well but Facebook is making it difficult

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          Ugh. I would think FB would want to make that an easy setup. Hang in there. 

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Ah, yes. Been there, done that.

    3. janetrcarnahan Avatar
      janetrcarnahan

      I enjoyed your poem, Daniel! Yes, those all-nighters were fun and, at times, necessary! Well done and groovy! 😉

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Good one, Daniel!

  5. Mike Bayles Avatar
    Mike Bayles

    Hanging Out for the Summer

    I was back home for break

    just hanging out, laying low.

    My friends and I would

    play tunes in the car

    and the world was ours

    as we cruised through the town.

    We’d talk and complain

    about summer jobs

    and I mentioned dates

    at college when I was

    trying to get on the right thing

    always my dream

    finding love

    when there were distant wars.

    I had a deferment and a high

    draft lottery number

    so I was saved

    while drama played out

    every day in D.C.

    After a hard day

    of moving stock

    in a warehouse

    I’d be with friends

    at dusk and the world shimmered.

    Far out, I’d say.

    *Get On The Right Thing” Paul McCartney and Wings- Red Rose Speedway

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Great poem. Especially, for me, “finding love when there were distant wars.” 

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Love that last line; last word.

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      This flows so smoothly, that the slang is woven right in.

  6. janetrcarnahan Avatar
    janetrcarnahan

    ONCE I HEARD THE WORD

    let’s use slang
    Dang
    here’s our group
    let’s just hang

    who else is here
    and just itchin’
    to say and hear
    What is truly bitchen

    head to the beach
    Surf’s up
    how many waves can we reach
    What’s sup

    catch some sun
    Bagging rays
    Let’s commune, we’re done
    only the cool stays

    watching volleyball
    Can you dig it
    Join us, have a ball
    You and your beach chair, here sit

    a total thrill
    Far Out
    such freedom then
    without a doubt

    enjoying life,
    happy as can be
    no hassles no strife
    Who’s not feeling groovy

    (c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2024

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Fun one, Janet! Isn’t this a fun prompt?! :D

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      So nice to see slang that comprises actual words.

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      In the groove, Janet!

  7. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    Walt, your poem was till pretty smooth and will some cool words! Marie, I love the “disco queen reference, and I ain’t no brick house was HILARIOUS!!

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Gigglegiggle. Thanks, Benjamin! It was fun to write! :D

  8. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

    Boyfriend of the Seventies

    My boyfriend booked in his MGB.
    He was bummed out when he couldn’t be with me.
    He burnt rubber that was just his way.
    I didn’t have bread, so he had to pay.
    He was no dweeb. He was cool.
    He was a hunk in our small high school.
    We went together four years of our past.
    We had fun making out, but we didn’t last.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Sounds like you still have a soft spot for MGBs.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Speaking of writing different from the poet’s norm! You and I both did for this prompt! :D Fun one, Connie!

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Good one, Connie!

  9. Tara Knight Avatar
    Tara Knight

    Cake had a
    different meaning
    when I was
    a young girl
    now I think twice when I say
    ”Wow, look at that cake!”

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Never heard of cake as a slang word, other than “that was a piece of cake!” You taught me something new!

      1. Tara Knight Avatar
        Tara Knight

        Thanks for reading! I credit all I “know” to my teenager lol

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Still blotto to me…..

      1. Tara Knight Avatar
        Tara Knight

        Thanks for reading this silly one According to the youth of today having “ cake” means you have a nice bottom

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Ha! That was a fun read.

      1. Tara Knight Avatar
        Tara Knight

        Thanks🤣

  10. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Tidbits of Gossip

    What did you think when you met her?
    Oh, she’s chill. No worries there.

    Now you don’t have to chill out,
    you can just be chill.

    You feel me?

    Anyway, what did you think
    of her dress?
    Oh, it was Drip!

    Yeah? I thought it was a bit promish looking.
    I hear she’s seein’ some back door man.
    Better watch out for his wife. I hear she
    is all up in his face.

    LOL

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      So funny reading of these slangs from different eras! Enjoyed this one, Sara!

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Marie!

    2. Tara Knight Avatar
      Tara Knight

      very fun!!

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Tara!

    3. William preston Avatar
      William preston

      I must be dead; I’ve never heard of most of those. Fun read anyway.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Some of them are really new.

  11. janetrcarnahan Avatar
    janetrcarnahan

    Enjoyed both your poems Walt and Marie! Great fun and well done! I see we had some similar expressions, Marie Elena! Dang, that was groovy!! 🙂

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Outa sight!

  12. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    YOU COULDN’T FIGHT IT

    Doctor Seuss was not in a gang
    but his name was a kind of a slang
    for, pronounced like “rejoice,”
    most folks said, in loud voice,
    that it sounded like “swoose,” so go hang.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      HA! Good one, Bill!

  13. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Walt, I love ‘pulling rare bits from my hat,

    Had to look. up that rather lengthy ‘P’ word.

    Marie, I love everything about this poem, especially the title.

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