INFORM POET – TRIQUINT

Triquint is a poetry form which consists of 3 verses of 5 lines each. Lines 3 and 4 of verse 1 (Refrain) repeat in verses 2 and 3. The declining syllable count for each stanza is 9, 7, 5, 3, 1 and has an aaAAb rhyme scheme.

WALT’S TRIQUINT:

SILENT ECHOES

He heard her whispered call as he slept,
into his mind she had crept.
He had to accept
she had stepped.
Gone!

When the sadness got so strong, he wept,
it made him feel so inept.
He had to accept
she had stepped.
Done!

How he wished that he could intercept,
such a roving heart, windswept.
He had to accept
she had stepped.
None!

© Walter J Wojtanik – 2019

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Responses

  1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Franklin

    In honor of have a heart for a chained dog week . . .

    He barks greetings and you offer treats
    Eagerly he trots to eat
    Six feet. . .eight. . . defeat!
    He retreats
    Chain

    He lazes under the summer heat
    Till clouds form over his seat
    Six feet. . . eight. . .defeat!
    He retreats
    Rain

    He waits for his master but he cheats
    Footsteps made by children’s feet
    Six feet. . .eight. . .defeat!
    He retreats
    Pain

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Spot on

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        🙂 Thanks, William

    2. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Truly wonderful, Darlene.

    3. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Oh my. Yes.

  2. Earl Parsons Avatar
    Earl Parsons

    This looked easy on the surface, but was actually quite a challenge. For one verse, no problem, but tying 3 together takes a bit of finagling. Nevertheless, I do love the challenge. Thanks.

    The Decision

    One important decision we make
    Before the day we don’t wake
    We wait at The Gate
    For our fate
    Fly!

    The signals were clear to formulate
    The one choice we had to make
    We wait at The Gate
    For our fate
    Why?

    Far be it from me to speculate
    Read God’s mind or contemplate
    We wait at The Gate
    For our fate
    My!

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Challenge isn’t the half of it.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        The dwindling word count was the hard point for me. And so many phrases that came to mind were even numbered! Well done, pointing us all to that ultimate decision we all must make.

        1. purplepeninportland Avatar
          purplepeninportland

          I agree with Darlene. Good job, Earl. I had problems with the dwindling syllable count as well.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Great work! I have to admit I haven’t tried yet. I get intimidated by some of these forms. This one, included. But I should really work at it!

  3. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    No Accident

    Accidental death is what they’ve ruled
    She said they were being fooled
    Victim was bejeweled
    Perp had tools
    Took!

    A little kitten began to mewl
    followed them around the pool
    Victim was bejeweled
    Perp had tools
    Look!

    In kitten’s paw behold, minuscule
    diamond earring, search the school
    Victim was bejeweled
    Perp had tools
    Crook!

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Dig dem rhymes!

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Cats make great sleuths.

        1. purplepeninportland Avatar
          purplepeninportland

          Sure do. They have the time and patience.

      2. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Gee, tanks William!

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Mighty impressive!

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Marie!

  4. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    DESIDERATA

    A wild bird nests in a gravel pit;
    only it knows the best fit,
    and may God permit
    to let it
    be.

    If a caged bird pines to more than flit,
    one must loose it for its grit
    and, may God permit,
    to let it
    flee.

    If a man should have but little wit,
    one must excuse him to twit.
    And may God permit
    to let it
    free.

    1. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      I like the topic you used for this, William.

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        Yep, and great work.

  5. Earl Parsons Avatar
    Earl Parsons

    The Play

    In the beginning we have no say
    Where we’ll end up that first day
    Our plan is His way
    If we play
    Womb!

    Ours is the power to choose our way
    Choice to refuse or obey
    Our plan is His way
    If we play
    Tomb!

    This life we live will soon pass away
    No second chance or replay
    Our plan is His way
    If we play
    Boom!!