PROMPT #187 – WINNING AND LOSING

I have been dealing with loss lately. So we’ll purge that from my system once and for all, and the best we can with this prompt. Write about something or someone you’ve lost. Or write the converse, something you’ve found or gained or won. Don’t lose sleep over writing a winning poem!

SARA’S POEM:

LOST AND FOUND

My sister and I are unhappy
each time Father’s Day rolls around.  We have recently
added Mother’s Day.  We imagine
what our parents would say,
today, about the upcoming election
and general chaos.  Both were
politically involved.
Today in Manhattan, we celebrated
my Aunt Sylvia’s ninety-seventh birthday.
My cousin and I found each other
again after years.  Nothing like a reunion
with Italian food and chocolate
blackout cake.  We remember
with tears, those we have loved
and lost, but we smile and feel lucky
about those we still have.

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WALTER’S POEM:

RESURRECTED

The phoenix rising,
back from the dead.
Lazarus called,
he wants his life back.
Lost in the depths
of a broken spirit,
left in the lurch
with much more to say.
You stand in silence,
wishing for the return
of your sanity, and
your security, and
everything else you’ve lost
or leaves you feeling empty;
dead from the floor up.
The randomness of words
tossed together with ease
and flair, brings your voice
from deep within you and
gives cause to express
every heartfelt pang,
poem and passion,
delivering your work
to an appreciative audience,
offering peace and
confidence to your lifeless
rhyme. Infusing your heart
and soul with the breath
of a million soft sighs,
for the poet has found
his promise and drive.
Once again alive.
Resurrected.

(C) Walter J. Wojtanik – 2016

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  1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
    http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    Both poems are gorgeous. Walt: I’m glad you have your words back!

    1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Thank you, Vivienne! No more glad than I!

    2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Walt and Sara, loved your leads on this prompt. Certainly parents and words are treasures lost and found in most poets’ hearts.

      1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
        Walter J. Wojtanik

        Thanks Damon. Mine will be gone 30 and 10 this Christmas. Their influence still lingers and their love is still felt! I thank God for that!

  2. Marie Elena Avatar
    Marie Elena

    Sara: So glad you were reunited with your cousin. What better than Italian food! Chocolate blackout? I’ve never heard of it, but oh the very sound of it. 🙂

    Both of you lost parents too soon in life. I’m so sorry … and for this most recent loss of yours, Walt. I pray for you, your wife, and your gorgeous girls.

    Walt: your poetry always strikes a chord. And that’s what it’s all about. ❤

    1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      And would that chord be a Q# (Q sharp)? Yes, That’s what it’s about, use our muse to touch something deep within each other!

  3. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

     
     
    IN MY SCRAPBOOK

    I used to think in the photo
    sometimes your eyes
    would blink, your lips
    tremble slightly.
    I would stare hard and long,
    Waiting for miracles,
    for you to wave
    your hand at me.

    In dusky light, in morning sun,
    I stared away,
    pretending life
    had never changed,
    that death had failed to conquer you,
    that you had found
    a place to hide
    far from Death’s wrath.

    I told myself to keep the faith.
    You would return,
    absent yourself
    from the spring scene
    of that photo, leave behind trees
    and your sidewalk,
    and suddenly
    come back to who

    you were to me,
    father and friend,
    not a snapshot anymore, not
    old memories
    poured into this broken heart,
    not a shadow
    but flesh and bone.

    #

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Understood

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      “Pretending life had never changed.” This says it all, doesn’t it? Well done, Sal.

    3. lswenski Avatar
      lswenski

      So beautifully written, as always Sal, and heartbreakingly true.

    4. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Wonderful and lasting tribute, Sal! No matter how distant in time they are, we recall the flesh and bone person!

    5. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Oh to have the flesh and bone father back… what I would ask and say and do… beautiful longing Sal.

  4. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

     
     
    DON’T BOTHER THE BLACK BELTS

    In Warsaw, a lass was accosted
    by a lecher whose locks were all frosted.
    He enticed with biscotti;
    she knew her karate,
    so she gave him a zloty and lost it.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Had to google zloty. 😀 Lovin’ the creative take on the prompt!

    2. lswenski Avatar
      lswenski

      Absolutely love it!

    3. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Ah Popolsku! Funny limerick!

    4. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Ha! Had to look up zloty too. Fun limerick.

  5. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Walt, for me your poem moves poetry beyond practice and discipline to be a living thing.

    1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Another pursuit of a poet, to breathe life into mere words. If I accomplished that here, then I’ve done my job. Thanks for that comment, William.

  6. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Sara, for me your poem crerates a vision of a dinner by candlelight. In my case it’s a seder I used to see through the dining-room window but the ambience is the same. Wonderful.

  7. Marie Elena Avatar
    Marie Elena

     
     
    Loss can be peculiar
    Sometimes trading nothing
    For something

    1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      The Toledo Poetic Dynamo strikes again! Love this in its brevity and message.

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        Wow … thanks much, Pard!

        1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
          Walter J. Wojtanik

          You’re welcome. And now you’re labeled for life! 😀

    2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Marie, so true… and said so succinctly. Nice.

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        Thank you!

  8. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

     
     
    LIMBURGER

    Some cheeses
    grow better with age
    but this cheese
    does not please;
    as it ages, it rages
    and the stomach turns.

    1. lswenski Avatar
      lswenski

      I agree, love cheese can’t stomach the limburger! Cute!

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      HA!!

    3. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      You said a nose full, William!!

    4. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      oh yes… not a cheese I’m enamored to.

  9. lswenski Avatar
    lswenski

     
     
    Take Backs

    I long for the time when we were small
    when sisters biggest fights involved a ball,
    who got the front seat or the red popsicle,
    who had to dry the dishes or set the table.
    I wish “no take backs” still involved a toy trade
    instead of the words that can now forever keep us apart.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Oh, Linda … so much heart in this. And ache.

      1. lswenski Avatar
        lswenski

        Thank you Marie!

    2. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      This is the toughest barrier to scale. I’ve been in that dilemma and know what you’re speaking of. Stay strong, my friend!

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Linda, you’ve pictured well this angst made deeper by memories of simpler cares. Well done friend.

  10. lswenski Avatar
    lswenski

     
     
    Losing It

    I am the Queen of Crazy!
    My throne is my recliner
    my scepter is a computer mouse.
    I demand complete nonsense in my kingdom.
    I rule with jokes and laughter.
    No Laws or militia allowed.
    I have to admit though,
    chaos reigns.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      HAHAHA! Such a creative take on the prompt!

    2. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      I love when it rains chaos and dogs! Smiles here, Linda!

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Ha what fun! Recliner queens (and kings) have all power… within their limited reign and reach.

  11. lswenski Avatar
    lswenski

     
     
    Lost My Mind

    It has to be here somewhere!
    I had it just before.
    Don’t try to help me find it:
    I’ll lose it even more.

    I’ll get it back together,
    I’ve done it in the past.
    I’ll be quite sane tomorrow,
    but it will never last.

    Of all the things I’ve searched for
    this one eludes me most,
    mental instability
    haunts me like a ghost.

    Oh look! I think I found it,
    a spark of sanity;
    Though I’m more fun without it,
    I think you will agree.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Great sense of humor about it all. I’m right there with ya!

    2. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      🙂 thanks for the laughter.

    3. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Robin Williams called it that “little spark of madness”. We all carry that within us, Linda. Expressed so well!

    4. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Linda, love this frantic short-lined search. Vague panic. Loved it.

    5. lswenski Avatar
      lswenski

      Thank you all very much for allowing me to vent my silliness!

      1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
        Walter J. Wojtanik

        Everyone’s silliness needs venting from time to time. Otherwise this place will smell like clown!

  12. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    Truly lovely poems from you both, Sara and Walt.

    1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      I thank you, Marilyn!

  13. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    This was also inspired by Miz Quickly’s “Changes” prompt, so I’ve wiggled two into one here.

    ❤️

    Pressed Between Estop and Ethiopia

    I’ve never heard a cuckoo sing.
    I lost that moment of spring
    to the big city, to its noise,
    and roar and smoke and feet,
    which might explain why I press
    flowers and leaves between
    unabridged dictionary pages,
    (usually between estop and Ethiopia)
    in weighty books and scrapped paper,
    and waxed sheets for swollen stems.
    And those autumn leaves, just fallen,
    gaunt and red and turned copper,
    lined, prodded and straightened
    like a story retold for bedtime,
    suitable pages of heavy darkness,
    hidden like illicit love letters.
    And then years later, by accident,
    you stumble across that pressed moment,
    there between estop and Ethiopia,
    and its phantom wings are thrown
    open into a long and found embrace.
    Such a fragile beauty it’s become,
    an emaciated memory so near dust.
    A faint twitch of sleep that dreams.
    Like an acorn — lost by stealth.

    1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      How fine these places, inside a book and between smoothed papers, to find those stowed away moments. I love this one Misty.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Be still my heart … such elegance and beauty I could never pen …

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        But of course you do! Your poems are gorgeous!

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          Thank you. But I don’t write anything like you consistently do. I soooooooo admire your work.

          1. Misky Avatar
            Misky

            Thank you so blush….. I mean much. 😉

            1. Marie Elena Avatar
              Marie Elena

              😉 ❤

  14. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
    Walter J. Wojtanik

    Two for one always works for me! I love where this took me! And I certainly must get over to MQ to check in!

  15. daniel paicopulos Avatar
    daniel paicopulos

     
     
    My God and my Bod Both Love a Little Humor

    I’m getting around
    in a used body now,
    recently found
    it’s when, not how,
    that matters.
    We’re just passing through,
    a few times like new,
    usually in tatters.
    All things ephemeral,
    they come and they go,
    it’s a good thing, in general,
    to think this, to know
    that if we would be happy,
    to prosper, to thrive,
    it’s best to be joyful
    about being simply alive.
    We all want to live
    as long as we might,
    to keep keeping on,
    to fight the good fight,
    and continue with chances
    to come up to bat,
    but we don’t like what happens
    to a body which does that.
    It’s all over too soon,
    in a flash, in a blink,
    and none of us has
    as much time as we think.
    As for me, I think,
    before my last bow,
    I’ll aim to be present
    In the here and the now,
    And what will I think
    as I lay down to rest?
    I hope when I’m gone,
    I’ll be less of a pest.

    1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Daniel, I feel your dilemma and agree with your conclusion…. oh, oh no…not THAT ‘conclusion!’ Stay around a while a least.

      1. daniel paicopulos Avatar
        daniel paicopulos

        One day at a time, my friend…one day at a time

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      I just love that personality of yours that shines through in your words. Yep … we need those words to keep on comin’ for many years ahead. ❤

    3. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      We just got you back here. I can take your pestering more than your silence, my friend! Let’s not be in such a hurry! 😀

  16. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

     
     
    Missing Something Missing

    I lost something small,
    hardly noticeable at all,
    except to me.

    Now that it’s gone
    it practically ruins my day
    I’ve lost my way.

    I’m aware that it’s missing
    every moment
    and I’m wishing

    as the week passes
    to replace the stem
    for my glasses.

  17. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
    Walter J. Wojtanik

    Yes, the optical irritant! I hate when that happens! 😀 A warm chuckle here!

  18. Winning At Life | echoes from the silence Avatar
    Winning At Life | echoes from the silence

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  19. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    With a crazy “turned upside down” week, I have found myself returning often to a place of seeking peace.

    If you want to see a picture accompanying this poem, go here: https://whenwordsescape.wordpress.com/2016/06/24/winning-at-life/

    I will be posting this for this week’s Inform Poets prompt, as well.

    WINNING AT LIFE

    Morning glory
    leaves me feeling
    hopeful; kneeling,
    I ask for grace.

    Full of love He
    turns to my face…
    here, in this place
    you seek, I give

    grace and mercy.
    You’ve learned to live
    My heart, your sieve–
    and peace remains.