INFORM POETS – HADRON

“A quark is an elementary particle and a fundamental constituent of all matter. Quarks combine to form composite particles, the most stable of which are protons and neutrons which join to form hadrons, the heart of atomic nuclei.”

To a poet, words are our quarks, and when joined together they form elementary poetry. A HADRON is an untitled poetic form consisting of just twelve words. The fundamental of brevity is the key. It offers two random glimpses of complimentary thoughts, (the proton and neutron) to form our hadron poem. Created by Walt Wojtanik.

LINE 1: Use two words to set the subject.
LINE 2: Three words that relate directly to subject of LINE 1
LINE 3: two words completing the thought begun on LINE 2, describing it.

The next three lines convey a new thought related to the first in an abstract way:

LINE 4: Two descriptive rhyming words
LINE 5: One word setting up the action conveyed in
LINE 6.

No passion.
Empty hearts lacking
love’s backing.
Unfulfilled, chilled;
shaken,
not stirred

© Walt Wojtanik

Heavy burden.
Weights on shoulders
like boulders.
Aching, breaking;
quaking,
knees shaking.

© Walt Wojtanik

Race cars.
On track winners;
wheel spinners.
Inviting, exciting;
real
nail biting.

© Walt Wojtanik

Poets ponder
words to express;
to excess.
Daring pairings;
preparing
to rhyme.

© Walt Wojtanik

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Responses

  1. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Hadron therapy:
    accelerators unleash baryons
    and mesons.
    Blinking, shrinking,
    cancer
    jumps ship.

    copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      You nailed it though, I think and I like how your brought more science to the table with it…great work, William.

    2. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      I am impressed, William.

    3. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      Wow, William! This is so well done.

  2. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    This is a tough form for me, Walt, but thanks for the challenge and the fine examples. I especially like the last one.

  3. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    God’s missing?
    Some have said
    He’s dead.
    yawning dawning
    Day
    Says No

    #

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      Nice one

  4. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
    http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    Marvellous fun. I’m off to play and hope I don’t collide with anything.

  5. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
    Henrietta Choplin

    (Poem w/image: http://lettheballoonssailmeaway.wordpress.com)

    A wreath
    Warmed in touch
    Spells heart.
    Blues too
    Changed
    to laughter.

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      how we all need that touch

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Ahh… yes… ❤ Thank you, Darlene!!

    2. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      This brings smiles. I love it.

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Aww… I am so glad, William, Thank you 🙂 !!

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Lovely, Hen!

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Thank you, Sara!!

    4. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      Very nice, Henrietta!

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Thank you, Susan 🙂 !!

  6. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
    http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    Distant friend
    in dire trouble
    help needed
    instantly sympathy
    flying
    to her

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      so true

      1. WmPreston Avatar
        WmPreston

        “instantly sympathy” could be a new definition of empathy. Love this.

    2. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      Beautifully poetic, Viv!

  7. humbird Avatar
    humbird

    Breaking walls.
    Going beyond disturbances
    Untether bonds.
    Intending defending –
    prisoned,
    not enlightened.

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      how sad

  8. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
    Susan Schoeffield

    Hearts collide
    on predetermined course.
    Powerful force
    raising. Blazing,
    dazing.
    utterly amazing.

    © Susan Schoeffield

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      how romantic

      1. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
        Susan Schoeffield

        Thanks, Darlene. Turned out more romantic than when I started it. Nice when things work out that way.

    2. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Great use o9f rhyme!

      1. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
        Susan Schoeffield

        Thanks, William.

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      How sweet, Susan. Almost broke through the black funk I am in.

      1. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
        Susan Schoeffield

        Thanks, Sara. Sorry to hear about your “black funk.”

  9. humbird Avatar
    humbird

    Creative thoughts
    Imagination at work
    Original ideas
    Audible, improbable
    Expanding
    New plots.

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      imagination at work – we need a road sign

    2. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      For me, this is a wonderful paean to the art of writing.

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  12. Laura M. Avatar
    Laura M.

    Mother’s cup:
    graduated with interruptions,
    erupting disruptions;
    bitter sitter
    waiting
    between sups.

    —–

    Mother’s cup,
    graduated with interruptions,
    abrupt disruptions,
    banding expanding
    between
    each sup.

    —–

    A cup,
    bitter with neglect,
    turned icy;
    chilled, unfulfilled;
    full
    yet empty.

    (though I have just realized I pretty much knicked one of Walt’s lines in that last one. So sorry, Walt!)

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      These, especially the middle version, in my view, are superb examples of focussing feeling on a simple object.

    2. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      These are excellent, Laura. Love that last one.

  13. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    Memories made
    begin to fade,
    locked inside.
    Distant, resistant;
    she’s
    still mine.

    2014-11-05
    P. Wanken

    In Loving Memory of Grandma Grace,
    and her husband who loved her to the end,
    through Alzheimer’s Disease.

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      precious

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Yes…

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Beautiful brevity.

    3. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Suoerb; this combines sadness with poignancy and a kind of triumph.

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Beautiful, Paula.

    5. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      This piece deeply touched me, Paula. Lost my mom to dementia. What a wonderful poem.

  14. RJ Clarken Avatar
    RJ Clarken

    For Michael

    No words.
    Nothing to say,
    just silence.
    Senseless, defenseless;
    why?
    Too young.

    ###

    This morning we got the terrible news that a boy in my son’s carpool, a young teenage boy, took his own life last night. He was an upbeat, friendly kid, who was really forward-looking. It was something totally unexpected, and we’ve all been blindsided by this. I don’t even know what else to say.

    1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      Oh, RJ… how terribly sad… we can never know what another human being might do, especially when there are no telltale signs 😦 !!

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      So sad…there’re too many stories like this. ♥

    3. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      So sorry, RJ. I wish we had the gift of prescience, to stop such tragedies.

    4. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      I often think that nobody knows the limits of words like a poet foes. This is a sad but effective example, when one with skills such as yours cannot find any.

    5. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      How terrible, RJ. We never know what’s inside someone.

  15. Darlene Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Franklin

    Walt, you pour these out with such seeming ease. . .

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      just your silent support means a lot. No “why” will ever suffice, from one who’s been there

    2. CreativeBloomings Avatar
      CreativeBloomings

      Darlene, your words mean as much to me if not more. At one time I was able to comment more – time was less constraining. But I guess I’ve fallen into the category of “too many irons in the fire”. It makes it hard to ignore my work in such a way. But I do support each and every one of you extraordinary poets. My examples are merely a way to connect with each of you… to be a part of this garden we’ve built! We share some commonalities. My youngest daughter had a classmate succumb to the pressures of his young life a few years back. She (daughter) is still affected. And my oldest and I are thirty years apart and she will be thirty when six-oh comes to call! I appreciate your works (I appreciate all of your works, poets) Darlene. I hope they help in some small way. I’ll make an effort to be a little more responsive. I’ve been remiss on the Blooms and am foregoing them until after November’s challenges. Thank you. Walt.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Walt, thank you so very much.

      2. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Your examples were amazing, to me. I can always feel your support out there. This is not a good time for me, so I get it.

  16. Darlene Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Franklin

    Holy God
    Truth and mercy
    Perfect balance
    Steeple people
    imperfect
    Divine mirror

    My daughter
    Still lives within
    Forever twenty-three
    Death’s breath
    Steals
    Life unfulfilled

    *This year my daughter would have been 30 to my 60, the “double” year, so for some reason I’ve been thinking of her a lot recently. First poem inspired by the theme of my Bible reading the last few days.

    1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      Blessings to you, Darlene.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        I am very blessed, thank you, Henrietta

        1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
          Henrietta Choplin

          !! ❤

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Poignant and affecting, Darlene.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Thank you, Hannah.

    3. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Beautifully done.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Thank you

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Thinking of you, Darlene. Your poem beautifully expressed your emotions.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Thank you. I’m fine. I can’t imagine Jolene at 30. . .she’s my past, and my future, but not my now. 🙂

  17. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    Walt – thank you for the expanded description of the prompt! I love short forms and found this to be challenging…but a good one! Way to go!

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  19. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    Ochre moon
    shines into kitchen
    window frames
    swift-slipping
    clouds
    pale-lit-trail.

    Ochre moon
    in indigo sky
    suspended contrasting
    cloud shroud
    embraces
    oyster’s pearl.

    Cloud arms
    a scarab beetle
    holding treasure
    yellow mellow
    moon
    night’s jewel.

    Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2014

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      These’re three that I worked on in order…moon was the muse but each holds a slightly different flavor.

    2. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      I see the moon with you. . .lovely

    3. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      These are a wonderful meld of real and ethereal. I can pictures all three.

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      All are wonderful poems, Hannah.

    5. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      Absolutely beautiful, Hannah. The second piece is particularly enchanting.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you so much!

  20. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    I love the form you’ve created, Walt and your description behind it…inventive and inspiring, thank you!

  21. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Beauty lost
    gathered in stars
    to shine
    guiding, tiding
    flame
    of heart

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Lovely; “starshine” comes to mind immediately.

  22. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Pink carnations
    coloring the sky
    for tomorrow
    Illusions, delusions
    knighting
    the day

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Wow. What a subtle yet pointed use of :knighting.”

    2. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      I love this one, Priti.

  23. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Feeling blue
    unable to shake
    this nightmare
    Fear, tears, Meneire’s
    Walls
    move

    1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      Hadron collider
      incomprehensible research project
      very expensive
      bling thing
      collided
      with incredulity

      1. WmPreston Avatar
        WmPreston

        This sounds like a comment on CERN. “Bling thing” is brilliant.

    2. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Rhymes usually enchant, but your fourth line brings chills. Very effective.

      1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
        http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

        Did you mean that one for Purple in Portland? If so, I agree, and feel sympathetic (I’ve had it and it’s not pleasant)

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Oh, yes you capture so well this awful condition, Sara. Sometimes I wonder if my sudden vertigo, tinnitus etc. are part of this…I hope it passes if this is nonfiction.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Hannah. It is all too real.

        1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
          Hannah Gosselin

          I’m sorry to hear that, Sara.

          1. purplepeninportland Avatar
            purplepeninportland

            😞

    4. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      You’ve captured a difficult situation very well in this lovely poem, Sara.

    5. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
      Susan Schoeffield

      You’ve captured a difficult situation very well in this lovely poem, Sara.

      1. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
        Susan Schoeffield

        Sorry for the double post. Didn’t go where I expected it to go.

      2. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Susan!

  24. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

    Happy fairies
    Twinkle, Winkle, Sprinkle
    Silken wings
    Whirling, twirling
    Fun
    Lively dancing

  25. Marian Veverka Avatar
    Marian Veverka

    Morning sun
    Bright blue sky
    Golden trees
    Razzle dazzle
    Autumn
    Falling leaves