This week our IN-FORM POET explores a new form devised by our own Salvatore Buttaci. The form is called PUN-KU. Instead of giving an interpretation of the form, we’ll let its creator’s words speak for themselves. From Salvatore’s blog SAL’S PLACE:
WHAT IS A PUN-KU ?
Poetry today continues to entertain readers, inspiring poets to write a greater number of poems according to the requirements of established poetic forms. The sonnet, for example, did not die with Shakespeare, Milton, Petrarch and the other masters. It is still being written according to the required iambic pentameter and rhyme patterns set down centuries ago. In most instances all that has changed is that poets write sonnets without the antiquated language of the past.
Because poetry is dynamic, because we are not restricted to reading only the works of famous poets, most of who are gone from the literary scene, modern-day poets are creating new forms.
I would like to add still another new poetic form, which I call the PUN-KU. Here are the requirements for writing one.
(1) Unlike the haiku that allows for a less than strict adherence to the 17-syllable rule, the pun-ku must be exactly 17 syllables long.
(2) It contains only four (4) lines arranged syllabically as follows:
Line 1: 4 syllables Line 2: 5 syllables Line 3: 4 syllables Line 4: 4 syllables
(3) As for the end-rhyme pattern, Lines 1 and 2 do not rhyme. Lines 3 and 4 do.
(4) The pun-ku must contain a pun on one or more of the words used in the poem. The subject matter deals with human nature, is light, humorous, or witty.
(5) The title of the pun-ku can only be one- or two-words long (or short).
Here are two of my pun-ku for examples.
LOVE’S MYSTERY
nothing is more
paradoxical
around these parts
than two cleaved hearts
#
TIMBER
strong lumberjacks
locate forest trees
then saw their bark
despite the dark
#
In the first example, the pun is on the word “cleaved,” which has two opposite meanings: “to cling together” and “to split apart.” In the second example, the pun is on the word “saw,” which can be defined as “a tool for cutting” and “the past tense of the verb ‘to see.’ ”
You might have fun writing a few pun-ku of your own!
Here are a few sites to visit if you’re looking to learn more about poetic forms. You can also do a search of “poetic forms” or type in a form and search for it.
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_forms/index.aspx?Letter=D
http://www.freewebs.com/itllnever/poemstylesandterms.htm
http://www.poetrybase.info/forms/origin.shtml
Thanks Sal! Give Sal’s new form a try.
Marie’s PUN-KU:
MEN!
Keith’s vacuuming.
He flashes a grin.
And I think, “Yup.
He’s sucking up.”
Walt’s PUN-KU:
DELOUSED
She’s had her fill.
She’s sent him packing.
And now the house
has been de-loused.
Responses
Marie and Walt, thank you so much for posting about my new form the pun-ku. I have always believed poetry should be fun and challenging to write, and that the more poetic forms to explore and try one’s hand at, the greater the enjoyment of both poet and reader. I hope lots of poets will write pun-ku. Perhaps in a future posting at Sal’s Place I will post all the pun-ku I find!
Salvatore Buttaci, author of 200 Shorts
Walt and Marie your puns are superb and the kus aren’t bad either! I’m passing this straight on to my friend Tillybud at http://imnotaverse.wordpress.com/ – she is an adept at wit, puns, short forms et al.
Thank YOU for this FUN-KNU poetic form, Sal! 😉
And thanks to Viv for passing on the word. Can’t wait to see them start rolling in. Should be fun!
Marie Elena
Blown Pipes
I start the reel
but I sound off key.
Kilted buffoon
quite out of tune!
Quite the humourous scheme, Salvatore!
Will make for some wonderful verse. I’m hooked!
Dyson, I really like your pun-ku. It’s a form that takes the seriousness out of poetry and I believe we need to provide some laughter with our poems.
Homeward Lassie
Bright eyes, warm coat;
missing for days.
Oh, by golly,
where’s that collie?
Lost in the transference:
Homeward Lassie
Bright eyes, warm coat;
BEEN missing for days.
Oh, by golly,
where’s that collie?
Pied Piper
So, Scotch whiskey
is my poison.
Music’s a drag,
half in the bag.
As well as:
Pied Piper
So, Scotch whiskey,
it is my poison.
Music’s a drag,
half in the bag.
Seem syllable count is not my forte!
GO DYSON!
Marie Elena
She found a blouse
in the wash–not hers.
Dirty spinnin’
foreign linen.
Great pun, Sara. I agree on your assessment of Sal’s form.
Thanks, Walt. It is not an easy form.
This one makes me think of one of De Jackson’s poems. (A compliment of the highest order!)
Marie Elena
HUGE Compliment!!
Clever!
Sal, this is a cool form!
Purple…, I am glad you are enjoying the pun-ku. I too love it.
Dinner Inspiration
Chicken kabobs
Taken from the grill
“We have to keep
Meating like this”.
Kevin, you get a response I OFTEN give Walt:
Grooooooooooan! 😉
Marie Elena
Any good Pun that hit’s its mark will always elicit a hearty groan. Thanks MEG.
Your sincere groan is a punsters highest compliment.
A bonus Pun-Ku for your further groaning pleasure:
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Miss Nomer
The beauty queen from
The town of Chapen
Protests her new
title: Misshapen.
Oops, too many syllables – rewrite…
Miss Nomer
Beauty queen from
the town of Chapen,
protests her new
title: Misshapen.
EEEEEWWWWWW! I goofed it up again. I need an editor! I quit!
Aww! How ’bout this?
Miss Nomer
Beauty queen from
small town of Chapen,
protests title.
Crowned: Misshapen.
Oops! HAHAHA! STILL didn’t work! I’ve rhymed the wrong lines! Sheeesh!
Marie Elena
Yours is still better than mine (of course). Thanx
Kevin, this one’s priceless!
Hesitance
“Why marry?” asks
this generation.
Couples falter
at the alter.
Good one, Connie.
Excellent, Connie! 🙂
Sustenance
“Starving children
would kill for a taste!”
Mum made haggis
just to nag us.
Concert Paralysis
He suffered from
pianist envy:
he had stage fright
in black and white.
Nancy, this is quite punny! A kind of double pun…
I bought this place.
See sign on the door?
That name you see?
Well, Wo is me.
Ain’t Bitin’
My son and I
Cast time and again.
Fish were not fooled.
We both got schooled.
For David and son.
Fish Eye view.
Above, afloat
two men in a boat.
Don’t look, I’m cooked,
on worms I’m hooked.
David, a great pun-ku!
I’m lovin’ these attempts! What a fun form!
I love all these pun-ku posted here! I am seriously thinking of posting an issue of pun-ku at one of my sites. I could add a two-line bio for each pun-kuist: 17 syllable max!
Would you all be agreeable?
Salvatore
Count me in, my friend!
What a GRAND idea, Sal! Count me in as well!
Marie Elena
Sure.
Love this form! Kudos for coming up with it, Sal! And thanks to Marie & Walt for highlighting it! :-)) Here’s my attempt: (Sorry for the salty language. Feel free to delete it, if you feel it’s too vulgar. :-O)
MUSE’S SPAT (A Pun-ku)
“Dumb witch!” I bitch.
“Idle shit!” she spits.
Both lie accused;
neither a-mused.
PSC in CT, the pun-ku, unlike the limerick, can be bawdy but only very subtly. No profanity at all. Also, no inside rhymes either.
RASH DECISIONS (A Pun-ku)
Which path to choose?
Consider wisely.
Some rough patches
lead to scratches.
PSC, I like this one!
Thanks, Sal! Love this form! But the challenge of getting multiple puns into so few lines kept me tied up in knots… and poring through my thesaurus! ;-))
Very good! Such a subtle pun. Bravo!
Marie Elena
Oh yeah, that’s me — subtle… not. :-]
Puns are not my forte – I have to listen to too many groany ones from my husband. Hence:
Revenge
He rates the bun
lowest form of wheat,
Next time he does
he will be was.
Good ons, vivinfrance!
I meant, “good one”!
Great idea, Sal. I’m in.
Chow, Bella
For safe eating
with a tasteful twist
practice good sense:
use condiments.
Whimsygizmo, a very good pun-ku!