To piggyback on Sleepless in Buffalo’s sleep prompt last week, let’s let our dreams inspire our poems this week. Dreams may come as we sleep, or as daydreams. They may be life-long goals. Dr. King had a dream and we honor him for his vision. What are your dreams?
Here’s to sweet dreams.
Marie’s Visitation
Visit with Grandpa
Walking up my street,
I see a man walking toward me.
Aww. Looks like Grandpa, I think,
knowing it couldn’t be.
As we get closer, there is no mistaking.
Yes, it is Grandpa.
I don’t want to wake up, and miss out.
He approaches me.
“Grandpa!”
He gives me a hug.
As is nearly always the case when I dream
of the dead, all senses are engaged.
“Grandpa, what are you doing here?”
He says he came to tell me not to worry about
circumstances that were consuming me.
Everything would be just fine.
Then he says, “You know I can’t stay.”
Yes, of course.
I just don’t want to lose him again
so quickly.
“But I will come back,” he assures.
He hugs me again, and,
just that quick,
he’s gone.
My long, detailed dream continues.
It seems to last a good portion of the night.
Suddenly, there he is again.
This time, he doesn’t speak.
His silence stills me,
while it declares a grand reassurance.
I wake from the dream,
recognizing it hadn’t been merely a dream.
And I smile.
When he said he would return,
I hadn’t realized he meant
that quickly.
That night.
That dream.
© Marie Elena Good 2023
Walt’s Vision
PERCHANCE TO DREAM…
Night falls clumsily,
tripping over every wink, and blink, and nod.
A nocturnal clod, cohort of the sandman,
deliverer of sleep and nightly nocturnal visions.
My mattress beckons,
soft and trance inducing,
seducing me with thoughts of slumber.
And if I should such sleep require,
do I venture yet to dream?
For my nights used to provide
essential rest for my survival,
but most times I feel deprived of repose
for reasons not so clear
when nightly noises reverberate in my ear.
At times I find myself nodding
off to a place midway between
hibernations and dawning,
third star to the right,
and straight on ‘til morning.
These short catnaps are wonderful things
until my internal timepiece
loses moments to a snoring snooze.
But, fall asleep I do!
This creative soul tosses and turns
in Technicolor dreams, disrupted
by disorders of the night.
A narcoleptic siege pulls my eyelids shut.
Anytime, every time, anywhere, everywhere.
Disruptive sleep apnea
slaps them right open into
a sleepless stare.
CPAP be damned
if insomnia pays a call
and curse the midnight hour
should I take a somnambulistic fall.
Were I to approach a drowse tainted state,
my RLS will shake me, wake me kicking and flailing.
And then I remember the REM
and I slip into dream stage
as rapidly as my eyes can move.
One evening, I can fly.
No wings, no plane, just a soar
into the wild blue yonder…
There’s a loving reunion.
Sandy beach, roaring surf
and you back at my side…
A chase ensues, thrilling
and suspenseful, dangerous
and life threatening…
I’m riding on a bullet train,
the red-eye to morning,
strafe with innuendo…
Erotic arousals
in exotic locales,
every night…
Free-falling from the pinnacle
of an endless precipice
jolted awake by the treacherous landing…
Caught in a sensuous embrace
with a ravenous vixen.
We inch close to that passionate kiss…
…and my damn alarm
gives me a rude awakening.
Sleepus Interruptus!
(C) Walter J Wojtanik
A Comet, Green
Have you seen the comet,
green,
in the morning sky?
Not I.
I cannot wake in time
to spy the scene,
an aberration in the sky,
like a star with sails.
A wish for simple viewing
pales with dreams I wish
to dream.
Oh, I would visit
this green being if I could,
if I could write my own
thoughts for my sleep.
I’d lie down with a lift-off
planned, skip off the moon
behind my fluttering lids,
traverse the void,
avoid an asteroid or two
to slide aside this
ball of gas and ice
and say,
“Hello.
I like your glow.”
And if I could compose
my dreams,
I’d have the comet answer me
in language no one else could know,
I and the comet,
sailing, flailing all our dust and gasses
to and fro.
That is,
if I could write my dreams.
Alas…I cannot wake myself.
I cannot write my dreams.
No matter how I long to speak
to comets.
How unfair that seems.
© Damon Dean, 2023
(…well, messed up line spacing in first stanzas… what I get for trying to use my phone…!)
The poem sure ain’t messed up. Wonderful.
Sometimes it is more interesting not to control the way your dreams turn out though space travel must be an interesting way to go
YOU WROTE THIS MASTERPIECE ON YOUR PHONE????
Hahah! No masterpiece… just a sleepy-eyed musing.
I beg to differ. This is an amazing poem.
Thank you… it was fun to write.
Still a great poem.
“if I could write my own
thoughts for my sleep.”
What an enchanting thought!
Thanks Sara!
VOWELY NIGHTMARE
EEE, there’s a scream;
AAA’s on the prowl;
III’m sweating heavily;
UUU’re straining mightily;
OOO, hoots the owl;
POOF goes the dream.
Oh my. Only a daring poet would complete this one
Indeed!
😂 Good one William!
Fun!!!
Clever poem, William!
GENERATION GAP
The dreams of youth are dreams of truth
and so of possibility,
but old folks’ eyes know all the lies
that lie behind civility
and old folks know those dreams, although
they drift toward senility
and dream of days when youthful ways
were theirs, without hostility.
So much truth in a few lines…sigh
Excellence right here. So much thought went into this, and came out in so few words.
Loved this William, I’ve seen those dreams in my departed aged parent’s eyes–wistful, lost in long ago.
A perfect truth succinctly stated.
Marie and Walt, your poems are streams (or dreams) of consciousness, each of them transporting me and, I think, any reader.
Thank you, sir!
Marie and Walt, if you chose to retire right now, (don’t, please), these two would be in your personal top five lists. I relate personally to MEG’s experience, prefer it to more phantasmagorical nights, and Walt, this is how you wrote all of the time when I first became attracted to your wordsmithing. So many perfect words, none of them wasted.
Thank you so much, Daniel. And I couldn’t agree more on your preference for these visits, nor on your words to Walt. Amazing writing, he does.
Longing
That dream again,
the one where
you’re away
Not here.
Out there.
Somewhere.
First at an airport
I’ve never seen,
then in a house
we’ve never been.
A mysterious city
one with a mall,
then a maze of buildings.
My phone won’t work.
Oh, now, yes, the tone,
but your number?
I guess.
And guess.
And guess.
Wrong again,
and now my legs
stuck in quicksand,
my heart begging for
mercy from this chase,
but it’s endless,
you’re never found,
not one small trace.
You’d likely think,
after all these years of love,
that dream would end,
but it still appears.
Oh such mood accompanies this excellently penned piece. I can relate to so much here.
I can sense the loss in this one.
Many deep sighs here…..
Daniel, you captured so well the uncertain edges of dreams, where plot unfolds to anxiety, or teeters on the edges of hope. So well written.
This sounds so much like one of mine that pops up every so often.
Well said, Daniel.
Aviary
The sound of wings
bursts through a room
as light streams
through black curtains
but I can’t open my eyes.
In their midst
I listen
to a cacophony
of songs
as loud fluttering sounds
come from everywhere
and I can’t escape.
I let the visions
take me anywhere
as I surrender-
I can’t breathe.
But
I get up for a moment
step into a hallway
an aura of soft blue light
and go back to bed.
I lie still
and listen.
The refrigerator
in the kitchen
gurgles and hums
an ambient sound.
This is a fantastic capture of dream state, Mike. WOW. Beautifully written, and a surprise ending that is still in keeping with a dream state. Well done.
Thanks, Marie.
Love all the visuals here.
Visually vivid, this.
Thanks, William.
Ah! Mike, those gurgles and hums are dreams for sure.
Thanks, Damon.
Gurgles and hums are a hint of a dream ending. Love this, Mike.
Thanks, Sara,
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Thank you, Larry! I left a comment on site. Love it!
Thank you so much
Love it, Sister Dolorita included.
Thank you. She was really my principal at St. Gabriel’s
Mama’s Dreams
Reality escaped her more than ever
Sleep was her vacation from the pain
More and more her dreams took over
Further and further she sank into the abyss
Increasingly her dreams became vocal
Naming names of people no longer alive
Some we knew, but others total mysteries
Some were constants while others passed on by
Mama dreamed these dreams almost every time
She would close her eyes and drift off to sleep
She would talk, she would laugh, she would cry
But remember nothing when she woke up
Then the day came we all knew was coming
Mama’s dreams came to a sorrowful end
But we’ll ask her the next time we see her
About those dreams she could never explain
Oh how interesting. I don’t know how you believe, Earl, but I do wonder if she was experiencing some sense of life beyond the veil. Fascinating, real-life poem here. Thank you. I pray God is granting comfort each and every day.
So sad and heartwarming at the same time.
So sad, yet so moving.
Yes, sad, but moving, with the mystery of passing, in which there is a hopeful horizon… so well written Earl.
Well done, Earl!
Living the Dream
I feel like I’m living the dream
How much more could I be blessed
God’s so good to me
Gives me all I need
God’s the bestest of all the rest
Aww! Love it!
NATURE OF DREAMS
evaporate
it seems
as we edge closer
to aging
whereas as a girl
they’d come in and swirl
spinning my head
just as fast
as they’d go mindfully
passed
as I’d grab
every flick
of their tail
setting sail
wherever they may
take me
now even my thoughts
of dreams have changed
everything has been
rearranged
and I don’t want to
randomly chase
pick up my pace
make my case
for some fleeting idea
of what’s possible
if it isn’t
can’t be
won’t be
will not happen
because I want to know
now
what actually can
appear
become near
push me into gear
right down here
where it’s real
the stuff
I can touch
that would be
more than enough
meanwhile I wait
inwardly debate
on good things
it seems
and, at least,
for now
ok
I entertain
on occasions
a few smaller
realistic
day dreams
(c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2023
Great set-up and form here, Janet. I especially like
“now even my thoughts
of dreams have changed
everything has been
rearranged”
Wow…
This poem of fleeting words is almost like a dream.
For me, this feels wistful, as if regretting the unrealistic dreams a bit.
Janet, this fast pace is the perfect envelope for these notes of thoughts and emotions. Loved it.
Wow! such perfect formatting for this excellent poem.
The Sandman does his duty
And we drift into Slumberland
A land we don’t control
Still we hope for
Sweet dreams
True, this.
Amen.
Maybe Little Nemo could help.
Dreams are written by
quills we can’t see, dipped in ink
that runs when we wake.
#seventeenintwentythree
Nice!
Bingo!
Yes. This nails the prompt. Perfect.
Thank you, gentlemen.
Outstanding, Marie! All that ink that runs when we wake.
Sun streaming through the trees
Dancing on fields of lavender
A little girl spins
Careless and free
White dress
Purple lilac splashed
Swirling with gentle breeze
Joy spills laughter from deep within
A heart innocent,
untarnished
Hopeful,
Light-filled,
Loved.
Beautiful.
Sparkling stuff, this.
Sweet, sweet dreams!!!
Shelly, this lifts my spirits! Lovely and uplifting. ❤
Lovely!
What If Your Daydreams Became Your Reality
Lost in lust
as daydreams
rise with
a hot sun.
Those days
of being
invincible,
carefree,
skin tingling
in anticipation.
With a vividness
of reality,
I see that woman,
feel those sensations,
and stay lost
in lust
for just
a little longer.
Your words brought me there.
Thanks so much, Benjamin. Stay a while.
I can feel a blues in here somewhere. Great phrasing.
Thanks, William!
Sara, what a true picture of those youthful lusts, brought back in the vapor of recall. Those years indeed became now’s dreams.
Thanks, Damon. I love your “vapor of recall”.
“Vapor of recall” oooh …
And I agree with your assessment. Sara, you’ve painted a richly sensual picture here.
Thanks, Marie!
A worthy nod to both of your poems, Walt and Marie.
Thank you, friend!
Spoken with wisdom.
DREAMERS DIGEST
Dreams are the stuff
of legends.
They are the teeth
of one’s own imagination.
We eat the days away
and digest their blessed truth.
Our stomachs assimilate
their fill of rich memories.
They make their way
to the deep bowels of the mind.
It is there—that they find
their destiny, a purpose.
It is there—that they unwind
re-convolute, on purpose.
It is there—immaterial time
that we become the stuff of legends.
©️ Benjamin Thomas
Much wisdom here, methinks.
👌
The stuff of legends. I’ve never thought of it this way. Great, creative take!
Thanks
This is wonderful, Benjamin!
THE FRUIT OF DREAMS
Dreams are plucked from
the virtuous stems of our
reality one by one.
They are then stitched
and streamed together by
happenstance.
Entering our subconscious
mind—sailing just beneath
our grasp.
Benjamin Thomas
Holographic, these dreams.
Indeed.
“… mind—sailing just beneath our grasp” Wow. What a capture!
👍
Dreams may seem far-fetched
Like a huge jig-saw puzzle
Pic forms, piece by piece
Hmmmmmm…. then waking up often means upsetting the table, eh?
lol I meant the goals and dreams kind of dreams.
So true, Bill!
Connie, I love it when you use short-form poems. You always manage to make me think. Well done!
I am sorry I have not contributed this week. I have a lovely medical test tomorrow and other things.
Your voice is missed, Mary. I pray all goes well for you. Hugs …
I Dream a Door
Oaken wood gone gray
as I stand looking
at the inside hanging
in its frame from leather
hinges back beaming
a peculiar pattern
of splayed trellis
in two by twos arcing
floor to lintel wood
no doubt soaked to bend
so gracefully from
banded base
but the almost strip
second from left
has slipped rawhide withes
gone dry and thin
new owners wanting
it restored to former
beauty ‘fixed’ they say
so I reach for square nails
and heft the heavy hammer
pulling the lattice in place
and wondering about the man
listening to her dreams
of roses and honeysuckle
lilacs and morning glories
that he would even bring
yet another trellis inside
for her and how that must’ve been
some kind of love
Lovely, simply lovely.
Oh my goodness, Pat. Lovely, dream-like, wistful, hopeful, loving, bewildering, inspiring … I could go on and on. How you manage to capture vision and nostalgia so wonderfully boggles my mind. Wow …
And I must say I admire your mindfulness in life.
Thank you both.., ‘‘twas real dream… interesting their origins!
I feel a yearning in this, Pat. Lovely.
Thank you!!
Marie and Walt, you both outdid yourselves with these opening poems. Gorgeous, passionate writing.