Animals have a knack for knowing. Call it instinct if you must, but trust their acumen and you’ll know too. Write an animal poem and we’ll purr like a kitten!
MARIE’S CHOICE:
Bonnie She showed up at the nursing home, waiting to be let in. Of course her chances for entry were near zero, as animals were not welcome. But this pretty golden retriever would not take no for an answer. I don’t know the story of how she actually gained entrance. I can only tell you that by the time my grandmother was in their care, she had already become part of the facility's staff. We were told that, from her very first moment inside, it seemed like she had just always been there. She knew where everything was. She knew the routine. She knew this was a quiet place, and she abided. She knew when a patient was soon to die. She graciously stayed with them and comforted them until they passed … but not before seeking entry permission from a nurse. She knew her role. This was her life’s work. I wonder … sometimes might we glimpse Eden’s garden in full bloom, pre-fall © Marie Elena Good, 2022 .
WALT’S ANIMAL:
RESCUE DOG
Oh, canine of mine,
who would hurt you,
desert you,
leave you for dead?
What’s in your head?
Timidity and suspicion,
are conditions from which
you suffered. Your life,
confusing and refusing
to give a dog a break.
Their mistake was our gain.
Love and affection are now
you affliction, still with
trepidation, but your tail
wags elation a telling sign.
There was no mistake
in making you a part of the family.
(c) Walter J Wojtanik
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Oh my. Walt and Marie, you have prompted my mind AND heart here, you know. What a lovely story about this self appointed therapy dog, Marie. Surely a glimpse into heaven. And your adopted canine poem, Walt, brims with grateful joy. I know enough to wonder– who rescued whom?
Thank you, Damon, And good question regarding ‘who rescued whom?”
I always need saving, Damon. That should tell you your answer.
Damon, I couldn’t agree more. There was a pet therapy dog in the nursing home where my mother was, and all the patients loved him.
Walt, you know my feelings on rescue dogs. They are my heart.
PUSS AT MY BOOTS
The thought occurred to me that loving you
is wearisome, akin to pushing fleas
across the yard; your constant needs and pleas
remind me that, no matter what I do,
your need for strokes and treats will never cease
until your nine or ninety lives are through.
The thought occurred to me
that other cats, content to purr and mew,
might be less of a bother; might climb trees;
might while away the days across my knees.
But years and memories reside in you.
The thought occurred to me.
Oh, Bill, this is so touching. So sweet. So loving and real. The format is perfection.
Gotta love that recurring occuring thought, Bill!
Wonderful! 👏
You’ll always have that thought, William. Wonderful poem!
A heart-stopping haibun, Marie
Thank you, sir.
The halting heart is surely her forte, Bill. Wonderful Haibun, Marie.
Walt, for me, the goodness of you shines here as nowhere else. Wonderful.
Gosh, yes. I couldn’t agree more. ❤
Thank you, My friends! I try!
Rothschild Giraffes of Kenya
Beautiful Rothschild Giraffes
deserve their rock-star status
at the Giraffe Centre.
Brown and cream patched coat,
white socks
and very long gray tongue.
They develop a rhythm
of scooping up food pellets with their tongue
from one tourist to the next and back.
Hold a pellet up for a selfie
as it places its giant head
over your shoulder to snatch a snack.
Snacks don’t spoil their meals, though.
They eat 145 pounds of acacia leaves a day
to keep their very tall bodies going.
Beautiful, beautiful animals.
This taught me something; I had to look up the subspecies.
Connie! I caught that you are there! I couldn’t respond at the time, but I’m way beyond excited for you! Thank you for sharing these descriptive words with us. So, SO cool!
Thanks, Yes, I’m here having a blast. Safari tomorrow!
Always one to stick your neck out to great effect, Connie! Well done!
That is my dream, Connie! The giraffe has always been my favorite animal. Any pictures to share?
Lessons Learned from Cats
Stress can not survive
playtime with a cat.
Each encounter its own
time of renewal and brighter days,
so much joy and gratitude in that.
Sometimes I only observe,
watching them take a break from hunting,
telling me they own the backyard,
basking a bit in the morning sun,
urging me to smile, and that’s not hard.
Cats are grateful for an audience,
especially when at silly play
with their alternative mice,
appreciative of genuine warm-heartedness,
a human who is more than food-giving nice.
They constantly remind me to become
someone worthy of their friendship,
letting go of ego, power, pretense,
inspiring me to live a life of
incisive simplicity and common sense,
and when I meet a new cat anywhere,
no matter where I might go,
offering a hand to nuzzle,
remembering to say hello.
This is a deeply moving piece, in my view, especially, “… constantly remind me to become someone worthy of their friendship… “
Thank you for this abundance of warm smiles. ❤
A wonderful expression of love, Daniel! I’m sure the cats would think so too!
Lovely, Daniel!
Sign of the Rabbit
In stillness of the morning
a rabbit waits
facing my car
parked on a side street.
The rabbit’s nose twitches I approach
and it lets me near.
It fixes its gaze on me
brown eyes so big
to watch my every move.
I stop three feet away
as its whiskers twitch
and I maintain a slight distance
to keep the fragile trust.
I bear the weight
of my past lives
as I awaken
to a sense
of promise or woe.
Drops of dew glisten
on grass graced
by light of the early sun.
I listen to the stillness
a song in the air
as a cool breeze stirs
leaves on trees
about to fall.
As the time I know
is slipping out of
the grasp of my fingers
a soft voice inside
says others must be forgiven.
A moment of silence shared
says more than idle words
ever could.
Fortunes told
as I bear my pain
the rabbit sign says
as we’re alone
that I’m on a pathway
to heal my weary life.
This poignant piece is so well drawn, I feel as if I’m there.
This encounter is portrayed with such depth of understanding and insight. WONDERFUL, Mike.
Thank you, Marie.
We should all seek such healing, Mike. Well written!
Thank, you, Walter.
This poem has such depth to it, Mike. Love it.
Thanks, Sara.
Thank you, William.
Felines
So magical
In a class of their own
So calming, loving, and loyal
But trainable? I think not
HA! Too true!
Maybe they’re trainers rather than trainees.
Makes as much sense as a cat leash! Good one, Earl!
Ha! So true.
Maggie Mooch
Scrawny little fur ball
Showed up on our deck
A cute little meow
And a rub on my ankle
I scratched her purring head
Found a crook at the end of her tail
Like a door bit her on a slow day
Went to get her some food
Mama gave me that look
Not supposed to feed strays
‘Cause they won’t go away
She was right
Mooch came back
Over and over
And I fed her
Then it got colder
Mooch needed a home
I coaxed her inside
Didn’t take much
Just more food
Long story short
Mooch is still here
Crooked tail and all
But no longer scrawny
“Like a door bit her on a slow day.” So clever!
Love the name Mooch! 😀 Enjoyed this one, Earl!
Big smile here.
Ah, a fat cat! Got it!
NORMALLY A SNAKE
would make me out run
my best sprint time
in no time
but not this time
with six or seven people
passing by each other
on a walking path
to Newport Beach
a large black rattlesnake
caused us all to stop
and shake
as it suddenly appeared
reared it’s head
as it began crawling out of the shrubs
it glanced
at each of us
before it proceeded
as if it needed
to sense the level of trust
an obvious must
for a snake like that
oddly, I could feel the snake’s
calm intention
to not bring any fear
or harm
to any of us gathered
in awe
of what we saw
once it sensed no danger
from any present stranger
it lowered it’s head
without dread
moving across our path
to again hide
on the other side
and moments later
we all moved on, too
forever moved
by a snake
who wanted respect
by giving respect
first
and teaching me
they aren’t as scary as I once thought
and yet
I doubt
I’ll ever find one
I want to
pet
(c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2022
*shudder*
Nope. No petting, that’s for certain!
I didn’t know rattlers were black. I like the shape of this poem: snake-like, it is.
The interesting thing, William, the signs in the park indicated red and black rattlesnakes lived there! New to us, too! A woman on another part of the park came jumping by us one day, citing a big red rattlesnake under the bench! It was gone once we got there! I was ok with that! 🙂
As would I be!
Glad I didn’t slither past that one, Janet! Wonderful!
Find them fascinating, but keep my distance from rattlers. Very interesting!
I can’t even say the word.
Deserted
My life is not the same,
with both dogs gone my heart hurts.
Sadness is quite a drain.
My life is not the same.
My smiles are merely feigned.
Nowhere can I find comfort.
My life is not the same,
with both dogs gone my heart hurts.
And my heart hurts reading this, Sara.They may be gone but are forever loved. And I’m sure you’re loved right back because you cared so.
Thank you, Walt.
🥲 Sorry to hear this. I really feel this one.
Thank you, Benjamin.
Understood
So sorry for your loss of these dear companions. Well penned piece, but makes me sad for you.
Thanks, Pat. I am ready to give a home to some new dogs.
Thank you, William.
ANIMALS
In the world—
there is a lack of mercy.
A jungle full of dark predators
with scanning eyes always on their prey.
Regardless of who, or what
gets in their way; they eat,
like lust driven carnivores.
They are all animals, wet, with innocent
blood on their hands—without conscience,
they steal, kill, and destroy.
They are all animals driven
solely by base instinct. They don’t stop
to think, or consider—that the world
is without mercy.
©️Benjamin Thomas
“Animals” is used inclusively, I notice. Well stated.
Ode to Gus, the Mr. Darcy of the cat world….
Gus, how I miss you!
Each time I sit down at my desk-
I miss your chats with me…
Usually about feeding you…
When I pointed to my watch,
And say, “Not time.”
You would ask, “Why?”
I never had a good answer
For that question…
Gus, I miss you looking for me.
I would hear you crying
As you began to roam the house,
And when you couldn’t find me
I could hear the panic in your cries.
As you passed by my office,
I would say, “Gus, I am right here.”
No creature ever had as much joy
As finding me,
As you did my sweet boy.
As I watched television
Gus, you gave the best
Massage with acupuncture
That I have ever got…
Those big paws covered a big space,
And I knew you wanted payment
With a favorite treat.
I would look at you and say,
“Gus, play coy.”
You would turn your head sideways,
And blink your big eyes.
You always got your treat.
Gus, you were the best surprise gift
I have ever gotten.
Since I called you God’s gift,
Thank you, God for Gus.
I miss him something awful sometimes.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
November 14, 2022
Warm smile here.
Thank you and I miss him still most days.
You painted a great picture of his mannerisms!
thanks
He sounds like a sweetheart, Mary.
Passages
Today on almost every backroad
they crossed, some at a mincing trot
others at a saunter to either vanish
in cinnamon woods that match
their tawny coats or vault fences
only to pause and study the truck
ears perked, white flag tails erect
on too many roadsides evidence
where someone failed to slow or
perhaps just didn’t see, ignoring
the local country rule of thumb
‘where there’s one there’s three’
Either ahead or behind, herds
traversing the same trails so that
once learning their haunts
you drive with one foot poised
above the brake lest you become
the reason for another ravaged carcass
and tonight waiting for the marmalade
cat that’s adopted us to appear
like something materializing from
the pages of Alice in Wonderland
I open the door into the crisp night
to hooves crunching maple leaves
beneath trees just beyond the porch
deer wending across the front yard
the way five glided by two nights ago
softly I call out a greeting, bid them safe passage
the sudden silence letting me know
of their pausing to study me
beneath the porch light on this late November
evening as the cat bounds up the steps
ready for supper and they resume their walking.
Might as well be a video, it’s so evocative.
I can see this whole peaceful scene, Pat.
DOGIES DON’T BARK
It takes a certain age of fogey
to know a doggie ain’t no dogie;
though both might have a case of mange,
the dogie’s the one that roams the range
and often is runtier than any other
because the critter has lost its mother.
A doggie often assumes the pose
of a waggly tail and moistened nose
and, though it might be a motherless pup,
is never branded and rounded up.
So, no way can a dogie be a doggie.
It’s plain to see, if your brain ain’t foggy.
Giggling especially here in cow country!
Great rhyme & thanks for appreciating our deer