PROMPT # 342 – NOT AN EXIT

Sitting at my desk, I look up to see a placard over the door that says “NOT AN EXIT.” But it leads to a room with a sign over its other door that clearly reads “EXIT.” So would it be a “Prelude to an Exit?” Whatever. Today you have another choice to make. Write an EXIT poem. Or Write a NOT AN EXIT poem. Decide if you want to leave a situation or remain in the one you’ve been in.

MARIE’S ENTRANCE:

I’m an introvert.
I feel the need to exit
before I enter.

© Marie Elena Good, 2021

WALT’S EXIT:

POETIC ESCAPE

I get lost in my words.
Every thought leaves me
to wax poetic; it is therapeutic.
Poetry is an escape that takes me
to distant places, to see loving faces,
to share traces of myself, to fly
a mile high then to land again.
To share my heart and soul,
to lose control and be verbose,
or closerthanthisclose. I go
where my words take me.
They are an escape, not an exit!

© Walter J Wojtanik - 2021

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  1. Marie Elena Avatar
    Marie Elena

    Good morning, Walt. THAT is a “wish I’d written it.” ❤

    1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Mornin! Yours is quite good too Marie! Probably one of your best in my opinion. They always have a nice punch to it. This one is like an uppercut. 👌

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Aye, a punch it has, greater, in point of fact, than Two Shillelagh O’Sullivan’s.

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          Oh me of half Irish blood, yet had to google this! 😀

      2. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        Aww, shucks! Thanks Benjamin! You are too kind!

        1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
          Benjamin Thomas

          👌

      3. Mike Bayles Avatar
        Mike Bayles

        I like your poems, Walt and Marie. Each has a nice spin on the word, Exit.

        1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
          Poetic Bloomings

          Thanks Mike!

        2. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          Thanks much, Mike!

      4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        She is very good, isn’t she?👍🏻

        1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
          Benjamin Thomas

          Yes!

    2. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Walt: I love your exit line “They are an escape, not an exit!”
      Marie: Hi, fellow introvert, I know what you mean!

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        We get it, don’t we? 😉

      2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Thanks Debi! I’ve never thought poetry to be an “exit”. There are great adventures in words, great romances, heart passion, and some sorrows in poetry. I escape to place, to people. My words carry me.

    3. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      I wish you did too! Thanks, Pard.

  2. 8:10AM – This Is Not A Diary – Plumb-Lines Avatar
    8:10AM – This Is Not A Diary – Plumb-Lines

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  3. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    I Think I Smell Coffee

    Night’s wick
    burns darkness until dawn.
    I wake,
    and exit these blind contours
    into morning’s perfume.

    1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Magnifique Misky! I really like this one. Such a contrast with a satisfying ending, or should I say, beginning?

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you!

        1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
          Benjamin Thomas

          👌

    2. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Excellent. Such an economy of 100 dollar images.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks so much, Debi.

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I find this enchanting,specially the first two lines.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you, William.

        1. pat anthony Avatar
          pat anthony

          Absolutely love /night’s wick/– what an image!!

          1. Misky Avatar
            Misky

            Thanks so much!

    4. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      *sigh* Oh to write like this …

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        You have your own voice that is quite beautiful. ❤️

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          I ❤ you.

    5. Mike Bayles Avatar
      Mike Bayles

      Very nice.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you.

    6. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Wish I smelled it too, Marilyn! A brisk poem!

    7. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      So perfect Misky! The ultimate aroma to rise by. The first part of waking…exiting…up.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks, Damon!

    8. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      ah yes… what a wonderful smell and your poem is delightful

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks.

    9. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Lovely poem, Misk!

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks, S.

  4. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    Walt, I got lost in your words too friend. It’s exquisitely Walt, and that last line is KAPOW! Love it.

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Thanks Benjamin. If I lose you next time, I’ll include a map! ;). I live for KAPOW. Thank you!

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        👌

  5. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    MORNING EXIT

    Before we get out of bed,
    we must exit a fumbling state of mind,
    naked and gormless.

    We must shake off the night—
    shift gears, put our foot on the gas,
    and engage the day with gusto.

    Accelerate—turn the page on yesterday;
    like old news, or expired food,
    and begin anew at last.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Talk about kapow! Good one!

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        😂 Ka-blewy!

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          Ka-blewy! LOL! 😀

      2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Yes, a good kapow!

    2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Thank you again for a new word. You have lessened my gormlessness, Benjamin!

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        You’re welcome! I just learned it myself.

    3. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      Wow, I love every line of this…

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks Mary.

  6. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    EXIT STRATEGY

    Life is a ball of memories
    that we accumulate as it rolls downhill
    picking up speed with the greed of gravity.

    The ball gets bigger,
    bounding and bouncing about,
    picking up milestones, various stages in life.

    Until it loses steam—
    the fervor of momentum, serving the law of physics,
    the force behind it subsiding.

    At the bottom of the hill—
    it stops, stands inert, still warm,
    and someone picks us up, treasures
    the memories of us.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Love both, Benjamin, but this part in particular “treasures the memories of us.”

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks Debi!

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Bingo!

    3. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Goodness. Beautifully penned.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks.

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      You’ve been rocking this poetry thing for a while now! I love your work Sir!

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks. Poetry’s really been fun. 😊

    5. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Ben, love “the fervor of momentum.”

    6. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      how lovely

    7. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Love this, Benjamin, especially the ending.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks Sara! It was fun writing this one.

  7. Connie L Peters Avatar
    Connie L Peters

    Exits

    In a few days I’ll be making my exit
    from my small town in Colorado
    which I’ve been so busy in
    and leaving it all behind,
    well most of it anyway.
    I’ll still have writing assignments
    I’ll be working on in my motel rooms.
    From Wyoming, I’ll watch for the right exits
    along I80 and meet three sisters in Nebraska.

    Then we’ll watch for more exits
    until we meet our oldest sister in Ohio
    whom we’re all going to see
    before she makes her final exit,
    hopefully that’s not an exit
    in the near future.

    Maybe on the way back,
    I’ll meet a special poet friend.
    Then I’ll exit that Colorado town once again
    and retrieve my husband who I left
    sweltering in Phoenix heat,
    of which he’ll gladly exit
    for Colorado mountains.
    Lord willing, of course.

    1. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Safe travels, Connie, and lots of fun with the sisters!

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Puts me on blue highways, this does.

      1. pat anthony Avatar
        pat anthony

        Love the idea of those Exits– and the ramps and the GPS and the…. be safe! & happy Sistering!

    3. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Love this, Connie! I pray your sister’s final exit leaves you all with plenty more time and opportunity. Goodness.

      And am I allowed to say I CAN’T WAIT!!!!!!!!! ❤

      1. Connie L Peters Avatar
        Connie L Peters

        Thanks Marie. Our oldest sister had a heart attack last month. She’s doing better, but still not in the best of health.

        I’m really looking forward to meeting you, too!

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          I’m so sorry to hear that, but thankful she is doing better. As you already know, I LOVE that you and your sisters take these road trips together. So cool!

      2. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        Marie for some reason the site won’t let me post a poem… this is just my life right now… but it will let me comment… could someone post a a comment to me, and I will reply with my poem…

        1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
          Poetic Bloomings

          Got it taken care of, Mary. Sorry about that! I’m not sure why it wouldn’t let you post it.

          Marie

    4. Mike Bayles Avatar
      Mike Bayles

      I like that your exits lead to other places. Your poem takes my on a journey to many places. I’ve driven I-80 into western Nebraska.

    5. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Wow, sounds like quite a trip!

    6. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Yes. Like I tell my daughter when she travels, “Be smart, be safe!” Love this little travelogue.

    7. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Yes, Connie, I also loved this travelogue of the heart.

    8. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      Enjoy your travels and may you meet adventures that will make you laugh…

      1. Connie L Peters Avatar
        Connie L Peters

        Thanks everyone! Packing up today and taking off tomorrow! Lord willing and I think He is.

  8. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    EMOTIONAL EXIT

    It’s the little things.
    Minute. Infinitesimal.
    That make big splashes.

    Things that should protect us.
    Are the ones that betray—us.
    Like eyelashes.

    Tears profoundly whisper.
    Abstruse feelings.
    Words can’t utter.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Fascinating. A;; the periods are like teardrops/

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Oh, nuts. Sloppy typing again. “A;;” is supposed to be “All,” and I could use one of your periods at the end.

        1. pat anthony Avatar
          pat anthony

          Admire your concise and almost sparse vocab here… words like/minute/ infinitesimal/– the idea of betrayal by an /eyelash/–soooo much in that!

          1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
            Benjamin Thomas

            Thanks Pat, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks William.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      I’m left shaking my head in awe of your creative mind. Eyelashes of betrayal. Profound whispers of tears.

      Wow …

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        🙏🏾 ty

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      “Tears profoundly whisper.” That’s artistry.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      double wow… and there are some feelings that only the soul can understand.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Absolutely.

    5. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      I like the brevity of the lines, that say so much.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Ty 😊

  9. poetrybydebi Avatar
    poetrybydebi

    Exit Stage Left

    Some people have a dramatic flair
    a “look at me” center stage air
    but I like being peripheral, on the fringe
    having all eyes on me, makes me cringe
    others, at hogging an exit scene, are deft
    as for me, I just *exit stage left.

    *exit stage left
    noun: A timely and inconspicuous exit or departure, done so as not to make a scene or attract attention to oneself. An allusion to stage directions in theater, indicating when (and where) an actor should leave the stage from a scene.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      For me, this is an example of succinct verse and a perfect title.

      1. poetrybydebi Avatar
        poetrybydebi

        Thanks William

        1. pat anthony Avatar
          pat anthony

          Some really subtle rhyme here–great!

      2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Love this piece Debi. I can’t help that the title reminds me of the cartoon character Snagglepuss. His tag line was “exit, stage left” Stage right, even!

        1. poetrybydebi Avatar
          poetrybydebi

          That’s how I even know the phrase. I can hear him saying it in my head.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Another way we are alike, Deb. Excellent piece.

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Debi, I know this stage edge comfort zone as well. Loved your poem.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      I like this one and there are some that do like to make big dramatic encores that I am really leaving this time, and others just quietly go.

    5. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Know the feeling, Debi!

  10. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    SHADES OF TILL EULENSPIEGEL

    Whilst skylarking through shenanigans
    at the home of the batty Brannigans,
    I indulged in some buffoonery
    by dabbling at cartoonery
    involving algebraic
    matters quite prosaic,
    followed by bits of boolery
    and other choice tomfoolery,
    until I make my exit
    muttering, “long live Brexit.”

    1. pat anthony Avatar
      pat anthony

      Although technically not Limerick, I’m sure Ogden is grinnin’

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Oh. My. Word. The height of cleverness!

    3. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Good use of words William!

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Ah, the Preston wit! You amaze me sir!

    5. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Ahaha! My smile is broad now.

    6. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      oooh love this, and the ending….I have friends in England who have made me understand how confounding and confusing Brexit.

    7. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Love all those fun word rhymes

    8. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      I love this, William! It is so clever and fun to read.

  11. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
    Mary Elizabeth Todd

    Walt, you expressed my feelings about poetry… perfection…

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Thanks Mary! I’m sure we all have those feelings for poetry.

  12. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
    Mary Elizabeth Todd

    Marie, I so understand this poem… I am actually painfully shy… put me in with people I know barely, I go into wallflower mode, and with those I know… it is only a bit better…

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      So many can relate that it makes me feel like it should no longer come as a surprise. I’ve always felt like odd-man-out for being such an introvert, but I’m beginning to wonder if we are much more common and perhaps even the majority.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        yeah we just keep quiet

  13. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Spot on, Walt. With both feet.

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      The way I entered the world Bill. Both feet first! 😁

  14.  Avatar
    Anonymous

    Doors

    There are doors that go in
    Doors that go out and
    Doors that swing both ways

    Each door taken is a choice
    Each choice made is our own
    And all have consequences
    Some good and others not

    So choose each door wisely
    But choose nevertheless
    Or suffer stagnation
    Claustrophobia
    Or suffocation

    Always remember the adage
    “When one door closes,
    Another door opens”
    In truth you have to open it
    If you can find it

    But what if there are multiple doors
    And only one is the right one
    Choose wisely
    The door that you choose to open
    May be your last

    1. Earl Parsons Avatar
      Earl Parsons

      That’s a new one. I hit the wrong key entering my email address and it posted my poem under Anonymous. Interesting.

      1. pat anthony Avatar
        pat anthony

        So many great lines and thoughtful content packed round with truth!

      2. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        Interesting indeed. Another point of interest: When I saw “anonymous,” I assumed it was Daniel. That has happened to him more than once out here. But I didn’t think it sounded like his work. It comes as no surprise this is actually you! Nice job!

        1. Earl Parsons Avatar
          Earl Parsons

          That makes me think of something fun to do. Maybe have an Anonymous poem day and see if we can guess who wrote what.

          1. Marie Elena Avatar
            Marie Elena

            That WOULD be fun! Except it could be super hard, because I think most of us would try to do something different. 😉

      3. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        I’ve submitted pieces that made me wish I had hit the wrong key.

      4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        I love this poem and I believe we make more choices than most care to acknowledge…

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      I love this take on the prompt!

    3. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      The surely had an Early feel to it, even bore you said. Good one!

    4. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Wise counsel Earl!

  15. Earl Parsons Avatar
    Earl Parsons

    I thought I chose “OUT”
    But it was not an EXIT
    Now that door is locked

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Ohhhhh …. Talk about few words with a punch! Love this one, Earl!

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Indeed

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      😂 Good one! I can see this one playing out in real time.

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Earl, we do too often assume two way portals.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      Marie is right

    5. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Good one, Earl!

  16. Janet Rice Carnahan Avatar
    Janet Rice Carnahan

    Great use of the prompt, Walt and Marie! I enjoyed both your poems! So many directions to go with this one.

    WHERE DO WE ENTER

    And when is it time,
    To go
    When do we appear?
    Will they let us know?

    Is there a right moment?
    To exit
    A socially acceptable sign?
    Yes, wait a bit!

    Hesitating to enter
    Not knowing when to leave!
    We have to trust our exit,
    Like knowing what we believe!

    We can so easily enter,
    Into life’s circumstance
    But how do we navigate?
    Is it time to end the dance!

    Some exits have flashing lights!
    To guide us on our way,
    We know when something has ended,
    There is nothing more to say!

    We can enter at our own risk,
    Taking our own life by the hand,
    We just have to know where to go out,
    If we do, we’ll understand!

    Some signs aren’t so obvious,
    Like maybe an exit doesn’t exist
    Like entering our walk for the day,
    Might end in a blinding, heavy mist

    Maybe our timing to enter is slightly off,
    Maybe we should adjust our idea to depart,
    Or maybe we jump in with both feet,
    Surrendering to it, right from the start!

    (c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2021

    1. pat anthony Avatar
      pat anthony

      I can almost see the heavy curtains// like Life’s a Stage // this fits so well stanza by stanza…

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Thank you for your kind words!
      Much to contemplate in this piece. Well done!

    3. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Love it Janet!

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Much to ponder here, Janet. You write each stage so clearly, it is easy to read your angst in these thoughts. A powerful piece here!

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Powerful is right.

    5. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Janet, our paths and daily itineraries do so depend on the people around us…I’ve felt this constant angst. Well written.

    6. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      You poems cause me to ponder and this is one of them

    7. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      This is wonderful, Janet!

  17. pat anthony Avatar
    pat anthony

    Oh Marie! Another I wish I’d written that. SOOOO perfect and so applicable to me so many, no–most of the time! Perfect.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Wow … thank you so much, Pat!

  18. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
    Mary Elizabeth Todd

    Exit Wounds…

    It has been a decade
    Since you decided
    You didn’t want me in your life.
    I accepted it…
    But the shot you made
    As you walked away
    More that bruised my heart.
    It caused my soul to bleed,
    And it has bled ever since…
    For you there were no exit wounds,
    But
    For me it was a bloody mess.

    You reached out to me,
    And I know I should feel joy…
    But all I remember
    Is how you sullied my name
    And thought you were justified
    For surely you can’t be wrong.

    I know that I will reach back,
    But I am wary…
    For I know that
    I will say something you do not like.
    And you will leave me again
    With exit wounds
    That will bleed me out…

    Mary Elizabeth Todd
    July 11, 2021

    My oldest nephew trashed me a year after my mother died. He told me I was to have no contact with his wife or his children. I tried once to reach out to him, and sent him a gift, and I got trashed even more. He has his problems… and I pray for him… He contacted me last week wanting to come down right now to visit… but he said, my children want to visit the farm…I told him i had plans and company until August. He would have to wait…I know I am strong enough to mend this, but I know I will be crushed again… He wants me to be moved out of my home so he can move in it. I can live here until I die. I just needed to express myself… I post most of my poems on fb but this one I will not because I know people who will tell him what I wrote.

    1. pat anthony Avatar
      pat anthony

      Positive thoughts for you, Mary. Think you’ve expressed this tragedy well albeit painfully…. perhaps there’s true healing in the future. We all need a shot a redemption…

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        I Know this and I know he is not a soul that is saved, and I do love him.. Praying for wisdom and strength..

    2. Earl Parsons Avatar
      Earl Parsons

      We must forgive others in order for God to forgive us. This sounds like a lesson your nephew needs to hear and heed. Sorry for your family struggle. We all have one or two of them if we look hard enough, I know I have and still do. Of course, even the act of forgiveness from one side is not always met with forgiveness from the other. That’s when it’s time to give it over to God and let Him handle it. Blessings.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        Thank you Earl, and my brother who was mentally ill was his father…He has some of the signs of his father….

    3. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Oh my. The ache of this. I’m so sorry, Mary.

      The title, btw, is brilliant.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        Thank you….This is one those times I have been wrestling with the Lord.. in the end, I will open my door to him and his family…but I know it will be stressful for me…

    4. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Sorry, my comment got misplaced…. Powerful. I felt this. I have family members in the same vein. Anytime I reach out to them there’s an wound inflicted. Sadly,I don’t reach out to them anymore.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        I understand that and I wonder about his motives… I will reach out this time on my terms, meaning you visit when I say… and it is because of his kids and his wife… my poor nephew is so damaged, and he doesn’t see it…

    5. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Such a stark relating of heartache.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        thanks for stark is a good way to say how I have been feeling…

    6. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Mary, sad to hear of this hurt in your heart, the healing seems to come so slowly when the wounds are so deep. Praying for a miracle of peace between you that doesn’t depend on either of you, but on the grace of God.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        thank you… Yesterday I almost did not go to church but I did and the preacher talked about Jesus telling the woman who washed his feet with oil to go in peace… those words resonated with me, and have grown a little stronger…I try to remember that I am an instrument of His work. Not always easy…

        1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
          Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

          Yes Mary, the hammer feels the blow as well as the nail. The saw dulls its teeth as the wood yields. The crowbar strains each molecule of iron as the boulder is oppressed by gravity. God uses tools, and they are priceless in His hands.
          You are priceless too, our friend, in His hands.

          1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
            Mary Elizabeth Todd

            Thank you…

            1. poetrybydebi Avatar
              poetrybydebi

              Mary, you can forgive as God tells us to do but He doesn’t expect you to go right back for more hurt at your nephews hands (or mouth). He doesn’t sound trustworthy. I am so sorry for your pain.

              1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
                Mary Elizabeth Todd

                thank you, and he isn’t…

    7. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      This is a sad situation, Mary. I hope it gets resolved (in your favor).

  19. Daniel Paicopulos Avatar
    Daniel Paicopulos

    Marie, I so appreciate a short poem which says a lot. Walt, everything about yours is to be enjoyed…the content, the structure, the rhyming, the length, the choice of words. Magnificent, both of you.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Thank you, Daniel!

    2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Thank you, Daniel. I am humbled.

  20. Daniel Paicopulos Avatar
    Daniel Paicopulos

    Sitting

    When one can not
    find an exit in the fog,
    one might pause,
    sit a bit in meditation,
    in quiet contemplation,
    to discover a singularity,
    the present moment’s clarity,
    or maybe just because.

    To survive the fog,
    one must be willing,
    like a blind dog,
    trusting itself, running
    headlong into the mist,
    accepting whatever comes,
    including this,
    the brilliant phosphorescence
    of a new way to see the world.

    To escape the pea soup
    of not knowing,
    one could make room for everything,
    the invisible, the showing,
    joy, grief,
    misery, relief.
    As a spider weaving a web,
    starting from nothing,
    grasping the difference
    between action
    and accomplishment.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      This took me on a journey of sorts. The final stanza especially grabs me.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        I agree.

      2. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Agree with Marie!

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      I love the metaphor and visual of walking into a fog. Losing your senes of direction, but finding a new one. Excellent.

    3. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Pure wisdom here, Daniel!

    4. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      So profound, this.

    5. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Wow. Daniel. Those last five lines. What depth perception your poetry has. I marvel.

    6. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      I have a deep love of fogs and mists… and when they lift they are magical… this poem is magical..

  21. Janet Rice Carnahan Avatar
    Janet Rice Carnahan

    A WAY OUT

    The question is a way out,
    Of what?
    The easy road
    The road less traveled
    The straight route
    From here to there
    The fastest point from
    A to B
    Will we see something different?
    Will we be someone different?
    Will we glean a new perspective?
    Or just shift and change
    An old self-image
    Until we need the next way
    To move forward
    To move on
    To move back
    And then we wake up
    One day
    Expecting something new
    Something, someone, or ourselves
    we left behind,
    Only to find,
    We have effectively
    Just gone around in endless circles
    Trying to circle a square,
    Or a removing a knot,
    That was actually,
    Never there!

    (c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2021

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Ooooo …. what a lesson-in-poem!

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Yes

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Awesome, Janet.

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Yes, Janet. That knot that was not there. I’ve struggled so to undo something that was not really done, but just was. Great insight here.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      powerful

  22. pat anthony Avatar
    pat anthony

    Grace

    I step from the trail believing
    myself well equipped for the foray
    boots to my knees and an eager gleam
    in my eye reflecting sun’s glare
    from purple black drupelets rising
    above insect-shredded triads
    raggedy green leaves already turning
    rusty orange cupping hands of red
    berries clustered around those perfect
    ones so ripe they lure you past
    sprawls of poison ivy and waist high brome
    where last night’s herd bedded in
    mashed whorls of grass no doubt sated
    on these tasty jewels so delectable a finish
    to their foraging in summer fields buck and doe
    alike able to pick their way past thorns
    and no doubt passing the skill along to
    spotted toddlers now dotting cooler woods

    but here hooked spines snagging skin better
    than burdock’s famous Velcro until
    intent on winning this war I tug
    at immature berries only now beginning
    to lose the rose glow that clearly shouts sour
    determined not to leave without something
    to show for my journey; move to wipe hands
    on my jeans only to find myself trapped
    by a thousand tiny teeth their ripping shred
    as I try to back out of this blackberry patch
    my entry so much more graceful than my exit.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Pat,

      I’m beginning to feel like I could recognize your work without your name attached. The consistency of imagery, thought, emotion, captured moments in time, simple things in life … all beautifully staged. You always wow me. This one with the bit of humor made my smile broaden.

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        I feel the same way, and thanks for a new word: drupelet.

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      So elegant, Pat.

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Pat!! What a richly real visit into the bramble I am so familiar with along the backroads of my childhood. You left no finger unpricked and no berry unpicked in this. Beautiful, photographic. I can see the red streaks on my forearms.
      But I can also taste that warm cobbler and it’s oven-browned rippled crust now topped with sweet cream.

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        I suspect I’ve said this before, but Damon I look forward to your comments. Utterly poetic in themselves!

        1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
          Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

          Thanks Marie, just comes out that way. Takes a Poetic mind to hear a Poetic voice, and that’s what’s so special about this clan.

          1. Marie Elena Avatar
            Marie Elena

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      they are right this is so you… and what a lovely rendering with a touch of a smile for me

    5. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      A beautiful poem with a spot of humor!

    6. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Superb, Pat! Love your work.

  23. Earl Parsons Avatar
    Earl Parsons

    Two Doors

    His door is always open
    It has no lock or key
    The sign above it plainly states
    That what’s inside is free

    Free to all who walk through
    Of their own accord
    Of course there’s still the other door
    But that would be absurd

    We all must choose a door
    Before our final breath
    Which one determines where we’ll be
    After we’re put to rest

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Perfect cadence, as always. (One of your traits, btw. 😉 )

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Very nice Earl.

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Earl, truth.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      love

    5. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Brother, I can read you all day! Great stuff.

  24. Mike Bayles Avatar
    Mike Bayles

    The Front Door is Locked

    The front door is locked
    as I sit alone, stories in my head
    waiting to be told.
    My life is another page turned
    remnants of a song I sang last night,
    a keepsake on my table.

    I look out the window
    to where clouds and trees loom
    like a painting I once saw.
    A clock says it’s time to go,
    but visions linger.

    Weather forecasts on my cell,
    fortunes to be told,
    a trill of a songbird, then gone
    the call of the road,
    but not now.

    A friend now lost once said
    there’d be a lot of living to do
    even after she’s gone,
    a soft voice cracking with delight
    fire in her eyes.

    Kissed by memories
    I allow myself another moment
    before taking to the highway
    entrance and exit ramps
    panoramas passing before my eyes.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Mike, this is lovely. A stirring of the simple, and the deep. Love it.

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This is so rich in images, one would swear it were a drawing.

    3. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      I feel the hesitant anticipation here, the pensive prep to a departure, packed with memory.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      I Love the kissed by memories line….

    5. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      What’s up Mike!! Excellent poem here. Love the journey this took me through.

    6. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Simple, with a trace of yearning. Lovely poem, Mike!

    7. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      You paint a wonderful vignette, Mike!

  25. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    THE SOUL’S BLOOD

    The soundless tears exiting a suffering soul
    are its’s blood shed from wounds inflicted.

    They are never truly silent though, or inaudible,
    for they echo the screams of pain deep in the ravines.

    They are the toil of twisted emotion seeking an escape
    from the prison of the inner being.

    They are the hemorrhage and eruption of anguish,
    Volcanic ash—that people are now seeing.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Gripping title, and remains so throughout. So many haunting phrases, not the least of which is “toil of twisted emotion seeking an escape from the prison of the inner being.” Goodness…

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Yes. The phrases are so vivid. you should have “MP” after your name: Master of Phraseology.

        1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
          Poetic Bloomings

          Spoken like a true wizard, Bill. And so true.

      2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks Marie.

    2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Those exhoes….yes, Benjamin, well done.

    3. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      YOur poems are often powerful, and a truth that cannot be escaped…

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thank you. 😊

  26. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    Powerful. I felt this. I have family members in the same vein. Anytime I reach out to them there’s an wound inflicted. Sadly,I don’t reach out to them anymore.

  27. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    The Interruption

    Stark naked
    on a folding
    cot, the couple’s
    lovemaking is
    interrupted by
    a pink-cheeked
    grandmother.
    “Oh my, isn’t
    this the exit?”
    Male of couple,
    face flaming
    from being caught,
    as well as for
    Grandma’s mistake
    bellows, “Can’t you
    read the sign
    that says No Exit?”
    Pink cheeks firing
    up, the grandmother
    says, “I am close to blind.
    Your excuse is mistaking
    the No Exit sign for a
    Bedroom.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      LOLOL! Pink-cheeked chuckles from here in Maumee! 😀 Good one!

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Marie!

    2. Mike Bayles Avatar
      Mike Bayles

      LOL as well. I loved the humor.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Glad you enjoyed it!

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Rolling on the floor here.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        So glad I made you laugh!

    4. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      😂😂😂 Good one Sara.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Benjamin!

        1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
          Benjamin Thomas

          😁

    5. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Laughing out loud as well, Sara! Love the pink-cheeked grandma…

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Damon!

    6. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      this made me laugh out loud

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Now that’s a tough thing to do. Thanks, Mary.

    7. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Not nearly as blind as she says!

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Not even close!

    8. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Haha. This caught me off guard. Unexpected twist at the end.

  28. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    A TRANSPARENT EXIT

    Tears are transparent.
    They are the most genuine part
    of human nature.

    They show us exactly what is within,
    and without.

    They transmit rays of light
    to see through—mind, emotion will,
    allowing safe passage.

    Making visible the hidden
    seat of affection.

    They are the liquid sign,
    connection—of joy, fear, and grief.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Oh, yes. Indeed they are. Love the imaginative description and take!

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Same, here

      2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Ty

    2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
      Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

      Okay Benjamin…that haiku-first-stanza nails it.

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        Absolutely!

      2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        👌🔨

    3. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      there is a sweetness in the sorrow in this poem…

  29. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
    Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

    EXERT SIGN
     
    a heavy door
    the hinges stiff
    it takes a grip
    upon the knob
    a shoulder’s thrust
    against the edge
    a shove of muscle
    mind and heart
    a will to leave
    a will to leave
    a want that’s deeper
    stronger than
    the room I’ve been in
    far too long
    the hinges stiff
    a heavy door
     
    © Damon Dean 2021
     
     
     
     
     
     

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Broad smile here

      1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
        Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

        Thank you William, glad you liked it.

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Good one. I love the perspective of this It can take several different meanings.

      1. Marie Elena Avatar
        Marie Elena

        It really can, Benjamin. I read, and then reread, and then read again. This can be taken lightheartedly (as the title would suggest). Yet, I could also see a much deeper non-literal meaning … a need for change in life circumstance that is exhausting to come by. Almost like an abstract piece of art that carries different meaning and feeling, depending on the eye of the viewer.

        Well done as always, Damon!

        1. Marie Elena Avatar
          Marie Elena

          And super creative take on the prompt, btw!

        2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
          Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

          Thank you Marie, yes it started light and moved to pensive.

          1. Marie Elena Avatar
            Marie Elena

            Expertly penned. (y)

      2. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
        Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

        Thanks Brnjamin. And your bouquets of Blooms this week are marvelous in color and form. Loved them all.

        1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
          Benjamin Thomas

          Thanks Damon! 👍

    3. poetrybydebi Avatar
      poetrybydebi

      Love the title. Very clever.

    4. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      I like the flow of this poem…and it did make me smile also…

      1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
        Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

        Glad you enjoyed it.

    5. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Wow! Clever title and follow-through! Great poem, Damon.

      1. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
        Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

        Thanks Sara.

    6. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      More B. T. Brilliance.

  30. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
    Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

    Loved your 17 Marie. I know exactly that moment of hesitance.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Thank you!

  31. Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky Avatar
    Damon Dean, SevenAcreSky

    Walt, you aptly describe this passion of poetry! Well EXpressed.

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Thanks Damon.

  32. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
    Mary Elizabeth Todd

    My Exit…

    There were jokes about me
    At my office…
    I had been there so long
    I was dubbed “Moses caseworker.”
    Because I wore black on many days…
    My coworkers said I was witchy woman.
    I sometimes got called- the witch with a capital B
    From he ll…Angel had been taken by the other Mary…
    She really is an angel.
    I was tough, it didn’t mean I didn’t care.
    When I was handed a new case…
    I was informed it was a Mary Todd case
    Meaning nothing would be normal.
    But I heard the jokes that I would never retire…
    That they would find me dead at my desk…
    They didn’t know me…

    I had a dream…
    From the first time I put pen to paper
    I knew who I was in my soul…
    I was a poet and a writer…
    A wanderer, who listened
    To the wind blowing through the trees
    In the forest that is my home.

    This job I had had for nearly three decades
    Was a place of teaching for me.
    It was time for me to leave
    For I heard the wind speak to me.

    On my last day after my luncheon,
    My supervisor said,
    “You are not really going.”
    I smiled and said, “Watch me.”

    I made my exit from the work,
    That had consumed my life.
    It was in many ways a quiet exit…
    A cousin or two came to celebrate, and
    Two friends traveled far to be there.

    It was an end of an era…
    A coworker said to me…
    You succeeded in your work…
    She knew I wanted to be a writer,
    And she told me to give up my dream…
    I had had my success in life.
    She was a realist…
    I respected that for I was one too,
    But I had a dream, and I had to try.

    I heard her words.
    They froze me for a time,
    But then I remembered…
    I had made an exit to my job,
    But not to my life,
    And I had much more to give…

    Mary Elizabeth Todd
    July 12, 2021

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      You are a force, Mary. Thank you for all the years you worked so hard to take care of those young hearts in desperate need. Now, write on. 🙂

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        Thank you and I also had the nickname as Terminator…because many of my cases were Termination of parental Rights cases.

      2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        What she said, Mary. Your work shines.

    2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      Beautifully penned, and well told. It really tells a story.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        thanks

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      The storytelling, again, is done wonderfully.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        thanks

  33. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
    Mary Elizabeth Todd

    There is no exit….

    Imagine…
    You are in a room.
    You hear the fights-
    Every night,
    And see the results-
    Every morning.

    Imagine
    You are ten,
    And every loud noise
    Makes you jump,
    Expecting to hear
    A scream.

    Imagine
    Pretending to sleep
    And you heart races
    As you hear
    The door knob turn
    And then your bed creaks.

    Imagine
    The fear
    That is with you-
    Every waking- and
    Sleeping minute-for
    There is no exit.

    Now
    Imagine
    What freedom
    Would mean,
    If this was
    Your reality.

    Mary Elizabeth Todd
    July 12, 2021

    1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
      Benjamin Thomas

      POW! Now that has quite an impact. Devastating, yet very powerful.

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        Thanks and it worked…we had a training session years and years ago where the leader had us close our eyes and imagine…and last night I remembered the method…

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Goodness. Horrific things people must live through. 😦

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        more than most know…. frontline workers always see the worst… but we are there to keep the rest not only safe from the dangers but also safe from knowing how bad things can be.

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Spot on/

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        thanks

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      What a nightmare!

  34. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    DOWN THE MOTHER ROAD

    Sometimes, as they say in Spanish,
    “Prohibida la salida” there ain’t no exit;
    there is no off ramp on this road called life.

    There are no shortcuts to reach our journey’s end,
    or small mercies down the epic lanes of route 66,
    we just put the pedal to the metal, clambering down
    that mother road.

    The situation never gets easier, or old, as we take
    the grand tour around the hinterlands of hard times.
    We just tip our hats, let the suffering do its work.

    There is no exit when your young’un is a hungry,
    and he’s gunning for the breast with a vengeance.
    We just bide our time, let em’ drink til the cows
    come home.

    There is no exit when there’s no grub on the table neither.
    We gotta go the extra mile through blood, sweat, and tears,
    keep yer nose to the grindstone for them vittles, you see?

    But just between you and me—when the going gets tough,
    the tough keep going down that ol’ mother road,
    like we’ve been told, spankin’ that ol’ Route 66.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      Wonderful and the reference to Route 66 clicked a memory of a tv show.. Yeah life has a way of getting even harder when times are tough… GREAT POEM!!!!

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks! Fun.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Well told. Excellent use of “voice” for this particular piece. “We just tip our hats, let the suffering do its work,” particularly speaks, to me.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks Marie.

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This brought back memories of being on that road, or what’s left of it, anyway. Wonderful.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        👌

  35. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
    Benjamin Thomas

    THE RUGGED ROAD

    There is no way around—
    the great wall of a young fractured mind.

    There is no escape—
    when you’re the convict, your loved ones
    have ill-defined.

    There is no way through—
    the bunker you’ve built, solid over time.

    There is no getting over—
    normalcy’s hill, you always get to climb.

    There is no way under—
    the rapids of guilt, all joy seems to be a crime.

    There is no way out—
    survival mechanisms, methodically designed.

    There is no way past—
    the hurricanes of pain, they’re always in behind.

    Your life has been forecast—
    the interest is high, but your card has been declined.

    You’re stuck on a long rugged road—
    with potholes, but there is no exit sign.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
      Mary Elizabeth Todd

      Pow this hits home and leaves a powerful impression…

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks.

    2. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Expert use of form to drive home the image and emotion. For me, the use of two-line stanzas that finish their point on the second lines and punctuate with a full-stop period is brilliantly effective.

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks!

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Such skillful use of rhymes and near=rhymes, especially, for me, “hurricanes of pain.”

      1. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        I liked that also….

      2. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Thanks William.

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Excellent poem, Benjamin!

      1. Benjamin Thomas Avatar
        Benjamin Thomas

        Ty Sara! 🙏🏽

  36. Mary Elizabeth Todd Avatar
    Mary Elizabeth Todd

    finally… it came up allowing me to post… sort of fits with this poem….

    The Exit Sign Is not in View…

    Car wrecked and scratched
    Two weeks ago
    (Dealing with the others insurance is not fun,)
    My new air conditioning is broke,
    And I am broke since I bought it,
    And it will have to be replaced,
    My roof needs replacing,
    My oven has been broken for over a year,
    My dishwasher for even longer,
    I can’t make gravy worth a dam-n,
    Three of four ceiling fans are broken,
    A leak in a pipe, fixed, but
    Missed fixing the hot water pipe
    To my bathroom…
    For now, living is
    In a sauna and going to cool off
    In a near frozen river (I have a well)…
    My dryer decided that today it would break.
    My iron levels I know are getting low…
    Trying to decide whether-
    To let it get lower, so I get an iron infusion,
    Or take more iron in hopes I get better…
    How I wish-there was a device
    To test my iron each day
    To stay ahead of the game
    Instead of walking blind
    Hoping I am on the right track…
    Until I know I am not.
    When the dryer died,
    I cried,
    Because I am weary.

    But I have good friends, and
    Some dear relatives, and
    There is hope for some things changing-
    That is all I am saying, and
    I sent my novel series to the second agent,
    And I know that is a toss in the air,
    Until I find the right one…
    But I am trying…
    In the meantime, I write every day…

    This is the life I have.
    It is a gift…each day is a gift,
    And it is also a dance…
    This is the dance card
    I have been given,
    And the exit sign
    Is not in view…
    Give me strength
    Give me wisdom…
    I will get through this…

    Mary Elizabeth Todd
    July 13, 2021

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      The short lines have a pounding quality, which seems fitting.

      1. etodmar Avatar
        etodmar

        Thanks and was it you who said something about my short lines before… I tried it again in this one…

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    etodmar

    Storms, not a reason to exit…

    My life has been a series of storms of late.
    It is like the end of the major storm
    That hit me a year ago…
    It has worn me down.
    It is chaos,
    And I prefer cosmos
    To chaos.

    I took a shore ride
    In yesterday’s sun
    To clear my head of the storms
    That were shaking my life
    Like a series of tornados.

    As I was driving home…
    I stopped on my driveway…
    Where the giant trees
    Were battered
    By the blows of a tornado
    A quarter century ago.
    I remember that night,
    And the destruction
    I saw the next morning…
    For I was sure my forest
    Would die.

    I was wrong.

    I stepped into the sunlight,
    And felt it dapple my skin.
    I looked at the tall giants,
    Damaged by that storm,
    But still standing.
    Strong, tall,
    Reaching for the light.
    It was peaceful…
    They were peaceful…
    Scars were there,
    For life often scars us.
    There was also life…
    Seeking out
    The good in the air,
    And the sunlight on their leaves
    Looking as a cathedral
    In an ancient gothic church.

    It is a holy place,
    My forest,
    For God walks
    In the gardens of His creation.
    There is cosmos
    In the gardens, and
    I found it as I stood there.

    Earlier
    I had wanted to give up
    And stop fighting,
    But looking at these tall giants…
    In the heart of my forest,
    I knew, storms are
    No reason to exit,
    Or to give up,
    But only give us strength
    To continue to reach for the light.

    I took a few photos,
    But knew they would never expose
    The cosmos of that moment
    As I stood with God
    In His cathedral
    Created by His love.

    Mary Elizabeth Todd
    July 14, 2021

    1. etodmar Avatar
      etodmar

      second stanza… should be I took a short ride…

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      etodmar

      for some reason… some of my stuff is listed as Mary Elizabeth Todd which has a painting I did for a friend… and some of it lists me as etodmar which is the name Better homes and garden gave me for ten years… actually it was Etod Mar….

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      William Preston

      Such a memorable line: ” … prefer cosmos to chaos.”

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        Mary Elizabeth Todd

        Thank you and I do…

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    purplepeninportland

    Marie, I love the twist in your clever poem.

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    purplepeninportland

    Walt, your words may be an escape for you, but they stay with me for some time.

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      Poetic Bloomings

      Thanks Sara! Glad my words stay with you. apparently I got my point across!

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    Travel – eastelmhurst.a.go.go

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