This past week, we had experienced the phenomenon of what’s called the Supermoon/Blood Moon. Moon gazers came out to try and witness Mother Nature’s show. And we were all looking up at the same moon. In a sense we were connected.
This week we’re writing to the moon and back. Actually, we’re writing with the title “UNDER THE MOON OF_________________”. Fill in the blank and write it!
Give the moon qualities related to something or someone else. Some examples: Under the Moon of Capricorn, Under the Moon of Reason, Under the Moon Pie Sky, Under the Moon of Chocolate Confections… You get it. So give it a go and shoot the moon!
MARIE’S SHARE:
Beneath the Moon of God’s Choosing
In the midst of war
(and there is always a war)
lies grim misjudging.
Fear of difference.
Insatiable greed for land.
Resolute loathing.
Dire false impressions.
Grave miscommunications.
And a common moon.
And beneath that moon,
in God’s perfect alignment,
is home to us all.
We’ve food and water
(if only we’d gladly share),
great plains and mountains,
celebrated seas
with unfathomably large
communal mammals.
With microscopic
yet astoundingly complex
sentient beings.
Sands God has numbered
stay in place as our home spins,
not spilling a drop
of the vast waters
that both adorn and provide,
beautify and quench.
And though we do not
tend to her needs (let alone
the needs of “others”),
God gave us this home
brilliantly placed beneath the
moon of His choosing,
populated with
children He chooses to love.
(There are no “others.”}
© Marie Elena Good, 2021
5-7-5
WALT’S TOTAL ECLIPSE OF THE HEART:
UNDER THE MOON OF WHISPERED DESIRES I can see you in the distance and I take the chance to dance with you in silhouette without regret. The moonlight illuminates, it waits for you to take your stance in these arms of tender caress. No need to confess our intent, we have sent it packing for it was lacking any fault of misdeed. This could lead to something more. What the evening holds is the dream of me holding you again, and then I will lean in close and on the heated breath of longing, breathe sweet somethings or nothings, anything that will make you return to my arms nightly. In the sight of the stars, you will quiver, and I will deliver every nuance in advance. They can see us in the distance, taking this chance to do our dance under the moon of whispered desires. © Walter J. Wojtanik – 2021
Great prompt and wonderful poems! You guys are awesome. 👏
Thank you so much, Benjamin! Walt is the best prompter around, IMHO.
Many thanks.
I love love love the moon.. I Loved your take on the moon… you are individually marvelous…
Thank you so much, Mary!
I’m individual, she’s marvelous!
hah
HA! Goofy guy! 😀
UNDER THE MOON OF WRINKLED YEARS
There’s only one exalted moon,
but there are many years.
Their extent resides in the midst
of elongated wrinkled flesh.
Through the lengthy tunnel of life,
folded over and over again.
As if in an constant turn,
agitating, rotating within a washing machine.
That purifies clean precious moments
from the foreign particles of dross.
Many attempt to wash away
the precious furrows in their life.
Those who do not mourn
the loss of calculated time.
In a poor attempt to strip away
the undesirable for a sense of vain beauty.
But they don’t yet understand,
the duty—of the folds.
For they hold the key of time,
the carriage of the experience of life.
For they greatly exemplify
the wisdom of one’s living.
It is the slow accumulation—
giving us wise years over time.
That resonate in the manifold
furrows of wrinkled majesty.
Like the glorious tasting
of vintage aged wines.
They are the wrinkles of time
spent here on the earth.
Some bear them in shame—
like old dishonorable worthless rags.
Others embrace the esteemed dress,
as a sign of being blessed in high dignity.
For the yoke of time tends to folds in on itself,
over and over and over again.
For no one can genuinely win the race,
or outpace the one called—Father Time.
Yet the savor of folds and wrinkles,
exhibit how many years we’ve been running.
Benjamin Thomas
Loads of wisdom here. Great piece!
Thanks. I don’t have any wrinkles yet, but I know they’re coming!
I have plenty to go around the garden!
👏 Thank you good sir. We appreciate it.
Wonderful, especially, in my view, the penultimate line.
Thanks William 😁
Wisely spoken, Benjamin.
Thanks Sara. 😊
Benjamin, this poem of all of yours that I like… and some I love . this one I love because…I am living it…and know how those younger disregard those wrinkles and folds… as see us as simply old…
😉 👌
Under the Moon of My Youth
Carefree days,
nights with no worries.
We danced with
fireflies
while the moon kept watch over
innocence of youth.
Perfect fit for the form, methinks.
Very lovely.
Carefree innocence. Perfect for a moon such as that Paula!
how wonderful to dance with fireflies!
Agree with William. This was a perfect form to use.
This. Is. Beautiful. ❤
love /we danced with fireflies/ oh, yes!
lovely and I remember those days
Hallmark Love
We’re growing older, as we should,
married more than 50 years now,
but it doesn’t mean in geezerhood
we’ve lost any of our amazing wow.
We’ve seen too many tropical moons,
experienced several sleepy lagoons,
yet there’s no less love, none that we lack,
and we still love each other to the moon and back.
Love it, especially using “geezerhood” in a thyme.
Well…. in a rhyme too….
I could see this in a Hallmark card. Nice.
hallmark
PRONUNCIATION:
(HAHL-mark)
MEANING:
noun:
1. A mark of quality, genuineness, or excellence.
2. A distinguishing feature or characteristic.
ETYMOLOGY:
After Goldsmiths’ Hall in London, where articles of gold and silver were appraised and stamped. Earliest documented use: 1721.
YES. No loss of amazing wow in your poems, either. This one warms my heart!
smile
UNDER THE MOON OF MANAKOORA
I watched the waves come from the sea
as though enticing me
to spend the balance of my days
among hulas and leis
beneath the palms and on the sands
while lovely hula hands
tell stories of the evermore
when grace meant Dorothy Lamour.
Some might like to hear this:
Delightful. Just one of the fabulous works of Alfred Newman, now combined with the fabulous works of our man Bill.
Splendid William!
Wow, this is a winner, William!
Perfectly penned cadence and rhyme, doing your subject matter proud.
love…. and for some reason made me think of Martin Denny’s Quiet Village…
Marie, your piece is wonderful, and the last line recalls for me a spiritual, “The Gospel Train,” in which one line is “no difference in the fare.”
Thank you so much!
Walt, your poem again shows that you’re peerless in your ability to use internal rhyming to create images.
UNDER THE MOON OF A CRYSTAL SKY
Under the moon of a clean crystal sky,
lie the lives of men, women, and child.
Moving, roving about, to and fro,
back and forth, but what they do not know—
is that they’re lives are under the observation
of the one that created them.
Him who dwells far above the crystal expanse.
The one who is seeking to romance fallen humanity.
The one who bought them at the price of his own blood.
His eyes descend down below to observe
the lives of men, women, and child.
To observe the wild, haughtiness of the nations,
to rule those who rule as lords among men.
His eyes are running to and fro, back and forth,
roving about seeking the lost.
Benjamin Thomas
Fascinating; there is a to and fro feeling in the construction.
Wonderful! And I will just add my sincere AMEN.
🙏🏽
I didn’t expect that ever watchful eye and it opened the poem to me thinking we are like ants in some ways and yet He loves us anyway…He watches over us anyway… thank you for this poem… I needed it.
You’re very welcome! I know he’s been watching over me for quite some time know. It’s an eery feeling sometimes, like a loving parent looking out for a child, but what a blessing.
I get that feeling… sometimes it is just a sense of I need to watch out…and yes it is a blessing..
Under the Moon of Poetry
Amidst the meter and the rhyme
Amidst the lines and the verses
Amongst the poets of our time
Come the blessing and the curses
From the cradles to the hearses
Stirred up in creativity
Some wonderment it disperses
Under the moon of poetry
Those who marvel in mere wording
Unite together with intrigue
Spotting wonders like they’re birding
Cheering each other in their league
Somehow erasing all fatigue
Fervent fans of hyperbole
Enthusiastic for the gig
Under the moon of poetry
Tears and laughter they are sharing
Tribulations, wisdom and grace
Persevering not despairing
Painting with words at their own pace
Life complexities face to face
With honesty the master key
Attune to person, time and place
Under the moon of poetry
Poeming for challenge and for fun
Gathered in mutuality
In this, they feel that they have won
Under the moon of poetry
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Superb, from rhyming to construction through the whole nine yards.
Awesome Connie. I love poems about poetry!
what a wonderful moon, this moon of poetry!
I love this, Connie, from the title to the description.
What a creative thought. Well done!
so many “poetic” truths woven throughout!
lovely and I am glad I am under that moon also
Under the Moon I Lay…
My vision was deficient;
I learned early to fake the eye tests
The school gave each year…
I saw few stars.
Barely could read the blackboard,
But I didn’t want glasses.
I was twelve when I got them…
But when I was eight, we lived on a river.
At night when I went to bed,
I opened the window,
When the moon was out,
And pulled my pillow
Out to watch the moon
Even when the snow laid
Crisp on the ground
And glowed in its light.
I would fall asleep,
Watching the moon
To the lullaby sung by the river.
In the morning I would be warm in my bed,
And the window would be closed.
No one ever told me not to do it…
They let me fall asleep to the moon…
Years later after my father was gone,
I found something he wrote
About how he slept when they lived in tents…
When he was eight, and
Pulled his cot out on moonlit nights
To watch the moon
Follow its ancient path
Across the sky…
And missed again
How much we were alike.
I always felt it was him
That put me back properly
Into my bed…
And told my mother not to fuss,
For he watched the moon,
When he was a boy of eight, and
Probably smiled that his daughter
Had did the same.
If I could have a house
Any where I wanted,
It would be in a hollow,
Where a brook came babbling down,
And the moon took its path,
Over where I would sleep,
And I would watch it again,
And have the water lull me to sleep.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
May 30, 2021
This is a very beautiful piece. 👌👏
thank you, and I did fake the eye test… my last name Todd was one of the last kids called and I memorized what they said, even though I couldn’t see a thing… in the 7th grade they had us point the direction of the the Es and I could not even see the other kids or the Big E… I was given a letter, and threw it away and Ma got a letter saying they would buy me glasses… THere is a reason the first time she did not know me and told me to find me and told me I was her most difficult child. I laughed cause I knew I was.
Such wonderful storytelling.
thanks I grew up among mountain people and they are great storytellers
From a child’s point of view to the adult she became. Wonderful, Mary!
thank you so much…
Mary, this is just lovely. The entire poem, the memories, the sentiment behind it all, the love and acceptance … all of it.
“I would fall asleep,
Watching the moon
To the lullaby sung by the river.” This makes me sigh.
thank you
such a gentle tribute to your Dad, and all spun with so much detail.
Thank you
UNDER THE MOON: CONSERVATIONS WITH THE SEA
It never seems to be a bore;
between the open expanse of rampant skies,
and the tumultuous counterpart of sizzling seas.
Her endearing winds flow and tease, disheveled
waves—his crazed moods a maze crashing about.
She persistently prays to understand
the erratic manner of his changing tides.
But she doesn’t realize his need to skate the surface,
knowing his depths run into the abyss.
Yet she’d be remiss if she didn’t confess—
her need to kiss the swell of seas.
Craving to possess the rising crest of teal lips,
and seize a flurry of teal blue kisses.
He feels the hawking condemnation
of not being completely transparent waters.
The shallowness of his reluctance,
from the breaking of waves to his sunken treasures.
He seeks to gauge the displeasure of her flaky countenance,
to know the flow of her cumulus clouds.
To absorb the radiant warmth of her valiance of sun,
and take the brunt of her cold, grey shoulder.
But his love for her is without measure,
for she is the azure wonder of the ocean of the sky.
For the conversation is never over,
the twin-teal titans of the sea and sky—
continue under the curious guidance of the moon.
Benjamin Thomas
Just realized I goofed the title. Perhaps it should read: UNDER THE MOON: CONVERSATIONS WITH THE SEA AND SKY
That’s probably better, but I think the piece is superb nonetheless.
That last stanza is gorgeous, Benjamin!
Thanks 😁
Simply beautiful.
So many wonderful ways to read this–superb visuals and so many layers IMO
Thanks Pat. 🙏🏽
just delightful
Thank you. It was a fun prompt.
Under the Misunderstood Moon
Can you imagine if the moon you see
For too long it’ll give you lunacy
What total bunk this has proven to be
‘Cause lunacy comes naturally to me
And what’s this about a ball of cheese
Just what kind of cheese would the moon be
Swiss, Blue Cheese, Pepper Jack or Brie
In truth, it’s all just bunk to me
Blue moon, blood moon, pink, white or red
And that face that makes it look like a head
So many weird things ‘bout the moon has been said
It’s just a moon, so don’t be mislead
We’ve been there you know more than a few
One after another the Apollo crews flew
‘Cept for 13, ‘cause an oxygen line blew
How I wish we’d send up a moon return crew
Good one!
That’s awesome Earl! Love the voice of this and the use of the word bunk.
Love the humor and rhyming.
I like this, with its bit of humor throughout and tons-of-fun rhyme.
this made me smile big
Under the Moon of a Friend
We’d watch the moon travel across the sky,
making wishes on stars scatted across the night,
singing the songs of teenage angst played on the radio.
It was the age of Aquarius and we were left behind
sitting on a porch in our small hometown.
But our dreams were the same as the girls we’d never met,
And our hopes were the universal hopes of youth.
Tonight I look up at the moon, large and clear, shining
on each of us, in different places, uniting us forever from a distance.
Beautiful.
Thank you
👍
I love how this poem unites time.
Such a hopeful thought.
You place us right there with you, Candy. Excellent, charming piece!
Thanks, Marie
you’ve said so much so concisely…and in a similar setting, I’ve often wondered about those other girls… yes, you captured something special here… the longing
such loveliness here… and I know that summer…
Marie, you have expressed the human condition so well in this!
Thank you!
Waly, your poem leaves me weak in the knees! Wow!
Gosh, I know it. His way with romantic poems totally wows me every single time.
Of course that should be Walt. Oi! I’ll never learn to proof read.
Under the Moon of Dreams Come True
Under the moon of dreams come true
you can stand when the moon is full.
Gaze ’til a face appears to you,
under the moon of dreams come true.
If you chance upon one that’s blue
your dreams will happen on schedule.
Under the moon of dreams come true
you can stand when the moon is full.
“Under the moon of dreams come true” beautiful.
Indeed/ A poem all its own.
Thanks, Willliam!
Truly!
Thanks, Benjamin!
😉
perfect form for content–IMO. So winsome….
this made me smile
Thanks, Mary!
Under the Super Flower-Blood Moon
She meets up again over violets and orchids
bathed in fragrance and rose gold light
the three of them huddled by the French doors
where she has a standing reservation
opening onto tiers of shelves holding plants
more stepping down the outside staircase
aglow with this borrowed light from
a long-set sun shining now over Africa
its waving savannahs, sparkling on canals
in Venice, dimpling Egypt’s Nile
music washes over her notes spilling from throats
of dueling mockingbirds as she watches
the play of moonbeams patterning her bare feet
reaches out as if to gather the shafts of light
into her blue veined hands almost translucent
now even her body grown thin through
so many nights spent on these two a.m.’s
when she awakens out of habit to hold forth
in this companionable silence even as she presses
her fingers against the glass before touching
them to her lips tasting sun flower blood moon
in a single drop holding the tang of ocean
that surprises her night after night when
she knows again the salt of it all and tells herself
it can’t have been a tear.
Beautiful!
Wow. And double wow. So absorbing.
and triple WOW!
is there a fourth wow for I would say that…
😀
My oh my oh my! Quadruple the wow, Pat. All of this is intriguing, and your ending sends it through the roof. WOW.
Thank you, All… 🙂
Marie & Walt, I think you deserve a lot of the credit for setting the mood with this prompt!!
thanks for I couldn’t remember the word… now I have to find out what a fifth wow would be
UNDER THE MOON OF TEASES AND TRICKS
The ascension of the night-glow of the moon
teases a yawning and blushing sun.
Her tender light trickles have begun—
a lingering sunset.
She only pretends to slumber,
yet never forgets—to rise another day.
The evening shift of moonlight is strewn,
and displayed across sunset teases.
Enlivening the grey-born shadows
that lay tricks before betraying eyes.
The night creatures praise and rise,
stalk in disguise of another light.
A horde of bats and fowl of the night
roam freely teasing the friends of the day.
A gathering symphony of crickets
strike the silence with resilient song.
The creeping things creep,
all night long— along with slithering kind.
But they all keep in mind, this one thing;
that all the teases and tricks will come to an end.
Benjamin Thomas
Big smile here
Joining Bill’s smile.
😁😁
Love the way you’ve captured the interplay/interdependence between Sun & Moon… fascinating
Thanks. 👍
big big smile
Yay 😁😁😁
Walking on the Dark Side of the Moon…
When the new moon floats in the sky…
I see a shadow of where it is…
Just like I am standing on its dark side…
Been walking on the dark side of the moon…
My heart is leaden and the weight
Keeps me from the light side of the moon.
There is nothing I can do,
But keep walking towards my grave…
Just knowing I make it to the light side.
They say it is not my burden,
But love says that it is,
All I have is my prayers and the steps I make…
I am walking on the dark side of the moon,
And my tears blind me, and I stumbled,
But I keep on walking and praying.
Too many people walking here with me.
I pass them all the time, and
Their hearts are carrying chains binding them.
Too many people think this life is all we got.
Too many people think they have a right…
The only right we have here is to give more than we get.
I look up at the new moon,
A shadow in the sky,
But that light will come again.
But until then I will keep on walking,
Saying my prayers
While on the dark side of the moon.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
May 30, 2021
Excellent! You had me at the title.
Thank you…going thru a rough patch with someone I can’t really help except listen and pray… it is hard…
Superb
thanks
Superb writing, pressing mood. Wow.
thank you…..
The only right we have here is to give more than we get.// Powerful stuff, Mary. Yes, the believing and the praying…. we’ve got to hold on no matter what even if thats “all” we’ve got– Love the “earthiness” of your poetry
Thank you
UNDER THE MOON OF ARRESTING PEACE
Under the moon of an arresting peace,
things lie at ease. Under the steady blast
of silver linked lights.
They brutally fight off the rolling darkness
of draining moods, and dank cellar-thoughts
The neighboring stars
bear witness to the testimony
of her calming faithfulness.
The neighboring stars
join in—and offer their light
from afar.
Benjamin Thomas
Fascinating title.
Love this, Benjamin, and oh that title!
Thanks Marie.
Ah and this title grabbed me and kept me thru the poem
👍
UNDER THE MOON OF WISHES
Under the moon.
Under a tree.
I made a wish.
For the healing
of wounds inflicted,
old and fresh alike.
Benjamin Thomas
Yes. Yes.
👌
amen
This is dedicated to those who lost their lives in the Tulsa massacre 100 years ago. R.I.P.
UNDER THE MOON OF REFLECTIONS
The night lamp hung tight;
the yellowy vibrant glow
of suspended moon-rock
riding the night skies—
Casts no light of its own,
yet it owns the sure fire ways
of blazing sun.
Its shining is resolute,
bearing witness to and exposing
the sins of those who shed blood.
She tearfully remembers—
the dark deeds of those
are written on her eyes.
Her moonlit tears,
streaming down are wet with grief;
pondering the voices of those
who cry out to her.
She knows them by name,
their escaping last sighs, and the heart wrenching
cries of orphaned lost children.
Her light danced across
their little faces—but they would no longer
see the faces of loved ones.
But of strangers,
they would come to know
the face of bitterness,
and the countenance of death.
The night-lamp held her breath,
taking in the harrowing
account of lives lost.
She always sees—
the nightseer, and always delivers
the hushed misdeeds of the spoken night.
Because there’s still,
an inflamed material witness
when they turn their back
on the way of the light.
Even though they may move
about in the darkness—
no one can escape the revealing eye
of the open moon.
Benjamin Thomas
I think this is superb, especially, in my view, the penultimate stanza
Oh my … all that you’ve managed to capture here so poetically … tears …
Thank you.
Such a beautiful, if wrenching tribute, to that massacre…. you’ve made me feel it as if a witness, and to me, that’s poetry. Powerful and timely
🙏🏽
this brought tears to my eyes
I know it’s sad. I wanted to give them a voice.
UNDER THE MOON AND SIXPENCE
I wagered my money on a ramble,
but the gambol
proved that I, like other poor sods,
couldn’t beat odds
stacked against me in massed array;
in my dismay
and anger I bet the farm, and hence,
I had no pence.
Very stately.
Good one, William!
Oh, Bill … this has the feel of an old classic. WONDERFUL.
Late afternoons are often filled with the white noise of old westerns…how many times did someone “bet the farm” and you’ve captured it here!!
smile
UNDER THE MOON OF ILLUMINATION
Comes a path to the sea,
Its as if the trees, part
Except for their perfected silhouettes
As the full moon’s subtle demands
Take her shine out of the shadows,
Showing the world her heavenly show
Even the black crabs,
Standing still on black lava rocks,
Have no place to hide,
Lovers cannot escape her glow,
As they come out in droves,
Basking in her romantic light,
A sight only they savor just so,
Children playing hide and seek,
Don’t need to peek,
She will guide their find,
Even the tides,
Will rise and fall,
As is their frothy call,
And if there is something we cannot see,
Just give her time,
She’ll reveal it all,
A pulse,
A vibration,
A secret love,
Not quite out in the open yet,
Clearly on their way,
We must,
Trust her shine,
She knows the path forward,
And the way back,
Her cycles speak of life,
They are the way,
We track our own cycles,
All her phases are ours, too,
When she shines,
As she shines,
We should not hesitate,
With our light,
Because it is never too late,
To illuminate,
Emerging out of the shadows,
Becoming whole and full,
Like the moon of illumination,
Once more
(c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2021
Fascinating poem; it even feels like tides.
I agree, I could almost hear them…
Very nice, Janet. My favorite line: “We must, trust her shine”
“never too late to illuminate” – Lovely!
Lovely! And I agree with Bill that even feels like the tides. Expert phrasing!
Even the black crabs, Standing still on black lava rocks,Have no place to hide,//She knows the path forward,And the way back,Her cycles speak of life…// I think these are my favorite lines– truly I think you’ve “illuminated” so much
UNDER THE MOON OF MAY
There once was a bee named Bea,
Obvious how her name came to be,
She flew through the flowers,
For many, many hours,
The true Bea buzz there was to see.
UNDER THE MOON OF JUNE
There once was a bug named June,
She wondered outside too soon,
Looking for a certain guy,
Not planning to be shy,
Just wanting a warm sand dune.
UNDER THE MOON OF JULY
There once was a wandering firefly,
Whose light would not let him fly,
Way too heavy to carry,
Bugs made fun of Larry,
But at night, his light lit the sky.
UNDER THE MOON OF AUGUST
There once was an intelligent grasshopper,
Who was an incredibly wise food shopper,
He knew just what to select,
And what to quickly reject,
When his sister took over, he’d bop her!
UNDER THE SEPTEMBER MOON
There once was a leggy, black spider,
Whose given birth name was Synder,
As the days got colder,
He became much bolder,
Instead of crawling, he became a glider,
UNDER THE OCTOBER MOON
There once was a beetle named Honey,
She hardly ever found anything funny,
Until she found a beetle mate,
A handsome youngster named Nate,
Whose nature was light and sunny!
(c) Janet Rice Carnahan 2021
Such fun!
I love the format of this.
How cool…loved this!
You’ve got the moons of summer all covered, Janet. Winter moons will get much colder! 😁
Oh my word how adorable are these! LOVE IT!
pure fun
Under the Moon Lit Sky
Under the moon lit sky
Row upon row of marble slabs stand
Each bearing the name of one fallen
Lost in the defense of our great land
Under the moon lit sky
Each night after the gates are locked tight
I wonder if these souls wander about
Exchanging stories of their final fight
Under the moon lit sky
Shining down on the places they lay
They lived and they died for freedom
We owe them all a debt we can’t pay
I hear an echo of “In Flanders Fields” here.
Spot on.
Excellent Earl.
So true, beautiful!
Wonderful! I’m there.
and yet with this poem you paid them
UNDER THE MOON IN THE CELESTIAL SKY
Angels come to watch
two whom love had made a match,
under the moon in their celestial sky.
They would spy with their Angel eyes
to see what true love does to hearts
from the beginning when the loving starts.
The two, unaware the night was watching
kept matching each other kiss for kiss,
embrace for each heated embrace.
And in case they didn’t see, the two
were you and me and together we came
to this spot on the hot sand,
a grand and passionate time.
And I’m sure you could feel it from over there,
to share that moment, that closeness
happily ever after despite tears
and laughter, our hearts will know
as it has all ways known under the moon
in the celestial sky!
For me, this has almost a medieval feel, something for the troubadours. Marvellous!
Excellent, Walt. 👏 Read it twice.
*sigh*
so much wonderful rhythm & rhyme to bring me, the reader, into the flow…
Ahhhh sigh, ooooh and just wonderful
Under the Winter Moon…
The young man was taken from his home,
And tied behind a horse to follow the men in white
To the hanging tree. His mother screamed out his name,
And he clung to that sound, wanting her voice
To be the last thought in his mind…
As they reached the top of the hill…
She wailed to the full moon,
“Oh, Lord, don’t let them kill my son.”
Those men, who thought they were right,
Those men, who felt only hate,
Those men didn’t listen to her pain
Because to do such a deed
Their hearts had to be hard
As granite rocks used for tombstones.
What was his sin,
The young man did not know.
He wondered if it was when he helped
The young white woman change her tire,
Or was it when he spoke without looking down.
It was hard to keep the rules straight,
When they changed all the time.
It must have been the time he drank
From the white’s only water fountain
But that was last summer
When he was warned when he was thrashed.
He knew his family would not come to rescue him.
No white person either, because if they did that
They would be outcast because the men in white
Kept tabs on everyone. His family would come
And cut him down, and bury him in the church graveyard.
They stopped beneath the hanging tree
For he wasn’t the first hung here.
He looked up at the winter moon
Against the cold dark sky,
He felt the air was heavy
And knew a snow was coming.
He hoped his little brother
Would bring wood into the house
For their Mama to use in her cook stove.
He kept his eyes on that moon,
And wondered if he would see it up close
As he made his way to heaven.
The men roughly put him on the horse,
And one man read out what he had done.
It was a kind act of changing a tire,
For that white girl, and telling her,
Which way to the main road.
The rope itched his neck,
And he just kept looking at the winter moon.
He felt his body jerk, and
As he left, he kept the sight of that winter moon
With him, and whispered to the air,
“Mama, I am going home.”
Mary Elizabeth Todd
May 31, 2021
Very tragic. You captured it well.
thank you… in the first novel in the series there is a lynching…not exactly like this but still it is there…it is in the 30s…
Such a tough read. 😦
thanks for reading it… I know it is… but I am doing a lot of reading on Civil Rights movement…
such a moving tribute to such a sad chapter…
it was that… and having dealt with the kKK on one occasion in my former job,,, not in too far a distant past.
UNDER THE MOON OF RISING TIDES
Two hearts afloat upon love’s endless sea,
bobbing free in currents of emotion.
There is no lake or ocean can compare
to the freedom there. Two hearts float in love.
Above is an endless sky moonlit and clear.
Hearts navigate by their chart position,
a condition driven by the love shared.
They are spared rough tides; they ride the current.
The rough torrent cannot put them under,
it’s a wonder love keeps their heads above
water. They ought to thank their lucky stars,
a rising tide raises all ships.
Hearts at sea are free to be. Their journey
can lead them to distant shores and much more!
Beautiful. Final stanza is so beautiful!
Thank you for your kind words, Sreeja.
Amen to that
I just love that first line, Walt!
Gorgeous, visual, sensual, emotional … WOW …
Bravo! 👏 This is wonderful. Killer first stanza.
you are a master of romance….
http://writingonjusttowrite.blogspot.com/2021/06/under-moon.html?m=1
Tried to write something after a long time.
A very visual vignette of life, well written. Thank you for bringing your work to our garden, Sreeja!
That last stanza could be a poem all by itself. Wonderful.
Well done, sreeja!
Hello, Sreeja. A pleasure to meet you and read your beautiful poem. You say it has been a long time. I’m so glad you decided to write again. Joining Walt’s welcome to you. I hope we see more of you here, and come to know your poetic voice.
Excellent, sreeja. I felt completely transported to another realm. 👏
Truly enjoyed you poem, Sreeja. The form, line breaks, the content… a feast of visuals and sound, the old woman gone from mumbles to bygones…. the grandchild dancing…. Hope you begin to post here, too!
Sreeja, this poem is lovely
Marie, I love the way you placed the moon. Beautiful poem.
Thank you, Sara!
Walt, your poem was perfect for its title.
Under the Summer Moon
When the world seemed young and new,
We would gather to play tag
Under the summer moon that guarded us…
We would catch lightening bugs,
Put them in a jar just to watch their magic,
And when we fell asleep my mother would set them free.
Our dreams would be laughing,
Under the summer sun…
And I would wake up grouchy.
But as the sky turned from blue
To twilight lavender, we would
Wait for the kids to gather, and play tag…
It was an old-fashion kind of life.
Television was for dancing to Lawrence Welk music,
For I was taught to polka when I was small.
As I gaze at the summer moon,
I wait for the first glimpse of lightening bugs,
And know that once those nights were enchanted.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
June 1, 2021
How well you captured this! It’s almost as though you were right there with me in my childhood.
thanks and as I wrote it I thought how sad the children of today don’t have lovely memories… I know some do but the majority don’t…
All very familiar, right down to the term, lightning bugs.
yep… and thanks
Very soothing poem here.
thanks
UNDER THE MOON OF STILL MOMENTS
Under the moon…
The heir of night escapades—the watchman,
are gathered jeweled moments most precious.
The black and white avenues, the evening
dishes of moonlight; serving up a dimmed brillance, a torrid hunger lies for a partial covering.
The enticing brisk touches from the night-light of the lensman—freelancing in the twilight.
The night captures with artful skill—
frame by frame, still images of the most intimate moments.
Frozen, and captured timeless—
lathered in the spirit moon bright beams.
We see life as what it seems—to be
under the seeking aspirations of the light,
and subtle variation of cunning shadows.
But nothing is completely shadowed
under the night tresses.
For it addresses a partial revelation
of things concealed.
The precious still moments,
are always revealed—to the lensman.
Benjamin Thomas
Another piece that reminds me of Whitman. Wonderful.
Thx
I agree
Under the Spring Moon…
The morning had a light rain,
And the earth still smelled fresh,
And the new leaves were still soft cloth
And light green…and as the evening passed
Into the night with the flowers were blooming.
The honeysuckle filled the air with incense;
The magnolia’s bombed the air with their fragrant lace,
For the moths to find their flowers.
The moon sauntered through the dark night
Shedding her light on the land,
And the light green leaves became black lace
Against a deep purple sky.
The owl called to his lady
To come out and share dinner with him,
And I looked at the moon
That shined over those I love,
And I prayed they felt the peace
Which flooded me this night.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
June 2, 2021
So vivid; almost like a moving=picture show.
thanks
This is a most excellent poem. I got a smile out of it too!
thanks and always glad to give a smile…
😃
Under the Autumn Moon…
As I walk through the last of my autumn days,
I know what I want to be.
I want to look to the moon,
And gaze in wonder as I did as a child…
I want to be crisp as the air is on an autumn night
And brilliant as the stars that glow in that sky.
I want to be colorful like the leaves are
Before they fall to their grave.
I want to dance as the leaves
Fall in the breeze on under the autumn moon.
I want my dresses to rustle
As the wind does when dressed in autumn’s leaves.
I want to walk under the autumn moon
In deep wonder with someone I fancy.
I want to laugh with the creatures
Who wander this earth.
I want to be who I am now,
And not the person I was in the Spring days of my life.
For despite what the world says,
These as the best days of my life.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
June 2, 2021
Conveys emotion beautifully.
thanks
Another excellent piece! 👏
thanks, i think I like the autumn one the best…
I want to apologize…I got some heartbreaking news the end of last week, and have been trying to figure out how I can help, and the answer was only to pray, but because of this… I have not had the emotional energy to read what I know is lovely poetry… I will try to read it tomorrow…
UNDER THE MOON OF SYMPHONIES
The great symphony of sound can be heard;
the gentle cast moonlight of the night conductor
is underway.
The invisible smooth swaying of wayward winds,
the constant roil and toil of blue sea waters.
There is a grand symphony at the open sea,
whose wind instruments never stay silent.
The slow rustle and bustle of leaves through the trees,
leaves the impression of a company of skilled violinists.
Whose dapper sound cuts through the military green forest,
an army of trees standing at attention, or standing ovation.
The nocturnal symphony of coconut brown barred owl,
the varied howl and yipping of bands of coyote.
The delightful sounds skipping and leaping upon the hills,
bowing and rolling deep into the valley.
The steady stream of cricket’s mating song,
a stately sound of brass instruments in their courtship call.
There is a grand symphony held in the open land,
its harmonic sound is the timely demand—
of the night conductor.
Benjamin Thomas
Echoes of Walt Whitman Here. Marvellous.
I’ve never heard of him. I’ll have to look him up now. Thanks 🙏🏽
I love the connection to music… i can hear that symphony…
It’s so therapeutic. I love to sit and listen. Thx
UNDER THE MOON OF SUMMER SOLSTICE
sun and moon
meet at midnight ~
star-crossed love
** I’ll post to my blog later with the photo that inspired this one.
I admire this little piece; the “star-crossed” allusion fixes the imagery for me.
Beautiful images conveyed here.
Smile
Under the Moon Did He Wonder as He Wandered…
I have read His life story
In red and in black…
I have studied it
And debated the meaning
Of the words He said…
But no where does it speak
Of how He wondered.
I see many things still in wonder
Like a child seeing the earth fresh new.
Sixty-nine years ago, I was soon to begin
But not yet born,
And yet I still see the wonder
In the stars, and the moon,
And want to take more roads
I haven’t yet taken.
And I wonder about Him
Who reached into the raging storm
Of the sea that was my life,
And pulled me out of that surging,
Turbulent, ship-cracking waves
To place me on dry but rocky ground.
I wonder if when He was sleeping
With a rock for a pillow
As He wander this earth,
Did he get up in the night and
Glance in wonder at the moon
His father’s hands had created?
He could have given His son a palace,
But knew that the souls within human beings
Would have worship the wealth,
And danced in abandon
Wanting to sell Him
The things he already owned.
His father wanted them to see those souls,
And to see how far into darkness
They had fallen. Into a night
That has no stars or moon
For light doesn’t exist there.
His Father knew His Son
Had to walk this earth homeless,
And had to be broken
For them to see beyond their vanity.
But still I wonder,
Did He look at the moon,
In wonder at the mysterious moon?
The rock that floats in atmosphere
Caught between our earth’s gravity, and
The pull of the sun…
Which makes the tides
Ebb and flow upon the many shores
Of the earth that He walked.
Did those late night moments
Of communion with His Father
Give Him strength to face the next day?
Did He pray that night he cursed the fig tree,
And to say that His anger got away from Him?
Did His Father empathize that it was a lesson
We all need to understand?
Did He understand? For I am still
Mulling over that one thing
And under the moon when it is a crescent
I have asked, why was that important
For us to know.
I wonder also because I am a lover of the night,
If when I cross through the veil
Will the moon be even more glorious, and
The stars shine in colors we have not seen
While we walk upon this earth.
I like to think that late at night,
When the others had fallen asleep
He had quiet talks with His Father
And told Him that the moon
Which does nothing but make the night
Filled with exquisite light
To make all those human souls
Look in wonder at some small moment
In their life and knowing that a big round rock
Can be more if light is shown upon it.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
June 3, 2021
Waxing poetic here. 👌 You should publish a poetry book.
Thanks I don’t know how to go about doing it…
Benjamin, back in 2008- 2009 I lost 12 very important people and one very favorite cat… I had trouble grieving all those people… so starting in 2010 I put together a book I call, “the Time I did not Dance” but it is not purely poetry… it is also essays… and it is my journey thru the stages of grief…it it how I began to get back to my life…It is about 90 pages long…
12??? Wow.
Included my mother my last sibling, my last three aunts, my last uncle, two cousins, a friend’s daughter I watched grow up, two of my best friends and a woman I taught in Sunday School….
So sorry.
Thanks and I Miss them all still, but it has been over ten years, and life goes on….
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Under the Moon of Wonder
We have stood in the dark
searching for Mr. Moon.
Young hand in old,
and truth be told,
You were looking to delay,
and I was searching for a way
to share a bedtime ritual.
I know the years go by too fast.
These precious moments can not last.
Time can not stand still.
It never will,
despite one’s fondest wish.
So now,
when I see the moon,
that shining sphere,
I wonder
will I still be here
after I’m gone,
at that hour long before dawn,
residing in your eyes
as you gaze up at dark skies
to find Mr. Moon.
wistful loveliness…
Under the Moon Rode Stormy Soldiers….
The moon smoothly moves in near stillness
Across the sky, and there is peace
Surrounding it, but blocking its light
Is the stormy soldiers bombing the air
With sound of thunder and
Casting its fire power to the earth,
And I cannot see the moon…
I see only the storm,
Surrounding my home, and threatening me.
I don’t take the threats seriously,
Which must make the storm troopers angry,
For the blast the night again and again.
But I know the moon is out there-
Just like I know the sun is shining on the other side
From where I am standing.
They do not disappear
Because I cannot see them.
It is faith in the knowledge
That they are there.
There are storms raging in my life.
I wish they would quieten,
But they are here, and I am weary…
Until I travel beyond the storms
And reach that place of stillness
And simply have faith
That what many deny
Is there deep in the stillness
Calming the waters,
And stilling the storm
Until it breaks,
And there is the moon’s gentle moonbeams
Floating in the vapors of the storm to the forest floor.
For now, I see only the storms,
But I know the moon exists,
And I know I will see it again.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
June 3, 2021
UNDER THE MOON OF PASSING MEN
The presence of the moon
is the same throughout the ages of men.
It stands tall regardless of circumstance,
over and over again.
Withstanding epic battles of bloodshed,
of hostile nations taking up the sword.
Enduring the pain of natural disasters,
hearing the slow ache of earth over the years.
Recording the dreadful fears of dying men,
of soldiers and peasants, knights and kings.
If it could speak its mind or testify the truth,
what verse or stanza would it sing?
The presence of the moon
remains the same throughout the pages of men.
It is the land’s greatest and brightest historian,
writing over and over again.
Benjamin Thomas
UNDER THE MOON OF AUBURN WINES
An anxious moon dripped night
upon the landscape.
Pouring a disarming shade of moonlight,
known only to its evening guests.
Serving up the best red auburn wines—
of the lunar blood moon.
Benjamin Thomas
UNDER A SHY MOON
Peeking over the horizon.
Squinting at parting sunset.
A slow reveal of cratered moon.
His dimples were on full display.
The rock finally comes out to play.
Dipping in and out of clouds.
His shy light was never too loud,
but inviting and soft,
offering the gift of night.
Benjamin Thomas
Under a Wishful Moon
Sun sinks on
distant horizon,
crickets chirp
lullabies.
The dreams of today rest be-
neath a wishful moon.
**This will be posted on my blog with the photo that inspired it.
Great pairings. Paula. Those photos seem to be inspiring your muse. Rather encouraging.
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Under the Moon…
We walked many a mile
Through Due West…
The place our college was located.
We would go to the library and
Take our books back to the dorm,
And then go shoot pool,
But we still had an hour or two
Left to discuss
The great issues of the day…
Who had caught our eye, or
What exam worried us,
And sometimes Vietnam…
Which seemed far away,
But yet in our back door.
The news reported how many had died that day.
Never how many Vietnamese had died…
Just those that belonged to us,
And back then that seemed okay,
But it wasn’t for they were living their lives,
As we were living ours, and
Our back doors faced each other…
But on these walks,
Under the moonlight. Life…
Seem so innocent…
But life has challenged us both
And broke us and
Grew us into the women we are…
I miss those nights sometimes,
And wished we could take a walk
Down some small town street just to talk…
And laugh about our days,
And our worries,
About who we loved…
And as we bounded out of the dark
Into the light of a building…
We would laugh that for a moment we were young once more.
Mary Elizabeth Todd
June 4, 2021
For my dear friend Sandra Hedrick Pelt
My former pool shooting buddy…but still my friend.
Elegiac moon (first draft)
With smoke and groans the truck arrives and coughs a spray of air
The driver nods, my fathers helps unload the Frigidaire
A scalpel wounds the cardboard skin, the ivory beast exposed
My gazing eyes grow round with hope as I watch the box disposed
I seize upon that tawny shroud, my body now her contents
The darkness hides the world around against all sounds and scents.
As eyes adjust to my newfound world, reality I hide
with all shut out, one tiny hole betrays the world outside.
That speck of light, elegiac moon against the coal black sky
attracts my eye, arrests my soul, forbidding hope to die.
It was God who made two great lights to rule o’er day and night
To reflect the sun, lieutenant moon serves as his sole delight.
In lamenting cries night’s prefect calls “This darkness do not love”
“Look through me, see the Son, and everything above.”
Obediently I press my eye up to that opening,
Where Glory reigns beyond the dark, revealing everything.
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