Welcome April! A poet’s favorite month! 🙂
DAY 14 prompt from Robert Lee Brewer of Poetic Asides: On this “Two for Tuesday,” write a form and/or anti-form poem.
Link to Poetic Asides PAD Challenge Day 14
Need help choosing a form? Robert’s prompt page for today includes a link to a list of 100 forms, or you may use our Bloomin’ list ( 😉 ) here: Inform Poets .
Welcome to April, Bloomers! We’re glad you are here! We will provide Robert’s 2020 April Poem-a-Day Challenge prompts right here at Poetic Bloomings each day. We will suspend our own Sunday prompts during April, in favor of simply poeming alongside the WD Poetic Asides group.
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Connect, keep healthy, and poem on!
A HELP IN TIME OF NEED
Shadormas
are my antidote
to mindless
formlessness;
especially when
rhyming’s flown out the window
and meter’s petered.
HA! Good one! “Meter’s petered” on the heals of “rhyming’s flown out the window” will keep me giggling a while!
Love the play on words.
Love the last line! I can identify with that!
Good afternoon!
I’m going with an American Sentence for my form choice.
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I always like Sylvia Plath; she knew her way around blackberries.
Good one, Misk! And thanks for the reminder of this form. Right up my alley.
Very nice.
A Clogyrnach Poem
4/14/20
The year 2020 came in
like any other year that’s been,
but with a strange twist,
a flick of the wrist,
punching fist,
Covid grins.
SPOT. ON.
Exactly! perfect
Aye
Anti-Sestina
I will not write Sestinas, sir.
It’s not the form that I prefer.
See, when I try, my brain won’t purr.
It spits and chokes. My mind’s a blur.
I will not write for him, or her.
I will not write Sestinas, sir.
And you’d be right if you infer
I will not write Sestinas, sir.
To navigate me through, for sure
I’d have to have a good chauffer.
Or wine or beer or hard liquor.
But I don’t drink, so then I’d slur.
I will not write Sestinas, sir.
To your insistence, I demur.
My mind is striking, as it were.
I’m not a poetry poseur.
To Walt Wojtanik, I’ll defer –
Our chief Sestina Whisperer.
© Marie Elena Good, 2020
And yet you wrote a superb Sestina…. and made me laugh with delight
Thanks much, but nope, this is not a sestina. And truth-be-told, I attempted to write an anti-sestina sestina, but quit after an hour or more of coming up with nothing but frustration. 😉
That is exactly how I feel about that form. Whoever invented it was a devious, evil poet.
HA! Yep!
I think this is just superb, especially the monorhyming. The whole sad subject reminds me of something I wrote a while ago:
EPITAPH
Here lies William Preston,
dead of sestina fright.
He was found
in a sleep so sound
that Lucifer danced around
with all his might,
but could not excite
him to rise up and write.
Defeated by the terrors
of thirty-nine lines,
he had made many errors
within its confines
and had dropped on the floor
at line thirty-four.
He used to say, dejectedly,
“a sestina will be the death of me.”
He was right.
NB: I was inspired by another epitaph: “I told you I was sick.”
That’s a good one!
OH. MY. WORD!!!!!!! PERFECTION! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Hahaha, William, I love this and totally agree “Defeated by the terrors
of thirty-nine lines” would be my line too
My sentiments exactly! Wonderful!
OOPS! Stuck my comment in the wrong slot! Loved this! Very clever!
Thanks Sally!
My poem is long so you will find it on my blog. I incorporated Poetic Blooming, Poetic Asides and The Twiglets prompts.
https://poetrybydebi.wordpress.com/2020/04/14/kept-its-fizz/
Amazing set you created. I commented on site.
D
A
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14
Enough
There’s nothing to wish for, nothing to crave.
We already have all that we need.
There’s more to cherish in the things we gave.
There’s nothing to wish for, nothing to crave.
Only our memories are worthy to save,
all else, like the dandelion, going to seed.
There’s nothing to wish for, nothing to crave.
We already have all that we need.
Excellent!
I know. I love it!
“all else, like the dandelion, going to seed.” Just brilliant
Forming My Thoughts
by Paula Riggs
Quarantined.
Social distancing
for a month.
And it is
April: Poetry Month! So ~
thirty shadormas!
Or not.
Or not. Maybe … 60? 😉 Loving each and every one!
😉 Ha – more like, it’s not a shadorma by adding the “or not” at the end.
Shadorma on… you bring the lovely out in shadormas
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The Norm Form
I will strictly adhere to this form
With nothing from outside the norm
I’ll pen you a poem
From the safety of home
While avoiding the COVID-19 storm
HA! Yep! And I’m right there with –
Oh wait. No I’m not. 😉
I think this speaks for me.
And for others out there.
What Form?
When I write
I have no preset plan
I know not where words will land
Nor their order or meaning
Words just fall
Straight out of the air
As if they know just where
They belong
At times they fall like rain
All perfectly spaced and timed
But then there are the droughts
And digging for words just doesn’t work
I’ve tried forms
Some I really like
Mostly the Japanese quickies
Best for my short attention span
Others just make me work too hard
To find the rhythm or count syllables
Or get that rhyming pattern down
I often just go off the rails
I’m a free form kind of guy
No handcuffs or crazy rules
At the same time I love a challenge
So a form once in a while works
I guess I’m not truly anti-form
Because free form is technically a form
Or just an excuse for people like me
To write my way
I agree. I don’t know if “I’m a free form kind of guy” or “just an excuse for people like me” Too brain lazy I suspect
Makes your always-consistent rhythm all the more impressive!
Dodoitsu
The sun slips into the sea
while the red sunset deepens
shooting fire across the bay
as the night comes on.
Stunning imagery!
I completely agree with Marie
Fibonacce
Low
lines
of clouds
are building
on far horizons,
shifting from white to shades of grey
as the gathering storm builds its
avenging force to
disrupt some
quiet
shore’s
rest.
The way your words flow through the form is perfection.
That’s lovely. That storm brought snow my way last night.
Unformed
We regret to inform you that
This poem has no shape
It is a formless pile of words
A mere muddle of syllables
Wallowing in a pool of ink
Its muse has gone off fishing
For phrases in a lake of letters
There will be no further rhyme or
Reason until it gets back on its feet
HA! Super cute!
Love it!
BRING OURSELVES TO RHYME, by Walter J Wojtanik
In the present we stand, hand-in-hand for the cause of poetry.
Not quite sure what means to this end, but poets and friends
sharing in the hearth of majestic musings warm their hearts
with glowing expressions. Never at a loss for words
but sometimes a lot of effort goes unnoticed. The rhyme
stays within reason, for ’tis the season for all to write.
We would be well within our right
to seize the opportunity to delve into poetry,
giving proper respect to the relevant rhyme,
for what would sound more fitting between friends?
After all, we all craft with our own fine words
and hold the verse of others to our hearts.
For it is within the beating of said hearts
that we find the power in all that we write.
Poems flow from the manipulation of words,
and become the true essence of living poetry.
Inspiration expressed in the gathering of friends
all for the propagation of rapturous rhyme.
Not all find worth in the like sounding rhymes
preferring the freedom that liberates their hearts
in the form a verse that is as free. These, my friends,
are the choices that we as poets make. We are what we write.
It takes all kinds to write all forms of poetry,
but a true poet see the emotion woven into words.
Offer up your musings, for the communion of words
never ceases. Be they random or deliberate, rhymes
are the glue that holds together all our pieces. Poetry
is the literal music of our souls. It resides in every heartfelt
pang of passion and fashions itself into the right
moments of our lives as if they were comforting old friends.
What can we do to spread the scope of our beauty, friends?
Put the power of your opinion or your longing into words,
for it is within every woman and man’s right
to give the world exactly what we glean from our rhymes.
Poetry is a pulse. It is the syncopation of a loving heart.
And the living that we do, becomes our lifelong poetry.
Give poetry a chance, friends.
Leaving your heart in every word.
You have the time to rhyme; and all night to write it.
***way to put the pressure on me
What pressure? You just proved Marie’s point. WOW
Yep, he sure did!
WOW! Just seeing this, Walt. Now see? You ARE the master of this form! It flows. It doesn’t sound forced in any way. I have found myself skimming most of the sestinas I come across. They lack “poetry” to me. But not yours. No, not yours. You shine in this difficult form.
Didn’t mean to put pressure on you. Just meant to honor you. But I must say I’m glad you felt the poke to write it. FANTASTIC sestina!
Words
(a clogyrnach)
Some words are well-placed bows on gifts
Some words are aimless smoke in wisps
Some are hard to face
Candor has its place
Words of grace
Spirit lifts
YES. (And I love rhyming gifts and wisps!)
Spring
(huitain)
Sometimes I long for green to come
And misty mornings full of dew
And woodpeckers sound like a drum
And sunsets turn their pinkish hue
And tulips wave in joy at you
And birds tweet from atop a tree
And stars send kisses in the night
And moon smiles warm and knowingly
Lovely form, BEAUTIFULLY penned. You are rocking this challenge, Connie!
Off Kilter
(shadorma)
Surprises
Some good and some bad
Shake the day
Stir us up
And break the monotony
Make us glad for peace
A trio of lovely forms
YES. 🙂