What was the scariest thing (moment) you had encountered in your life? Poem your story, give us a chill!
Alternatively, write about something that is scary. Maybe a phobia someone may have, or a movie that had you off the edge of your seat. I’m afraid of heights. That’s scary to me. So is struggling with a writer’s bottleneck. Write something and don’t be scared. We don’t bite… much!
UNDER THE PORCH, UNDER THE FLOOR, by Walter I Wojtanik
Dark and dusty, cobwebbed and musty. A space I used to go to for escape. A flashlight and a bundle of comic books were all this little nook needed. I would read my adventures, sequestered in this hidey-hole. I had control. No one else ventured there. My siblings found it very scary, but to me it was sanctuary.
I had gotten older. And asthmatic. And a bit rounder. I found that under the house in the crawlspace was dark and dusty, cobwebbed and musty. A space that would turn my face blue. The trusty flashlight in tow, I would forego all reading material. It was too real a fear. No one in his right mind would venture here. A mistake to try and slide under a floor beam. It seems I got myself quite stuck. I found it very scary, nary a sanctuary or safe place. A space just tight enough to squeeze and make me wheeze. Breathing became a chore. I resign myself, “No more!”
Yikes! I can envision this, and it makes my heart race! What a space! 😀
We grow up and find different sanctuaries… if we’re lucky. Yours sounds like it was great for a time. Mine included reading materials, too, now anywhere with a book is a sanctuary.
Hmmmm…. alpha, omega, ziti.. Love it.
I used to be fearless way back in the day. Now I know my limitations! And they are limited! Thanks though!
For a time, it must have been wonderful.
Saturday Nights
When I was just a little girl,
I’d whimper in my room.
I’d plug my ears, hold back the tears,
And fight the dread of doom.
With covers pulled up to my eyes,
I’d suffocate my scream.
What once-a-week would make me freak?
The Perry Mason theme!
© Marie Elena Good, 2019
I was SUCH a wimp. Still am! 😀
We are all wimps about something. My oldest daughter loved loves Agatha Christie, but they did and do still freak her out. It is the psychology behind the murders that gets to her.
When I was little, I actually never “saw” a Perry Mason episode. Funny how simply nothing but the music scared the beejeebers out of me. 😉
Come to think of it… it was suspenseful and scary
You should try “inner sanctum.” Love this.
Nope. 😉 (And thanks!)
OK, Wimpy! The kicker was the Alfred Hitchcock theme. It sounded play full. Compared in content, miles scarier than the counselor’s music!
I’ll give ya that. And I’ll raise you a “Tubular Bells.” *shudder*
When I was a little girl, I was afraid of the song “Flight of the Bumblebee”. It used to make me cry.
Awww! That’s strange and cute all at once. 😀
My friend, who is now in her 70s, cannot listen to the Alfred Hitchcock theme. We all have our own peculiarities.
Strange, isn’t it? 🙂
Mm, I wrote about fear (together with a prompt to write about a fan and about temptation). I may come back t o my scariest moment. Until then, this is w hat I have:
2 Timothy 1:6-7
Fear stalks me still,
blowing cold upon my soul’s fire,
tempting me to retreat into my tent.
But God gave me a gift, a greater-than-gift,
a “look-Mikey-I-made-it” meal of mercy and might.
Fan the fire’s flame, fight the fear.
Fan until fear’s flown outside,
shifting places with the power of prayer,
a love for others, and self-control.
I’ll add my humble amen. Thank you for this, Darlene. I’m glad you shared it here.
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Yesterday, Today and Maybe Tomorrow
That day long ago when
for a little while, I died,
thought I was going home,
no sadness, no more fear,
no clinging to what’s here.
Day and night,
the bombs had cast their light,
yet from tunnel bright
a chiming bell,
not of hell,
just a call to
the work undone.
That year I’d gone to war,
all thrumming energy,
rising above the cacophony,
struggling beneath the fear,
wishing mightily to be invisible,
knowing I had put myself there,
all the elements of ego
so visible to God,
if not to me.
Those long months in
hospital, reflecting, thinking that
some warriors fear nothing,
but this does not
make them strong.
It simply makes them,
I think,
too foolish to be afraid.
Now, when I consider
bravery, and fear,
I see the absence of one does
not define the other.
Today, I have declared freedom
from fear and darkness.
Life is always present.
Grief has had its time,
in all its untidy dress,
complicated and deep,
feeling a lot like fear.
Now, there is
less force, more flow,
less stress, more ease,
less fear, more Grace.
So uplifting, so wise.
Yours is a life well lived, and I am a better person for knowing you.
“When I consider
bravery, and fear,
I see the absence of one does
not define the other.”
This should be on plaques, refrigerator magnets, etc. Wonderful poem, Daniel.
A great piece, Daniel.You write this memory so well and with passion. So glad you’re still with us to write it.
Amazing.
Your last stanza is a positive statement of how you live your life. Excellent writing, Daniel.
Wolf Creek Pass
One holiday season, I was driving over Wolf Creek Pass
headed to Grandma’s in Wyoming in my 1983 Chevy Caprice
with my two small kids in the back.
An article in the local paper declared Wolf Creek Pass
the most dangerous pass in Colorado,
but that’s arguable compared to Red Mountain Pass.
Wolf Creek was the subject of C. W. McCall’s 1975 song
that described it as “37 miles o’ hell.”
That wouldn’t be my description exactly,
because I’ve driven over it many times.
Regardless, Wolf Creek Pass has many hairpin turns,
runaway truck ramps and cliffs with heart-stopping drop-offs.
More often than not, it’s snowing as it was that day.
My motto for driving that old car up the pass was,
“Going forward is all that matters!”
As we crept up the side of the mountain in dreary skies,
falling snow, and slush that built up on the tires,
we were almost to the summit when the radiator hose blew.
I gingerly backed up toward a wide spot
of the roadside next to an unrailed drop off.
I planned to coast back down to the base
of the mountain where I had seen a business
and hoped to use their phone.
Looking back behind me I saw sky.
As I backed up, the car started sliding toward the cliff.
I thought, with terror, that the kids would go over first.
My heart hammered. I don’t think the kids realized
what was happening. The car stopped.
I breathed again. It was only two or three seconds,
but it was the scariest two or three seconds of my life.
I coasted down the mountain and used the phone as planned.
I got the car repaired and returned home.
The next day, we went the long way around through Utah.
Gripping tale, this.
OH MY WORD. My heart is pounding, Connie! I’m afraid that might have been the last time I was behind the wheel of a car for a very, very long time. Well told. (And, thankful for the angels that held you!)
The edge of my seat hasn’t seen such action in a while, Connie. A harrowing retelling!
Now this is a truly terrifying moment.
THE GAPPER STRIKES
I once went to dentist named Kress
who would cause a great deal of distress:
he could yank teeth as fast
as a microburst blast
and was known as the Molar Express.
Nooooooooo! LOL! 😀
And your title! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Yeah, and I would have gotten a groan if I had attempted that! I see the “Pard” is held to a different standard!?
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
I enjoy waking up to a smile, and you certainly bring one to me. Thanks.
“molar express” – I am still laughing!
Even though there are about 365 references to not being afraid or not living in fear in the Bible (one for each day of the year), we still ignore that advice quite often, it seems. But just like most other things in the Bible, our human nature is to doubt.
Fears
I used to think under the bed
Something was waiting and not quite dead
I’d wrap up tight and say my prayers
And hope whatever would stay under there
I outgrew that fear
Don’t remember the year
When very young mom would get stuck
Behind those massive trailer trucks
I’d scream if she attempted to pass
I thought it would fall and we’d get smashed
I outgrew that fear
Don’t remember the year
For many years nothing scared me
Until I joined the military
That first late night getting off the bus
That T.I. scared the crap out of us
I outgrew that fear
And I remember that year
My fear list is really quite small
Who’s not scared of snakes after all
Tall buildings cause me anxiety
And closed in places really bother me
I’ll not outgrow those fears
They’ve been with me for far too many years
Enjoyed this, Earl. Well written, and admire your creative use of your end lines. Well done!
And we hope you recount this for more years and years, Earl!
SNEAKY SNAKES
Sneaky snakey
black rubber hose
laying in the summer sun.
It slipped away
into the climbing rose
when my foot
set hard upon it.
Love the alliterative nature of this piece, Marilyn. Well done.
Thank you!
Ooh! Cannot deal with snakes at all.
In My Sister’s Closet
My sister and brother-in-law’s
first apartment was a small,
adorable place. I was bunking
in for awhile, but we had
our schedules neatly worked out.
Night begins. Dinner is over,
dishes done. My sister and I
are having a conversation, when
we realize my brother-in-law
has vanished. Not around,
no sound echoing from any
room. We look, we call
his name. Nothing. Strange
because we did not hear
an outside door close. I head
down the narrow hallway.
BOO! My brother-in-law jumps
out of a closet yelling. Did
not need the ‘boo’ to feel
my heart pound, my mouth
scream. It was a one-time
only moment.
When someone writes an article he/she maintains the image of
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why this piece of writing is outstdanding. Thanks!