We talk of muse. As poets, it can be our best friend. Muse is a kind of motivation. It gets us writing. So let’s get motivated. For the next thirteen Sunday prompts we’ll be inspired by various nudges of motivation. It can be the featured concept, or you may be inspired by the accompanying quote about the subject. Or come up with a quote of your own and expound on that motivation.
As long as we’re on the subject, what motivates you? Write a poem about what moves you to write. Then we’ll delve into the different concepts of motivation.
WHAT MOVES MARIE:
THEN AND NOW
“So you write your novels, if that’s what you do,
Or scholarly texts, or cerebral world view,
While I write my lighthearted, fun-to-write rhyme,
Then do it again for the ten millionth time.” ~ Marie Elena Good, 2009
Now sometimes I write some political stuff –
Some downers and bummers, and, oddly enough,
It isn’t dependent on what’s in the news,
Nor spotting and schmoozing with some obscure muse.
What moved me back then and still moves me today
Is the awe of my God – and to this end I pray:
That whatever I write, be it witty or grim,
It will honor my God, and point others to Him.
© Marie Elena Good, 2019
WALT’S WORDS MOVE:
WORDS FOR ALL
I share my words.
They have become my passion.
I would fashion my thoughts into poems.
But I would never show them to anyone.
No one would ever know my heart
and I would start to doubt the power
that lived in my linguistic pursuits.
I felt smothered under the weight
of their gravity. I felt this need
to dispatch my words into the cosmos.
I would feed my poetic beast,
a feast of the rhymes I would prepare.
And it is there I get my fire.
I have this desire to share my words,
no longer one of my fears,
it brings me to joyful tears.
(C) Walter J Wojtanik – 2019
Good morning.
The one on my blog at https://wp.me/p7ofDB-VG is formatted, but this is the same without formatting. Lately, what motivates me is the sun rising again. I hope to get out of this frump sooner rather than later. Poetic Form Dodoitsu (7.7.7.5)
And It Keeps On
In the east where the sunrise
sings, faint horn of a train rings.
Dawn is gone — a flash and burn,
counting milestones.
I want to live where I can
remain. See the seasons. Rain
scour — blow against my door.
Live. Let live today.
Wishing you joy to thump the overwhelming frump. Live. Let live in the warmth of your words and those around you. Good Dodoitsu!
Thank you 🙏
Hear, hear. I’m not sure what’s happening, Misk, but I pray thins turn around for you, and joy returns. Total, complete joy.
Excellent piece, here.
Beautifully written, Misk. Hope you rise again soon.
Misky, certainly understand your frump. They seem to last forever while in the middle of them, but then a rescue, like a sunrise, comes and the frump fades like fog. Live on fellow poet.
LOOK FOR THE SILVER LINING
When the cardinals fly over the snow
on these mornings of twenty below,
their bright splashes of red
then demolishes dread
that this wintertime weather won’t go.
I never dread winter after a lifetime in its grip. I’ve come to know it is what it is. So far this winter has been forgiving (for the most part). The red birds are certainly a true sign of hope, Bill.
I like winter. Summer, on the other hand….
My husband were I were just talking about this on our today, as two cardinals flew down the snowy path right ahead of us. They are simply gorgeous, but especially in winter.
Your poem makes me smile.
I love the cardinals in winter too, William. Love the relish they exhibit for snow, ice, and nandina berries–frost covered, of course.
URGENCY
The music of the words invites
my pen to find its needed path,
expressing joy or maybe wrath
or musing on the simple sights
of flying birds or starry nights
or even broken plaster lath;
the music of the words
is never really mine, by rights,
for in its startling aftermath,
more bracing than a morning bath,
I sense that something deeper frights
the music of the words.
Love this one, Bill. Especially those first two lines. YES.
This musician/poet appreciated this to no end, Bill. Music and words, a great combination. And they seem interchangeable, words are musical, music speaks volumes.
Gorgeous poem, William. I love the first two lines.
Wow, William…this one is just so true! “the music of the words / is never really mine, by rights.” LOVE these lines.
Marie and Walt, your poems remind me once again of the great service you provide, not only making this apace available, but sharing whom you are. Thanks.
Thank YOU, Bill. It’s such an honor to have you among us.
More sharing with “family” than providing a service, William. It’s like welcoming all to a bountiful feast and passing the potatoes. The poems are the gravy!
I write my seventeen’s,
unless I have no time.
Then I write long poems.
———————————-
I’m nearly seventy-five
and he wants to know why.
Why?
What would our friend Walt do?
He’d write and write and write,
and then write some more,
and they’d all be great,
and they’d all be interesting,
and we’d all read them,
and we’d all have ink envy…again.
I tell lots of stories, so
that’s no problem, and
it’s too late now to worry about
too much exposure.
I have written about going through
a windshield…twice.
Not the same windshield, but still.
I have spoken to
the day my mother died,
and about when I met her
on the night I died, nine years later,
the day she sent me back from near death.
I have ruminated on the choice to
move to a foreign country,
and then we settled inCalifornia.
When homage was the goal,
it was sourced in that writing group
in the SoCal desert.
Ultimately, there is only one choice.
I write because I have no choice.
I write for the pure expression of life,
the joys and fears and hopes,
surely about love.
I write, inspired by the writing of others,
by the natural world in my backyard,
by the speechless days at the ocean,
by the sun and the moon,
their rising and setting,
even moved by the sounds of fire trucks afar.
As age has flattened me,
as humility has claimed me,
I now write more about Spirit,
about oneness, about transition.
I don’t know what tomorrow will bring.
I’m simply sure I will write about it.
Oh, Daniel … I love these. Both of them. And let me tell you something: I am a better person because of all you have shared of yourself. I’m thankful. ❤
You have me pegged, Daniel. I’d write and write and write some more, for you see, I have no choice either. Once near death myself, holding dad’s hand as he crossed over, and a home that is still so deeply ingrained (it was a great place to find myself). Love is a perpetual subject (lost or found) and the grounding that this place, “that” woman and wonderful poets such as yourself provide… I need you all as much as you need me. Thank you for your kindness.
So eloquent
Beautiful, heartfelt writing, Daniel.
Daniel, your writing is always this delightful documentary that promotes awe for a moment in life, a new view of a normal day, or a deep thoughtful examination that reveals beauty in simplicity. Often your work leaves my jaw hung open, or prompts a whispered ‘wow’ from my lips.
Poems are where my life
goes to be remembered.
Some seem like songs.
How sweet.
#seventeenineighteen
#tralalalala
Indeed!
If I could, i’d be harmonizing with the background fiddle-de-des! Love your seventeens.
Yes. Yes.
Motivation lies
In mind and soul and will
But mostly it stems
From the heart
Darlene franklin
Oh, hear hear!
Planting the seed in the heart is the only place to start, Darlene. You are so correct. Sweetly penned.
Indeed
Hear, hear…Heart, HEART!
Words Without Motivation
This poem is born of
Here and now
Shaped and formed
By words tumbling
Around as if some cosmic
Juggler was putting on a show
One word falls upon the
Page followed by another
Feeling no need for speed
Or acceptance
Often seeming to lack direction
Lose track of some destination
Not motivated to accomplish
Just to be
“Feeling no need for speed Or acceptance”
Just to be, indeed. Beautiful, Candy.
Ah-men
A perfect process, Candy. I find my words tumbling into place too, for the most part. You have advanced your art by leaps and bound and we are profoundly grateful you apply them here!
Thank you for giving us a safe place to learn and share.
“just to be” says it all. Love this, Candy!
Thanks so much!
Candy, you’ve defined it perfectly. Love this SO much.
Thanks!
I write because I can not quit
Words on my heart demand free reign
Though9s once spoken keep me safe
Phrases my dreams together knit
Too closely woven to be split
Once shared we all enjoy the gain
I write because I can not quit
Words on my heart demand free reign
But I pick and choose but by bit
Carefully choosing what remains
For soundness before I commit
Both right and left sides of my brain
I write because I can not quit
So many of us in this boat with you, Darlene. You express it well.
…and we pray you never will, Darlene! Well done.
The form fits the sentiment, in my view.
Lovely, Darlene!
Oh yes, Darlene. “Words on my heart demand free reign…” What a perfect homophonic use of ‘reign.’ These words do rule us.
The words flow freely
At times they flow free no more
Motivation please
#haikuin19
#seventeeninnineteen
Hooboy do I ever understand!
Oh, yes
We’ll give a strong push
like a swift kick in your as-
perations. Go write.
We do go about begging our muse sometimes, Earl.
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When looking through the archives, I found this partially written piece from a decade ago and decided to update it. Hope y’all like it.
My Poetic Life
The origin of my very first poem
Is vague to say the least
I can tell you I was very young
When I released the poetry beast
I cannot wrap my mind around it
That first set of rhyming words
But I can tell you why I wrote
And now hang with poetry nerds
I do remember hearing stories
With lines that rhymed throughout
And as these stories went through my head
My thoughts would scurry about
My mind would change the lines around
The words just seemed to flow
The story came alive anew
Poetry was the way to go
So I began to write the lines
The rhymes flowed like a stream
I wrote of life and love and God
And things only in my dreams
Inspiration came from all around
And at times out of the blue
Once I broke the rhyming rule
I wrote like a poetic fool
I wrote with pencils, pens and more
On paper of every kind
I bought a pocket tape recorder
For those inconvenient times
I wore out my computer keys
More than a time or two
Pounding out the prose and rhymes
It was what I liked to do
Then life caught up and I slacked off
It was a hobby after all
I switched over to devotionals
I felt that was God’s call
But soon the poems slipped right back in
The stories they could tell
‘Cause poetry is Biblical
King David used them well
And then I found the challenges
To write a Poem-A-Day
Read the prompt; write the verse
So much fun to play
Each April and November
I wrote in prose or rhyme
Sometimes I didn’t make the grade
Just didn’t have the time
Then appeared the blooming bunch
A group that fits me the best
We’re not the biggest on the web
But we’re better than the rest
We write of love and life and God
In free verse, forms and such
It’s my new home for poetry
Thank you very much
© 2019 Earl Parsons
Liked
Love it, Earl. So happy to have you here with us, and happy to be a poetry nerd you hang with!
Wonderful
Welcome home, Earl. This is where your poetry belongs, as well as the rest of our poets. None greater than the other or riding a high horse. And believe me, it’s not easy to get a horse high!
From one nerd to another…AMEN, Earl! What a great group to write with.
Why I Write Poetry
As a youth, I was extremely shy.
I don’t know how or why.
It doesn’t mean I had nothing to say.
So I needed to find another way.
All those words built up inside me.
This condition sorely tried me.
I was like a volcano ready to spew.
With writing poetry, spew, I do.
Not to say, it’s volcanic destruction.
That’s not how I like to function.
Instead, may I encourage others.
That’s what I’d do, if I had my druthers.
Spew, you do, and quite nicely, too
I love the way Daniel stated my very feelings, so I’ll just add a big ole AMEN.
lol
BIG grin here
I hear you on the shyness aspect, Connie. It can be debilitating. I would know. But poetry, among other creative pursuits was the ticket into the mainstream for me. And it has become what we do. It gives pleasure, comfort and a sense of belonging to a community. Thanks for your “Lava flow” of words.
Like the volcano ready to spew. I know that feeling.
Connie, may your lava ever flow. Great.
Great poems, my friends…I can’t seem to think poetically at the moment, so I will write in prose:
I am motivated by so many things in my life. The beauty of a sunrise has me spilling over in words that taste and smell of butter cream, lemon tarts and strawberry sherbet. The sound of my grandchildren inspires me to find words that can match these little scallywags as they cavort and scamper through the yard or along the shore, making more noise than the crows or seagulls. My garden has me tongue-tied for words to describe new shoots in springs, all green and tender; to paint word pictures that portray peace roses in full bloom; to capture the glory of New England in shades of harvest gold, pumpkin spice and apple red; and to memorialize the winter whites, grays and browns of a garden tucked away for the season, dreaming of sunshine dandelions and the scent of fresh herbs. Finally, my love motivates me with is never-ending support, encouragement and kind critique. For all of this, I am infinitely blessed!
Uplifting and lovely, Linda. Thank you for the big smile your sentiments put in my heart.
I assume you meant to say, “… with his never-ending support… “. I’ll change it for you, if you like.
Your prose is quite poetic on its own, Linda. Add a haiku and it becomes a powerful haibun! But without it, this rose smells just as sweet!
Linda, you employ all the senses, the whole of you, as you infinitely bless us with your writing. Lovely.
What Drives Me To Pick Up A Pen?
If I hear a funny
conversation, see an
unusual sight,
I write.
If I think of people,
and animals I’ve known
and loved in my life,
I write.
If death rears its head,
causing me to lose
someone I love dearly,
I write.
If I am in the early
days of depression
when all seems futile,
I write.
If the government pisses
me off, and I begin
shouting at the television,
I write.
My motivations are plentiful, and,
I love to write.
I hear ya, Sara. I hear ya.
Thanks, Marie!
Yup, yup, yup….
Thank you, William.
And we love to read what you write, Sara. And you’ll have plenty of fodder for you poems in the next few weeks as motivation will be our focus. I am so very glad you write.
Thanks so much, Walt. You and Marie are great motivators!
From every front of our experience, Sara. Yes, anything worth writing has to be from what we see, know, feel. Perfect.
I don’t know how to muse
really, have few clues,
but I love the One who came
and I write for the glory of His name.
And you do it so well. So inspiring!
Yes, faith-based words. I am certain (of things known but not seen) that muses are really angels for those God calls to write.
Hopeless, helpless, ball of pain
wishing someone could help me regain
the woman I was born to be.
Will anyone dare speak life and liberty
to all the chained and broken inside of me?
Then I read of One so humbly grand
He spoke a word and the world began
His light drove out the deepest dark
Started a soul-fire with one small spark
Healed the broken of heart, set them apart.
I trusted Him and surrendered my life
Fell at his feet in an act of belief
Jesus the Christ died on a cross for me!
His grace and love made me free,
My debt was cancelled by the Son’s decree.
My words spill from His abundant love
and for the glory of the One from above
Boldly, I tell of my struggles and sin
how Jesus redeemed and entered in
my heart to cleanse and my battles to win.
Heart wrenching and uplifting at once. Beautifully penned. So much love and admiration for who you are and what you deal with, all the while pointing us all to Christ. ❤
Thank you, my beautiful friend. I appreciate your support and kindness, always. Nothing to admire here, I assure you!
MUCH to admire. SOOO much. ❤
Well written, this gratitude that blooms into boldness.
Thank you.
Writing Whys
It’s on my site,
digitized in so many pixels,
published for the unaware to see,
with but a few poet followers,
a dozen occasional friends
or cousin, sister,
one spammer
undeleted yet.
“Why kids read is why
I write” I say.
Not only kids,
but any wondering heart
that wanders among stanzas,
to stumble upon occasional words
random or purposed thoughts that are
a part of me.
Yet sometimes that
concise and catchy motto
seems so lame, so thin,
like a clever reason scribbled out to satisfy
a query, but not just that,
instead a question of my own
upon the margins of my life,
unanswered fully,
yet.
I write–
but quietly,
too often timid,
pursuing the whole answer,
parts of which I know,
but parts not fully assembled,
yet.
© Damon Dean, 2019