AN ENTERTAINING SUMMER – DAY #8: THAT SUMMER IN SICILY

One week has passed and we’re off on a productive July P.A.D. experience. We’ve worked with quotes of summer, poems of summer, Songs with Summer in the title and a book with Summer. Today we pull another tome off the shelves for inspiration. (And in doing so, pay homage to our own favorite Sicilian, Salvatore Buttaci) The volume we are choosing is entitled “That Summer in Sicily – A Love Story” by Marlena de Blasi.

That Summer in Sicily by Marlena de Blasi
That Summer in Sicily
by Marlena de Blasi

The story: “At villa Donnafugata, long ago is never very far away,” writes bestselling author Marlena de Blasi of the magnificent but crumbling castle in the mountains of Sicily that she  accidentally finds one summer while traveling with her husband, Fernando. de Blasi is befriended by Tosca, the matriarch of the villa, an elegant and beautiful woman-of-a-certain-age who conveys her life-spanning love story with the last prince of Sicily descended from French nobility.

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Today’s prompt? Write a “That Summer in ________” poem about a place that brings a fond (or otherwise) memory from summers past. Maybe a coming of age poem, or an expose. A self-discovery perhaps. If you are at a loss for such a place and time, maybe an interesting person you may have met in your summer travels can spark your writing today! As always, Bon Voyage and Good Poems to you all!


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  1. daniel paicopulos Avatar
    daniel paicopulos

    What a great prompt. So many choices…childhood memories, teenage love and loss, Vietnam…oh the dilemma

  2. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    Really good prompt. Thank you.

    That Summer of Crows

    I was ten.
    I was smaller then.
    The world was smaller, and
    that made everything bigger.

    Made the sky bigger.
    Made the old oak bigger
    than sky, and when I stood
    under that tree, clouds
    disappeared into its leaves,

    into its shadows. It was wind-
    flicked and dry as old books.
    And some days, I’d lay myself
    under that tree, watching
    crows sit on telephone lines.

    Grandpa died later that year,
    but for now, I owned my summers,
    and I spent hours watching
    those sooty-black crows
    weightless as a shadow.

    .

    (c) Misky 2016

    1. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      Wow you are a master wordsmith! so many great lines but this one took me clear back to early ’70s…
      when I stood
      under that tree, clouds
      disappeared into its leaves,

      Also love the image of crows ‘weightless as a shadow’!

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks, Janet. Glad you liked it. 🙂

    2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      That last stanza made me feel that it was the last of summers in a sense… love the watching of clouds.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        I think everything changes when a child experiences grief for the first time, so in that sense it was the last summer.

    3. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      For me, one word, “shadow,” made this poem ring. I love the images, and the startling finish.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks, William. 😀

    4. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      my favorite type of poem…and oh so well done…poetic yet believable

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        This is so very good. Truth in a poem is always a wonderful thing and when it is coupled with excellent wordsmithing, it becomes a joy to read.

        1. Misky Avatar
          Misky

          Thank you so much!

      2. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you, Daniel. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

      3. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Very odd that my reply went walk about! Anyway, thanks! 😀

    5. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Oh, my…Misky. I love your poem…the small-bigness of it the black and the shadows pierced by light filtered through leaves. I was right there…thank you. 🙂

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank YOU, Hannah!

    6. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Great images, Misky. I remember how much bigger everything was as a kid.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you, Connie.

    7. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      Love this, Misky–I went way back in time, too.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks, Victoria.

    8. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      wow! I felt like I was under that tree with you

    9. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Oh Marilyn! This is such a story that needs to expand and grow. A memoir in your hand would be a marvelous read! Just beautiful!

    10. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Owning summers is a nice thought. Somewhere along the way, we lose control.

  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

     
     
    The summer of thunder

    To find youself
    exposed to lighting,
    in the mountains
    when even father’s panic.

    I was ten I think,
    and didn’t care
    I had to soak, puddled wet
    through clothes.

    You can calculate
    the distance to the lighting
    by counting seconds
    from flash to BOOM.

    But if they coincide
    the rumble’s sharp,
    more a shot,
    and you rather count
    the minutes till they cease.

    Afterwards the streams
    where rivers brown
    and home we lit a fire
    to keep warm.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This put me there.

      1. Janet Avatar
        Janet

        yes!me too!! What comfort it was when one could count to five before the boom!

    2. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      simple yet elegant…a perfect portrait

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        How scary but so good you were with your dad. I was taught the same way to measure between lighting and thunder. Your style shines through in this.

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      The tight lines rather feel like lightning strike and sharp BOOM…love that I can feel your piece…the wet and brightness of it. Well done, Bjorn. 🙂

    4. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Bjorn, great word painting. I could see how this event could stick in a child’s mind.

    5. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      … when even father’s panic… this really set the tone for your story

    6. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      I feel much the time-traveler to whom William referred! A wonderful glimpse of youth, Bjorn!

    7. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Love, “puddled wet”. It makes the fire cozier.

  4. The summer of thunder | Björn Rudbergs writings Avatar
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  5. Janet Avatar
    Janet

     
     
    Those Summer Years of Youth

    We thought Time was bondage
    Those summer years of youth
    It wasn’t until they were gone
    We realized the truth

    …those miles of corn we hoed
    Those whiles we whiled away
    Beneath the sprawling canopy
    Of maple-willow sway

    That swing in the hay-loft
    Strung from the highest truss
    Daring timid riders to brave
    Its burlap Pegasus

    …those childish tears we shed
    Those chores that seemed so dull
    Those chatter-jolly supper-times
    When every plate was full

    The monotone of clocks
    The drone of heat-waved haze
    Where boredom conceived building-blocks
    And Mom, another babe

    Those years before the years
    That drew us from home’s doors
    And we left without looking back
    Oblivious to shores

    Those brother-sister days
    Of farm-life laugh-love-learn
    They slipped through us, one-way freeways
    To ports of no-return

    We thought it was bondage
    Those years before we flew
    Away from the safe haven of
    The only life we knew

    more ‘fill-in’ here: http://anotherporch.blogspot.ca/2016/07/those-summer-years-of-youth.html

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      For me, this is an elegant version of the old song, Toyland. Once you cross its borders…..

      1. Janet Avatar
        Janet

        William, your comment evoked tears…good ones. thank-you.

    2. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      this had me feeling like I was reading one of my favorite Victorian poets…and that is a good feeling, indeed

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        The next to last stanza is so poignant – those days truly don’t return except in our memories.

        1. Janet Avatar
          Janet

          Kanzensakura, thank-you. I am suddenly too close to seeing my children approaching the place where they are stunned by the briefness of living at home! I hope they take with them the good memories and release the rest to the grace of the passage of time!

          1. Kanzensakura Avatar
            Kanzensakura

            I hope so as well.

      2. Janet Avatar
        Janet

        Daniel thank-you. and thank-you for understanding that the bondage I speak of was the blessed bonds of a happy childhood wealthy with dreams!

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      I love the stanza that speaks in heat waves and the entirety breathes of such wonderful memories, Janet…so enjoyed!

      1. Janet Avatar
        Janet

        Hi Hannah, thank-you.

    4. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Wonderful, Janet. Burlap Pegasus–cool!

    5. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      Wonderful memories of the best years of our life. That’s where I took mine, too.

    6. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      too bad we can’t see how precious those times are until they are only memories.
      lovely!

    7. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      A brave look-back with a tear and melancholy heart! Outstanding, Janet!

    8. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Sounds like a splendid childhood, Janet.

    9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      Oh – this sounds like such a wonderful childhood – so good that they live in memories at least.

  6. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

     
     
    THAT SUMMER IN CEFALÙ

    I spent the hours writing poetry
    pretending the beach was my domain
    and with a turn of phrase I could transform
    the sparkling sand into diamonds,
    collect them in the sack of memory,
    enough to buy the sea and ride her
    like a mariner to the mountain gates
    of our Sicilian village of Acquaviva.

    Uncle Onorfio and I drank
    Messina Beer on the balcony
    of his Cefalù home that overlooked
    the sea I loved. He talked of Baltimore
    where he once lived, the wife who left him,
    the sons who rarely came now to visit.
    “You’re like a son to me, Turiddu,”
    He said, tears glistening like the sea.

    Today, so many years washed away
    by time’s rushing waters, I still return
    to Cefalù, if only in my memories.
    I spend the lavish treasures gathered there
    and it all comes swooshing back to me:
    the joy bells ringing in my ears,
    those hypnotic waves, my uncle’s laughter.
    “A saluti,” he says. “One more beer for Cefalù!”

    #

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I’ve never been there, but it doesn’t matter; this poem took me there.

    2. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      perfectly wistful

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        How wistful this is…but you can return in your memories. Those dreams of youth – how grand they were for us all.

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love the diamonds and tears the likening to the sea…a rich poem here, Sal…thank you, for sharing. 🙂

    4. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      Sal, I’ve never had a summer outside of the village I grew up in and still live in…this, to me is pure romance and nostalgia! LOVE the language you used to tell the pictures.

    5. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Sal, I love this, especially the first stanza.

    6. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      I love that line…so many years washed away…

    7. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      that first stanza is magical. Love the memory you’ve shared.

    8. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      A heartfelt “Salute” to this magnificent memory, Salvatore!

    9. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Such longing in that first stanza, Sal. You made this place feel like home to me.

  7. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

     
     
    SUMMER AT THE CAPE

    Sand dunes and salty air abound
    as waves come flowing in and pound
    the shore beside a verdant lea;
    the gulls and terns are gliding free
    and yet there’s stillness all around.

    By day this is the place to be,
    to watch how serendipity
    and colors laced with scents have crowned
    sand dunes and salty air,

    but nighttime truly does astound:
    the stars surround from rim to ground,
    reflecting on the bay and sea;
    these points of light proclaim to me
    that summer heat cannot confound
    sand dunes and salty air.

    1. kanzensakura Avatar
      kanzensakura

      The beach at night truly is magical. I enjoyed this trip back with you.

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      My favorite is the stillness…your details are delectable…especially the salty air. 🙂

    3. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      I’m in love with this place you painted and the rhyme-scheme you painted it with! A treat to the senses.

    4. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Wonderful poem, William

    5. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      I like the use of repetition in this.

    6. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      How I wish I could be on that beach to see the stars.

    7. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      The beach and the sea mesmerize me and your depiction places my toes in the sand, Will! Written with such aplomb!

    8. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Sand dunes are lovely to see, day or night. ‘Colors laced with scents’ really drew me in to that special place you experienced.

    9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      What marvellous song like poetry, the rhymes and meter perfect match to sea

  8. Michelle Hed Avatar
    Michelle Hed

     
     
    That Summer at the Lake

    The setting was ideal…
    a clear, blue lake
    with sandy beaches
    and summery breezes.

    The people were willing…
    two boys with shaggy blond hair
    and two brunette girls
    in bikinis.

    We were breathing hormones
    and whispering pheromones
    in each look and smile
    that passed between us.

    Then there was that walk
    late at night
    when our parents got mad
    and yelled

    but we were walking
    on the summer romance cloud
    and their anger just ricocheted
    from cloud to cloud

    like a silver ball in a pinball machine
    and our secret smiles
    couldn’t be wiped from our faces
    as we reveled

    in being…us,
    up at the lake
    that summer
    in ’83.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Marvellous, especially, for me, “ricocheted / from cloud to cloud.”

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Thank you, William. It was a fun one to write. 🙂

    2. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      wouldn’t you like to return, if only for a day? reading this, I know that I would…

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        I love the comparison of anger bouncing to the ball in a pinball machine!

      2. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Hi Daniel! Maybe for one day but I would really like to watch my past like an old movie.

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      I love the floating experience of partaking in your poem and the breathing and whispering…gorgeous, Michelle!!

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Thank you so much, Hannah!

    4. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      Part of me was young teen and the other part mad mom/dad…been both the ‘we’ and the ‘their’ of this stanza…
      but we were walking
      on the summer romance cloud
      and their anger just ricocheted
      from cloud to cloud;-))

      Really enjoyed!

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Thank you, Janet. This one was pure truth. I even put a blurred out picture of the four of us over on my blog. 😉

    5. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Great writing, Michelle Love the pinball analogy.

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Thank you. Connie!

    6. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      Teenage summer romances…who can forget.

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        🙂

    7. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      sweet summer romance –

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Thanks!

    8. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Very sensory and sensual, Michelle! Another tender glimpse!

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Thank you!

    9. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Oh that summer romance cloud–what a fine umbrella.

      1. Michelle Hed Avatar
        Michelle Hed

        Indeed! 🙂

    10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      What better way is there than summer love, wonderful to feel apart that way,

  9. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

     
     
    That Summer in Cheyenne

    I met you there one summer night
    A gospel group performed at church
    Your solo clapping caught my sight
    When others had all quenched the urge

    The pastor introduced me to
    Some P-A friends of yours that day
    I didn’t have one single clue
    I’d meet my groom-to-be that way

    The fun I had that summer there
    Could fill a thick, expansive book
    No other summer would compare
    To Pennsylvania I went back

    Wyoming soon became my home
    Great things can happen when you roam

    1. kanzensakura Avatar
      kanzensakura

      What a wonderful way to meet your future husband! I enjoyed this immensely.

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      So true…sometimes that’s the only way we’ll do and see what we’re meant to…fun glimpses, Connie!

    3. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      a-w-w-w! sweet little love story! beautiful!

    4. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Big smiles here

    5. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      I’m clapping, too. Delightful.

    6. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      Awwww … wonderful memory

    7. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      All roads lead to roam, Connie! The best steps make the journey!

    8. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      What a fine memory this must be for you, Connie.

  10. Haibun: The Summer of Elegant Men | kanzen sakura Avatar
    Haibun: The Summer of Elegant Men | kanzen sakura

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  11. kanzensakura Avatar
    kanzensakura

     
     
    Haibun: The Summer of Elegant Men

    I was at that awkward age between being a child and a teenager. Thick glasses, knobby knees, beautiful skin like my Aunt Gay – roses and cream. But I was so bored. Both my teenaged aunts had gone to camp as counselors and my best buddy Effie was in Greece visiting relatives. So very hot. The ceiling fans in the house barely moved the stuffy air around the high ceilinged rooms. My books were all read and the public library wouldn’t allow me into the adult section. I went to the kitchen to discuss my boredom with my grandmother. “Watch the oven for me” and off she went to the library in the corner of the house. She returned shortly. High up out of my reach were certain books. On the table she placed four books. “I think these will keep you busy for a bit.” And there, she placed beside the basket of tomatoes and freshly picked string beans from the kitchen garden were: a ratty edition of On Walden Pond, a brand new Collected Poems by T.S.Eliot, and antique editions of The Picture of Dorian Gray and The Importance of Being Earnest. I eagerly seized them and rushed up to my room. I read them obsessively. Within two weeks they were all read and I began to read them again. The poems of T.S.Eliot stayed by my bedside until I left for University. It became dog-eared and sometimes a page would fall out. But that summer, I became enrapt with the four main men in my life. John Lennon became part of them the next summer. These men influenced my taste in men until I finally married many years later. Thin men with wit and intelligence came and went in my life but these four men remained steady. They taught me to observe nature and people, to converse, to be true to myself, to write poetry. That summer of thin elegant men became the pattern of my summers and are still part of this summer. The Collected Poems still resides on the table by my bedside.

    sultry summer days
    unfold one page at a time –
    elegant men smile

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love your closing haiku! 🙂

      1. Kanzensakura Avatar
        Kanzensakura

        🙂

    2. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      your influences serve you well. this reads like a page from a timeless classic!

      1. Kanzensakura Avatar
        Kanzensakura

        Thank you so very much.

    3. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      I enjoyed reading this. Great haiku at the end.

      1. Kanzensakura Avatar
        Kanzensakura

        Thank you!

      2. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Amen, on both counts

        1. kanzensakura Avatar
          kanzensakura

          Thank you!

    4. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      sigh……. thanks for sharing this

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        Thank you for reading!

    5. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      This is a fantastic haibun, Toni! I love the tale and it had Lennon in it, so it had me hooked! Thanks for this!

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        You are most welcome!

      2. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        Thank you. After this, my grandmother and I spent a week re-arranging the library, putting the old encyclos, history, etc on the top shelves and the “adult” books w/in my reach.

    6. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      This is gorgeous writing, Toni. The haiku finishes it perfectly. And, you can’t go wrong with Lennon, ever.

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        Nope. John Lennon was THE man….

    7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      What a wonderful introduction to poetry.. The perfect selection to grow and learn.

  12. Summer of Small Wonders, (A Sevenling) | Metaphors and Smiles Avatar
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  13. daniel paicopulos Avatar
    daniel paicopulos

     
     
    Summer in San Diego

    (Stopping By San Diego on a Sunny Day)

    This city mine, for six years now
    is making its most seasoned bow
    to guests and locals, everyone,
    its sandy beaches and sunshine, wow.

    We’ve grown accustomed to the sun,
    we feel entitled, everyone.
    The nights, while cooler, still hold their cheer,
    no holding back the mid-year fun.

    Our friends back east are very clear
    about what matters, what is dear;
    it’s family, and friends who matter so,
    kept close at hand, in hearts, so near.

    But the humidity’s too high, this I know.
    I’ve promised no sweating, not ever, no.
    I have rays to catch, snowbirds to tease,
    I have rays to catch, a tan to show.

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Cheers to what’s held dear and to your fun poem, Daniel! 🙂

      1. daniel paicopulos Avatar
        daniel paicopulos

        so great to see your name, Hannah…hope your move was ok

        1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
          Hannah Gosselin

          Thank you, Daniel – good to see you, too! We’re in limbo land for a bit but soon…late July early-August…I appreciate you asking. 🙂

    2. kanzensakura Avatar
      kanzensakura

      Nice light touch in this! Please do show that tan and tease those birds!

    3. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      sounds divine!

    4. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      It’s great to live in a place you enjoy.

    5. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Somewhere, Frost is wearing a big grin.

    6. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      I grew up in SoCal and we used to vacation at the Del. Wonderful memories.

    7. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      this made me smile ….

    8. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Nothing like a good Frost on a summer day, Daniel! A great parody!

    9. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      That last stanza is wonderful, Daniel. Fun poem to read.

    10. Iris Deurmyer Avatar
      Iris Deurmyer

      And miles to go before I sleep! Lovely

  14. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

     
     
    Summer of Small Wonders, (A Sevenling)

    Small wonder – tiny island living in sea,
    wild-flowers, winding paths
    and tame grazing velvet-nosed-doe reaching…

    Life is freckle-smile-free
    floral-embroidered-smock, cut off blue-jeans
    and fresh – only twelve cycled-seasons deep.

    Monhegan, (in my heart), just 4.5 sq. mi – 19 km from rocky-main-shore.

    Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2016

    1. kanzensakura Avatar
      kanzensakura

      Oh this is so very good! I can just smell the ocean and wind in this.

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Yes

      2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Toni!

    2. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      oh my

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Daniel!

    3. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      almost hear Mozart dancing on the air. LOVE this summer-land!

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you so much, Janet!

    4. connielpeters Avatar
      connielpeters

      Great poem and ounds like a great place, Hannah

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Connie!

    5. Earl Parsons Avatar
      Earl Parsons

      Just looked up Monhegan. What a great place to disappear from the rat race. I was born and raised in Northern Maine and would love to have enough for a summer home up that way. Monhegan would be perfect, but probably way too pricey,

      And great poem, by the way.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Yes, Monhegan was magical…I only spent one afternoon there and it will be with me for a lifetime. I’m glad that you were led to research the island, Earl and thank you for the compliment on my poem. 🙂

    6. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      I love the sprinkling of nature in this.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Victoria!

    7. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      bravo!

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Candy!

    8. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Welcome back to the flock, Kid! And you brought your wonder-words with you! How cool is that! Loving the sevenling and how you make it sing!

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Walt! I’m so glad you enjoyed the Sevenling. 🙂

    9. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Hi Hannah! Good to see you here. I admire the loveliness and ease of this Sevenling; I find this form tough going.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, Sara, it’s good to be here! I’m glad that my poem read with ease…you’re right, I think this form can be tricky sometimes, too. 🙂

    10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      A wonderful connection to nature… Sometimes an island is the best place to be

  15. Earl Parsons Avatar
    Earl Parsons

     
     
    The Summer of Guilty Innocence

    ‘Twas the summer of learning
    Though in far too many ways
    I was not ready for the lessons
    Some that could have waited
    Or not been taught at all
    While others ultimately necessary
    For that passage from innocence
    Into the reality of life

    They say that sin is a lot of fun
    Indulging in it can be addictive
    If the courage to say no is missing
    When the second temptation pops up
    Or the third or the fourth, depending

    We all go through that summer
    The summer of guilty innocence
    The summer of learning about things
    On the other side of life’s coin

    Some make it through
    Others stay behind
    I’m one of the lucky ones
    Who can look back and say
    I walked through the valley
    Came out scathed and scarred
    But still in one piece
    Never to go back again

    © Earl Parsons

    1. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
      Victoria C. Slotto

      There is that enticement in summer that can make or break us. A rite of passage, I suppose.

    2. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      thanks for this memory

    3. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      A sage coming of age poem, Earl! Lessons learned is respect earned!

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Good place to be in, Earl.

    5. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Powerful closing, Earl. Well done.

    6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      Maybe we need a walk on the wild side, and return again… I only walked on the edge a few times.

  16. Earl Parsons Avatar
    Earl Parsons

     
     
    The summer of life
    Behind lay spring; ahead fall
    And the clock ticks on

    1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      A grand march in time!

  17. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
    Victoria C. Slotto

     
     
    The Summer of 1948

    I perch in my pepper tree.
    Pungent scents, fingered
    leaves embrace me.
    A lady bug, dressed in red
    with black polka dots
    climbs my arm, tickles.

    Ocean sand, white as the rind
    of a watermelon, clings to my
    bare toes.
    Only hours ago I ran through it,
    reaching out, stretching to catch
    sapphires.

    The smell of hot concrete
    dampened by rain showers
    lingers along with DDT
    sprayed from a can with a
    plunger like a bicycle pump.

    I slip down the gnarly trunk,
    enter the house by the
    screen door near the
    Bendix with the ringer where
    Mama found a black widow
    yesterday.

    She’s melting a blue cube
    of laundry starch
    in hot water.

    “Did you know I’m four
    and a half today?”
    I ask. She nods, smiles.
    The black fan whirrs
    in the background.

    “Go on over to Stewie’s,” she says.
    “It’s almost time for
    Kukla, Fran and Ollie.”

    Cross-legged on the floor
    I watch the 12” screen,
    understand what it
    means to be.

    1. Janet Avatar
      Janet

      ah yes. the best years indeed! so many great word-pictures but this one made me grin…
      She’s melting a blue cube
      of laundry starch
      in hot water.

      Wow! back when ironing was a weekly chore and stiff-starched was in!
      Did she use that water-shaker to dampen it before she ironed. Mom used to starch her aprons then rolls them into rolls for a while. Oh! good old memories!

      1. kanzensakura Avatar
        kanzensakura

        Love this poem of memories. I used to love to help with the ironing – those soda bottles with the sprinkle top, the smell of the bluing and starch. Lovely poem of sights and smells – I love the catching sapphires in the ocean water.

      2. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar
        Victoria C. Slotto

        That’s exactly how my mom did it!

    2. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      childhood and summer – perfect time for creating memories – yours are especially sweet.

    3. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      These memories are best when shared and in the tell, become a part of us even though we hadn’t lived them. The memory of a memory remains a memory, Victoria! Nicely done!

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      What a great group of recollection images, Victoria. I love the comparison of ocean sand to watermelon rind.

    5. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Your details are pitch-perfect…I can even hear the squeak-slam of the screen door and I love your closing. Awesome!

    6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      So long time passed, the inclusion of details like DDT makes this so connected to another time.

  18. lorwynd Avatar
    lorwynd

     
     
    That Summer in…Rome?

    Ah, recall the grand old days of yore…
    That last summer we spent in Rome,
    seduced by our own power.
    Idle days, drunken nights.
    Vainly ignoring
    civil discord,
    moral strife.
    We cared…
    Not.

    1. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      much said in this little gem

      1. lorwynd Avatar
        lorwynd

        Thanks, Candy

    2. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      I love being seduced by my own power. Then I realize I don’t have any, and LAUGH?

      1. lorwynd Avatar
        lorwynd

        I have that problem, too

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Form is perfect for this poem. Has such a recklessness about it.

  19. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
    Walter J. Wojtanik

     
     
    THAT SUMMER IN MOURNING

    In the throes of a summer swelter,
    lives helter skelter and falling fast.
    I am well past feeling tomorrow’s another day.
    There is no other way to say it,
    summer mournings take a lot out of
    a caring soul’s soul. We have no control
    over our outcomes and some would rather
    not deal with the realities of death.
    But that summer lingers, it clenches my fingers
    into a fist and memories of those that I miss will
    soften with time. They say often that time
    heals all wounds, but it steals to much in return.
    I yearn for happier days when mourning goes away!

    © Walter J. Wojtanik – 2016

    1. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      hold those memories tightly … this drips with sadness

    2. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Time can be a terrible thief. May future happiness create new memories.

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Your title is perfect for this…emotive and well-felt poem, Walt.

    4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      Maybe we need to remember the sorrow, if nothing else we can feel the warmth only if we’ve been cold enough

  20. That Summer In The Sand | echoes from the silence Avatar
    That Summer In The Sand | echoes from the silence

    […] Shared at Poetic Bloomings: AN ENTERTAINING SUMMER – DAY #8: THAT SUMMER IN SICILY […]

  21. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    So many ideas came in my head when I read the prompt…but this is the one that emerged when I finally sat down to write. I wish I’d written something happier…but it just wasn’t in the cards. Thank you Walt/Sara for a great prompt!

    THAT SUMMER IN THE SAND

    Were we just
    having fun, playing
    at beaches…
    living life
    as if we would always be
    in a safe bubble?

    Or were we
    just ostriches with
    our heads so
    buried, that
    we weren’t prepared for our Fall
    of 2001?

    1. Candy Avatar
      Candy

      Oh my … how quickly life can change. I can fel the irony in this – well written

    2. pmwanken Avatar
      pmwanken

      Whoops…the “we” in the 3rd line from the end should be “that”.

      1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
        Walter J. Wojtanik

        Got it! And so does this poem!

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      This may be sad, Paula, but so is our present time. Beautifully written.

    4. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love the ostrich imagery…nice work, Paula!

    5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      Love the thought of how sand can be different depending how you see it.

  22. Candy Avatar
    Candy

     
     
    Summer In My Imagination

    Clear blue sky with little
    tufts of white clouds
    gliding across its surface

    A gentle sun, slowly warming
    the air and drying the dew
    on soft grass that never
    needs mowing

    Riotous colors of flower –
    filled beds with bee and
    butterfly feasting on the
    sweet nectar

    A bench for two, a breezy
    get away where there are
    no phones, TV, iAnything
    a favorite cold drink, a book

    ….. and a friend to share it all

    1. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      Clear and gentle and riotous and breezy…yes!

    2. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Thanks for sharing, Candy!

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Sounds idyllic!

    4. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love the vibrancy and color in this and the iAnything…ha!! Great poem, Candy!

    5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      Isn’t it simplicity that’s best.

  23. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
    Walter J. Wojtanik

     
     
    THAT SUMMER IN THE DAYS OF MY YOUTH

    My voice changed.
    That fact defined the year which brought me
    to the precipice of adulthood.
    Unsure of foot & teetering
    on the weak knees of youthful thought.

                   All of thirteen, a bit green
                   & ignorant to a changing world.
                   I found myself transforming into
                   someone I barely knew, realizing
                   I would find myself soon enough

    as long as I tuned in, turned on
    & dropped out of the norms of a
    distilled upbringing, wringing my hands
    at authority & standing up to the “man”,
    still yielding to my mother to take out the trash.

                   Short on cash & stature, & the nature
                   of the beast was the least of my concerns.
                   The females in my realm of thought
                   made funny things happen to me.
                   My hands shook, my stomach churned,

    & I learned that they were the cause
    of my voice fracturing every time they came near.
    I had a fear of the war lasting forever,
    & having to learn to speak Vietnamese
    or Canadian, knowing I’d look bad in fatigues.

                   Why is it we could put men on the moon,
                   but couldn’t keep guys like John
                   & Martin & Bobby safe from hatred.
                   Isn’t anything sacred anymore? Did we even know the score?
                   But one thing always delivered the goods. Music.

    Music did it for me. I know that now.
    We were lighting fires for Morrison,
    while Hendrix did fine all by himself.
    Mick was gathering no moss, & the cost
    of freedom was very high, but worth every CS&N song.

                   I was wishing I could have gone to Woodstock
                   & it was a shock that it had grown as big as it was.
                   Free-love was the best buzz word I ever heard
                   & it was absurd to think I stood on the brink
                   of such an uncertain future! It was torture!

    If anyone would tell me that in a year the Beatles
    would argue and break up over an avant-garde Ono,
    I would tell them they were crazy. I stopped being lazy
    in ’69, ever since I found this thing called “muse”,
    & how expressing it made funny things happen

                   to the females in my realm; a release in a lyrical sense
                   under some false pretense of ever really being
                   in love yet above all else, music and words lived in me
                   (but I was just too ignorant to get that clue, see?)
                   Besides, my voice changed.

    © Walter J. Wojtanik – 2016

    1. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      There is music in everything you write, CH. Of course, I haven’t heard you sing!

      1. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
        Walter J. Wojtanik

        You wouldn’t want to!

        But if you did, it would sound something like:

        THE POETRY IN MY MUSIC #1

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Music is such a wonderful outlet for creative expression…nice journey through these times, Walt.

    3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
      Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

      I love how you time-stamp it all with those artists of my youth – Woodstock sounds fantastic – but I was way too young then…

  24. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

     
     
    That Summer in Lake George

    Four New Yorkers traveling
    to Lake George–their first
    time. An efficiency on the lake
    with floor to ceiling windows
    overlooking a blue expanse
    of calm, clear water. Canoes cutting
    through lake, swimmers splashing,
    and ping-pong balls bouncing
    back and forth. One of four plays
    golf. Not me. Casual air
    of serenity here. Dew-sprinkled
    morning walks, Lone Bull
    for a bracing breakfast. Shopping,
    stopping in Fort Ticonderoga,
    strolling to a spot of splendor
    with a view of Lake Champlain,
    and Vermont’s green mountains.
    Watch battle reenactments
    in costume Tour fort for lessons
    in history. Four New Yorkers
    would love to revisit that
    “Queen of American Lakes.”

    1. daniel paicopulos Avatar
      daniel paicopulos

      Aw…do it

    2. Walter J. Wojtanik Avatar
      Walter J. Wojtanik

      Loved Lake George! The Great Adventure Amusement Park has the roller coaster of my youth, the Comet from Crystal Beach! Brings back memories, CH2!

      THE COMET

    3. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love the list-y-ness of this, Sara…I can hear those ping-pong balls…I love that game!

  25. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    This songs like a perfect vacation spot,

  26. Poem: That Summer in…Rome? – Wanna Get Published, Write! Avatar
    Poem: That Summer in…Rome? – Wanna Get Published, Write!

    […] Prompt: That Summer in _____ […]

  27. Iris Deurmyer Avatar
    Iris Deurmyer

    Catching Crawdads

    Tying worm on string at end of stick
    Dropping into creek and then quickly raise
    Crawdads clinging to string
    Cousin holds bucket as I drop crawdad in
    We take turns “fishing” for crustaceans
    A couple of dozen later we walk home for lunch
    Summer of endless heat and forever fun