PROMPT #156 – “YOU MAY SAY I’M A DREAMER”: GUEST HOST – PATRICIA HAWKENSON

I would be remiss if I didn’t take this moment to thank Connie Peters for hosting last week, and all the guest hosts to date. You have all contributed greatly to the success of Creative Bloomings. It continues this week with the addition of another talented and expressive artist in words and other disciplines. It’s a joy to share the spotlight this week with Patricia Hawkenson,

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Artisan, Poet and Author Patricia Hawkenson

Patricia A. Hawkenson was an award-winning educator before her retirement, but now she is a full-time artist offering a range of skills from stained glass kaleidoscopes, sewing tapestry handbags, creating jewelry, and writing poetry. Check out a few of her crafts on Creative Bloomings ‘CRAFT’ tab:

http://poeticbloomings.com/crafts/

You can follow her Expressive Domain business on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/ExpressiveDomain

She shares her poetry with a variety of online writing communities such as: Creative Bloomings, Writing Digest’s Poetic Asides, and Hello Poetry. Selected poems were published on e-zines, such as InTheFray and Storm Sage Central. She is published in numerous print anthologies including: Poetic Bloomings the First Year, Prompted, Beyond the Dark Room, Whispered Beginnings, Fandemonium I & II, Four of a Kind, and Royal Flush. Her first full collection, “Magnetic Repulsion, 100 Poems from Desire to Disgust,” is available on Amazon and Barnes and Noble: http://www.outskirtspress.com/magneticrepulsion

If it is not jinxing fate to mention it here, Patricia’s poem ‘Plum Crazy’ is slated to be published in the 2015 Poet’s Market! It was originally written for a prompt on Poetic Asides.

Patricia is currently seeking a writing agent and a publisher for her finished historical fiction novel ‘Born with a Tarnished Spoon.’ The novel exposes the social expectations of unwed mothers and the illegal baby trade that exploited their situations in the 1930’s.

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PROMPT #156 – “YOU MAY SAY I’M A DREAMER” – The poem we’re asking for this week, is based on a dream you’ve had. It could be the misty visions we have during our R.E.M. cycle, or it could be an aspiration we hold dear. Write the poem entitled, “I Once Dreamed About____”

WALT’S MYSTIC NIGHTLY VISION:

I ONCE DREAMED ABOUT ANDREA MEETING HER GRANDMOTHER

A DREAM MEETING
A DREAM MEETING

My daughters are my pride and joy. I got just what I wanted; I never “wished” for boys. As different as night and day, they both have a way of working Daddy around their finger. The feeling lingers. Melissa holds a seven-year advantage, in time spent and shared. There were many a glad moment when she “met” her grandmother, my mother, spending her last nine months together. But as short lived, they were moments I cherish in my heart. The part that staggers me and saddens this old Dad’s demeanor was that my youngest daughter Andrea had never known her grandmother. I have no doubt that Andi would have had Mom’s special favor. She has Mom’s smile.

I recently dreamed about Andrea meeting her grandmother. Any other dream would have faded quickly in the early morning light. But this dream had the feeling so real that I could feel Mom’s gentle hand leading me through the mystic midnight vision playing in my sleep filled mind. For twenty-eight years she’s been gone, but ever-hopeful, this “one more day” played like it was video taped for posterity. The sincerity of Mom’s smile while she embraced our baby – fully grown and who has only “known” grandma by photos and oft-told memories which she had come to cherish as much as we have in making them. But, there they were a generation removed and settled into the groove that should have had the chance to flourish. It would have nourished both hearts in the lifetimes they would have known. Cuddled close conversing about futures planned and wisdom handed down; secrets shared between two of my favorite “girls”. But all nights do end and dreams do sometimes find conclusion. One final photo, a keepsake to take to my waking moments and beyond. In my dream, my daughter found her missing peace!

Daughters find their way
even in dreams they can feel
moments in their heart.

© Walter J Wojtanik – 2014

PATRICIA’S DREAM:

WE ONCE DREAMED ABOUT GROWING OLD TOGETHER

There was no section
of our colonoscopies
that was scrapbook worthy,
and we had to settle
for pressing dead leaves
as they withered and dropped
instead of your balding hair,
our falling reading glasses,
or my sagging skin,
so our desires for
idyllic porch lemonade
and white-wicker rocking chairs
became improbable fantasies
that have slowly grown
into five o’clock shadows
with eye-opening dark drinks
served from our shaking hands
into old-fashioned glasses.

© PATRICIA A HAWKENSON – 2014

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  1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
    http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    Walt, you break my heart with your unfulfilled dream. Patricia, your dream is close to my real life.

    1. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      Thanks, Viv! Yes, it will be everyone’s reality – if we want to be the last man standing! HA!

  2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
    Henrietta Choplin

    Beautiful, both.

  3. b_young Avatar
    b_young

    Dreamy

    That I’m dreaming
    is notable, more than
    what I’m dreaming.

    The med that suppresses
    my nebulous ailment–restless leg–
    suppresses, too, my dreams.

    These new yellow capsules
    warn: may cause vivid dreams. Yes.
    And mellow, and funny. More, please.
    (But make the next spy
    kiss better.)

    1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      I don’t know what’s wrong with these spies nowadays. I guess they’ve just gotten jaded and lazy. Here’s to better and more pleasant dreams, Barbara

    2. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      You and I are kindred spirits. I think we’re on the same prescription!

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Nice Barbara!

    4. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Love this, Barbara. I always love the ones that carry kisses and hugs. Hope you can keep this med for a long while. 🙂

    5. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      “They” say we all dream. . .but I rarely remember mine. I love the idea of dreaming at all being notable. And of course, the next spy kiss.

    6. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Nice, Barbara.

    7. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Chuckle! Delightful, loved this.

  4. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    I DREAMT I DWELT IN MARBLE HALLS

    They gleamed;
    genuflecting
    with such utter brilliance
    that it seemed there was no need for
    mirrors.

    copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      lovely

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Stunning piece, William.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Love this one from title to the end.

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Lovely vision, William.

    5. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Lovely vision, William!! I can see that gleaming brilliance…well done!

    6. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      A beautiful place, well pictured. Nice.

  5. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    A POET DREAMS OF WORLDLY SUCCESS

    When muses seem far off the beam, I need to dream of milk and honey.
    Who knows? One muse might then enthuse and I’ll peruse some silk and money.

    © copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      I like this William. Your poetry always deserves silk and money in my estimation.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Love this, William. You speak for many poets in it.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Sweet!

    4. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Words of worth.

  6. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Walt, Your piece pulsates with emotion. The love you feel for your mother and her granddaughters is palpable.

  7. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Patricia, the startling opening lines of your poem caught my attention and laid a foundation for the turn in the poem. This is rivetting work, in my opinion.

    1. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      Thank you, William. I always appreciate your thoughtful commentary. You have a gift for specific feedback, and for creating your own compelling poems with intriguing phrases like genuflecting marble. 🙂

  8. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    I DREAMED OF MY CAT CURAGGIU

    in dreams a pet cat I once knew
    talks to me in human tongue
    as if we were old buddies
    who had been through wars
    and know too well how wounds
    become scars to remind us
    how we laid our lives on the line
    and only through the Grace of God
    managed to return home again

    in dreams Curaggiu is kind
    not to remind me
    how I tricked her into a cage
    hustled her to the pound
    where I left her forever
    how she riveted her golden eyes
    on my speedy departure out the door
    but in dreams we play poker
    and laugh about the good old days

    #

    1. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      nice work

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Oh, my, this is one that tells of a lesson and of forgiveness. Lovely, Sal.

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      In dreams, you became closer to the cat. Lovely.

    4. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Dreams sometimes tend to heal, to be the balm, for our regrets. Loved this, Sal.

  9. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    I DREAMED OF MARY’S GARDEN

    in a dream one night
    I walked in Mary’s garden
    where every flower
    was a soul at peace
    and I stooped to touch
    the softest petal
    of the brightest red rose

    it wore my father’s face
    and Mary stooped
    beside me
    touched the velvet
    and smiling said
    how happy my Papa was
    in this Garden of her Son

    when I awoke
    despite sleep tears
    I could smell spring

    #

    1. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      Enjoying all three, this is my favorite. I can relate to waking to sleep tears. Dreams, and poems like that, can stick with you all day. Well done.

    2. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      this is beautiful, Sal

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Words fail me on this one, Sal.

    4. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Oh, Sal, how heart-quickening this is. And to add the sense of smell at the end of the experience was genius.

  10. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    I DREAMED I WAS A FLOWER

    when I was a flower
    I dreamed one day
    within a dream
    I’d become a tree
    tall enough
    to pierce the floor
    of Heaven

    when I became
    that mighty tree
    tall in my dreams
    I wished to know
    the secrets of
    human hearts

    when I awoke
    one spring morning
    roused from sleep
    in which I dreamed
    about the stings
    of human sorrows
    I longed for dreams
    of flower days

    #

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This is a superb trio of poems; thanks for posting them. I must admit to having most feeling for the cat, though.

      1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
        georgeplace2013

        Sal, I wholeheartedly agree with William- I LOVE the cat poem!

      2. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Love the cat best, as well, Sal.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Fantastic poem, Sal. It says so much about wishes and where they take us and what they can teach us.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      This is a beauty

    4. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      Where do I start? With the cat story, which any person owned by a cat can understand? With the surprise in Mary’s garden? With the ultimate misery of longing to be someone other than yourself? Beautifully written, all three

    5. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Beautiful, Sal. A progression of longings.

  11. georgeplace2013 Avatar
    georgeplace2013

    Walt and Patricia both your poems were tug-at-the-heart bittersweet. Lovely.

  12. georgeplace2013 Avatar
    georgeplace2013

    I Once Dreamed of Heaven

    I looked ahead, upwards,upwards they wound
    and behind single file more followed
    a narrow path that spiraled round and round
    a mountain rising from a flat plain.

    The music… oh, the music and voices raised
    in sweet melody of songs that came to our lips
    in words unknown – they simply became. We praised
    as we walked higher, higher, round and round.

    And in each person’s hands a gift was clasped,
    wrapped and bowed to bestow – an offering
    of thanksgiving. And to my relief I grasped
    a gift also, though small. It didn’t seem to matter.

    I wondered what I could have brought
    that would please so wondrous a God
    then a voice in my head, clear as thought
    said, “Your gift to me is your words in verse –
    my gift returned and multiplied.”

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Wow. This is transcendent.

    2. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      This reminds me of the children’s book “The Littlest Angel.” Our gifts, when they come from the heart, are true treasures.

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Such loveliness and grace. Simply perfect, Debi.

    4. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      Littlest Angel and the Little Drummer Boy. His gift to you, returned hundredfold to Him.

    5. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Debi, this is SO affirming for me, and probably many poets. Thank you.

  13. I Once Dreamed About Being A Grandma | echoes from the silence Avatar
    I Once Dreamed About Being A Grandma | echoes from the silence

    […] for Creative Bloomings Prompt #156: You May Say I’m A Dreamer – this is prompt #156 of weekly prompts, which means it is the final prompt of the third year of […]

  14. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    I Once Dreamed About Being A Grandma

    I could see
    my grandkids and me
    walking through
    my house, the
    stories being told again
    about all they see.

    Their mom’s first
    trophy for tennis;
    their dad’s framed
    cast photo
    from his last night performing
    on stage in college.

    We would bake
    cookies together
    to take to
    their grandpa
    who was working out in the
    yard, or his workshop.

    I would watch
    the love being shared
    between gramps
    and the kids,
    thankful for good fortune and
    loving family.

    But first, I
    would have needed to
    fall in love.
    The kind of
    love that lasts forever; to
    become man and wife.

    Together
    we’d have built a home,
    started a
    family.
    To be a grandma, I would
    have first been a mom.

    I would have
    watched my children grow
    into young
    adults, I’d
    have cheered their successes and
    nursed their hurts, in love.

    To be a
    grandma, I would have
    needed to
    let my kids
    go out on their own to find
    their own place in life.

    As my years
    advance, my daydreams
    become mere
    memories;
    nightmares of being alone,
    my reality.

    I once dreamed about being a grandma.

    It was just a dream.

    1. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      Do Marie and Walt keep track of wonderful poets like you who have written a poem for EVERY one of Creative Bloomings’ prompts??!! WOW. That’s trophy worthy! (Put that on the mantle for your family to see.)

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thanks for this and for your visit and comments on my blog – I certainly haven’t written to EVERY prompt…those “inform poet” prompts often elude me. 😉

    2. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      this makes me sad 😦

      1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
        georgeplace2013

        Me, too. Beautifully written

        1. pmwanken Avatar
          pmwanken

          Thanks, Debi.

      2. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thank you for the empathy, my friend.

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Aw, Paula, I can understand Linda’s sadness at reading this, and your sadness at having written it. It says much about the poet. But our love never goes to waste. We can choose to invest in whatever stock strikes our fancy. Children don’t have to be ours to watch their growth and give us joy. Many of us have numerous children whom we borrow from time to time to our own selfish and vicarious dreams.

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Yes, I do borrow nieces and others…having also nannied for a number of years, my maternal instincts have been put to good use. I suppose I’m just at the age now that my peers’ grandbabies are growing in number, making it another milestone in what I have and will be missing.

    4. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Beautifully expressed Paula 🙂

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thank you, Benjamin.

    5. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      Oh, Paula . . . I ache for your pain.

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thanks, Darlene…

    6. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      I think these are magnificent, moving, and a masterful use of the shadorma form.

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thanks, William…seems if I have more to say than six lines, the shadorma still works for me. 😉

    7. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      A stunning and wistful poem, Barbara.

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        I think your comment went astray.

        ~ Paula

        1. purplepeninportland Avatar
          purplepeninportland

          No, it didn’t. I did. I meant to write your name.

          1. pmwanken Avatar
            pmwanken

            Oh! Well in that case, thank you, Sara!

    8. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Paula, this is such a gentle ‘wakening’ into a regret-full reality…great poetry. Carried me along on your longings into your sad sigh at the end. Loved it.

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thanks, Damon. I suppose time has allowed me to reach the point of “gentle.” So glad you enjoyed it.

  15. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

    The Dog of My Dreams

    I always liked big dogs.
    My idea of a perfect dog
    was a Great Dane until
    I met a beautiful half-
    breed, a part St. Bernard,
    all of the good features,
    and no slobber. That’s
    the dog I wanted.

    Seven years later,
    I had two kids but no
    St. Bernard mix. And
    I pretty much decided,
    no pets. But then when
    visiting a friend, there
    stood a dog, larger than life,
    with St. Bernard markings.

    She was even prettier
    than the one I first saw.
    My friend said, “Take her.
    She’s a stray with no collar.”
    I took her home, ecstatic
    God had given her to me.
    Hubby even recognized her
    as the dog I’d been hoping for.

    But happiness was short lived.
    We got a call from a lady
    a few miles down the road.
    She wanted her dog back.
    We had named her Autumn
    for her burnt orange coat.
    But she called her Amber.
    We returned the dog.

    That weekend I wondered
    why God would send Amber
    and then take her away.
    One night my daughter and I
    dreamed we got her back.
    I told her God speaks that way,
    at times. Then we got a call—
    the lady looking for Amber.

    She said if we found her
    we could have her. Next,
    our pastor, our neighbor, phoned.
    Earlier, I had shared about Amber.
    When we picked her up,
    he Cheshire grinned
    at God’s goodness to bless us
    with the dog of my dreams.

    1. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      Such a sweet story! I can bet that Autumn Amber is right where God meant her to be. She is one lucky dog!

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Wonderful story, Connie. It always amazes me when things like this happen in my life. And it always reinforces my faith in a universe that listens to our thoughts and grants our wishes.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Very beautiful Connie

    4. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      Beautiful story, esp from a cat lover.

    5. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      I love happy endings : )

    6. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Oh, what a wonderful story, with a bit of a shaggy-dog element.

    7. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Great story! Loved it, and so heart warming, in such great form.

  16. David Avatar
    David

    Skunked

    By David De Jong

    I dreamt, we had a skunk, in the house last night;
    He came back to life, lookin’ for a fight.
    The last time I saw him, he was on the road,
    His head hit by the tire, flat as a toad.
    Wasn’t aimin’ to end his furry life,
    He committed suicide, launched this strife.
    I felt a bump and shouted; “Oh No! Oh Dear!”
    He got mystical with his fountain, in the rear.
    The stink was so awful, it scared my poor nose,
    But it all missed me, my truck, and my clothes.
    How he came back to life, I’ll never get right;
    I dreamt, we had a skunk, in the house last night

    The critters were unitin’, that’s for sure,
    They were scamperin’ about, raisin’ fur.
    They’d chase one another, up a tall tree,
    Stop short, turn and fix their eyes, all on me.
    The dogs just laughed, at my predicament,
    They raised their legs, in solemn sentiment.
    So much for believin’ in “man’s best friend”,
    They were all in cahoots, to see my end!
    After all the lovin’, feedin’, and care;
    They all turned against me; how did they dare?
    I’m still quite quizled, by the crazy sight;
    I dreamt, we had a skunk, in the house last night.

    The cats pried opened the door on the porch,
    I scrambled around, lookin’ for a torch.
    He hid so well, in the dark of dark night,
    I searched and searched, in a tad bit of fright.
    I don’t know, if he was real or a ghost,
    I thought for sure, he was dead as burnt toast.
    Never did find him, don’t know where he hid,
    My wits are slidin’ down a pyramid.
    Now as I rest and close my eyes to sleep,
    I’m wonderin’ if I’ll see the little creep.
    His tail all poufy; his stripe of pure white,
    I dreamt, we had a skunk, in the house last night.

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      What fun, David. LOL Had a really good chuckle over this one. I know that nightmare. I recognize its scent. Many is the night I spent, guarding my bedroom window in fear. 🙂

    2. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      So funny

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      This is fun; recalls, for me anyway, the “boll weevil” song. I think it’s a song, for sure.

    4. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      Brings back memories of our family singing about ‘the dead skunk in the middle of the road’ – always sung on long car rides. 🙂

    5. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      I’ve never gotten that close to a skunk, especially when “He got mystical with his fountain, in the rear.” What a fun nightmare, David!

      1. David Avatar
        David

        All based on actual events – it was quite a week…

  17. Claudsy Avatar
    Claudsy

    Wonderful to see you, Patricia, at the garden gate today. Lovely and honest poem, too. Yeah, even the single journey falls into your “vision’s” description. I can testify to that. Walt, your dream is easily understood and worthy of tears. Lovely.

    I’ll have only one offering today. Life has been handing me more than the usual obligations this past week and looks to be moving into the rest of the one coming. Happy writing, everyone.

    Passage

    To travel amid star trails
    Or on seas’ rolling waves
    To join pilgrims at shrines
    Or settle for mountain peace;
    These were visions of youth,
    Transplanted into adulthood,
    E’er following spirit’s growth,
    Caring little for direction,
    Preparing only for meaning
    Within time’s passage on earth.

    1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Franklin

      What will get out of life vs. have I made a difference? I hear you.

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Yep. I think it’s a question we all come to, sooner or later.

    2. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      All the things I hoped to do… but I’m content with having made a difference in my family’s life. Lovely thoughts here, Claudsy

      1. Wm Preston Avatar
        Wm Preston

        Amen

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          🙂 William.

      2. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Thanks, Debi. Glad you liked it.

    3. expressivedomain Avatar
      expressivedomain

      This is my mother’s lament. Did she make a difference? I assure her, she DID!

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Patricia, I don’t doubt that in the least.

        I think for many of us, if we’d stop long enough to look back from the outside looking in, we could do an “It’s a Wonderful Life” eval of our lives and see where our real lives have been spent.

    4. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Wonderful poem, Claudsy. It was quite thought-provoking.

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Thanks, Sara. I was in a thoughtful mood at the time. 🙂

    5. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      What’s striking to me is our ability to travel to such places in spirit with imagination and words…beautiful visions, Claudsy.

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Thanks so much, Hannah. We are always blessed when we can see beyond “reality” to what could be. I agree.

        1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
          Hannah Gosselin

          🙂 That’s how dreams become reality, I believe.

    6. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Ah! The wisdom to live ‘preparing only for meaning’ is great example. Thank you dear Claudsy.

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Thank you, Damon. Blessings. I’m glad you liked it.

  18. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Walt, touching piece of the heart there. It’s a joy to see parts of the family manifested in a smile or facial expression. Patricia, I love your piece of growing old together in improbable fantasies!

  19. Darlene Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Franklin

    I don’t often remember dreams. In this one, I relive both my last memorable dreams, and what led to it.

    Once I Dreamed of No More Dreams

    Once upon a time I was a Musketeer
    Living a dream I didn’t know I wanted
    Death knocked at my door, leaving me
    Alone

    Alone I entered my nursing home jail
    Living a nightmare I earned by bad choices
    Hospitals blew down my house of cards
    Crippled

    Crippled I dozed in my chair on wheels
    Existing in a vacuum I need help to survive
    Air warmed me, body and spirit
    Awake

    Waiting I sensed unseen angel wings
    Not believing, I could not deny them
    Musketeers reunited, hope reignited
    Loved

    Darlene Franklin
    c2014

    1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      alone, crippled, awake, loved… so glad the progression ended well. Effective way to tell this story.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        George, the dream gave me great peace about being where I am now.

    2. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Superb use of images and form.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Thanks, William

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Such dreams often tear at the mind of the dreamer. I’m so glad that peace came from this one for you, Darlene. I also enjoyed the progressive nature of the story line. Great work.

      1. Darlene Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Franklin

        Claudsy, It was a great comfort, a sense that I was where I was supposed be and they were there with me. “They” being my mother and daughter.

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          It would be a great comfort to anyone, I think. 🙂

    4. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Darlene, this was beautiful, and done so well. I loved your pattern and the progression here, from despair to hope.

  20. Darlene Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Franklin

    Patricia, Walt, what power in your poems to ignite a visceral response.

  21. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    I ONCE DREAMED ABOUT A HEART

    I once had dream,
    about a heart,
    chock-full of steam.
    Pulsating, booming
    in rhythm and rhyme.
    But in time
    it lessened,
    in vigor and grind.
    Now come to find;
    this sleeping ambition
    of mine,
    vanish, in the eyes
    of woken reality.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Wow. Excellent

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        Thx

    2. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Memories pulsate a little slower. Wonderful poem, Benjamin.

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        Thx Sara

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Terrific, Ben. Why is it that powerful lines of verse come to us in dream to vanish with the light of day. I’ve often asked myself that, Looked at from a life’s time span, many come to such dreams late and find fewer hours to cram them all in.

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        True Claudsy thx

    4. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Ben, loved this. Startling at the awaking moment.

  22. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
    Henrietta Choplin

    (Poem w/image: http://lettheballoonssailmeaway.wordpress.com)

    Two Become One*

    I dreamed once that I flew…
    So exhilarated, I woke to tell you:
    “I dreamed I flew!! I dreamed I flew!!”
    You smiled, silent
    Then wrapped my excitement
    All around you.

    *Jewel, “2 Become 1”, CD: 0304

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Beautiful!

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Aww… Thank you, William!! 🙂 !!

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Love this one, Hen. Seldom do I get to fly in dreams now. I’d be excited too, to have another one. Lucky you on both counts–to dream and have one to share it with.

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Oh, Clauds… it was one of the happiest moments of my life 😀 !!

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          Cherished feelings, aren’t they, Hen? 😀

          1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
            Henrietta Choplin

            Yes, so very !! 😀

    3. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Hen, this was delightful. The response was the delightful thing. To wrap up in another’s joy is the sweetest love.

  23. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    I DREAMED A PORTERHOUSE STEAK
    (A Line-Serpentine Poem)

    Hunger invades my sleep: hunger
    for steaks to die for:
    too delicious! And thick too.
    Dreams of Porterhouse, dreams
    of huge steaming stacks of
    rare cuts bubbling red, rare
    delights to this dreamer who delights
    in simpler culinary treats like pancakes in
    batters of buckwheat, while dawn batters
    sleep walls, but I hold firmly to sleep,
    That mouth-watering steak that
    gradually begins to distance itself so gradually
    I hardly notice it has vanished until I
    open my eyes, try desperately to keep open
    memories of that steak feast, those memories
    never to be realized in Real-Life time. Never!

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      I’m hungry now.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Oh, man. You’ve done it now, Sal. You just had to mention steak, didn’t you? Love this exuberance of the Steak Experience. Whether dreaming of waking, the mouth salivates just the same. Good one, my friend.

    3. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Mouthwatering. Oh. I . Can. Taste. It. Now.

  24. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    INTERSECTIONS 

    It was a misstep between dreams, 
    a clarity between seaworthy swells. 
    You and I, long friends of decades, 
    we met for lunch — that restaurant 
    at the intersection where rain soaked 
    pavements fork off in all directions. 

    You had minced beef, raw to ruby red 
    with green capers rolling off the plate. 
    You stabbed at the egg yolk, a mounted
    beacon on beef, a raw cycloptic eye 
    staring up at me, and it bled fluid gold 
    veins across the plate. Everything 

    about you was raw that day, and I 
    was pained by our static conversation, 
    so difficult, so splayed and tough 
    to chew, and in between each word 
    swallowed, I choked on incomplete 
    thoughts. And then came the moment 

    when my heart torqued, when I knew
    that we had nothing left to say, that
    our friendship was like corked wine.
    You ordered another glass. Red.
    I sucked on ice cubes that tortured 
    my nerves, and dissolved to water. 

    And I woke, knowing our friendship
    deserved more than we’d given it.

    1. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      ‘raw cycloptic eye’ – love that image.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      This was magnificent, Misky. There’s a short story/novel in this one, whether you wrote it from before the beginning of this poem or after the end of it. The poem is complete, but the story begs for details. Love it.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Aah. Thanks ladies! xx

    3. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Oh, what an unexpected regret. How painful to discover that, as if it was a bad entree in a place where you expected something wonderful.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Yes, quite right. Exactly.

  25. expressivedomain Avatar
    expressivedomain

    Such an interesting imagery and structure. Can you tell me how you chose the line breaks?

    1. Misky Avatar
      Misky

      I tried to select end words that when read consecutively created a distorted image.

  26. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Once, I dreamt–that made me think-

    From that suspended state
    where dreams are made
    who yanks them out
    from under the rocks?
    takes a tiny piece of that colloid
    and somehow makes their colors play
    through Alice’s mirror of eternity
    shining shadows in full moon
    of Mary’s lamb and ocean tunes
    Who? –Is it me–or you?
    Who?

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      This is a fascinating question, and I wonder if it has an answer. Whijh might be the point of the poem.

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Interesting…I like the questions in this, Priti.

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      I enjoyed the questions you ask in this poem, Priti, as well as the images you create. Well done.

    4. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      So often, I (an I’m sure all of us) have asked that. You phrased the question well, Priti.

  27. I Once Dreamed About the Woven Gold of Slumber | Metaphors and Smiles Avatar
    I Once Dreamed About the Woven Gold of Slumber | Metaphors and Smiles

    […] Creative Bloomings- PROMPT #156 – “YOU MAY SAY I’M A DREAMER”: GUEST HOST – PATRICIA HAWKENSON-The poem we’re asking for this week, is based on a dream you’ve had. It could be the misty visions we have during our R.E.M. cycle, or it could be an aspiration we hold dear. Write the poem entitled, “I Once Dreamed About____” […]

  28. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    I Once Dreamed About the Woven Gold of Slumber

    A thin covering of cloth is woven in her sleep
    it’s knit of words that could be crushed in the eye of light rising.
    Pre-dawn illuminates this fragile fabric,
    a tapestry emerges, a veil of silhouettes –
    the stain of dark streaking trees pulled from plot;
    the sky holds one glowing apple shivering in the driving breeze,
    a portal of hope – a hole in the horizon.
    She suckles from this surreal cup.
    Drinking from this teat of truth that she’d not known before –
    idleness of imagination is overcome and a dream kissed slumber’s born.
    Within these tight corridors of storied sleep there’s a doorway
    it leads to a land of sand and sea-foam frilled beaches;
    here is where the camel lives,
    it’s here that she sits and listens –
    she watches the resinous saliva of his mouth as he forms thoughts into words.
    His tawny fur and arching humps of back transform into great rolling desert hills,
    an enormous golden papyrus leaf is suspended against blue cloudless canopy;
    it’s curled with the wind.
    Simultaneously an audible vision visits her just as she stirs,
    it echoes in her internal passageway…
    the line of a poem greets her in gossamer awakening:

    A new leaf pressed deeply –
    delicate flower, amidst the pages of my heart.

    A new day, the first dream memory of the New Year.
    Yes, she says…I believe this is a good omen.
    Hidden blossom of inspiration blooms richly in her heart.

    Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2014

    The leaf portion of this poem is the real part of my dream. The rest of the poem expresses some of the surreal feeling around dream work and visions that swirl within this mind of mine. The leaf was similar to the shape of this one.

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      You mention the “swirl” of your mind, which seems apropos to me; this whole piece leaves me with that sort of feeling.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you, William…I appreciate your thoughts. 🙂

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Amazing images in this one, Hannah, angled with the subject and the bending of reality, all to funnel down to a new leaf of dream morphing into a new day of life.

      I like it. Wonderful work here.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        Thank you so much, Claudsy…I really enjoy your summation of this…brings clarity for me, lovely! 🙂

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          Thanks, Hannah. Glad to see I didn’t go too far off the mark on my understanding of it.

          1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
            Hannah Gosselin

            Right on in my opinion… 🙂 Thank you!

            1. Claudsy Avatar
              Claudsy

              You’re welcome.

    3. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Hannah, just the title alone is so lovely. The poem was even better. This was such a joy to glide through. Loved it.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        I’m so glad that you enjoyed this, Damon!! Thank you. 🙂

  29. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    Sorry folks for my lack of commenting time last week…I appreciate all of the wonderful comments that were gifted to me…thank you all!

    I’ll be around to read soon…need to walk now though. 🙂

  30. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    I Once Dreamt About A Strange House

    Unfinished, sprawling rooms
    off narrow corridors
    in a weathered wooden
    three-story house, fronting
    the beach. Pandemonium
    reigned as people scattered,
    seeking their rooms. Many
    were strangers to me, although
    I felt I should have known them.
    Settling into a space of one’s own
    superseded the call of wild birds,
    and white waves, for which I longed.
    It was impossible to complete
    endless tasks that would clear
    a path to the beach.

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      This is a fascinating piece of imagery, in my view; there seems to be wildness everywhere, in and out of the house.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, William.

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love the meaning conveyed in this…great imagery, Sara.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Hannah!

    3. purplepeninportland Avatar
      purplepeninportland

      Thanks William, and Hannah.

    4. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Interesting, Sara. This almost reads like a quest dream with all the requisite obstacles and conflicts. Very enjoyable, especially with its imagery.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Claudsy. Most of my dreams seem to contain unfinished projects.

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          I know that experience all too well. 🙂

    5. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      I sensed your frantic panic here….so well expressed, Sara.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, 7!

  31. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
    Erin Kay Hope

    Beautiful words to start us off, both of you!

    Descent

    I once
    Dreamed of when the
    Razor and mirror weren’t
    My life, but I woke up and there
    They were…

    @ Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2014

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      It’s good to see your work again, Erin Kay, and this is a good cinquain, albeit the razor image leaves a feeling or tension. for me anyway.

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        And it’s nice to be back again! Thanks, Will! 🙂
        Sadly, a lot of people my age turn to the razor or knife for release…

        1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
          Hannah Gosselin

          Sad indeed.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Ah, Erin, it’s so good to see you again. I hope you’re doing well.

      As I read this through the second time, I saw the image of a young roommate of mine at university during my first run through. Lovely and talented girl, she was, who face the same dilemma and actions.

      Hopefully, your journey no longer takes you through this equation of instrument and reflection. Hugs.

    3. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Erin, was wondering where you were! This is such a quick hard picture of sharp and raw shock. Wow.

  32. SevenAcreSky Avatar
    SevenAcreSky

    I have been reading these great visions and sleep-bound imaginings. Hope to come back with comments soon. Patricia and Walt, you started us off with beautiful offerings.

  33. SevenAcreSky Avatar
    SevenAcreSky

    THE DEED OF DREAMS

    dreamed we sold the place.

    Lock, stock, barrel.

    Strong memories bound to familiar latches, hasps and swaying gates, we handed over the keys of our hearts.

    The goats long baas on that last evening sounded out sad good byes, broken pleadings, echoing of our souls.

    Our stores of quiet evenings calmed by whip-poor-whills, soft silver moons, and moths dusting window panes would stay contained in an array of untapped days.

    All gone. The deed was done.

    I almost felt a fool for planting so much here, more year by year.

    Then I awoke with a sigh much like the pasture’s sigh when it throws back the fog of dreams and greets a new morning sun.

    1. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Should begin with “I dreamed…”.
      (Did this from my phone.)

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Goosebumps. This is so effective, I love the listing in threes that you employed and the sigh in the end…was echoed here. Excellent.

  34. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    I once dreamed about fighting the Incredible Hulk

    Sometimes we’re
    boondoggled by the obscure
    reflections of alternate reality
    that pickles the conscious or unconscious mind entertained by the fantastical fluff we call dreams.
    Perhaps if trapped in this obscurity it’d either be a mythical paradise or a nightmare with wings.
    But for me, paradise was an altercation with the Incredible Hulk (must’ve pissed him off when I was a kid). Trading punches with the great green goliath while falling off a balcony was quite exhilarating. I served him up a sweet knuckle sandwich or two, but he delivered a hell of a right hook. As we hit the ground, our bodies felt every bit of the sudden jolt. At least mine did anyways. It was quite a thrill, sucker punching the ol’ green lug. So, what color is your fantasy?

    1. SevenAcreSky Avatar
      SevenAcreSky

      Ha! Ben, this was comically fun!
      Hmmmm…I guess slinging around between skyscrapers leaving flashes of red and blue glances might be my comic-book dream from my youth.

  35. Waiting On A Woman | echoes from the silence Avatar
    Waiting On A Woman | echoes from the silence

    […] for Creative Bloomings Prompt #157: Bold Face Lie. As further inspiration, I also used the title of a song sung by Brad Paisley as the title of […]