This week, I have the honor of presenting one of the more truly gifted poets around. Her work has been an inspiration to me since 2009, so that says something. And I find it fitting that in my “tribute” to Gordon Lightfoot last week, I wrote “If I could, I would have been Alberta Bound”. In a way, I have done just that, tapping Edmonton, Alberta for the work of one of the Great White North’s wonderful wordsmiths. I give you Sharon (S.E.) Ingraham.
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S.E.Ingraham, a long-time frequenter of many of the web’s poetic watering holes – Poetic Asides, the Sunday Whirl, dVerse Bar, Poets United, and of course Creative Bloomings (formerly Poetic Bloomings) to name a few…She admits to being a less faithful member of each than she would like, but comes as often as time and health permits. Even being a retired mental health consumer doesn’t mean she’s entirely out of the woods when it comes to either depression or, in the odd instance, mania, and she’s aware of this, and tries to be careful when it comes to getting enough sleep or down time (emphasis on the “tries to be”).
Since Ingraham began taking her writing seriously in 2008, all she’s really wanted is to have her work read and heard. Due to the encouragement of places like Poetic Bloomings where Walt and Marie Elena have been tireless cheerleaders, plus a generous dollop or two of luck, she now has poems in a number of publications, both print and on-line, amongst them: Pyrokinection, Red Fez, Shot Glass, Otis Nebula, Poised in Flight, Of Sun and Sand, In Gilded Frame…She also just learned that her work has been selected by kindofahurricanpress.com (another very supportive venue incidentally) for the second year in a row to be in their “best of the year anthology” Storm Cycle…
Of other poetry related things over the past year, Ingraham had the privilege of taking part in the Pulitzer Remix Project, writing a poem a day based on “Arrowsmith”, Sinclair Lewis’s award winning novel from 1929. This led to a semi-regular gig reading for the Found Poetry Review, plus ongoing relationships with many of the 80+ international poets involved in the project and its conceptualizer, Jenni B Baker. In additional, a fall online course on Modern and Post-Modern American Poetry taken through Coursera (one of the up and coming MOOC’s) was so good (and gratis) she’s already signed on for next year.
In her life outside of poetry, S.E. (Sharon) is married to the love of her life, Terry – 44 years this month – and they have two grown daughters, Julie and Katy. All of them live on the 53rd parallel in Edmonton, Alberta where it’s, as you might well guess, extremely cold! As of March 4th, there will also be three grandsons in the family as the third is scheduled to be born that day…As well as an extremely loyal but too-quickly-aging border-collie/wolf cross, family mean everything to her.
Ingraham’s work may be found on any one of her blogs:
The Poet Tree House – S.E. Ingraham Says – The Way Eye See It – In My Next Life
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PROMPT #142 – “TAKE ONE PLEASE” – Choose from one of the titles below and write your poem based on that thought. Your title must come from this list. It will be interesting to compare your thoughts on the exact same themes.
TITLES:
Culture Shock
True Blue
Where Hope Finds Me
A Waltz of Words
Love Never Ceases
WALT TAKES ONE:
WHERE HOPE FINDS ME
Lost boys never quit dreaming,
scheming of ways to stand their ground
with a new found respect for their abilities.
the agility of a Pan, and the nervous sense
of self not withstanding. Demanding much
from what hope they can muster, they may
get flustered from time to time, but are never
out of the game; never the same, they become
stronger the longer in the tooth they find themselves.
Old gents hold those glowing embers well into their
Decembers. They remain members of life’s fraternity.
Battles waged and lost, and hard-fought victories
over hook handed bandits lands us firmly on our feet,
ready if we chose to roam. But the hope of lost boys will
eventually bring them home when villains are vanquished.
(C) Copyright Walter J Wojtanik – 2014
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SHARON’S PICK:
CULTURE SHOCK
I knew him and he goes on haunting me.
~Pablo Neruda
In war, odd alliances are forged
We fell together with a common need
trying to hide from death,
from those who would take us both
Language was a barrier yes, but eyes,
eyes speak many translations and together
we formed a bond and trust without
ever exchanging a word…
The morning I awoke and he was gone,
did it seem extra-quiet?…Did I suspect
at once what he had done for me…
I can’t think I did…
The day seemed like any other in our
situation, that is…difficult to explain
or describe
The days were unlike anything we
might have imagined before the tanks
lumbered up our streets
And friends stopped speaking to friends
Hours, or maybe as long as a day later
when I knew he was not returning
I ran through the woods during
the day…I couldn’t think what else to do
Finally I emerged in the dark to find
him hung in the square
I knew then.
(c) Copyright S. E. Ingraham – 2014
I couldn’t resist posting this second wonderful poem of Sharon’s that has touched me dearly with its tenderness and loyalty.
Consider it a Bonus. I love this piece! Walt.
LOVE NEVER CEASES
for Farley, my wolf
You amble now so slow
and I can see you grow old ‘fore
my eyes, wolf I adore
Moving carefully, you’re on ice
snow’s bad but still quite nice,
soft should a sacrifice be that
last step which lays you flat
Frail, a misstep, a fall splat down
break a bone, oh dear hound
I fear to see your mound, your grave
I fear I know I won’t be brave…
(C) Copyright S. E. Ingraham – 2014
Responses
I’ve been pretty busy, what with starting driver’s ed and getting ready for a school performance, and so haven’t been able to contribute lately. I’m finally getting back on track, though. 🙂 Great prompt and examples, Sharon and Walt!
True Blue
The painting drew her from the start-
She couldn’t tear her eyes away,
Or explain the tug at her heart,
And how her pulse began to race;
It seemed to be all done in blues:
Ultramarine, cobalt, midnight,
Cerulean and azure hues,
Shimmering in the changing light,
Color that filled the mind with peace,
The color God chose for His sky
Painted the deep depths of the sea,
Enhanced and caught in human eyes:
Something she couldn’t quite explain,
But knew all along its true name.
© Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2014
This is beautiful, Erin Kay.
Lovely how you’ve captured a larger canvas in blues Erin…very nice.
I echo, very beautiful Erin!
This is for Walt…thanks again for having me co-host! And just to say, your “Where Hope Finds Me” brought a lump to my throat…lost boys, the ever optimistic ones…and, as I think your oh-so-poignant poem subtly delivers…aren’t all boys lost, time to time?
Sharon, we most certainly are! Sometimes I’m “the Pan”, but most times I’m searching like everyone else! You’re welcome and thank you again for sharing this stage with me. W.
Great to see you back. As my poetic nature has always leaned toward free verse, it never ceases to amaze me how you always speak to eloquently in rhyme.
Ah, Erin, you always make a reader sink into your lines and come out with more than expected. This story does that in spades. Excellent emotive qualities. Great job.
Erin, this is beautiful and the rhyme and meter are spot on. Good work!
Nice to have you back in the garden. Wonderful True Blue.
Simply blu-tiful…
The magic of blue is beautifully evoked in this poem.
lovely as always.
True Blue
They called her Melancholy Molly.
She was shy to a fault, a bit sad
and assured that her malaise
would last for days and days.
Happy was a state she never visited,
she never left her apartment. That’s no lie!
She was truly melancholy!
Sounds like a melancholy baby. I like this poem, especially “Happy was a state she never visited”
Nicely done. Definitely a shade you don’t want to visit too often. You are new to me Jeep…I will have to pay better attention; I like your poem with its clever word-play very much.
Hmm…sounds like Pensive Paula to me…
Nah! Pensive Paula would be laced with more self-doubt than would ever be necessary, I think. Pensive Paula should be proud of the work she does! We all are! W.
Amen to that.
With a situation similar to Sharon’s I am all too familiar to the sentiment here.
Good one, Jeep. You, too, paint an emotive piece. As “sad” as the subject is, you showed what can be a person’s objective in that state. Good work.
🙂
Poor Molly – permanent blues are not a happy place to be.
Love Never Ceases
By David De Jong
Love never ceases
There may be creases
Or maybe wrinkles
And even some folds
Yet love still pleases
It maybe teases
All the while, eases
From youngest to old
Love never ceases
Yet I’ve seen it change
Even re-arrange
Broken to pieces
Then engulf the same
Single spark to flame
Stronger than one heart
Truer than the start
Love never ceases
Even in pieces
If you can keep, some
Pieces in your heart
This one really sings.
I agree with William, David…I almost found myself tapping my foot. I love the last stanza the best…the visual is so strong. Is this a particular form? It seems like it is but I’m having trouble remembering which one…could you remind me? It really works well.
Thanks all – No form here (that I know of) if so purely by chance – just more ramblin’s from an insomniatic trance.
The rhythm of this invites singing, as so much of your work does, in my view.
This piece is lyrical. The rhythm leeds you along to the next line, the next stanza.
I love this, David. Well done. And I like how you evolve your rhyme in what seems a natural circulation of sounds. And the sentiment isn’t bad either.
There is so much truth in this one, and it’s beautifully written as well. “Love never ceases/Even in pieces/ If you can keep, some/ Pieces in your heart” is a perfect ending as well.
I totally agree. Great!
Delightful wee ditty.
I love this one, the structure, the words, and the sentiment.
A WALTZ OF WORDS
When vowels and consonants mix and combine,
the alphabet laughs while the words fall in line;
then, sooner or later, some sentences dance
till I, quite entranced, fix them fast in my mind.
The words conjure mystery, facts, and romance
and take me from home to Peru or to France.
My books can unlock sundry worlds undefined,
and words are my keyhole, awaiting my glance.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
Lovely William, you’re quite the dancer in this one.
Ah, a writer’s song, William. Good for you. I like how you define your waltz, allow it to take the floor, swirl a bit, and come back as a single focus in a keyhole awaiting your glance. Terrific.
A wonderful waltz of words, William.*
* Hey! I just realized that not only is the above comment an example of alliteration but it would also make a fabulous tongue twister. Try saying “a wonderful waltz of words, William” ten times, fast.
I did twy it. Tongue all tristed now.
Beautiful dance of words. 🙂
Oh how your words waltz!
When there’s some blue about, winter is bearable. I like your poem very much.
That one was for your True Blue poem below!
Good one, Bill. I feel as if I’ve been a hitch-hiker on your words for some time now.
TRUE BLUE
When bluebirds fly on winter days,
the patch of blue surprises white.
Although the cold pursues its ways,
when bluebirds fly on winter days
they startle snowflakes out of phase;
freedom is loosed to soaring flight
when bluebirds fly on winter days.
The patch of blue surprises white.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
This is gorgeous.
Oh William, as always, your work is stellar. The waltz is pretty much in 3/4 time (I know: I sang it!) and the phrasing impeccable. And taking a phrase like “patch of blue” and making it astonish with “surprises white” was brilliant.
they startle snowflakes out of phase. love it.
I like this, William. It’s very visual with dipping and soaring happening for the reader as well. Great job. Very apropos for today here.
very nice
Written for others to see blue.
Love this!
Here’s mine. I’ll read the others later – we have to go out now.
A Waltz of Words
The sparkly pair swoop around the ice
with lifts and twirls,
crunching stops
crossovers and swirls
of flecks of light
In a remote glass box
commentators are enmeshed
in a waltz of worthless words :
vision says it all.
That’s telling them!
This made me laugh right out loud Viv! Hopefully that’s not offensive, but it sounds as if you are as fed up with some of the figure-skating judging as I am….I love your final stanza. It encapsulates what I’m sure many of us are feeling. Nicely done.
Here, Here!
Yes – sometimes just want to tell/yell at them “Shut Up” and let us enjoy it.
Oh, good one, Viv. You’re so right. I don’t think we need that much commentating either when viewing art before our eyes. Love it.
Nice work, Viv.
Right on.
True Blue
By David De Jong
The color
Of red
Before
It bleeds
Oh. My. Word.
So much in so few. AMAZING, David.
Wow.
I agree. He packed a punch in only 7 words. That’s a knock-out!
MEG! where you been?
😀
WOW!
Well done, David. A thought mot many have. I like it.
Yup. Just… WOW.
🙂
Oh, my goodness- terrific
wow! I just looked at the veins on the back of my hand, and you are absolutely right!
True Blue
By David De Jong
Long before the rail and the smoke of trains,
Gained in trade from his brother on the plains.
The chief’s appaloosa, his prized, True Blue,
Quiet afoot with speed to follow through.
They chased the buffalo, white tail, and griz,
Fished the creeks and rivers and called them his.
True Blue was faster than any he knew,
His striped feet glancing the earth, as they flew.
His mane was braided, with shells and feathers,
From eagle’s wings and albino tethers.
The sky shimmered off his coat, aqua blue,
With shadows and spots in magical hue.
When the chief called his name he’d run beside,
And nuzzle his shoulder begging to ride.
They road the ridges the crests and canyons,
Danced on the beaches, of seas and oceans.
They hunted; winter, spring, summer, and fall,
Found the start and the ending to them all.
Fastened each color to arrow by hue,
Placed them in a quiver to keep them true.
Each day the sun rises and comes to view,
He pulls back the bow and releases blue.
This is wonderful; utterly magical.
What a splendid vignette…I found myself breathless as it unfolded,, and you packed so much into such a few short lines.
My feellings exactly.
David, this will always be one of my favorites for reasons I won’t go into. Suffice it to say that a winter tale has become a song to sing throughout the seasons in this verse. You definitely struck a deep chord for me. Thank you.
You are so welcome Claudsy! Thank you – If only one person relates, understands, or is moved by something I have written – I feel blessed. Your kind words mean much.
I feel the same way, David.
Sometimes words fail… or feel so trite… so, simply- this touches me.
An unexpected but delightful interpretation of the title – took me with you all the way.
Love Never Ceases
Wrinkles are inevitable in the best of raiment. Some crease under heat and pressure. White diamonds house minute imperfections. Though It’s blemishes are cloaked by beauty. The Earth never misses a ray of sunshine. And the Sun never fails to give. In time splendid flowers release their persona. In time there is a failing bloom. In time the fallen shall rise in triumph, it’s beauty far from deadly tomb. The storm shall not withhold its thunder. Ever faithful to it’s pounding peals. Nor the rain ever cease to plunder. For Spring cannot be stopped nor sealed.
Benjamin Thomas
A unique take on this title and some interesting word choices for your prose poem. Love “ever faithful to its pounding peals”…
Thx Sharon!
This narrative gives hope and anticipation free rein. Good for you, Benjamin. All true, and often ignored. I like it.
Thank you Claudsy
You’re welcome.
“…Spring cannot be stopped or sealed”
so full of hope and promise.
LOVE NEVER CEASES
Words cannot
trump
the trust of touch.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
YES!
Lovely, William. Often touch tells the only truth one needs to “hear.” Great little piece.
Complete. Succinct. Well done!
That touch is so special.
Sharon and Walt, your examples are breath-taking: mastery at work.
Absolutely!
A Waltz of Words
one two three wake
one two three work
one two three one two three one two three
whine
one two three spin
one two three shirk
one two three one two three one two three
work
one two three can’t
one two three can
one two three can-can
one two three dance
one two three one two three one two three
giggle
one two three one two three one two three
waltz
Nicely penned Barbara. Now change partners and dance on…
I had such fun reading this, Barbara. It was a dance for the reader. Terrific. Thank you.
Giggle two, three…. Wonderful!
This is so clever and wonderful!
This brought a big smile.
A Waltz of Words
From the time I get up, yes, I waltz with my words.
And at times, they are shy, oh, I know it’s absurd.
On occasion, they flirt like a southern belle.
With wide smiles, words invite and still others repel.
But their dance is so lovely I keep coming back.
Though I step on their toes, I develop a knack.
Like a lover with hand on a slim, dainty waist,
I can guide in a whirl either slow or in haste.
And our laughter’s contagious, soon others around
Begin clapping in glee with their rhythm and sound.
In the evening, exhausted, we bid all adieu,
Till the morning sun rises and we waltz anew.
Waltz indeed!
Very nice Connie. The rhythm and rhyme are so waltz-like, I found myself swaying in time as I read and re-read. A fine waltz of words.
This was quite a treat Connie, I was dancing the whole time!
Another fun one. Yeah, Connie, you gave us another dance. This is such a visual one that reading the words as individual ones is almost impossible. I love it.
Catchy rhythm & tempo — fun!.
You could do this one in old Vienna, I think.
Beautiful waltz … I’m still working on the two-step.
A dance for writers. . .we’ll have to schedule one for our next writer’s conference. It sounds like a lot more fun than a workshop. Lovely poem.
That’s what words do to us. I love your poem.
Sharon – Love your True Blue – What would life be without our four legged family
Culture Shock
By David De Jong
Where hope finds me still
Is in the palm of Your hands;
Where your Perfect Love, reigns true blue
Proving Your Grace, is more than a waltz of words
While Your amazing love, never ceases
Aren’t you clever David, fitting so many titles into your succinct poem? And seamlessly too…
I blame insomnia…
Quite clever friend! Good job!
Good one, David. I, too, thought of using all of the titles as lines in a verse. I’m glad to see someone else had the same thought. I thoroughly enjoyed how you wove them all together. Marvelous.
Fun waltz with choices.
WHERE HOPE FINDS ME
Oftentimes beneath the tap that drips
The mantra of water like zen prayers
Inside the candled darkness of myself
Or in the wind
Consenting to the push and pull of Nature
Hobnobbing with eagles and hawks
Who cast wary eyes but let me fly
Sometimes in February snow skies
Portending heavy falls from heavens
Rich with gifts that comfort-cover
The absence of sun-filled hope
Or in the wounds
The heart carries inadvertently
When past lovers donned convincing masks
Oftentimes in the silence of noonday prayer
When I try with all my heart and soul
To link myself with the God Who loves me
Or in the softness of His grace
Open-palmed like a mendicant
I Accept alms to feed a hope-starved man
Oftentimes near the woman I love
The one God sent to reward my patience
Her hand in mine
Or lying still upon our night pillows
Content we found each other
Where hope and love converge
where heart and soul meld forever
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02/15/2014
You crafted such a beautiful poem here
Beautiful, Sal. Inside the candled darkness of myself. Marvelous.
Lovely, Sal. I often come close to drowning in your word pictures. This is a definite keeper. 🙂
Oh, lovely!
Wrong date! It should read 02/16/2014
“Or in the wounds/ the heart carries inadvertently” – I am glad this fell in the verse of “Sometimes” and not one of the “Oftentimes” verses, but I love the image all the same. I love the whole poem actually Sal. If “hope is the thing with feathers” you have shown many places it might fly to hide from, or be found by, you. Lovely.
Whatever the date – beautifully written
A Waltz of Words
Hear their music, string sounds
that sing from falling stars,
whisper oohs on waltzing wind,
and traced thin angled shapes
on pages circled rain. Play song
uncurled and hooked by tails,
waltzing letters dropping
floating words, solid, sturdy,
stones splashing sounds,
as they dance on slipper
shoes round and round. Arms
clasped, they’re chanting vowels,
this waltz of enchanted words.
Wonderful, Misky. You always have such a way of stringing words together that have the reader swirling with them. I like this very much. Terrific job.
I think Claudsy has expressed more eloquently than I could pretty much what I want to say Misky…your way with words is always so inventive, I’m perpetually taken aback and then wonder why since you’re always such a fine writer. Another excellent offering…I especially like “unhooked and curled by tails” … that’s an image that’s a bit enigmatic yet has stayed with me since I read it earlier. Well done.
Thank you, ladies!
Exactly what I felt – a circling, spiral-like as I read line after line and almost felt dizzy with the effect. So lovely
Oooh, pretty, Misk! I can see and hear them dancing. 🙂
Breath-taking, this.
Thanks. 😀
Dancing words across the page. Well done.
Thank you, Marjory
This carries the rhythm of the dance. The words command attention.
Thank you, Viv.
Culture Shock
I think I suffer from a phrase
or term or idiom which notes
that I am old or out of touch.
I will admit that in some ways
it’s culture shock á ‘totes magotes.’
Oh well, I get it (not so much.)
You see, it’s weird, this ‘cray-cray’ craze.
But hey – whatever floats one’s boats
of ‘feels’ – oh dear. That’s ‘sick’ (or such.)
I’m sorry if my eyes do glaze
when ‘ere the current slang…or quotes…
are used like verbal Double Dutch
which, probably is not so ‘fly.’
O obsolescence – I’ma die.
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LOL, RJ. I’m with you on this. I have enough trouble working with real language without dealing with the made-up version used by those striving to create their own verbal mark on the world.
Great job.
How very up-to-date and relate-able De; I’m with you…I find myself wanting to say to adults, “Use your words!” the way I would to toddlers, but then I’d like to correct texters who can’t seem to produce entire words so I suspect I’m just getting old and bitchy…rofl. Good poem, as always, imho.
Sheesh RJ…I don’t know why I’ve pegged you as De in both comments…I apologize…I must have been totally out to lunch writing these…sorry…the comments are correct,…just directed to the wrong poet; I DO know who wrote them, believe it or not…
LOL Yup! 🙂
Wonderful. You have me smiling broadly again.
I admit – you lost me in the waltz of the culture.
: )
I sigh in agreement. I think I’ve outlived my era and everything seems to be a culture shock these days!
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Sharon, your Culture Shock left my jaw agape in awe. And Love Never Ceases is indeed tender, as Walt said. And speaking of Walt, I especially loved the line: “Old gents hold those glowing embers well ito their Decembers”.
Sharon, what a thought provoking prompt! Thank you.
Love Never Ceases
Love never ceases
to amaze me,
graze me
with its unexpected ricochets.
Often entrances
me concealed
in side-long glances.
Where hope finds me
waiting in a
waltz of words,
finds me with
two left tongues.
And if the love turns
out to be
true blue,
leaves me swirling
in the
culture shock
of no longer
being alone.
(c) Copyright Ellen Evans – 2014
for PB 2.16.14 use one of the following as title:
Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, Waltz of Words, Love Never Ceases
Excellent work, Ellen. Love that you could use the titles to weave the verse, too. The lines so smoothly flow from one to the next that at the end I was quite breathless.
Thank you so much!
You’re welcome, Ellen.
Oh yes — what Claudsy said, Ellen! I love how it starts right out with a twist of the title… not ‘Love never ceases’, but ‘Love never ceases to amaze me’… and “two left tongues’? Nice!
Ellen – what a wonderful poem…I love this phrase, “graze me with its unexpected ricochets” amongst others…Thank you for your kind words about my poems. I’d love to take credit for the prompts, but they’re Walt’s inspirations, not surprisingly — he has a very fertile mind. Great that you could weave the titles throughout your poem…impressive.
Impressive is indeed the word!
Thanks Ellen and Sharon. For the first time, I have prompts and forms scheduled for the rest of the year. A little time away gave great inspiration. I hope to have every one serve a week as co-host here. I would appreciate if our newer contributors could send an e-mail (poeticbloomings@yahoo.com) so I can have your address on file.
Fun to read.
True Blue
When she embraces in blue
all her other hues – glinting
gold, glory orange, blazing
yellow, radiant red – dim
and pale to black & white.
Wholly luminous silver frost
will wash out, losing light; but
even in her frozen form
blue is warm: a hug, a kiss;
blue is home is love is bliss.
I love it, Pamela! I like how the colors shift because of blue. It reads so well. A keeper, for sure.
THANK you, Claudsy! You might check out the photos on my blog — they complete the picture. 😉
How very up-to-date and relate-able De; I’m with you…I find myself wanting to say to adults, “Use your words!” the way I would to toddlers, but then I’d like to correct texters who can’t seem to produce entire words so I suspect I’m just getting old and bitchy…rofl. Good poem, as always, imho.
I am not sure why this double-posted…maybe it’s a sign…sorry.
I went to you blog Pamela and became lost in your wonderful photos before re-reading your poem, which is equally fine…the last line is my favourite…”blue is home is love is bliss”…yes.
Thank you, Sharon! So glad you stopped by to enjoy the photos too.
These words and those pictures are dancing with each other, in my view. Wonderful.
Ahhh… thanks, William for such a lovely compliment!
Blue is welcoming!
That it is, Marjory! And it’s always been my favorite!
A WALTZ OF WORDS
tone-deaf too many years
a wallflower-spectator
at weekly high school dances
I was an A-1 nerd who danced
with words assembled like puzzles
jigged with rhyming nouns
jagged with sharp verbs
my sister Anna could name the instruments
clap her hands to the beat
but I kept myself busy
tossing wood on the fires
of a stampeding imagination
pretending I could tap my feet
gliding and sliding to the rhythm of words
that floated around the cauldron
of my mind but I couldn’t leave the wall
couldn’t ask a girl to dance
couldn’t confidently put on airs
or whirl her in neat Lindy circles
where I would hold my breath and pray
I wouldn’t step on her feet
and when I’d go home
my Remington typewriter out of its case
almost calling to me, not insulting words,
but word come-ons, flashes of poetic lines,
“Sit down, Mr. Shy Guy. Write some verse.
Things could be worse.”
And I’d waltz like Fred Astaire
shuffling my feet in iambic wonderment
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Aw, Sal, this is so sweet and telling. It’s a tiny memoir that allows the reading into a private time of self-exploration. Love it. Thank you.
Ahhh, memories — painful & sweet. Lovely, Sal!
Was that you holding up the other wall? It was me and my one friend pretending to be happy about examining the one opposite you, gently swaying to the music, trying not to meet eyes…this touched some chords in me Sal; a very fine poem.
Superb, utterly superb, and that last line is stunning.
I am not tone-deaf, but edge on spelling-deaf 🙂
To waltz with words is wonderful.
Culture Shock
The add-mixture of older years and
older ears with the music and
rhythms of a more modern
time, the pulsating beats
and sounds can create
such confusion.
The sum is
culture
shock.
(c) Copyright Ellen Evans – 2014
for PB 2.16.14 use one of the following as title:
Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, Waltz of Words, Love Never Ceases
Love how you waltzed your words to this tune of Culture Shock, Ellen. Fine job, too.
Yes…there are all sorts of culture shocks, aren’t there? Well said.
I just noticed the marvellous harp-shape of this poem…was that planned? It’s exquisite…
This gets right down to the point, eh?
Hearing aids with an off switch, softens the sound and reduces the shock 🙂
(Love mine!)
I love the rhythm and tone of this
Hello, all. Sharon, it’s so good to see you as co-host. Your verse never disappoints. I really like what you’ve done here today. And I like the prompt. It’s one that lets the mind soar.
A Waltz of Words
Babble roamed ‘round
Dark space encasing me;
Through murmuring sound
None heard my whispered plea
For clarity profound,
Or silence’s gentle sea,
Where I’ve never drowned
But sought to be free.
Patience created a playground
Of letters fprming intricate filigree,
For climbing among words bound
In a sing-song waltz to be me.
Oh, this is lovely Claudsy. Truly. I especially like “Patience created a playground” … what a wonderful image, and I love the idea that the waltz’s words are all conspiring to help you be you…unique and precious.
Thank you so much, Sharon. I must confess something here about this first poem. When I was writing it, it was to be about allowing words to play with themselves and others in a dance around people’s minds, but somewhere along the way, I realized that what I was really writing about was how it must be for an unborn child, hearing so much murmured babbled from inside the womb.
Heavy, huh? But I couldn’t get the image out of my mind, so that’s what it means to me. A baby struggling to be born, using those murmured words as a guide.
Go figger. The mind is a scary place sometimes. 🙂
I came back to re-read this Claudsy and it makes even more sense now that I know the back-story…I love learning the process behind a poem so thank you so much…I agree, the mind is a scary place sometimes (as well as an enigmatic, wonderful, and cool place sometimes).
That it is, Sharon, that it is. I’m glad that it worked even better once you knew the reasoning. Perhaps I should add a wee couplet to it for explanation. Thank you.
I love this, both for sound and sense.
Beautiful words, feel, movement, dance……
Love Never Ceases
When
the
power
of mental
torment and even
physical pain due to the loss
of someone close, someone who touched you so deeply that
you feel overwhelmed by the anguish and its rushing in to fill the void,
remember that like an invisible womb, you are
surrounded by the presence of
love, ready for you
to lean on—
never
to
end.
(c) Copyright Ellen Evans – 2014
for PB 2.16.14 use one of the following as title:
Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, Waltz of Words, Love Never Ceases
Wonderful reminder, Ellen, of the infinite love source in our lives. I like it. Thank you.
My word you’re prolific Ellen! And good…I particularly like the shape and thrust of this…it made me just a tad sad and I think that’s probably a good thing, yes?
yes
For me, this is almost a classic case of the fitting form. Wonderful.
…surrounded by the presence of love..”
Wonderful reminder.
Hoops, Was thinking Tri-fall,
only I got my 6 and 8 reversed.
(Should be 6-3-8-6-3-8, ABCabc)
LOVE NEVER CEASES
Love never ceases we are assured.
War will come,
hardships will still abound,
We wonder why sickness accures
(more to some)
when live seems to be sound.
We seek beauty in a sunset,
and find storms;
Clouds, cold, darkness and pain.
We remember some past regret,
(out of norm)
Why in mind does it reign?
So much negative is around,
countering
we answer with a cure.
Hold to what is promised, is sound.
Remembering,
assured, … love will endure.
Nice! Marjory. Good one. The message is one to remember. Thank you.
Thank You, Claudsy. Nice to connect with you.
[Busy schedule makes it hard to get to the garden)
Indeed it does, Marjory, but I’m determined to give myself at least one day to putz with blooms each week. 🙂
Never-mind the numbers, I really like how this turned out Marjory, especially, “Why in mind does it reign?” Very nice.
Thank you, appreciate your comment.
I think this is great.
“Great” is good, thank you Wm
Yes, love will surely endure!
WALTS OF WORDS
Whitman and Wojtanik,
men of a manic mind
finding wisdom in the
wealth of words. One
famous and dead;
one infamous and not quite yet.
I can never get my fill
of his words. He had never
heard of me or mine.
That’s fine. He is Whitman,
I am a man of wit!
Close enough!
I can live with that!
(C) Copyright Walter J Wojtanik – 2014
POET’S NOTE: (My apologies to Mister Whitman for presuming to place my name anywhere near his great legacy. I just thought it was a joyful play of words.)
Good one, Walt. Chuckled and flowed with your words. Thoroughly enjoyable. And who says that you aren’t known as widely in numbers as your great poet Whitman. Different times, different mediums. It’s all in the numbers anyway. 🙂
What fun! Whitman and the quick wit! 😀
By putting our poetry out there, all of us poets are open for such presuming, great and small. 😀
I posted a note on your site as well but wanted to say, what I know of Whitman (which is admittedly not a huge amount) he was so all-encompassing, so egalitarian and democratic, I’ll bet he’d be thrilled to add another poet to his legacy, especially one as fine as you…
I think you’re spot on with that comment.
Good one Walt, enjoyed the play on words, as usual.
Fun play (dance) with words, Walt.
Where Hope Finds Me
Within a child’s laughter
Springs hope of continuance,
Of joy’s moments unending.
Within summer’s birdsong
Floats acceptance of immediacy
In a world of constant change.
Within autumn’s shedding leaves
Comes Nature’s cycle folding
Inward to rejuvenate itself.
Within winter’s hibernation,
Renewal begins its resurgence
Of life’s expected spring leap.
To each a season, a lesson
Taught in a round-robin world;
Hope waits for recognition.
Claudsy, sweet! I love the circle of hope that flows from season to season.
I’ll do that. Thanks.
A variation of the circle of life in a beautifully rendered and totally new fashion…well done Claudsy. I quite like this.
Likewise.
Taught in a round-robin world. love it. And it all holds together in a fine weave. Nice job!
Thank you, Ellen. Glad you liked it.
and Hope brings peace. 🙂
That it does, my friend Marjory, that it does.
Walt, Sharon: beautiful work! All three pieces touch the heart in different ways.
Thank you Pamela…appreciate your words and thoughts…
TRUE BLUE
Sharon, nothing personal, but I couldn’t help but poem about “True Blue” after seeing your “True Blue” eyes!
(a shadorma)
Right at home,
In the iris sky
Of blue eye.
I pass through,
Those fair pupils to witness
A colorful you.
Benjamin, we have a preponderance of blue eyed poet beauties here in the garden: Paula Wanken, Sharon, Hannah Gosselin, Me… well, three out of four isn’t that bad! W.
Lol! A lot of true blues!
Blue is good.
You’re making me blush…good shardorma; I’m hopeless at them!
Thx, I doubt if you’re hopeless ’em.
🙂
Excellent!
What a lovely tribute, and right on taget!
(Walt and Sharon: Excellent examples!)
Where Hope Finds Me, Love Never Ceases
Where hope finds me
under a tree on an early
day of summer, gazing
lazily at a softening sky,
I sigh. In that moment
I can imagine as truth,
that love never ceases.
Nicely done…well woven titles and a great outcome.
I agree, much.
Thanks, Sharon. I enjoyed this prompt.
Nice one Sarah, enjoyed the seasonal tone in this.
Thanks so much, Benjamin.
Oh, Sara, I really find that so assuring and peaceful.
Thanks, Marjory!
Lovely
WHERE HOPE FINDS ME
Hopes arise
when music flies
across the span of space
and bids me know my ancient dream
is not so dead as it may seem
and I will yet know grace.
I cup my ear
to hear it here:
the melody’s embrace.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
I understand this. Hope is a great thing friend. 🙂
Ahh…heavy sigh. I like the idea of being in melody’s embrace.
Music wraps the deafest ears with a warm feeling of gladness.
“I cup my ear to hear it here…” touched me. Love this, Bill.
Where Hope Finds Me
Dredging in the doldrums of sorrow and pain
The past but a parade of badly made choices
Bad choices that got me exactly where I stood
At the lowest point in the valley of desperation
Drowning in the impossibility of resurrection
From my self-made prison of hopelessness
Then through the flood of self-pitied tears
As I stared down for fear of glimpsing doom
I saw a shadow stretching from behind me
But there was no sun for to cast this silhouette
Quickly I turned that I might see for myself
And I saw; and I fell to my knees in utter fear
For the shadow grew larger as it came for me
Close now, its red glowing eyes shone bright
Black and cold it pointed a bony finger my way
My frozen soul ached at the pull of pure evil
Through thought that this evil could be my relief
My escape from the despair of hopeless misery
My life flashed before me, the good and the bad
Then all thoughts stopped at one exact moment
The day I rejected the One they called Jesus
I’d pushed Him away and paved my own path
A path fraught with bad choices, pain and strife
Bad choices that got me exactly where I stood
That moment would not depart from my brain
Would this be the torture I’d carry for eternity
Reliving the instant I rejected His mercy
Just so I could do things the way I decided
Decisions that have turned my life upside down
Decisions that got me exactly where I stood
I didn’t need Him then, but I need Him so now
But, alas, I fear it must be too late to save me
I’m unworthy, filthy, corrupted and immoral
A heart of wickedness; an unsalvageable soul
Not a decent bone in this wasted walking corpse
I’m not even worthy of an eternity in Hell
I crumpled to the ground as regret flooded in
Why had I pushed away the hope of all mankind
If only I had one last chance to accept His grace
One chance to set my feet on the righteous path
Forgive me, Lord, for turning my back on You
That moment will be my torture forevermore
Then I felt a gentle hand, softly on my shoulder
I heard a voice so calming whisper in my ear
I looked up and I saw Jesus smiling down at me
He called me son as He took my hand in love
Tears of joy filled my eyes as He lifted me up
Hope had found me in the depths of my despair
© 2014 Earl Parsons
I really admire how sincerely you write Earl. This comes from the heart and rings with authenticity. Very nicely done.
Same here
Hope – the promise of what is to be.
Love Never Ceases
Love never ceases
It daily increases
The more time I spend
With my love
Love is forever
Its end will be never
For my love is sent
From above
© 2014 Earl Parsons
A Waltz of Words
The rhythm
The rhyme
The arrangement of time
The words form a beat
Each one on each line
The whole piece is alive
As if it were a song
But it’s all in your head
As the words waltz along
© 2014 Earl Parsons
True Blue
If there’s a true blue
Then is there an untrue blue
I must ponder this
© 2014 Earl Parsons
Culture Shock
If the culture that we’re living in
Is not a shock
Then you must have your eyes closed
© 2014 Earl Parsons
This is an interesting “suite” of poems…I think I like “True Blue” the best…now I’ll be pondering that as well…”Culture Shock” gave me food for thought as well.
Each one enjoyable to read. Thank you.
U think these are little gems.
I think they are, too.
Earl, every one is delightful. Each a tasty morsel!
TRUE BLUE
If the eyes
are windows to souls,
gaze deeply
into mine,
to see where hope finds me and
love never ceases.
Sometimes I wish there were actual shades (not sunglasses) that we could lower or draw over our eyes so that they weren’t quite the windows to the soul all the time. I guess some people are better at doing that than others, and maybe it’s easier for each of us to do it at some times than others…As you can no doubt tell, your poem has me pondering…It’s late, better wait until tomorrow to do any more commenting. I do like your poem by the way…
Beautiful.
Bingo!
Paula! You have the best shardormas! Or should I call you….. Shar-Paula?
Thanks, Benjamin. 🙂
True Words Never Shock Me
A conversation between lovers
Is but a waltz of words
Between true blue hearts
From which love never ceases
True love, however
In today’s vernacular
Can come across to the young
As a counter-culture shock
But, true love, my friend
Is where hope finds me waiting
Patiently for the next encounter
A conversation between lovers
© 2014 Earl Parsons
True…
Maybe true words are only unable to shock those truly in love? That’s what I’m getting from your poem. And maybe, the patience and knowing comes with maturity…where true blue hearts hang out and love never ceases? I feel all of this from your poem and except in very rare examples, the young know little of this…Well said Earl.
Bingo! here, too. I think this is wonderful.
This was true waltz of words in my opinion. Well put!
[…] for Creative Bloomings #142: Take One Please (choosing a title from a list to use as my poem […]
Where Hope finds Me
Hope found me after dusk, when all ray was gone and shadow lusted quick nightfall.
Hope found me bare to the bone in a woeful tomb, where warmth retracted it’s affection.
Hope found me wounded under contemptible rock, where every worm mocked my arrival.
Hope sought me out where the Sun didn’t shine, where cold was the warmest thought.
Hope found me destitute, barren, and starved for the basics of self-esteem.
Hope found me in the nightmare of my life, and pulled me into it’s very own dream.
Hope found me helpless when my heart derailed, and couldn’t find my way back.
Hope found me stranded, when all others set sail and put me on it’s faithful back.
Hope found me when life was bitter blue, saved me, and imparted another hue.
Hope found me, slapped me in the face and said, are you blind? Don’t you see his grace?
Hope bore me when I could not walk.
Made me buoyant where I couldn’t swim. Dried me when I was wet with tears. Supplied me in the time of need. Freed me when a slave in chains. Strengthened me in a time of grief. Awakened my eyes in a time of slumber. And consoled me on the battlefield.
Hope found me where I could not found.
Hope, will always find you.
Wow. Profound, indeed.
Such a powerful poem…thanks for sharing it here.
Wonderful encouragement, assurance ….Hope…..
A Waltz of Words
(A shadorma)
It was an
August performance,
duly planned.
A triple
meter waltz of words—we’ve been
dancing ever since.
Calls to mind the Anniversary Waltz, for me, anyway.
Yes! Exactly, William nailed it.
A Waltz of Words
Music
light, lilting, lifting,
fluting breeze, twirl, skip, dip, and sway –
join me friend
and dance, heady effervescent
spring song of Terpsichore
enchants.
This feels balletic. Lovely.
This is enchanting…and I admire anyone who can work Terpsichore into any poem, never mind such a succinct one.
Thanks : )
Yes! Quite enchanting. Glad I read it…missed it earlier.
Where Hope Finds Me
My parents bartered choices for a girl.
Should she be Bonnie Blue to Scarlett born?
Or should she sing and dance with Mickey Mouse,
A Billie Jean, Annette—no, wait. Darlene
My name reveals my age with no more clues.
For middle name, eternal values loomed
Perhaps choose Faith, for mountains rise to climb
Long-suff’ring Charity presides o’er all
Make Hope her name, where faith and love cross roads,
Her map to surety written in her name.
It’s true, you don’t here Darlene very often, do you? Do you get a nickname? And Hope seems to be in fashion again…both are lovely, as is your tiny narrative of a poem.
Seingraham, I don’t have a nickname. Should I have one? Or does someone suggest one for me? Yes, I’m new. I spent a week writing poetry to take a break from writing novels (my career) and caught the bug. 🙂
In that case, I hope the bug hangs on. I enjoy reading your work.
Why, thanks, William. I never get over the appreciation for praise. A bad habit for a writer. Poetry allows me to play with the sounds of language and images–skills that come back into play in my book writing, but without the write-or-loose-contract worry. I appreciate Connie introducing me here,
that would be *hear*
I had the feeling of the Mickey Mouse Club coming out for a bow here. This is fun to read aloud.
Actually I don’t know if my mother chose “Darlene” from the Mickey Mouse Club or not, but it makes sense. I did have fun with it.
I’m joining the club here, very nice Darlene. Welcome!
This is lovely!
Thanks, georgeplace 2013!
Hi- my first time posting here– I am relatively new at the writing game- please bear with me
True blue
Blooms royal in feathers, and crystals of lapis
In the velvet of shadows, and lips that are placid
It opens in skies, but can dampen some views
It deepens in waves,and can pull through and through
An Egyptian favorite, it squeezes near green
It feels in the iris, and the magic of dreams
It glazes our breath, with a friendly persistence
It flows in our blood, and the truth of existence—
Wow. What a delicious feast of color and sound.
This is so lovely to read. Hope you post often.
Couldn’t tell you were new…wonderful Poem!
Welcome Priti! Your poem, as William says, is a feast…such richness; and a very nice rhyme scheme throughout. I hope we see you often.
Welcome Priti. You’ve come to a very supportive and encouraging place. Hang in with us and you’ll learn and grow with us in our “garden” A very expressive first submission here. Please take the time to read the Welcome tab for our features and expectation. They are all summed by in the first key. Have fun!
Priti, I’ve only been here for two weeks, but talented poets and great encouragers. I love your literal descriptions flowing into meaning of the color.
WHERE HOPE FINDS ME
She scans the whole town over;
she searches everywhere;
but when she looks in the doghouse
she’s sure to find me there.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
NB: I’m thinking of Hudie Ledbetter’s sing, Goodnight Irene, as I write this.
Hope in a doghouse. . .love it. That’s when I most need it.
Yes! That’s genius. Love it.
Now I have that song in my mind…Irene goodnight, goodnight…is it not a waltz actually? And what, pray tell, did you do to land yourself in the doghouse? Or are you merely the pet in this poem?
Actually, I was thinking of a gal named Hope, searching for the singer on a Saturday night. The song is a waltz, and, as done by the Weavers and Gordon Jenkins long ago, a supremely beautiful one, probably much different than when Leadbelly (Ledbetter) first performed it.
Culture Shock
Kids brought up
today are in for a
very rude awakening.
When they finally see
the befuddlement
of their cock-a-hoop…
And actually realize
they are not the center.
This sounds true, and eternal.
Oh my yes, isn’t that the truth for many…the entitled ones are going to fall hard…I like that expression “cock-a-hoop” but haven’t heard it before (assume it’s similar to cock-of-the-walk?)…well said.
There are SO MANY good poems here. We are truly waltzing folks.
Yes,when I consider selecting just one, I keep thinking of that old expression, “Feet, don’t fail me now…”
Culture Shock
(a shadorma)
Egg hatches…
A new life begins…
In newness.
Tell him now…
That he’s next on the menu,
part of the food chain.
Oooohhh… bingo!
Uh oh…reality check.
Waltz of Words
Its a waltz folks
And that with friends
A tango
With words
A flapping of winds
Its a waltz folks
And that with grins
A polka
With verse
In triplets and twins
Its a waltz folks
And that with spins
A ballet
With prose
And sleight of pens
Masterful!
You’re on a roll…I love that last line and it caught me by surprise….
Love never ceases where hope finds me
•Culture shock, in a pool of great poets.
•True solid blue talent wets your whistle with muse.
•Vertigo, in a world of waltzing words.
•Love never ceases in the garden; or on the other side of the pen, where hope finds me.
Whew…I can’t keep up…I’m going to cry uncle soon! Another home run!
True Blue (2)
(a shadorma)
Her eyes stood;
A pair of bellows,
Summoning–
Hidden flames,
That were hard to tame, once he
Caught a drift and burned.
Wow. What an image: bellows. Very arresting piece.
Hmm…I have a visual of bellow-eyes that I’m not going to be able to banish…
True Blue (3)
(I literally, cannot stop poeming…gotta go to sleep. Take a trip to mystic blue. Good night! …or morning.)
The forecast drawn:
Lavish blue
Pluvial pearls
Swirled, snaked, styled
Her world.
She was not—
Ashamed of the cloud,
That gave her rain.
Until she became
A mystic blue.
This is mystical in its own right. Or own write, and someone once wrote. Wonderful.
Cool.
Where hope finds me (2)
(Last one promise…)
(a shardorma)
Hope finds me,
When I close my eyes.
Fled from world
Severed ties.
Enwombed in darkness misting
Quick…hey, I like this trick.
This has a real bedtime feel to it. Love it.
Good one. Night.
“Where Hope Finds Me”
I imagine hope
to be like other sub-atomic particles,
charmed and strange,
as it ricochets its way
through the human atmosphere,
looking to bond
with a host
who stands on frozen earth,
under azure skies,
arms upturned
and shivering slightly
at the thought
that today
is really
today.
I think this is superb. The allusions to quarks takes it to essentials, while the upraised arms could be an ocotillo or Joshua tree, comprising those particles yet apart from them. There’s lots for me to think about with this one.
Perfect Jerry. I love to take on this. Sub-atomic hope!
Oh, this is wonderful… I love your take on hope.
Ooh, that’s chilling. And lovely. I have a visual of arms upturned and shivering slightly…very nice.
Looks like some of the comments are misplaced…
WHERE HOPE FINDS ME
Abandoning dreams, fearing rejection,
I was well-acquainted with crying.
Wallowing in my lack of perfection
made trusting in love not worth trying.
I was chained to pillars of raw despair,
but your candle would to stop burning.
You entered my space with a love so rare,
it released an unrestrained yearning
to end my sadness. By loosening ties,
hope now finds me alive in your eyes.
© Susan Schoeffield
This is heart=warming work. Thanks.
“You entered my space with a love so rare” – such a hopeful, lovely line…what a heartfelt piece…I’m with William, glad you shared it with us here.
[…] for the 2.16.14 “Take One Please” prompt at Creative Bloomings to write a poem using one of these titles: Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, A Waltz […]
I haven’t so much as looked at a poem for months – mainly due to a visual issue, which thankfully is now behind me. Anyway, MA workload permitting, I hope to get back in the swing of things, at least a little!
Culture Shock
or
On the transportation of Phil Ochs to the modern world
Call it “Peace” or call it “Treason,”
Call it “Love” or call it “Reason,”
But I ain’t marchin’ any more, – Phil Ochs
The Man, the hero, (well my hero anyway)
Stepped out of the time machine
He looked around
He looked up and down
He marvelled at the new
He harked back to the old
He whispered, he screamed, he cried:
But what about the songs we sang?
What about the marches we marched?
Where did it all go wrong?
Why have so many innocents died?
He wondered at technology,
He longed for simpler times
He was undone by the misery
And all the endless crimes
But he stood tall and sure and stated once again
We are only as strong as the weakest of men
We are only as free as a padlocked prison door
But why oh why did they not listen?
Why did they not learn?
Why does brother still kill brother?
Why are the poor still trodden down?
And I looked the great man, the voice of reason, in his eye
And I told him I didn’t know
I told him I was ashamed that I hadn’t done more
I said that in the end I had given up
I ain’t marching anymore
And he laid his hand upon me
And he spoke so soft and sweet and raised me from my knees
To stand upon my feet
He said I too, I think would have given up
No more to fight the good fight, I fear
Please, won’t you take me home now?
He whispered through his tears.
And in the darkness, in the long cold night
I hope, I dream, I cry for wisdom and fortitude
For courage and great strength
But when history is my witness
And I see that all I did was ‘ere in vain
Then I too will leave here to be free of the sting,
The agony, the shame.
We did not listen to our poets nor hark our minstrels words
And on and on we spiral down
With each advance
With each new toy
We make out world a little worse
But much worse by far is the truth
For we do not listen still.
Iain
This is heart- (and gut-) wrenching
Thank you William.
Oh Mr.Kemp – how good to see you back, and penning poems! Buy what a piece…I remember Phil Ochs all too clearly, and it’s as if you brought him here and resurrected him through your words. I think you and I probably share some of the same sentiments (have marched enough, feel disenchanted by what has, and has not happened) but your poem tears at the heart…makes one reconsider one’s stance…It’s excellent Iain. Welcome back.
Thanks so much Sharon. Phil Ochs was mu voice of conscience as a young man. I find it so frustrating that most of his words are still topical.
Where Hope Finds Me
Sometimes it counts to ten to let me hide;
sometimes it seems to blossom from inside;
sometimes it waits until I give it up
and think of how I’ll reach fill my cup.
It’s often barefoot, silent as a cat,
or comes disguised with mustache, cape, or hat
to make me squint to recognize and smile,
“Hello, old friend. I’ve missed you. Stay a while.”
For even when I put dreams on a shelf
and, ever practical, I heal myself;
and even when, afraid to wish or hope,
I take my life in hand, steady my scope,
there’s part of me that listens for footfalls
of hope trying to find me behind walls,
to gently take my hand and help me rise
so hope can see the world using my eyes.
I love this, and especially that phrase, “footfalls of hope.”
William stole the words out from under me….(not really, but that’s my favourite phrase as well)…this is an excellent piece Jane, so good.
Love Never Ceases
to prickle the pessimist in me—
love, buddied up with negativity,
so the eternal conversation plays
of who or what’s worth loving,
when love’s often abused,
subordinated loves—if, when,
as long as, limits and proofs
laid on to help us justify
our choices when love leads us
to wade pain and doubt.
And still I know—despite
all reticence—to love,
simple as that, because I can,
because it’s free and endless
as our faith in all that’s lovely,
good, and kind, because love
is not wasteful or useless, not ever.
I know the problems of this world
share the absence of love. I know
love solves and heals; promises and
laughs and shows us how hurts
in the name of love make beautiful
scars embossed on our Selves.
My inner pessimist sees love holding hands
with misery and waits for the first slap,
knowing misery needs loving more than
anything else in the world. It’s mine to do,
yours too, to love without ceasing, so
love never ceases.
I enjoyed reading more about Sharon. Good prompts.
This strikes me as thoughtful passion, or, perhaps, passionate thought. I think it outdoes St. Paul.
Ah, good work William, I was trying to think what Jane’s poem reminded me of and that’s it…the verses you hear read at weddings sometimes, St.Paul’s love treatise from Corinthians, but you’re spot on about the difference, and why Jane has out-done him…Nicely done Jane.
A Waltz of Words
My words sometimes stumble,
tripping over my tongue
as I rub my eyes and grumble,
blushing in embarrassment
as my words rumble.
I find my words sometimes dance
as they flow from pen to paper,
from my brain a joy filled prance
or perhaps a stalagmite filled cave
where words jab and stab like a lance.
Sometimes my words arm wrestle
in front of friend and foe alike,
as we belly up to the trestle
to break our bread and drink
the wine that flows from the vessel.
Once in a while my words waltz.
They float across the expanse
oozing with musical schmaltz,
with wit and grace and
nary any faults.
But mostly my words stumble.
“But mostly my words stumble” – boy, I can certainly relate to that sentiment…this is a neat poem, nicely turned out with great word use and turns of phrase…I like how you used the dance metaphor and other physical movements to mimic how it is to write…very nice.
True Blue – (Sitting Lotus)
You’ll find me buried,
at the bottom
of the deepest ocean.
You’ll discover where I’ve
caged myself
within an ivory prison,
I pursue the fault lines,
cracked calcified ribs
bones that once were home-
abode for the largest of souls.
You see,
I seek proof of the start
the very breath of corrupt purpose,
the evidence and heartbeat
of determined ill-intention-
utter abandon of respect
for our ultimate Mother.
Yes,
I search
for the schism
truth behind all this is-ness
showing precisely,
where
who
how
and why…
…
…why?
I see she’s spear splintered
and the Light sifts through
such brokenness.
I sit in her silted heart center,
within the remains-
that of the last
of the great blue.
Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2014
Arthur C. Clarke, in his 1962 book Profiles of the Future, was the first prominent intellectual to call attention to the plight of the blue whale. He mentioned its large brain and said, “we do not know the true nature of the entity we are destroying.”
Thank you Walt and to you, Sharon for bringing inspiration to the garden.
Oh Hannah, this broke my heart…I just finished watching a documentary — I think it was called “Blackfish” about the catastrophic results of keeping orcas in captivity (former Sea-World trainers were the impetus behind this film being made and distributed, because of the number of human deaths that have happened, many of them unreported, in these types of aquariums). One of the things that was shown and discussed in detail during the film was the MRI’s done of whale brains and how it’s been discovered that there’s a section that is larger than in a human’s that indicates ability to feel and emote. The descriptions of mothers and calves being separated and the mothers grieving for days…ah…it defies imagining. I think we (as humans) need to step back and think before we do any more damage, especially in the seas. Your poem captures so nicely, these sentient, misunderstood gentle giants. Very well done
A Waltz of Words
Two poets, one small space,
begin their poem in a waltz
of words, each smooth line
a sweet lilt like flowing water,
till they reach rocks hidden in rapids.
Here the poem turns, notes discordant
his words no longer rhyme, their meter
lost in a tangled jig of Irish charm as
shallow as the water touching shore.
Carol A. Stephen
Feb. 21, 2014
Hi Carol,
Glad I took one glance back here or I would’ve missed your lovely poem…especially love the last two lines in the final stanza…
Thanks, Sharon! Sorry I almost missed you! Great job here for sure!