PROMPT # 142 – “TAKE ONE PLEASE” : GUEST HOST – SHARON (S.E.) INGRAHAM

This week, I have the honor of presenting one of the more truly gifted poets around. Her work has been an inspiration to me since 2009, so that says something. And I find it fitting that in my “tribute” to Gordon Lightfoot last week, I wrote “If I could, I would have been Alberta Bound”. In a way, I have done just that, tapping Edmonton, Alberta for the work of one of the Great White North’s wonderful wordsmiths. I give you Sharon (S.E.) Ingraham.

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SHARON (S.E.) INGRAHAM
SHARON (S.E.) INGRAHAM

S.E.Ingraham, a long-time frequenter of many of the web’s poetic watering holes – Poetic Asides, the Sunday Whirl, dVerse Bar, Poets United, and of course Creative Bloomings (formerly Poetic Bloomings) to name a few…She admits to being a less faithful member of each than she would like, but comes as often as time and health permits. Even being a retired mental health consumer doesn’t mean she’s entirely out of the woods when it comes to either depression or, in the odd instance, mania, and she’s aware of this, and tries to be careful when it comes to getting enough sleep or down time (emphasis on the “tries to be”).

Since Ingraham began taking her writing seriously in 2008, all she’s really wanted is to have her work read and heard. Due to the encouragement of places like Poetic Bloomings where Walt and Marie Elena have been tireless cheerleaders, plus a generous dollop or two of luck, she now has poems in a number of publications, both print and on-line, amongst them: Pyrokinection, Red Fez, Shot Glass, Otis Nebula, Poised in Flight, Of Sun and Sand, In Gilded Frame…She also just learned that her work has been selected by kindofahurricanpress.com (another very supportive venue incidentally) for the second year in a row to be in their “best of the year anthology” Storm Cycle…

Of other poetry related things over the past year, Ingraham had the privilege of taking part in the Pulitzer Remix Project, writing a poem a day based on “Arrowsmith”, Sinclair Lewis’s award winning novel from 1929. This led to a semi-regular gig reading for the Found Poetry Review, plus ongoing relationships with many of the 80+ international poets involved in the project and its conceptualizer, Jenni B Baker. In additional, a fall online course on Modern and Post-Modern American Poetry taken through Coursera (one of the up and coming MOOC’s) was so good (and gratis) she’s already signed on for next year.

In her life outside of poetry, S.E. (Sharon) is married to the love of her life, Terry – 44 years this month – and they have two grown daughters, Julie and Katy. All of them live on the 53rd parallel in Edmonton, Alberta where it’s, as you might well guess, extremely cold! As of March 4th, there will also be three grandsons in the family as the third is scheduled to be born that day…As well as an extremely loyal but too-quickly-aging border-collie/wolf cross, family mean everything to her.

Ingraham’s work may be found on any one of her blogs:

The Poet Tree House        –         S.E. Ingraham Says        –         The Way Eye See It        –         In My Next Life

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PROMPT #142 – “TAKE ONE PLEASE” – Choose from one of the titles below and write your poem based on that thought. Your title must come from this list. It will be interesting to compare your thoughts on the exact same themes.

TITLES:

Culture Shock
True Blue
Where Hope Finds Me
A Waltz of Words
Love Never Ceases

WALT TAKES ONE:

WHERE HOPE FINDS ME

Lost boys never quit dreaming,
scheming of ways to stand their ground
with a new found respect for their abilities.
the agility of a Pan, and the nervous sense
of self not withstanding. Demanding much
from what hope they can muster, they may
get flustered from time to time, but are never
out of the game; never the same, they become
stronger the longer in the tooth they find themselves.
Old gents hold those glowing embers well into their
Decembers. They remain members of life’s fraternity.
Battles waged and lost, and hard-fought victories
over hook handed bandits lands us firmly on our feet,
ready if we chose to roam. But the hope of lost boys will
eventually bring them home when villains are vanquished.

(C) Copyright Walter J Wojtanik – 2014

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SHARON’S PICK:

 
CULTURE SHOCK

I knew him and he goes on haunting me.
                                                                     ~Pablo Neruda

In war, odd alliances are forged
We fell together with a common need
trying to hide from death,
from those who would take us both

Language was a barrier yes, but eyes,
eyes speak many translations and together
we formed a bond and trust without
ever exchanging a word…

The morning I awoke and he was gone,
did it seem extra-quiet?…Did I suspect
at once what he had done for me…
I can’t think I did…

The day seemed like any other in our
situation, that is…difficult to explain
or describe
The days were unlike anything we
might have imagined before the tanks
lumbered up our streets
And friends stopped speaking to friends

Hours, or maybe as long as a day later
when I knew he was not returning
I ran through the woods during
the day…I couldn’t think what else to do
Finally I emerged in the dark to find
him hung in the square

I knew then.

(c) Copyright S. E. Ingraham – 2014

I couldn’t resist posting this second wonderful poem of Sharon’s that has touched me dearly with its tenderness and loyalty.
Consider it a Bonus. I love this piece! Walt. 

LOVE NEVER CEASES
for Farley, my wolf

You amble now so slow
and I can see you grow old ‘fore
my eyes, wolf I adore
Moving carefully, you’re on ice
snow’s bad but still quite nice,
soft should a sacrifice be that
last step which lays you flat
Frail, a misstep, a fall splat down
break a bone, oh dear hound
I fear to see your mound, your grave
I fear I know I won’t be brave…

(C) Copyright S. E. Ingraham – 2014
 

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  1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
    Erin Kay Hope

    I’ve been pretty busy, what with starting driver’s ed and getting ready for a school performance, and so haven’t been able to contribute lately. I’m finally getting back on track, though. 🙂 Great prompt and examples, Sharon and Walt!

    True Blue

    The painting drew her from the start-
    She couldn’t tear her eyes away,
    Or explain the tug at her heart,
    And how her pulse began to race;

    It seemed to be all done in blues:
    Ultramarine, cobalt, midnight,
    Cerulean and azure hues,
    Shimmering in the changing light,

    Color that filled the mind with peace,
    The color God chose for His sky
    Painted the deep depths of the sea,
    Enhanced and caught in human eyes:

    Something she couldn’t quite explain,
    But knew all along its true name.

    © Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2014

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This is beautiful, Erin Kay.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        Lovely how you’ve captured a larger canvas in blues Erin…very nice.

    2. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      I echo, very beautiful Erin!

    3. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      This is for Walt…thanks again for having me co-host! And just to say, your “Where Hope Finds Me” brought a lump to my throat…lost boys, the ever optimistic ones…and, as I think your oh-so-poignant poem subtly delivers…aren’t all boys lost, time to time?

      1. CreativeBloomings Avatar
        CreativeBloomings

        Sharon, we most certainly are! Sometimes I’m “the Pan”, but most times I’m searching like everyone else! You’re welcome and thank you again for sharing this stage with me. W.

    4. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      Great to see you back. As my poetic nature has always leaned toward free verse, it never ceases to amaze me how you always speak to eloquently in rhyme.

    5. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Ah, Erin, you always make a reader sink into your lines and come out with more than expected. This story does that in spades. Excellent emotive qualities. Great job.

    6. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      Erin, this is beautiful and the rhyme and meter are spot on. Good work!

    7. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Nice to have you back in the garden. Wonderful True Blue.

    8. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      Simply blu-tiful…

    9. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      The magic of blue is beautifully evoked in this poem.

    10. janeshlensky Avatar
      janeshlensky

      lovely as always.

  2. Jeep Walters Avatar
    Jeep Walters

    True Blue

    They called her Melancholy Molly.
    She was shy to a fault, a bit sad
    and assured that her malaise
    would last for days and days.
    Happy was a state she never visited,
    she never left her apartment. That’s no lie!
    She was truly melancholy!

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Sounds like a melancholy baby. I like this poem, especially “Happy was a state she never visited”

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        Nicely done. Definitely a shade you don’t want to visit too often. You are new to me Jeep…I will have to pay better attention; I like your poem with its clever word-play very much.

    2. pmwanken Avatar
      pmwanken

      Hmm…sounds like Pensive Paula to me…

      1. CreativeBloomings Avatar
        CreativeBloomings

        Nah! Pensive Paula would be laced with more self-doubt than would ever be necessary, I think. Pensive Paula should be proud of the work she does! We all are! W.

        1. WmPreston Avatar
          WmPreston

          Amen to that.

    3. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      With a situation similar to Sharon’s I am all too familiar to the sentiment here.

    4. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Good one, Jeep. You, too, paint an emotive piece. As “sad” as the subject is, you showed what can be a person’s objective in that state. Good work.

    5. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      🙂

    6. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      Poor Molly – permanent blues are not a happy place to be.

  3. David Avatar
    David

    Love Never Ceases

    By David De Jong

    Love never ceases
    There may be creases
    Or maybe wrinkles
    And even some folds

    Yet love still pleases
    It maybe teases
    All the while, eases
    From youngest to old

    Love never ceases
    Yet I’ve seen it change
    Even re-arrange
    Broken to pieces

    Then engulf the same
    Single spark to flame
    Stronger than one heart
    Truer than the start

    Love never ceases
    Even in pieces
    If you can keep, some
    Pieces in your heart

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This one really sings.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        I agree with William, David…I almost found myself tapping my foot. I love the last stanza the best…the visual is so strong. Is this a particular form? It seems like it is but I’m having trouble remembering which one…could you remind me? It really works well.

        1. David Avatar
          David

          Thanks all – No form here (that I know of) if so purely by chance – just more ramblin’s from an insomniatic trance.

    2. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      The rhythm of this invites singing, as so much of your work does, in my view.

    3. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      This piece is lyrical. The rhythm leeds you along to the next line, the next stanza.

    4. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      I love this, David. Well done. And I like how you evolve your rhyme in what seems a natural circulation of sounds. And the sentiment isn’t bad either.

    5. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      There is so much truth in this one, and it’s beautifully written as well. “Love never ceases/Even in pieces/ If you can keep, some/ Pieces in your heart” is a perfect ending as well.

      1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
        georgeplace2013

        I totally agree. Great!

    6. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Delightful wee ditty.

    7. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      I love this one, the structure, the words, and the sentiment.

  4. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    A WALTZ OF WORDS

    When vowels and consonants mix and combine,
    the alphabet laughs while the words fall in line;
    then, sooner or later, some sentences dance
    till I, quite entranced, fix them fast in my mind.

    The words conjure mystery, facts, and romance
    and take me from home to Peru or to France.
    My books can unlock sundry worlds undefined,
    and words are my keyhole, awaiting my glance.

    © copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Lovely William, you’re quite the dancer in this one.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Ah, a writer’s song, William. Good for you. I like how you define your waltz, allow it to take the floor, swirl a bit, and come back as a single focus in a keyhole awaiting your glance. Terrific.

    3. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      A wonderful waltz of words, William.*

      * Hey! I just realized that not only is the above comment an example of alliteration but it would also make a fabulous tongue twister. Try saying “a wonderful waltz of words, William” ten times, fast.

      1. WmPreston Avatar
        WmPreston

        I did twy it. Tongue all tristed now.

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Beautiful dance of words. 🙂

    5. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      Oh how your words waltz!

    6. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      When there’s some blue about, winter is bearable. I like your poem very much.

      1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
        http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

        That one was for your True Blue poem below!

    7. janeshlensky Avatar
      janeshlensky

      Good one, Bill. I feel as if I’ve been a hitch-hiker on your words for some time now.

  5. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    TRUE BLUE

    When bluebirds fly on winter days,
    the patch of blue surprises white.
    Although the cold pursues its ways,
    when bluebirds fly on winter days
    they startle snowflakes out of phase;
    freedom is loosed to soaring flight
    when bluebirds fly on winter days.
    The patch of blue surprises white.

    © copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. pmwanken Avatar
      pmwanken

      This is gorgeous.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Oh William, as always, your work is stellar. The waltz is pretty much in 3/4 time (I know: I sang it!) and the phrasing impeccable. And taking a phrase like “patch of blue” and making it astonish with “surprises white” was brilliant.

    3. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      they startle snowflakes out of phase. love it.

    4. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      I like this, William. It’s very visual with dipping and soaring happening for the reader as well. Great job. Very apropos for today here.

    5. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      very nice

    6. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Written for others to see blue.

    7. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      Love this!

  6. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
    http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    Here’s mine. I’ll read the others later – we have to go out now.

    A Waltz of Words

    The sparkly pair swoop around the ice
    with lifts and twirls,
    crunching stops
    crossovers and swirls
    of flecks of light

    In a remote glass box
    commentators are enmeshed
    in a waltz of worthless words :
    vision says it all.

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      That’s telling them!

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        This made me laugh right out loud Viv! Hopefully that’s not offensive, but it sounds as if you are as fed up with some of the figure-skating judging as I am….I love your final stanza. It encapsulates what I’m sure many of us are feeling. Nicely done.

        1. elishevasmom Avatar
          elishevasmom

          Here, Here!

    2. David Avatar
      David

      Yes – sometimes just want to tell/yell at them “Shut Up” and let us enjoy it.

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Oh, good one, Viv. You’re so right. I don’t think we need that much commentating either when viewing art before our eyes. Love it.

    4. Linda E.H. Avatar
      Linda E.H.

      Nice work, Viv.

    5. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      Right on.

  7. David Avatar
    David

    True Blue

    By David De Jong

    The color
    Of red
    Before
    It bleeds

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Oh. My. Word.

      So much in so few. AMAZING, David.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        Wow.

      2. Linda E.H. Avatar
        Linda E.H.

        I agree. He packed a punch in only 7 words. That’s a knock-out!

      3. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        MEG! where you been?
        😀

    2. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      WOW!

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Well done, David. A thought mot many have. I like it.

    4. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Yup. Just… WOW.

    5. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      🙂

    6. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      Oh, my goodness- terrific

    7. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      wow! I just looked at the veins on the back of my hand, and you are absolutely right!

  8. David Avatar
    David

    True Blue

    By David De Jong

    Long before the rail and the smoke of trains,
    Gained in trade from his brother on the plains.
    The chief’s appaloosa, his prized, True Blue,
    Quiet afoot with speed to follow through.
    They chased the buffalo, white tail, and griz,
    Fished the creeks and rivers and called them his.
    True Blue was faster than any he knew,
    His striped feet glancing the earth, as they flew.
    His mane was braided, with shells and feathers,
    From eagle’s wings and albino tethers.
    The sky shimmered off his coat, aqua blue,
    With shadows and spots in magical hue.
    When the chief called his name he’d run beside,
    And nuzzle his shoulder begging to ride.
    They road the ridges the crests and canyons,
    Danced on the beaches, of seas and oceans.
    They hunted; winter, spring, summer, and fall,
    Found the start and the ending to them all.
    Fastened each color to arrow by hue,
    Placed them in a quiver to keep them true.
    Each day the sun rises and comes to view,
    He pulls back the bow and releases blue.

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      This is wonderful; utterly magical.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        What a splendid vignette…I found myself breathless as it unfolded,, and you packed so much into such a few short lines.

        1. elishevasmom Avatar
          elishevasmom

          My feellings exactly.

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      David, this will always be one of my favorites for reasons I won’t go into. Suffice it to say that a winter tale has become a song to sing throughout the seasons in this verse. You definitely struck a deep chord for me. Thank you.

      1. David Avatar
        David

        You are so welcome Claudsy! Thank you – If only one person relates, understands, or is moved by something I have written – I feel blessed. Your kind words mean much.

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          I feel the same way, David.

    3. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      Sometimes words fail… or feel so trite… so, simply- this touches me.

    4. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      An unexpected but delightful interpretation of the title – took me with you all the way.

  9. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Love Never Ceases

    Wrinkles are inevitable in the best of raiment. Some crease under heat and pressure. White diamonds house minute imperfections. Though It’s blemishes are cloaked by beauty. The Earth never misses a ray of sunshine. And the Sun never fails to give. In time splendid flowers release their persona. In time there is a failing bloom. In time the fallen shall rise in triumph, it’s beauty far from deadly tomb. The storm shall not withhold its thunder. Ever faithful to it’s pounding peals. Nor the rain ever cease to plunder. For Spring cannot be stopped nor sealed.

    Benjamin Thomas

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      A unique take on this title and some interesting word choices for your prose poem. Love “ever faithful to its pounding peals”…

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        Thx Sharon!

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      This narrative gives hope and anticipation free rein. Good for you, Benjamin. All true, and often ignored. I like it.

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        Thank you Claudsy

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          You’re welcome.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      “…Spring cannot be stopped or sealed”
      so full of hope and promise.

  10. WmPreston Avatar
    WmPreston

    LOVE NEVER CEASES

    Words cannot
    trump
    the trust of touch.

    © copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. David Avatar
      David

      YES!

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Lovely, William. Often touch tells the only truth one needs to “hear.” Great little piece.

    3. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Complete. Succinct. Well done!

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      That touch is so special.

  11. WmPreston Avatar
    WmPreston

    Sharon and Walt, your examples are breath-taking: mastery at work.

    1. Marie Elena Avatar
      Marie Elena

      Absolutely!

  12. barbara_y Avatar
    barbara_y

    A Waltz of Words

    one two three wake
    one two three work
    one two three one two three one two three
    whine

    one two three spin
    one two three shirk
    one two three one two three one two three
    work

    one two three can’t
    one two three can
    one two three can-can
    one two three dance

    one two three one two three one two three
    giggle
    one two three one two three one two three
    waltz

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Nicely penned Barbara. Now change partners and dance on…

    2. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      I had such fun reading this, Barbara. It was a dance for the reader. Terrific. Thank you.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Giggle two, three…. Wonderful!

    4. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      This is so clever and wonderful!

    5. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      This brought a big smile.

  13. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

    A Waltz of Words

    From the time I get up, yes, I waltz with my words.
    And at times, they are shy, oh, I know it’s absurd.
    On occasion, they flirt like a southern belle.
    With wide smiles, words invite and still others repel.

    But their dance is so lovely I keep coming back.
    Though I step on their toes, I develop a knack.
    Like a lover with hand on a slim, dainty waist,
    I can guide in a whirl either slow or in haste.

    And our laughter’s contagious, soon others around
    Begin clapping in glee with their rhythm and sound.
    In the evening, exhausted, we bid all adieu,
    Till the morning sun rises and we waltz anew.

    1. David Avatar
      David

      Waltz indeed!

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Very nice Connie. The rhythm and rhyme are so waltz-like, I found myself swaying in time as I read and re-read. A fine waltz of words.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      This was quite a treat Connie, I was dancing the whole time!

    4. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Another fun one. Yeah, Connie, you gave us another dance. This is such a visual one that reading the words as individual ones is almost impossible. I love it.

    5. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Catchy rhythm & tempo — fun!.

    6. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      You could do this one in old Vienna, I think.

    7. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Beautiful waltz … I’m still working on the two-step.

    8. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Hope Franklin

      A dance for writers. . .we’ll have to schedule one for our next writer’s conference. It sounds like a lot more fun than a workshop. Lovely poem.

    9. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      That’s what words do to us. I love your poem.

  14. David Avatar
    David

    Sharon – Love your True Blue – What would life be without our four legged family

  15. David Avatar
    David

    Culture Shock

    By David De Jong

    Where hope finds me still
    Is in the palm of Your hands;
    Where your Perfect Love, reigns true blue
    Proving Your Grace, is more than a waltz of words
    While Your amazing love, never ceases

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Aren’t you clever David, fitting so many titles into your succinct poem? And seamlessly too…

      1. David Avatar
        David

        I blame insomnia…

    2. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Quite clever friend! Good job!

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Good one, David. I, too, thought of using all of the titles as lines in a verse. I’m glad to see someone else had the same thought. I thoroughly enjoyed how you wove them all together. Marvelous.

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Fun waltz with choices.

  16. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    WHERE HOPE FINDS ME

    Oftentimes beneath the tap that drips
    The mantra of water like zen prayers
    Inside the candled darkness of myself
    Or in the wind
    Consenting to the push and pull of Nature
    Hobnobbing with eagles and hawks
    Who cast wary eyes but let me fly

    Sometimes in February snow skies
    Portending heavy falls from heavens
    Rich with gifts that comfort-cover
    The absence of sun-filled hope
    Or in the wounds
    The heart carries inadvertently
    When past lovers donned convincing masks

    Oftentimes in the silence of noonday prayer
    When I try with all my heart and soul
    To link myself with the God Who loves me
    Or in the softness of His grace
    Open-palmed like a mendicant
    I Accept alms to feed a hope-starved man

    Oftentimes near the woman I love
    The one God sent to reward my patience
    Her hand in mine
    Or lying still upon our night pillows
    Content we found each other
    Where hope and love converge
    where heart and soul meld forever

    #
    02/15/2014

    1. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      You crafted such a beautiful poem here

    2. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      Beautiful, Sal. Inside the candled darkness of myself. Marvelous.

    3. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Lovely, Sal. I often come close to drowning in your word pictures. This is a definite keeper. 🙂

    4. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Oh, lovely!

  17. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    Wrong date! It should read 02/16/2014

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      “Or in the wounds/ the heart carries inadvertently” – I am glad this fell in the verse of “Sometimes” and not one of the “Oftentimes” verses, but I love the image all the same. I love the whole poem actually Sal. If “hope is the thing with feathers” you have shown many places it might fly to hide from, or be found by, you. Lovely.

    2. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Whatever the date – beautifully written

  18. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    A Waltz of Words

    Hear their music, string sounds
    that sing from falling stars,
    whisper oohs on waltzing wind,
    and traced thin angled shapes
    on pages circled rain. Play song
    uncurled and hooked by tails,
    waltzing letters dropping
    floating words, solid, sturdy,
    stones splashing sounds,
    as they dance on slipper
    shoes round and round. Arms
    clasped, they’re chanting vowels,
    this waltz of enchanted words.

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Wonderful, Misky. You always have such a way of stringing words together that have the reader swirling with them. I like this very much. Terrific job.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        I think Claudsy has expressed more eloquently than I could pretty much what I want to say Misky…your way with words is always so inventive, I’m perpetually taken aback and then wonder why since you’re always such a fine writer. Another excellent offering…I especially like “unhooked and curled by tails” … that’s an image that’s a bit enigmatic yet has stayed with me since I read it earlier. Well done.

        1. Misky Avatar
          Misky

          Thank you, ladies!

      2. georgeplace2013 Avatar
        georgeplace2013

        Exactly what I felt – a circling, spiral-like as I read line after line and almost felt dizzy with the effect. So lovely

    2. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Oooh, pretty, Misk! I can see and hear them dancing. 🙂

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Breath-taking, this.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks. 😀

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Dancing words across the page. Well done.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you, Marjory

    5. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      This carries the rhythm of the dance. The words command attention.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thank you, Viv.

  19. RJ Clarken Avatar
    RJ Clarken

    Culture Shock

    I think I suffer from a phrase
    or term or idiom which notes
    that I am old or out of touch.

    I will admit that in some ways
    it’s culture shock á ‘totes magotes.’
    Oh well, I get it (not so much.)

    You see, it’s weird, this ‘cray-cray’ craze.
    But hey – whatever floats one’s boats
    of ‘feels’ – oh dear. That’s ‘sick’ (or such.)

    I’m sorry if my eyes do glaze
    when ‘ere the current slang…or quotes…
    are used like verbal Double Dutch

    which, probably is not so ‘fly.’
    O obsolescence – I’ma die.

    ###

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      LOL, RJ. I’m with you on this. I have enough trouble working with real language without dealing with the made-up version used by those striving to create their own verbal mark on the world.

      Great job.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        How very up-to-date and relate-able De; I’m with you…I find myself wanting to say to adults, “Use your words!” the way I would to toddlers, but then I’d like to correct texters who can’t seem to produce entire words so I suspect I’m just getting old and bitchy…rofl. Good poem, as always, imho.

        1. seingraham Avatar
          seingraham

          Sheesh RJ…I don’t know why I’ve pegged you as De in both comments…I apologize…I must have been totally out to lunch writing these…sorry…the comments are correct,…just directed to the wrong poet; I DO know who wrote them, believe it or not…

    2. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      LOL Yup! 🙂

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Wonderful. You have me smiling broadly again.

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      I admit – you lost me in the waltz of the culture.

    5. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      : )

    6. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      I sigh in agreement. I think I’ve outlived my era and everything seems to be a culture shock these days!

  20. A Waltz of Words | The Chalk Hills Journal Avatar
    A Waltz of Words | The Chalk Hills Journal

    […] Written for Creative Bloomings […]

  21. elishevasmom Avatar
    elishevasmom

    Sharon, your Culture Shock left my jaw agape in awe. And Love Never Ceases is indeed tender, as Walt said. And speaking of Walt, I especially loved the line: “Old gents hold those glowing embers well ito their Decembers”.
    Sharon, what a thought provoking prompt! Thank you.

    Love Never Ceases

    Love never ceases
    to amaze me,
    graze me
    with its unexpected ricochets.
    Often entrances
    me concealed
    in side-long glances.
    Where hope finds me
    waiting in a
    waltz of words,
    finds me with
    two left tongues.
    And if the love turns
    out to be
    true blue,
    leaves me swirling
    in the
    culture shock
    of no longer
    being alone.

    (c) Copyright Ellen Evans – 2014
    for PB 2.16.14 use one of the following as title:
    Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, Waltz of Words, Love Never Ceases

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Excellent work, Ellen. Love that you could use the titles to weave the verse, too. The lines so smoothly flow from one to the next that at the end I was quite breathless.

      1. elishevasmom Avatar
        elishevasmom

        Thank you so much!

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          You’re welcome, Ellen.

      2. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
        Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

        Oh yes — what Claudsy said, Ellen! I love how it starts right out with a twist of the title… not ‘Love never ceases’, but ‘Love never ceases to amaze me’… and “two left tongues’? Nice!

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Ellen – what a wonderful poem…I love this phrase, “graze me with its unexpected ricochets” amongst others…Thank you for your kind words about my poems. I’d love to take credit for the prompts, but they’re Walt’s inspirations, not surprisingly — he has a very fertile mind. Great that you could weave the titles throughout your poem…impressive.

      1. Wm Preston Avatar
        Wm Preston

        Impressive is indeed the word!

      2. Walt Wojtanik Avatar
        Walt Wojtanik

        Thanks Ellen and Sharon. For the first time, I have prompts and forms scheduled for the rest of the year. A little time away gave great inspiration. I hope to have every one serve a week as co-host here. I would appreciate if our newer contributors could send an e-mail (poeticbloomings@yahoo.com) so I can have your address on file.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Fun to read.

  22. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
    Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

    True Blue

    When she embraces in blue
    all her other hues – glinting
    gold, glory orange, blazing
    yellow, radiant red – dim
    and pale to black & white.

    Wholly luminous silver frost
    will wash out, losing light; but
    even in her frozen form
    blue is warm: a hug, a kiss;
    blue is home is love is bliss.

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      I love it, Pamela! I like how the colors shift because of blue. It reads so well. A keeper, for sure.

      1. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
        Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

        THANK you, Claudsy! You might check out the photos on my blog — they complete the picture. 😉

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      How very up-to-date and relate-able De; I’m with you…I find myself wanting to say to adults, “Use your words!” the way I would to toddlers, but then I’d like to correct texters who can’t seem to produce entire words so I suspect I’m just getting old and bitchy…rofl. Good poem, as always, imho.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        I am not sure why this double-posted…maybe it’s a sign…sorry.

    3. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      I went to you blog Pamela and became lost in your wonderful photos before re-reading your poem, which is equally fine…the last line is my favourite…”blue is home is love is bliss”…yes.

      1. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
        Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

        Thank you, Sharon! So glad you stopped by to enjoy the photos too.

    4. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      These words and those pictures are dancing with each other, in my view. Wonderful.

      1. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
        Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

        Ahhh… thanks, William for such a lovely compliment!

    5. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Blue is welcoming!

      1. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
        Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

        That it is, Marjory! And it’s always been my favorite!

  23. flashpoetguy Avatar
    flashpoetguy

    A WALTZ OF WORDS

    tone-deaf too many years
    a wallflower-spectator
    at weekly high school dances
    I was an A-1 nerd who danced
    with words assembled like puzzles
    jigged with rhyming nouns
    jagged with sharp verbs

    my sister Anna could name the instruments
    clap her hands to the beat
    but I kept myself busy
    tossing wood on the fires
    of a stampeding imagination
    pretending I could tap my feet
    gliding and sliding to the rhythm of words

    that floated around the cauldron
    of my mind but I couldn’t leave the wall
    couldn’t ask a girl to dance
    couldn’t confidently put on airs
    or whirl her in neat Lindy circles
    where I would hold my breath and pray
    I wouldn’t step on her feet

    and when I’d go home
    my Remington typewriter out of its case
    almost calling to me, not insulting words,
    but word come-ons, flashes of poetic lines,
    “Sit down, Mr. Shy Guy. Write some verse.
    Things could be worse.”
    And I’d waltz like Fred Astaire
    shuffling my feet in iambic wonderment

    #

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Aw, Sal, this is so sweet and telling. It’s a tiny memoir that allows the reading into a private time of self-exploration. Love it. Thank you.

    2. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Ahhh, memories — painful & sweet. Lovely, Sal!

    3. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Was that you holding up the other wall? It was me and my one friend pretending to be happy about examining the one opposite you, gently swaying to the music, trying not to meet eyes…this touched some chords in me Sal; a very fine poem.

    4. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Superb, utterly superb, and that last line is stunning.

    5. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      I am not tone-deaf, but edge on spelling-deaf 🙂
      To waltz with words is wonderful.

  24. elishevasmom Avatar
    elishevasmom

    Culture Shock

    The add-mixture of older years and
    older ears with the music and
    rhythms of a more modern
    time, the pulsating beats
    and sounds can create
    such confusion.
    The sum is
    culture
    shock.

    (c) Copyright Ellen Evans – 2014
    for PB 2.16.14 use one of the following as title:
    Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, Waltz of Words, Love Never Ceases

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Love how you waltzed your words to this tune of Culture Shock, Ellen. Fine job, too.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Yes…there are all sorts of culture shocks, aren’t there? Well said.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        I just noticed the marvellous harp-shape of this poem…was that planned? It’s exquisite…

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      This gets right down to the point, eh?

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Hearing aids with an off switch, softens the sound and reduces the shock 🙂
      (Love mine!)

    5. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      I love the rhythm and tone of this

  25. Claudsy Avatar
    Claudsy

    Hello, all. Sharon, it’s so good to see you as co-host. Your verse never disappoints. I really like what you’ve done here today. And I like the prompt. It’s one that lets the mind soar.

    A Waltz of Words

    Babble roamed ‘round
    Dark space encasing me;

    Through murmuring sound
    None heard my whispered plea

    For clarity profound,
    Or silence’s gentle sea,

    Where I’ve never drowned
    But sought to be free.

    Patience created a playground
    Of letters fprming intricate filigree,

    For climbing among words bound
    In a sing-song waltz to be me.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Oh, this is lovely Claudsy. Truly. I especially like “Patience created a playground” … what a wonderful image, and I love the idea that the waltz’s words are all conspiring to help you be you…unique and precious.

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Thank you so much, Sharon. I must confess something here about this first poem. When I was writing it, it was to be about allowing words to play with themselves and others in a dance around people’s minds, but somewhere along the way, I realized that what I was really writing about was how it must be for an unborn child, hearing so much murmured babbled from inside the womb.

        Heavy, huh? But I couldn’t get the image out of my mind, so that’s what it means to me. A baby struggling to be born, using those murmured words as a guide.

        Go figger. The mind is a scary place sometimes. 🙂

        1. seingraham Avatar
          seingraham

          I came back to re-read this Claudsy and it makes even more sense now that I know the back-story…I love learning the process behind a poem so thank you so much…I agree, the mind is a scary place sometimes (as well as an enigmatic, wonderful, and cool place sometimes).

          1. Claudsy Avatar
            Claudsy

            That it is, Sharon, that it is. I’m glad that it worked even better once you knew the reasoning. Perhaps I should add a wee couplet to it for explanation. Thank you.

    2. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      I love this, both for sound and sense.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Beautiful words, feel, movement, dance……

  26. elishevasmom Avatar
    elishevasmom

    Love Never Ceases

    When
    the
    power
    of mental
    torment and even
    physical pain due to the loss
    of someone close, someone who touched you so deeply that
    you feel overwhelmed by the anguish and its rushing in to fill the void,
    remember that like an invisible womb, you are
    surrounded by the presence of
    love, ready for you
    to lean on—
    never
    to
    end.

    (c) Copyright Ellen Evans – 2014
    for PB 2.16.14 use one of the following as title:
    Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, Waltz of Words, Love Never Ceases

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Wonderful reminder, Ellen, of the infinite love source in our lives. I like it. Thank you.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      My word you’re prolific Ellen! And good…I particularly like the shape and thrust of this…it made me just a tad sad and I think that’s probably a good thing, yes?

      1. elishevasmom Avatar
        elishevasmom

        yes

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      For me, this is almost a classic case of the fitting form. Wonderful.

    4. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      …surrounded by the presence of love..”
      Wonderful reminder.

  27. Marjory MT Avatar
    Marjory MT

    Hoops, Was thinking Tri-fall,
    only I got my 6 and 8 reversed.
    (Should be 6-3-8-6-3-8, ABCabc)

    LOVE NEVER CEASES

    Love never ceases we are assured.
    War will come,
    hardships will still abound,
    We wonder why sickness accures
    (more to some)
    when live seems to be sound.

    We seek beauty in a sunset,
    and find storms;
    Clouds, cold, darkness and pain.
    We remember some past regret,
    (out of norm)
    Why in mind does it reign?

    So much negative is around,
    countering
    we answer with a cure.
    Hold to what is promised, is sound.
    Remembering,
    assured, … love will endure.

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Nice! Marjory. Good one. The message is one to remember. Thank you.

      1. Marjory MT Avatar
        Marjory MT

        Thank You, Claudsy. Nice to connect with you.
        [Busy schedule makes it hard to get to the garden)

        1. Claudsy Avatar
          Claudsy

          Indeed it does, Marjory, but I’m determined to give myself at least one day to putz with blooms each week. 🙂

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Never-mind the numbers, I really like how this turned out Marjory, especially, “Why in mind does it reign?” Very nice.

      1. Marjory MT Avatar
        Marjory MT

        Thank you, appreciate your comment.

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      I think this is great.

      1. Marjory MT Avatar
        Marjory MT

        “Great” is good, thank you Wm

    4. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Yes, love will surely endure!

  28. CreativeBloomings Avatar
    CreativeBloomings

    WALTS OF WORDS

    Whitman and Wojtanik,
    men of a manic mind
    finding wisdom in the
    wealth of words. One
    famous and dead;
    one infamous and not quite yet.
    I can never get my fill
    of his words. He had never
    heard of me or mine.
    That’s fine. He is Whitman,
    I am a man of wit!
    Close enough!
    I can live with that!

    (C) Copyright Walter J Wojtanik – 2014

    POET’S NOTE: (My apologies to Mister Whitman for presuming to place my name anywhere near his great legacy. I just thought it was a joyful play of words.)

    1. Claudsy Avatar
      Claudsy

      Good one, Walt. Chuckled and flowed with your words. Thoroughly enjoyable. And who says that you aren’t known as widely in numbers as your great poet Whitman. Different times, different mediums. It’s all in the numbers anyway. 🙂

    2. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      What fun! Whitman and the quick wit! 😀

    3. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      By putting our poetry out there, all of us poets are open for such presuming, great and small. 😀

    4. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      I posted a note on your site as well but wanted to say, what I know of Whitman (which is admittedly not a huge amount) he was so all-encompassing, so egalitarian and democratic, I’ll bet he’d be thrilled to add another poet to his legacy, especially one as fine as you…

      1. Wm Preston Avatar
        Wm Preston

        I think you’re spot on with that comment.

    5. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Good one Walt, enjoyed the play on words, as usual.

    6. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Fun play (dance) with words, Walt.

  29. Claudsy Avatar
    Claudsy

    Where Hope Finds Me

    Within a child’s laughter
    Springs hope of continuance,
    Of joy’s moments unending.

    Within summer’s birdsong
    Floats acceptance of immediacy
    In a world of constant change.

    Within autumn’s shedding leaves
    Comes Nature’s cycle folding
    Inward to rejuvenate itself.

    Within winter’s hibernation,
    Renewal begins its resurgence
    Of life’s expected spring leap.

    To each a season, a lesson
    Taught in a round-robin world;
    Hope waits for recognition.

    1. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
      Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

      Claudsy, sweet! I love the circle of hope that flows from season to season.

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        I’ll do that. Thanks.

      2. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        A variation of the circle of life in a beautifully rendered and totally new fashion…well done Claudsy. I quite like this.

        1. Wm Preston Avatar
          Wm Preston

          Likewise.

    2. elishevasmom Avatar
      elishevasmom

      Taught in a round-robin world. love it. And it all holds together in a fine weave. Nice job!

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        Thank you, Ellen. Glad you liked it.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      and Hope brings peace. 🙂

      1. Claudsy Avatar
        Claudsy

        That it does, my friend Marjory, that it does.

  30. Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC) Avatar
    Pamela Smyk Cleary (PSC)

    Walt, Sharon: beautiful work! All three pieces touch the heart in different ways.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Thank you Pamela…appreciate your words and thoughts…

  31. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    TRUE BLUE

    Sharon, nothing personal, but I couldn’t help but poem about “True Blue” after seeing your “True Blue” eyes!

    (a shadorma)

    Right at home,
    In the iris sky
    Of blue eye.

    I pass through,
    Those fair pupils to witness
    A colorful you.

    1. CreativeBloomings Avatar
      CreativeBloomings

      Benjamin, we have a preponderance of blue eyed poet beauties here in the garden: Paula Wanken, Sharon, Hannah Gosselin, Me… well, three out of four isn’t that bad! W.

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        Lol! A lot of true blues!

      2. Marjory MT Avatar
        Marjory MT

        Blue is good.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      You’re making me blush…good shardorma; I’m hopeless at them!

      1. poetryshack Avatar
        poetryshack

        Thx, I doubt if you’re hopeless ’em.

        🙂

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Excellent!

  32. elishevasmom Avatar
    elishevasmom

    What a lovely tribute, and right on taget!

  33. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    (Walt and Sharon: Excellent examples!)

    Where Hope Finds Me, Love Never Ceases

    Where hope finds me
    under a tree on an early
    day of summer, gazing
    lazily at a softening sky,
    I sigh. In that moment
    I can imagine as truth,
    that love never ceases.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Nicely done…well woven titles and a great outcome.

      1. Wm Preston Avatar
        Wm Preston

        I agree, much.

      2. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Sharon. I enjoyed this prompt.

    2. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Nice one Sarah, enjoyed the seasonal tone in this.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks so much, Benjamin.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Oh, Sara, I really find that so assuring and peaceful.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Marjory!

  34. elishevasmom Avatar
    elishevasmom

    Lovely

  35. Wm Preston Avatar
    Wm Preston

    WHERE HOPE FINDS ME

    Hopes arise
    when music flies
    across the span of space
    and bids me know my ancient dream
    is not so dead as it may seem
    and I will yet know grace.
    I cup my ear
    to hear it here:
    the melody’s embrace.

    © copyright 2014, William Preston

    1. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      I understand this. Hope is a great thing friend. 🙂

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Ahh…heavy sigh. I like the idea of being in melody’s embrace.

    3. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Music wraps the deafest ears with a warm feeling of gladness.

    4. janeshlensky Avatar
      janeshlensky

      “I cup my ear to hear it here…” touched me. Love this, Bill.

  36. ejparsons Avatar
    ejparsons

    Where Hope Finds Me

    Dredging in the doldrums of sorrow and pain
    The past but a parade of badly made choices
    Bad choices that got me exactly where I stood
    At the lowest point in the valley of desperation
    Drowning in the impossibility of resurrection
    From my self-made prison of hopelessness

    Then through the flood of self-pitied tears
    As I stared down for fear of glimpsing doom
    I saw a shadow stretching from behind me
    But there was no sun for to cast this silhouette
    Quickly I turned that I might see for myself
    And I saw; and I fell to my knees in utter fear

    For the shadow grew larger as it came for me
    Close now, its red glowing eyes shone bright
    Black and cold it pointed a bony finger my way
    My frozen soul ached at the pull of pure evil
    Through thought that this evil could be my relief
    My escape from the despair of hopeless misery

    My life flashed before me, the good and the bad
    Then all thoughts stopped at one exact moment
    The day I rejected the One they called Jesus
    I’d pushed Him away and paved my own path
    A path fraught with bad choices, pain and strife
    Bad choices that got me exactly where I stood

    That moment would not depart from my brain
    Would this be the torture I’d carry for eternity
    Reliving the instant I rejected His mercy
    Just so I could do things the way I decided
    Decisions that have turned my life upside down
    Decisions that got me exactly where I stood

    I didn’t need Him then, but I need Him so now
    But, alas, I fear it must be too late to save me
    I’m unworthy, filthy, corrupted and immoral
    A heart of wickedness; an unsalvageable soul
    Not a decent bone in this wasted walking corpse
    I’m not even worthy of an eternity in Hell

    I crumpled to the ground as regret flooded in
    Why had I pushed away the hope of all mankind
    If only I had one last chance to accept His grace
    One chance to set my feet on the righteous path
    Forgive me, Lord, for turning my back on You
    That moment will be my torture forevermore

    Then I felt a gentle hand, softly on my shoulder
    I heard a voice so calming whisper in my ear
    I looked up and I saw Jesus smiling down at me
    He called me son as He took my hand in love
    Tears of joy filled my eyes as He lifted me up
    Hope had found me in the depths of my despair

    © 2014 Earl Parsons

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      I really admire how sincerely you write Earl. This comes from the heart and rings with authenticity. Very nicely done.

      1. Wm Preston Avatar
        Wm Preston

        Same here

    2. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Hope – the promise of what is to be.

  37. ejparsons Avatar
    ejparsons

    Love Never Ceases

    Love never ceases
    It daily increases
    The more time I spend
    With my love

    Love is forever
    Its end will be never
    For my love is sent
    From above

    © 2014 Earl Parsons

    A Waltz of Words

    The rhythm
    The rhyme
    The arrangement of time
    The words form a beat
    Each one on each line
    The whole piece is alive
    As if it were a song
    But it’s all in your head
    As the words waltz along

    © 2014 Earl Parsons

    True Blue

    If there’s a true blue
    Then is there an untrue blue
    I must ponder this

    © 2014 Earl Parsons

    Culture Shock

    If the culture that we’re living in
    Is not a shock
    Then you must have your eyes closed

    © 2014 Earl Parsons

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      This is an interesting “suite” of poems…I think I like “True Blue” the best…now I’ll be pondering that as well…”Culture Shock” gave me food for thought as well.

    2. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Each one enjoyable to read. Thank you.

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      U think these are little gems.

      1. WmPreston Avatar
        WmPreston

        I think they are, too.

    4. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Earl, every one is delightful. Each a tasty morsel!

  38. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    TRUE BLUE

    If the eyes
    are windows to souls,
    gaze deeply
    into mine,
    to see where hope finds me and
    love never ceases.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Sometimes I wish there were actual shades (not sunglasses) that we could lower or draw over our eyes so that they weren’t quite the windows to the soul all the time. I guess some people are better at doing that than others, and maybe it’s easier for each of us to do it at some times than others…As you can no doubt tell, your poem has me pondering…It’s late, better wait until tomorrow to do any more commenting. I do like your poem by the way…

    2. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      Beautiful.

    3. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Bingo!

    4. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Paula! You have the best shardormas! Or should I call you….. Shar-Paula?

      1. pmwanken Avatar
        pmwanken

        Thanks, Benjamin. 🙂

  39. ejparsons Avatar
    ejparsons

    True Words Never Shock Me

    A conversation between lovers
    Is but a waltz of words
    Between true blue hearts
    From which love never ceases

    True love, however
    In today’s vernacular
    Can come across to the young
    As a counter-culture shock

    But, true love, my friend
    Is where hope finds me waiting
    Patiently for the next encounter
    A conversation between lovers
    © 2014 Earl Parsons

    1. Marjory MT Avatar
      Marjory MT

      True…

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        Maybe true words are only unable to shock those truly in love? That’s what I’m getting from your poem. And maybe, the patience and knowing comes with maturity…where true blue hearts hang out and love never ceases? I feel all of this from your poem and except in very rare examples, the young know little of this…Well said Earl.

    2. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Bingo! here, too. I think this is wonderful.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      This was true waltz of words in my opinion. Well put!

  40. True Blue | echoes from the silence Avatar
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  41. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Where Hope finds Me

    Hope found me after dusk, when all ray was gone and shadow lusted quick nightfall.

    Hope found me bare to the bone in a woeful tomb, where warmth retracted it’s affection.

    Hope found me wounded under contemptible rock, where every worm mocked my arrival.

    Hope sought me out where the Sun didn’t shine, where cold was the warmest thought.

    Hope found me destitute, barren, and starved for the basics of self-esteem.

    Hope found me in the nightmare of my life, and pulled me into it’s very own dream.

    Hope found me helpless when my heart derailed, and couldn’t find my way back.

    Hope found me stranded, when all others set sail and put me on it’s faithful back.

    Hope found me when life was bitter blue, saved me, and imparted another hue.

    Hope found me, slapped me in the face and said, are you blind? Don’t you see his grace?

    Hope bore me when I could not walk.
    Made me buoyant where I couldn’t swim. Dried me when I was wet with tears. Supplied me in the time of need. Freed me when a slave in chains. Strengthened me in a time of grief. Awakened my eyes in a time of slumber. And consoled me on the battlefield.

    Hope found me where I could not found.

    Hope, will always find you.

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      Wow. Profound, indeed.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        Such a powerful poem…thanks for sharing it here.

  42. Marjory MT Avatar
    Marjory MT

    Wonderful encouragement, assurance ….Hope…..

  43. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    A Waltz of Words

    (A shadorma)

    It was an
    August performance,
    duly planned.

    A triple
    meter waltz of words—we’ve been
    dancing ever since.

    1. WmPreston Avatar
      WmPreston

      Calls to mind the Anniversary Waltz, for me, anyway.

      1. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        Yes! Exactly, William nailed it.

  44. georgeplace2013 Avatar
    georgeplace2013

    A Waltz of Words

    Music
    light, lilting, lifting,
    fluting breeze, twirl, skip, dip, and sway –
    join me friend
    and dance, heady effervescent
    spring song of Terpsichore
    enchants.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This feels balletic. Lovely.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      This is enchanting…and I admire anyone who can work Terpsichore into any poem, never mind such a succinct one.

      1. georgeplace2013 Avatar
        georgeplace2013

        Thanks : )

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Yes! Quite enchanting. Glad I read it…missed it earlier.

  45. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Hope Franklin

    Where Hope Finds Me

    My parents bartered choices for a girl.
    Should she be Bonnie Blue to Scarlett born?
    Or should she sing and dance with Mickey Mouse,
    A Billie Jean, Annette—no, wait. Darlene
    My name reveals my age with no more clues.
    For middle name, eternal values loomed
    Perhaps choose Faith, for mountains rise to climb
    Long-suff’ring Charity presides o’er all
    Make Hope her name, where faith and love cross roads,
    Her map to surety written in her name.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      It’s true, you don’t here Darlene very often, do you? Do you get a nickname? And Hope seems to be in fashion again…both are lovely, as is your tiny narrative of a poem.

      1. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Hope Franklin

        Seingraham, I don’t have a nickname. Should I have one? Or does someone suggest one for me? Yes, I’m new. I spent a week writing poetry to take a break from writing novels (my career) and caught the bug. 🙂

        1. William Preston Avatar
          William Preston

          In that case, I hope the bug hangs on. I enjoy reading your work.

          1. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
            Darlene Hope Franklin

            Why, thanks, William. I never get over the appreciation for praise. A bad habit for a writer. Poetry allows me to play with the sounds of language and images–skills that come back into play in my book writing, but without the write-or-loose-contract worry. I appreciate Connie introducing me here,

      2. seingraham Avatar
        seingraham

        that would be *hear*

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I had the feeling of the Mickey Mouse Club coming out for a bow here. This is fun to read aloud.

      1. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
        Darlene Hope Franklin

        Actually I don’t know if my mother chose “Darlene” from the Mickey Mouse Club or not, but it makes sense. I did have fun with it.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      I’m joining the club here, very nice Darlene. Welcome!

  46. georgeplace2013 Avatar
    georgeplace2013

    This is lovely!

  47. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Hope Franklin

    Thanks, georgeplace 2013!

  48. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Hi- my first time posting here– I am relatively new at the writing game- please bear with me
    True blue
    Blooms royal in feathers, and crystals of lapis
    In the velvet of shadows, and lips that are placid
    It opens in skies, but can dampen some views
    It deepens in waves,and can pull through and through

    An Egyptian favorite, it squeezes near green
    It feels in the iris, and the magic of dreams
    It glazes our breath, with a friendly persistence
    It flows in our blood, and the truth of existence—

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Wow. What a delicious feast of color and sound.

    2. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      This is so lovely to read. Hope you post often.

    3. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Couldn’t tell you were new…wonderful Poem!

    4. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Welcome Priti! Your poem, as William says, is a feast…such richness; and a very nice rhyme scheme throughout. I hope we see you often.

    5. Walt Wojtanik Avatar
      Walt Wojtanik

      Welcome Priti. You’ve come to a very supportive and encouraging place. Hang in with us and you’ll learn and grow with us in our “garden” A very expressive first submission here. Please take the time to read the Welcome tab for our features and expectation. They are all summed by in the first key. Have fun!

  49. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
    Darlene Hope Franklin

    Priti, I’ve only been here for two weeks, but talented poets and great encouragers. I love your literal descriptions flowing into meaning of the color.

  50. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    WHERE HOPE FINDS ME

    She scans the whole town over;
    she searches everywhere;
    but when she looks in the doghouse
    she’s sure to find me there.

    © copyright 2014, William Preston

    NB: I’m thinking of Hudie Ledbetter’s sing, Goodnight Irene, as I write this.

    1. Darlene Hope Franklin Avatar
      Darlene Hope Franklin

      Hope in a doghouse. . .love it. That’s when I most need it.

    2. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Yes! That’s genius. Love it.

    3. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Now I have that song in my mind…Irene goodnight, goodnight…is it not a waltz actually? And what, pray tell, did you do to land yourself in the doghouse? Or are you merely the pet in this poem?

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Actually, I was thinking of a gal named Hope, searching for the singer on a Saturday night. The song is a waltz, and, as done by the Weavers and Gordon Jenkins long ago, a supremely beautiful one, probably much different than when Leadbelly (Ledbetter) first performed it.

  51. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Culture Shock

    Kids brought up
    today are in for a
    very rude awakening.
    When they finally see
    the befuddlement
    of their cock-a-hoop…
    And actually realize
    they are not the center.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This sounds true, and eternal.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Oh my yes, isn’t that the truth for many…the entitled ones are going to fall hard…I like that expression “cock-a-hoop” but haven’t heard it before (assume it’s similar to cock-of-the-walk?)…well said.

  52. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    There are SO MANY good poems here. We are truly waltzing folks.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Yes,when I consider selecting just one, I keep thinking of that old expression, “Feet, don’t fail me now…”

  53. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Culture Shock

    (a shadorma)

    Egg hatches…
    A new life begins…
    In newness.

    Tell him now…
    That he’s next on the menu,
    part of the food chain.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Oooohhh… bingo!

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Uh oh…reality check.

  54. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Waltz of Words

    Its a waltz folks
    And that with friends
    A tango
    With words
    A flapping of winds

    Its a waltz folks
    And that with grins
    A polka
    With verse
    In triplets and twins

    Its a waltz folks
    And that with spins
    A ballet
    With prose
    And sleight of pens

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Masterful!

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      You’re on a roll…I love that last line and it caught me by surprise….

  55. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Love never ceases where hope finds me

    •Culture shock, in a pool of great poets.

    •True solid blue talent wets your whistle with muse.

    •Vertigo, in a world of waltzing words.

    •Love never ceases in the garden; or on the other side of the pen, where hope finds me.

    1. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Whew…I can’t keep up…I’m going to cry uncle soon! Another home run!

  56. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    True Blue (2)

    (a shadorma)

    Her eyes stood;
    A pair of bellows,
    Summoning–

    Hidden flames,
    That were hard to tame, once he
    Caught a drift and burned.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Wow. What an image: bellows. Very arresting piece.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Hmm…I have a visual of bellow-eyes that I’m not going to be able to banish…

  57. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    True Blue (3)

    (I literally, cannot stop poeming…gotta go to sleep. Take a trip to mystic blue. Good night! …or morning.)

    The forecast drawn:

    Lavish blue
    Pluvial pearls
    Swirled, snaked, styled
    Her world.

    She was not—
    Ashamed of the cloud,
    That gave her rain.
    Until she became
    A mystic blue.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This is mystical in its own right. Or own write, and someone once wrote. Wonderful.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Cool.

  58. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Where hope finds me (2)

    (Last one promise…)

    (a shardorma)

    Hope finds me,
    When I close my eyes.
    Fled from world

    Severed ties.
    Enwombed in darkness misting
    Quick…hey, I like this trick.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      This has a real bedtime feel to it. Love it.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Good one. Night.

  59. Jerry Walraven Avatar
    Jerry Walraven

    “Where Hope Finds Me”

    I imagine hope
    to be like other sub-atomic particles,
    charmed and strange,
    as it ricochets its way
    through the human atmosphere,
    looking to bond
    with a host
    who stands on frozen earth,
    under azure skies,
    arms upturned
    and shivering slightly
    at the thought
    that today
    is really
    today.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I think this is superb. The allusions to quarks takes it to essentials, while the upraised arms could be an ocotillo or Joshua tree, comprising those particles yet apart from them. There’s lots for me to think about with this one.

    2. poetryshack Avatar
      poetryshack

      Perfect Jerry. I love to take on this. Sub-atomic hope!

    3. georgeplace2013 Avatar
      georgeplace2013

      Oh, this is wonderful… I love your take on hope.

    4. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Ooh, that’s chilling. And lovely. I have a visual of arms upturned and shivering slightly…very nice.

  60. poetryshack Avatar
    poetryshack

    Looks like some of the comments are misplaced…

  61. Susan Schoeffield Avatar
    Susan Schoeffield

    WHERE HOPE FINDS ME

    Abandoning dreams, fearing rejection,
    I was well-acquainted with crying.
    Wallowing in my lack of perfection
    made trusting in love not worth trying.

    I was chained to pillars of raw despair,
    but your candle would to stop burning.
    You entered my space with a love so rare,
    it released an unrestrained yearning

    to end my sadness. By loosening ties,
    hope now finds me alive in your eyes.

    © Susan Schoeffield

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      This is heart=warming work. Thanks.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      “You entered my space with a love so rare” – such a hopeful, lovely line…what a heartfelt piece…I’m with William, glad you shared it with us here.

  62. Where Hope Finds Me | Words With Sooze

    […] for the 2.16.14 “Take One Please” prompt at Creative Bloomings to write a poem using one of these titles: Culture Shock, True Blue, Where Hope Finds Me, A Waltz […]

  63. iaindouglaskemp Avatar
    iaindouglaskemp

    I haven’t so much as looked at a poem for months – mainly due to a visual issue, which thankfully is now behind me. Anyway, MA workload permitting, I hope to get back in the swing of things, at least a little!

    Culture Shock
    or
    On the transportation of Phil Ochs to the modern world

    Call it “Peace” or call it “Treason,”
    Call it “Love” or call it “Reason,”
    But I ain’t marchin’ any more, – Phil Ochs

    The Man, the hero, (well my hero anyway)
    Stepped out of the time machine
    He looked around
    He looked up and down
    He marvelled at the new
    He harked back to the old
    He whispered, he screamed, he cried:
    But what about the songs we sang?
    What about the marches we marched?
    Where did it all go wrong?
    Why have so many innocents died?

    He wondered at technology,
    He longed for simpler times
    He was undone by the misery
    And all the endless crimes
    But he stood tall and sure and stated once again
    We are only as strong as the weakest of men
    We are only as free as a padlocked prison door
    But why oh why did they not listen?
    Why did they not learn?
    Why does brother still kill brother?
    Why are the poor still trodden down?

    And I looked the great man, the voice of reason, in his eye
    And I told him I didn’t know
    I told him I was ashamed that I hadn’t done more
    I said that in the end I had given up
    I ain’t marching anymore
    And he laid his hand upon me
    And he spoke so soft and sweet and raised me from my knees
    To stand upon my feet
    He said I too, I think would have given up
    No more to fight the good fight, I fear
    Please, won’t you take me home now?
    He whispered through his tears.

    And in the darkness, in the long cold night
    I hope, I dream, I cry for wisdom and fortitude
    For courage and great strength
    But when history is my witness
    And I see that all I did was ‘ere in vain
    Then I too will leave here to be free of the sting,
    The agony, the shame.

    We did not listen to our poets nor hark our minstrels words
    And on and on we spiral down
    With each advance
    With each new toy
    We make out world a little worse
    But much worse by far is the truth
    For we do not listen still.

    Iain

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      This is heart- (and gut-) wrenching

      1. Iain Douglas Kemp Avatar
        Iain Douglas Kemp

        Thank you William.

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      Oh Mr.Kemp – how good to see you back, and penning poems! Buy what a piece…I remember Phil Ochs all too clearly, and it’s as if you brought him here and resurrected him through your words. I think you and I probably share some of the same sentiments (have marched enough, feel disenchanted by what has, and has not happened) but your poem tears at the heart…makes one reconsider one’s stance…It’s excellent Iain. Welcome back.

      1. iaindouglaskemp Avatar
        iaindouglaskemp

        Thanks so much Sharon. Phil Ochs was mu voice of conscience as a young man. I find it so frustrating that most of his words are still topical.

  64. janeshlensky Avatar
    janeshlensky

    Where Hope Finds Me

    Sometimes it counts to ten to let me hide;
    sometimes it seems to blossom from inside;
    sometimes it waits until I give it up
    and think of how I’ll reach fill my cup.

    It’s often barefoot, silent as a cat,
    or comes disguised with mustache, cape, or hat
    to make me squint to recognize and smile,
    “Hello, old friend. I’ve missed you. Stay a while.”

    For even when I put dreams on a shelf
    and, ever practical, I heal myself;
    and even when, afraid to wish or hope,
    I take my life in hand, steady my scope,

    there’s part of me that listens for footfalls
    of hope trying to find me behind walls,
    to gently take my hand and help me rise
    so hope can see the world using my eyes.

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      I love this, and especially that phrase, “footfalls of hope.”

    2. seingraham Avatar
      seingraham

      William stole the words out from under me….(not really, but that’s my favourite phrase as well)…this is an excellent piece Jane, so good.

  65. janeshlensky Avatar
    janeshlensky

    Love Never Ceases

    to prickle the pessimist in me—
    love, buddied up with negativity,
    so the eternal conversation plays
    of who or what’s worth loving,
    when love’s often abused,
    subordinated loves—if, when,
    as long as, limits and proofs
    laid on to help us justify
    our choices when love leads us
    to wade pain and doubt.

    And still I know—despite
    all reticence—to love,
    simple as that, because I can,
    because it’s free and endless
    as our faith in all that’s lovely,
    good, and kind, because love
    is not wasteful or useless, not ever.
    I know the problems of this world
    share the absence of love. I know
    love solves and heals; promises and
    laughs and shows us how hurts
    in the name of love make beautiful
    scars embossed on our Selves.

    My inner pessimist sees love holding hands
    with misery and waits for the first slap,
    knowing misery needs loving more than
    anything else in the world. It’s mine to do,
    yours too, to love without ceasing, so
    love never ceases.

    I enjoyed reading more about Sharon. Good prompts.

    1. Wm Preston Avatar
      Wm Preston

      This strikes me as thoughtful passion, or, perhaps, passionate thought. I think it outdoes St. Paul.

  66. seingraham Avatar
    seingraham

    Ah, good work William, I was trying to think what Jane’s poem reminded me of and that’s it…the verses you hear read at weddings sometimes, St.Paul’s love treatise from Corinthians, but you’re spot on about the difference, and why Jane has out-done him…Nicely done Jane.

  67. Michelle Hed Avatar
    Michelle Hed

    A Waltz of Words

    My words sometimes stumble,
    tripping over my tongue
    as I rub my eyes and grumble,
    blushing in embarrassment
    as my words rumble.

    I find my words sometimes dance
    as they flow from pen to paper,
    from my brain a joy filled prance
    or perhaps a stalagmite filled cave
    where words jab and stab like a lance.

    Sometimes my words arm wrestle
    in front of friend and foe alike,
    as we belly up to the trestle
    to break our bread and drink
    the wine that flows from the vessel.

    Once in a while my words waltz.
    They float across the expanse
    oozing with musical schmaltz,
    with wit and grace and
    nary any faults.

    But mostly my words stumble.

  68. seingraham Avatar
    seingraham

    “But mostly my words stumble” – boy, I can certainly relate to that sentiment…this is a neat poem, nicely turned out with great word use and turns of phrase…I like how you used the dance metaphor and other physical movements to mimic how it is to write…very nice.

  69. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    True Blue – (Sitting Lotus)

    You’ll find me buried,
    at the bottom
    of the deepest ocean.
    You’ll discover where I’ve
    caged myself
    within an ivory prison,
    I pursue the fault lines,
    cracked calcified ribs
    bones that once were home-
    abode for the largest of souls.
    You see,
    I seek proof of the start
    the very breath of corrupt purpose,
    the evidence and heartbeat
    of determined ill-intention-
    utter abandon of respect
    for our ultimate Mother.
    Yes,
    I search
    for the schism
    truth behind all this is-ness
    showing precisely,
    where
    who
    how
    and why…

    …why?
    I see she’s spear splintered
    and the Light sifts through
    such brokenness.
    I sit in her silted heart center,
    within the remains-
    that of the last
    of the great blue.

    Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2014

    Arthur C. Clarke, in his 1962 book Profiles of the Future, was the first prominent intellectual to call attention to the plight of the blue whale. He mentioned its large brain and said, “we do not know the true nature of the entity we are destroying.”

    Thank you Walt and to you, Sharon for bringing inspiration to the garden.

  70. seingraham Avatar
    seingraham

    Oh Hannah, this broke my heart…I just finished watching a documentary — I think it was called “Blackfish” about the catastrophic results of keeping orcas in captivity (former Sea-World trainers were the impetus behind this film being made and distributed, because of the number of human deaths that have happened, many of them unreported, in these types of aquariums). One of the things that was shown and discussed in detail during the film was the MRI’s done of whale brains and how it’s been discovered that there’s a section that is larger than in a human’s that indicates ability to feel and emote. The descriptions of mothers and calves being separated and the mothers grieving for days…ah…it defies imagining. I think we (as humans) need to step back and think before we do any more damage, especially in the seas. Your poem captures so nicely, these sentient, misunderstood gentle giants. Very well done

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    quillfyre

    A Waltz of Words

    Two poets, one small space,
    begin their poem in a waltz
    of words, each smooth line
    a sweet lilt like flowing water,
    till they reach rocks hidden in rapids.

    Here the poem turns, notes discordant
    his words no longer rhyme, their meter
    lost in a tangled jig of Irish charm as
    shallow as the water touching shore.

    Carol A. Stephen
    Feb. 21, 2014

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    seingraham

    Hi Carol,
    Glad I took one glance back here or I would’ve missed your lovely poem…especially love the last two lines in the final stanza…

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    quillfyre

    Thanks, Sharon! Sorry I almost missed you! Great job here for sure!