A poetic form created by Lencio Dominic Rodrigues, the Lento is named after it’s creator, taken from his first name Lencio and rhymed to Cento, an existing form of poetry.
A Lento consists of two quatrains with a fixed rhyme scheme of abcb, defe as the second and forth lines of each stanza must rhyme. To take it a step further, but not required, try rhyming the first and third lines as well as the second and forth lines of each stanza in this rhyming pattern: abab, cdcd. The fun part of this poem is thrown in here as all the FIRST words of each verse should rhyme. There is no fixed syllable structure to the Lento, but keeping a good, flowing rhythm is recommended.
For an added challenge, one may write a four-verse Lento and call it a Double Lento, or a six-versed Lento to become a Triple Lento.
Below is an example of a Lento:
Composed in winter of Two Thousand Five, (a)
Proposed by my dreams, this entire theme, (b)
Exposed now for all to write and have fun, (c)
Supposed to be easy though it doesn’t seem. (b)
Two verses of four lines each you will write, (d)
Do rhyme the beginning word in every line, (e)
Pursue to keep last rhymes in line 2 and 4, (f)
Chew your brain a little, you’ll do just fine! (e)
For a real fun challenge, try the Cross Lento: The cross Lento has been introduced in 2012. The cross lento was introduced to make Lento writing more fun. However, a cross lento is applicable only in cases of double, triple and lento chains, where the rhyme schemes in alternate quatrains are reversed, as seen in the following example:
a——b
a——c
a——b
a——c
d——f
e——f
d——f
e——f
WALT’S CROSS LENTO:
SHADOWS IN THE NIGHT
Night falls upon the lowly,
bright lights fade and shadows creep,
right before they slumber, they slowly
fight their weary eyes to sleep.
Morning sits, a vigil silent; still,
Moon and stars align at will,
warning midnight sprites upon the hill,
soon their lights will die, become nil.
Day will pass in its allotted time,
hay made as the sun shines, lingers.
May the world know night’s toils in rhyme,
saying all that a heart desires. Fingers
curl to grasp the darkened shroud,
mist descends to cover lovers avowed.
Hurl the pall so all can call out loud,
kissed by evening’s shadow so endowed.
© Copyright 2014 – Walter J Wojtanik
For this example, the above LENTO combines aspects of all variations. It is a LENTO, a DOUBLE LENTO, LINES 1 and 3 rhyme, LINES 2 and 4 rhyme, and it is indeed a CROSS LENTO.
For more information on Lencio Dominic Rodrigues and his LENTO form, visit these sites as well:
Shadow Poetry Poetry Soup Allpoetry
“How to Write a Lento”, an article by Lencio Dominic Rodrigues
Walt, this lento is amazing. It’s as if you’re juggling crystal glasses filled with champagne and not losing a single bubble. Color me WOWWWWWED.
That’s saying something, if I can wow you! Thanks, Jane.
Jane is right, though.Very impressive.
Once More
She said she’d never love again,
Three stabs at her heart had drained her,
“We” never lasted through the rain-
She’d wake alone…and close the door;
Love was dangerous, she gathered,
Filled your heart, betrayed, then shattered,
Wove elusive dreams, then withered,
Killed and maimed and left you bitter;
By this time she was exhausted,
Life seemed pointless, painful, weary;
Sky grew darker, light contested,
Eyes grew tired, spent and weary…
He burst into her world like flame,
To heal her heart and stop the rain,
He taught her how to trust again,
Drew her close, chasing doubts away.
© Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2014
This is a double lento and a cross lento. Lines 1 and 3 rhyme, as do lines 2 and 4. 🙂
Nicely done, Young one! You are strong with the verse! As always, May the Verse be with you! 😉 I couldn’t help myself! Walt.
Hehe, thank you, Master Walt! 😉 And may the Verse be with you (which it already is).
Erin, I love how you have adapted the form to the poetry: much better than squeezing the poem to fit the form!
Lento, slowly, largamento
Cento composition theft
Memento of my musical youth
Divertimento – there’s nothing left.
Tempo of a bygone age
Crescendo, diminuendo, up and down
Rallentando as the days go by
Sacramento – my time has flown.
At least giving me a form to work with gives me something to cling on to!
We’ll keep you holding on, Viv!
Thanks, Walt.
SABBATH
Come, sweet Shabbos, come again,
numb is my life without you.
Some would forsake you now and then,
dumb, they return anew,
chastened, chary, and contrite,
weary of life’s fight.
Hasten to my side, with fading light,
near me, brighten this night.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
Another impressive Preston. Like I’d expect anything less?
Beautifully and simply put, by someone who knows Shabbos up close and personal!
a lovely psalm, William. This form is challenging, but so fun to see what everyone does with it.
Non-Consento Lento
“I am extraordinarily patient, provided I get my own way in the end.” Margaret Thatcher
‘Conversation’ of a political nature often works best with some
moderation. Otherwise, things can soon turn disagreeable.
Dedication to principle echoes like the beat of a drum:
Obfuscation is foreseeable.
In other words, each side totally thinks they’re right.
Spin is how they get the point across.
Chagrin is what happens when they don’t win the night…
akin to each side’s perception that the other is full of dross.
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And you with forms? I have a hard time challenging the master, so I don’t even try, Randi. But am awed all the same!
This is another wowser. Gonna wind up in a browser and an example of how, sir, to write a lento now, sir.
😀
Where I am
I live as fraternity mother to the brothers
try and try to keep the calm, keep the peace
sigh, where else would I be if I had my druthers?
spy me lounging seaside alone if given a day pass release?
truth be told, I would decline
where I am, looks just fine
youth passes fast, my sons linked forever to my heart line
share today’s moments, tomorrow off on their own to shine
Here we go again: wowwww….
The best place to be is wherever you are, Robyn. Sounds like you have that figured out! Very nice. Walt.
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JUSTICE (lento)
Bart was a lawyer who had many clients;
smart, he viewed truth with consternation.
Heartless at times, he made browbeating science,
part of a tendency toward obfuscation.
One day, while he was arguing in court,
grand noises ensued, a loud, rolling snort.
Gunfire it was, the ultimate retort,
and Bart wound up in a police report.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
Aaaaand he’s off ladies and gentlemen!
THE HAPPY POETASTER
I write poems just for the fun of it.
Why, you ask, should you have none of it?
Fie, I say! Enjoy the whole run of it;
sky is the limit until you’re done of it.
Sonnets I’ve written, some in a group;
how I love cinquains when I have croup;
bonnets of blitzes I write in a loop;
now I’m creating some hot lento soup.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
REGRET
Stumbled through the daily fog.
Fumbled dreams have run their course.
Tumbled down a muddy bog,
crumbled by a callous force.
Feeling pain in every heartstring,
empty vows mean not a thing.
Reeling, words intent to sting
tempt me far from where I cling.
Holding on has lost its pleasure.
Moulding me to your designs,
scolding me as tarnished treasure,
folding me in crooked vines.
Powers I chose to neglect
touch the disappearing bliss.
Hours pass as I reflect.
Much has changed since our first kiss.
© Susan Schoeffield
Wonderful. I suspect Walt has opened some floodgates here.
Me and Lencio!
Thanks, William. Writing poetry is certainly carthartic.
A powerful force flows through this piece Susan!The rhymes work well and ring achingly to compliment your subject! Thank you. Walt.
Thanks, Walt. Much appreciated.
Walt, love the poem and I have to congratulate you for being one of the only people who has ever figured out a way for me to understand the a-b e-f patterns–colored words! Brilliant!!
Amen to that!
Thanks Sara. I will try to demonstrate those nuances when I can with the color coding. I find it helps me too. If you can “see” it, you can understand it.
Is color coding available to all of us, or just to administrators? Seems like there must be html tags for it.
There are HTML tags for it William. I will experiment in the comment section and see if they work there. It would be easier to trash can my efforts than someone’s poem.
No Bill. It appears that those color tags do not work in our comment boxes.
O.K., Walt. Thanks.
OK, I’ve tinkered for hours. Time to commit. We didn’t get so much snow, but it’s a beautiful morning here, a chamber music of ahhhhh. I tried to pull a Walt, but didn’t quite make it.
Eine Kleine Weiss Musik
(A Little White Music)
So white the world became today,
snow gloving trees like evening wear,
glow of the sun glancing away,
low limbs slow shake will strip them bare.
Tracks say night creatures were about,
and things with wings praise seeds and shout;
snacks under snow require they scout.
Grand doubts make us doubly devout.
A little snow makes all things bright—
a fiddle tune cardinal red,
a brittle glaze on wrong and right,
a griddle’s music, and we’re fed.
I’ve read this three times, and will read it some more. It’s a thorough delight, and I can see everything. It’s so good. Thanks.
Didn’t make it? Says who? Although, did you lose a stanza? I enjoyed the first word rhymes in the last. Beautiful mornings are made for poets!
Walt
Right you are, Walt. I just wrote until I had little more to say, creating a cup and a half lento almost double crossed 😉 I’ll work on this today.
OK, Walt, I reread the directions and now have a triple lento, double crossed, with a double scoop of rhymed ending. Don’t know what that’s called. By the time I finish tinkering with this poem, my inspiration will have melted 😉
Eine Kleine Weiss Musik (A Little White Music)
So white the world became today,
snow gloving trees like evening wear,
glow of the sun glancing away;
low limbs’ slow shake will strip them bare.
Tracks say night creatures were about,
and things with wings praise seeds and shout;
snacks under snow require they scout.
Grand doubts make us doubly devout.
In silence, air hollow as drums,
spin snowflakes hissing in their falls
lending a static swell of hums,
sending a call to cardinals.
Just like a symphony at play,
birds fill white noise tweeting away;
trust will conduct snow songs’ foray.
Word flakes swirl in my head today.
Why is it silence must be filled
by what we have ready at hand—
sighs, wings, imagination spilled
like ink on paper, poems planned?
A little snow makes all things bright—
a fiddle tune a bluebird’s flight,
a brittle glaze on wrong and right,
a riddle’s lullaby. Good night.
This is precious.
GOOD ADVICE BUT IS HE LISTENING?
Crazy from so many flirtation with street drugs,
Hazy in the upper story, a brainless
Lazy fool who callS workers “pawns of the Man,”
Daisy plucker wasting away time: aimless.
Bill, don’t you think today’s the day to wake up?
Fill your empty hours with worthwhile things?
Will yourself to climb out of that deep dark funk?
Kill the blues and see what a new morning brings.
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I don’t know how I missed this earlier. Wonderful, and that last line is superb, in my view.
TESTING COLOR
still no color?
Afghan Hound
Black mask, long hair, long head, top knot
Back of the tail curls ‘round, so cute
White, gray, brown, golden, black a lot
Bright, playful, dignified, aloof
Fine old breed from Afghanistan
Line bred to hunt and watch the herds
They’ve high hip bones and run, they can!
Brave and elegant beyond words
I’d forgotten what those sight hounds look like. I looked it up, and your description is spot on. Wonderful.
Connie, the blend of rhymes is wonderful and even the near rhyme keeps this grand work flowing nicely. Walt
Walt, I cannot get over how well your poem flows. I found this quite difficult.
A Little Faith
Stranded on this dark road,
handed a map I cannot read.
Scanned it under flashlight, then
demanded you take the lead.
Surprised you found a gas station;
surmised we were not far.
Realized you always come through.
Chastised, my silence filled the car.
These are harder than they look, I discovered, but Walt warned us (above): “Supposed to be easy though it doesn’t seem.” I could feel that final line of yours; it was like a deflating tire. Nice job, in my opinion.
Thanks, William.
Thanks Sara. The trick is in getting the first word rhymes to fit. The end rhymes seem less difficult. Your difficulty paid off quite well. I like this piece! Walt
Thanks, Walt.
WAYWARD WIND (lento)
Breezes are wafting along the barren ground,
seizing the sands and taunting the desert air.
We are alone, myself and the haunting sound,
fleeing from certainty; going, we know not where.
Maybe the breeze and I will come to naught,
saving ourselves for rain that will not come;
day after day we wander, sore and distraught,
weighing our chances that we will matter to some.
© copyright 2014, William Preston
Well, I guess this doesn’t follow the rules: the first words are supposed to rhyme, not merely the first syllables.
As part of the rhyme scheme, what’s a syllable among friends? Rhymes, part-rhymes and near-rhymes all sound the same to me!
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