PUZZLE PIECES – PROMPT #111

Today, you are given random nudges, the replies to which will become the pieces to your poetic puzzle.

1. Your mother’s first name.
2. A wild  animal.
3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to.
4. A hobby.
5. A mode of transportation.
6. Your least favorite vegetable.
7. A “lucky” number.
8. Your favorite color.
9. Three random words.
10. Historical event.
11. A childhood friend.
12. The street on which you grew up.

You can write in any form, meter and rhyme scheme.

Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.

MAYBE MARIE:

Patricia’s Summer (a haibun)

Though it was November and quite chilly for the locals, its touch and texture was summer to Patricia as she walked the early morning beaches of Naples.   She strolled leisurely, taking mental note of individual grains of sand as they caressed her toes.  She considered the beached sea kale, noticing minute nuances of emerald tones.  She bent to pick up a particularly lovely shade, when she spotted a baby seahorse — no longer alive, but perfectly formed.  Patricia coddled her in her palm, contemplating whether or not to return her to the gulf of her birth.  Instead, she wrapped her in sea kale, and placed her in her pocket with coquina and golden olive.   She smiled as she recalled lessons learned on Belmont as a child – lessons of the Calusa “Shell Indians.”  Her childhood friend, Summer, loved to learn and speak of early Indian tribes.  She was the one who had introduced Patricia to this little-known tribe.  Now here she was on their beaches, far from her northern roots — farther still in distant time and culture.  Stroking the smooth shells in her pocket, she pondered these resourceful shell seekers, and mourned their extinction
 
Returning home, Patricia re-opened a letter from Summer, to which she had not taken time to respond.  She reached for the ornate treasure box Summer had made for her years ago.  In it, she placed her letter, the shells, kale, and seahorse, a dozen grains of beach sand, and her obituary.  She placed the box on a sun-dappled shelf, and marked it “Forever Summer.”      
 
Branch beyond your roots
Be mindful in the present
Gather memories
 
© Copyright Marie Elena Good – 2013

SURELY WALT:

IRENE’S GARDEN

Roller skates without a key
were useless as anyone can see,
And Irene truly knew the score
(though she’s never been to Baltimore)

She planted butt upon the couch
but sat upon her tiger (ouch)
which gave the large cat cause to cry,
and a piece of Irene’s rhubarb pie.

Her friend Susie lived on Wood Street,
her house was Navy Blue
with fourteen pickets in her fence
(you could see right through).

Susie had a veggie garden
that she dug with a spoon,
to make a dish to go with fish,
to eat walking on the moon.

Irene and Susie were in tune,
in fact, they were connecting,
but were caught raiding mail boxes,
(they called it, stamp collecting!)

© Copyright Walter J. Wojtanik – 2013

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  1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
    Erin Kay Hope

    I couldn’t decide what form to use, so this is just a little bit sloppy. 😉

    Shannon’s Spell

    She lay still in the soft, green grass,
    Eyes wide open, DREAMILY absent;
    And she imagined herself passing
    Through the streets of DUBLIN,
    At length finding herself standing
    On the banks of the River SHANNON;
    She’d often LONGED that she could be there;
    She was in love with all things Irish.
    Perhaps it was the interesting fact
    That her name meant Ireland,
    Or that her mother’s name was the same
    As a river that ran its course through Ireland.
    Or perhaps the mention of the place
    Had cast a strange SPELL on her,
    Maybe that explained it.
    She wanted to soar like a BIRD,
    FLYING over the AQUAMARINE of the Atlantic Ocean,
    Landing peacefully next to the beautiful river,
    Away from all hustle and bustle,
    Far, far away from the familiar surroundings
    Of WALLER ROAD, and her studies of
    The interesting, but disappointing VIETNAM WAR;
    And she would take AMY with her;
    They’d fly together…

    She blinked slowly seven times,
    And woke up;
    Green beans and CAULIFLOWER scented the air –
    She was lying near the garden;
    She was back to reality,
    But she smiled as she remembered her daydream,
    And picked up her camera to SNAP SOME PHOTOS…

    © Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2013

    1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Even though I like cauliflower, I can see how its smell would wake one up.

      1. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
        Sharp Little Pencil

        Ditto, Laurie…

      2. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
        http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

        My comment to you slipped down a bit. Technincompoop that I am!

        1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
          Erin Kay Hope

          I saw your comment. Thanks, Viv. 🙂

      3. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Yes, it has a very pungent odor. 😉 Thanks for reading, Laurie and Amy.

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      “Perhaps it was the interesting fact
      That her name meant Ireland,
      Or that her mother’s name was the same
      As a river that ran its course through Ireland.”

      I really like this portion…it stands out to me for some reason…I was thinking about name meanings, too…I never knew my mom’s name means young.

      Great job, Erin!

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Thank you so much, Hannah! I love to figure out name meanings. The name Erin has several, but I tend to prefer Ireland. Thanks for reading! ❤

    3. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      “…Eyes wide open, DREAMILY absent…” :D!!! I can relate!!

      1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Yes. I like this line as well. Very much.

        Lovely job, Erin!
        Marie Elena

        1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
          Erin Kay Hope

          Thank you, Marie, that means a lot. 🙂

      2. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Haha, thanks, Hen! Sometimes I find myself just staring up at the sky, completely lost in thought, or a daydream. 🙂

        1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
          Henrietta Choplin

          … yep … me too… 🙂 !!

  2. ejparsons Avatar
    ejparsons

    Greta’s Brush

    Such attention given to Snowball
    Aptly named, a seven year old fur ball
    A lion at heart
    She’d tear you apart
    Like the day the Third Reich did fall

    Some say she came from Miami
    Stowed away in an airplane belly
    She made it somehow
    Lives on Silver Street now
    Knitting carpets with claws is her hobby

    Greta gave Snowball a nice home
    Keeps her clean with a brush and a comb
    Snowball has a bed
    Bright tomato red
    Her friend Gina bought it in Rome

    (C) 2013 Earl Parsons

    1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Aww…

      I used a plane and knitting, too.

    2. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      and me. I liked the dream – a good way to incorporate the zany prompt words.

    3. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      My above comment was meant for Erin!

      I think your Greta’s Brush is wonderful.

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Wow. Impressive that you managed such a great rhyme and cadence throughout, Earl. Fun stuff!

      Marie Elena

    5. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Impressive, Earl. I love your rhyme scheme! 🙂

  3. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    A BROUHAHA FOR ELIZABETH

    Elizabeth, from Roxborough Road,
    was frightened by a horny toad
    upon a street in Tallahassee.
    The toad was green and somewhat sassy;
    round as eggplant, it boasted seven
    brown-basted spots and warts, eleven.
    So frightened was Liz, she called on Shirley
    thinking that certainly Shirley surely
    would leave her painting, hop on her bike,
    and use her brains on the toady tyke.
    Well, Shirley came, a great brouhaha
    ensued, it could be heard in Baja;
    the toad was bested, it lost the battle
    and ribbeted out its last death rattle.
    so Liz and Shirley’s personal Midway
    was won on a Tallahassee skidway.

    copyright 2013, William Preston

    1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Enjoyed this!

    2. sheryl kay oder Avatar
      sheryl kay oder

      Oh, my goodness! You used the words and put a rhyme at the end of each line. I’m impressed.

    3. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      fun poem – clever to use rhyme. I like toads, though!

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Oh my goodness. What a fun read!!

      Marie Elena

    5. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Wow! Good one, William!

  4. William Preston Avatar
    William Preston

    Marie, I did not want to go through that minefield again and attempt a haibun within the specifications of the prompt, but the form is intriguing. Apparently, it’s supposed to be a combination of a prose poem and a haiku. Can it also combine straight prose with haiku and/or senryu? I ask for two reasons: I have no idea what a “prose poem” is, and the latter part of your example looks more like senryu than haiku, as I understand (or, more likely, don’t understand) it.

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Good morning William!

      Prose poetry is written in prose, rather than verse. What makes it “poetry” is the increased poetic imagery/emotion. And you are absolutely right about my “haiku.” It would most definitely fit into the senryu category. Modern haiku very often crosses that line, or is even simply misnamed. Your understanding is spot on! 😉

      Marie Elena

      1. William Preston Avatar
        William Preston

        Thank you for the clarification. I will try a haibun, albeit not, as I said, with that minefield of prompts you and Walt doled out this time. That was tough, if fun; even so, I think I’d prefer a bath with Fels Naptha soap.

        1. RJ Clarken Avatar
          RJ Clarken

          hahaha!

        2. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
          Sharp Little Pencil

          William, you caught me offguard with that remark, and I squirted coffee out my nose!!! Amy

          1. William Preston Avatar
            William Preston

            I apologize for that mishap. It does remind me of what we used to call a “Danny Thomas take,” though.

        3. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
          Poetic Bloomings

          Teehee! I totally understand. 😉

          Marie Elena

  5. ejparsons Avatar
    ejparsons

    Greta’s Restaurant

    As children, Greta and Jill would often dream
    Dream of what they’d like to do in the future
    Future plans were made of a restaurant in red
    Red doors and walls and thirteen white tables
    Tables all arranged like the streets of a city
    City scenes on the walls in life-like murals
    Murals of Sydney, Shanghai, and Mexico City
    City after city, all with a little history
    History like Revolutions, Independence and more
    More on each wall, all painted by Greta
    Greta’s paintings and food would bring in the customers
    Customers hungry like wolves at a feast
    Feast your eyes on the magnificent veggie bar
    Bar those black olives from my salad plate
    Plate those meals at the Silver Street Diner
    Diners drive there from hither and yon

    © 2013 Earl Parsons

    1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      I don’t like olives either! You make a nice story poem.

      1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        I like it too, Earl. AND olives. 😉

        Marie Elena

    2. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Nice!

  6. RJ Clarken Avatar
    RJ Clarken

    Elaine’s Earworm

    “Yeah, yeah, yeah.” On the evening of February 9, 1964,
    the Beatles were on Ed Sullivan.
    We lived on Tyrone Road back then
    and Kathy lived next door.

    If I could take the Tardis for a spin
    I’d like to time travel back to London in the late 1800s
    (or maybe just revisit Tyrone Road in 1964.)
    I might even eat some broccoli if I could do this.

    But I can’t time travel,
    so I won’t eat broccoli
    even ‘though my mom must have asked me to do so
    at least a bazillion times.

    “Yeah, yeah, yeah.” On the evening of February 9, 2013,
    I sat and stared at my cell phone
    whose phone case is in midnight blue
    with a Nittany Lion logo stamped on the back. But I digress…

    I thought about the phone conversation Mom and I just had.
    Mom mentioned that she had spoken recently with Kathy’s mom
    who told her that Kathy was still living in Berlin (or was it Brussels now?)
    In any event, it was a long way from Tyrone Road.

    But the thing is, years ago, I lost touch with Kathy
    (and yes, I still won’t eat broccoli.)
    Then, I put down my phone and picked up a pencil
    and doodled a picture of two little girls who once were friends.

    ###

    1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Love this, RJ!

    2. RJ Clarken Avatar
      RJ Clarken

      BTW…I forgot to give my answers, so here they are:

      1. Your mother’s first name – Elaine;
      2. A wild animal – Nittany Lions
      3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to – Brussels
      4. A hobby – doodling
      5. A mode of transportation – Tardis
      6. Your least favorite vegetable – Broccoli
      7. A “lucky” number. – bazillion
      8. Your favorite color – Midnight Blue
      9. Three random words – Cell phone, Earworm, pencil
      10. Historical event – The Beatles appeared on Ed Sullivan for the first time, February 9, 1964
      11. A childhood friend – Kathy
      12. The street on which you grew up – Tyrone Road

      Thanks, Marie and Walt – and thank you, Laurie!

    3. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      RJ, the repeated “Yeah, yeah, yeah” goes both ways… This was too much fun, though. And your take on broccoli is great, even though I love it almost as much as asparagus, or as we call it, asspergrass! Brill. Amy

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Ditto! 😀

    4. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      I love this. You could try Facebook or Friends Re-united to find Kathy. I hope you do.

    5. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      …just had to go to Youtube to hear “…She Loves you, yeah, yeah, yeah…” :D!!

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        ~ ❤ ~

    6. Andrew Kreider Avatar
      Andrew Kreider

      Not too many poems include a Tardis sighting. Love this one!

    7. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      You get me every time, RJ. EVERY stinkin’ time. 😀

      Marie Elena

  7. Laurie Kolp Avatar
    Laurie Kolp

    Kathleen’s Hiccup

    Kathleen and Gabriela sipped
    Mimosas on the plane, a girl’s only
    trip to Savannah their weekend plans.
    To their left, a man was knitting
    while a baby slept in its mother’s lap
    holding tight a stuffed cheetah.
    One sip too many and a rank odor
    filled the air, like Brussel Sprouts
    or cabbage cooked too long, a smell
    strong enough to sink the Titanic.
    Kathleen squeezed Gabriela’s yellow
    sleeve, a rush of bile in her throat,
    her urge to vomit stronger than a hiccup,
    faster than a grab of bag release.

    1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      I wish my colored text had shown up. Anyway, here are my answers:

      1. Your mother’s first name. Kathleen
      2. A wild animal. cheetah
      3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to. Savannah
      4. A hobby. knitting
      5. A mode of transportation. plane
      6. Your least favorite vegetable. Brussel Sprouts
      7. A “lucky” number. One
      8. Your favorite color. yellow
      9. Three random words. sipped, hiccup, squeeze
      10. Historical event. Titanic
      11. A childhood friend. Gabriela
      12. The street on which you grew up. Mimosa (Drive)

      1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
        http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

        Great stuff. I really like your random words – how did you choose them?

        1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
          Laurie Kolp

          Randomly… = )

    2. Willyam Preston Avatar
      Willyam Preston

      Funnn-eee. A bit sickening but funnn-eee.

      1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
        Laurie Kolp

        Thanks… I wasn’t completely awake when I wrote this…

    3. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      Yikes, I just about ralphed when I read this, but it was from laughter, not nausea! Sometimes those just-woke-up bits are the best… Amy

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Yikes!!

    4. jlynn sheridan Avatar
      jlynn sheridan

      I was watching the man knitting and then suddenly felt my breakfast churning in my tummy. Stop the plane! Let me off! Fun poem!

      1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Yes, yes, yes! And yikes, and fun! 😀

        Marie Elena

    5. Andrew Kreider Avatar
      Andrew Kreider

      Love how you drew this one in tightly, making that crazy grab-bag of words flow coherently!

    6. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Oh dear!

  8. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
    Henrietta Choplin

    Fun prompt!

  9. David Avatar
    David

    Amazing piece Marie! Walt, yours drew a hearty, much needed smile!

    I rebel the form this week in honor of my Mother, who went home yesterday. Will return later to read everyone’s masterpieces. Following link shares some of what came to mind in the middle of the night as we watched her make the journey home. Also wrote/posted a piece for Mother’s day “Mom” which describes Mom to a T on the same Blog if you wish to see it, just scroll back.

    Mom’s Final Voyage

    1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      Oh, so Beautiful, David… I am so sorry for your loss…

      1. David Avatar
        David

        Thanks Henrietta

    2. jlynn sheridan Avatar
      jlynn sheridan

      So sorry, David, for the loss of your mom.

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Me too… Beautiful poem, David!

    3. sheryl kay oder Avatar
      sheryl kay oder

      Well done, David. A fitting tribute.

      1. David Avatar
        David

        Thank you Sheryl

  10. Puzzle Pieces | Gene's Musings

    […] poem answered the Puzzle Piece challenge at Poetic Bloomings. I was given random prompts that all had to form the poem. Here they […]

    1. ewdupler Avatar
      ewdupler

      Hazel Train

      My best friend, ran so hard from here
      as boys from artichokes.
      He left as if a dog to steak
      you’d never have to coax.

      ‘twas Market street he barreled down,
      ‘cause he saw it coming.
      Like an army bound for Moscow
      strongly was forthcoming.

      It charged as if through fields of green,
      an orient express,
      Past lakes of blue and mountains tall,
      while causing some distress.

      A crazed hyena driving it,
      conductor for the day.
      In 50 blocks or just one more,
      she’d surely find her prey.

      Once you’re pinned beneath the wheel,
      prepare to acquiesce.
      There won’t be pain, though now you’ll hear
      the Gettysburg Address.

      Those lectures always packed a punch
      like words that formed a bomb.
      Next time skip the running down
      and listen to your mom!

      1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        What an interesting and excellent piece! Glad to have you with us, Gene.

        Marie Elena

      2. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Haha! Love the last stanza! 😀

  11. jacquelinecaseypoetry Avatar
    jacquelinecaseypoetry

    (Mother’s first name, wild animal, city, hobby, mode of transport, ugly vegetable, lucky number, fav color, 3 random words, historical event,
    friend, street where you grew up, Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.)

    “Olga Origami”

    OLGA was the name her mother gave her;
    at birth she made a sound like caterwaul.
    Wild and distant as the Bengal TIGER.
    To MOZAMBIQUE; that place where’s she’s enthralled.

    She flies by BROOM and carries in her purse
    a coin mark`ed THIRTEEN; colored GOLD.
    Her ORIGAMI hobby is a curse;
    so, folded on the plate her OKRA cold.

    At KITTY HAWK, she watches Orville fly
    and screeching with the ugliest of glee
    she motions with her POWERS fond goodbye
    as trav`ling to her home she will now flee.

    This tiger in the TANGLED-WOOD of night
    is off to fold her paper into fright.

    1. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      Jac, this is spooky and fun. Amy

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Your first two sentences ROCK, Jackie!! You really ran with this challenge…I enjoyed this! 🙂

    3. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Love this!

    4. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      This is SO very creative!!

    5. Andrew Kreider Avatar
      Andrew Kreider

      Love the final line especially – putting a bow on the origami theme. Nicely done indeed.

    6. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Our queen of the sonnet reigns! Wow! And yes, your final couplet is AMAZING.

      Marie Elena

    7. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      This is great, Jacqueline! Spookily sweet. 😉

    8. jacquelinecaseypoetry Avatar
      jacquelinecaseypoetry

      Thanks, all you guys, for your kind comments.

  12. Patricia A. Hawkenson Avatar
    Patricia A. Hawkenson

    Fran’s Woven Glass

    There is a tapestry of life
    with distorted dreams
    and chaotic threads
    that pull one day
    into the next.

    First one, then two,
    then a blurring of a thousand
    oil stained slats
    that form a fallen ladder
    holding up the train
    as it fills the blue sky
    with blackened soot.

    And all the rubbing inside
    can’t clear the outside
    nor bullet stop the frantic love
    that drove Bonnie and Clyde
    to lay upon the dust
    of a desolate road
    deep in the piney woods.

    So little Polly and I
    couldn’t know our path
    as we made hollyhock dolls
    and set them floating
    in a kitchen platter dance
    on Curry Street.

    1. Patricia A. Hawkenson Avatar
      Patricia A. Hawkenson

      Sorry, I posted an earlier draft instead of the final version.
      It should read:

      Fran’s Woven Glass

      There is a tapestry of life
      with distorted dreams
      and chaotic threads
      that pull one day
      into the next.

      First one, then two,
      then a blurring of a thousand
      oil stained slats
      that form a fallen ladder
      holding up the train
      as it fills the blue sky
      with cheetah blackened soot.

      And all the rubbing inside
      can’t clear the outside
      nor bullets stop the frantic love
      that drove Bonnie and Clyde
      to lie upon the dust
      of a desolate road
      deep in the piney woods.

      So little Polly and I
      couldn’t know our paths
      as we made hollyhock dolls
      and set them floating
      first one, then two,
      in a rutabaga platter dance
      blurring a thousand dreams
      of ours on Curry Street.

      Words:
      Fran, cheetah, woods, glass, train, rutabaga, two, blue, chaotic, distorted, woven, Bonnie and Clyde, Polly, Curry Street.

      1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
        Hannah Gosselin

        This feels so dream like and I love where you gather us in to…floating these dolls…really unique, Patricia!

      2. Laurie Kolp Avatar
        Laurie Kolp

        Love this… especially the 3rd stanza.

      3. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Your title is very intriguing…

      4. jlynn sheridan Avatar
        jlynn sheridan

        Beautiful writing.

      5. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        I read this several times, Patricia. Each time, I get more and more out of it. It is so intriguing and beautifully written. Well done!

        Marie Elena

        1. William Preston Avatar
          William Preston

          Same here

      6. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Love this! Beautiful!

  13. jlynn sheridan Avatar
    jlynn sheridan

    Mine’s a little sloppy, too.

    MARIJEAN’S BELIEF

    If you only charged into each day as if it were the Lewis and Clark expedition, you’d find all the adventure you could ever dream.

    That was Marijean’s belief anyway.
    So, one day Pat and I gave it go.

    We bared our toes, packed a lunch of lima beans and cod,
    hopped on our bikes and rode around London pretending we were we were our own corp of discovery–cougars on the prowl for a new horizon.

    For seven months we dug up those trails chasing imaginary adventures, chasing away the monotony of clocks, chasing predators and prey and then one hot day we chased each other into a calligraphy shoppe on Vail Ave where we inked our names in indigo requesting the pleasure of your company at the expedition our nuptial knot.

    Words: Marijean cougar London calligraphy bicycle lima beans 7 indigo charge belief toes Lewis and Clark expedition Pat Vail Ave.

    1. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      Jlynn, this is fabulous. A runaway train of a piece, and rollicking good fun! Amy

    2. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Delightful and imaginative.

    3. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      🙂 !!

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      I’m thrilled with the variety this prompt has inspired. This piece is so creative!

      Marie Elena

    5. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Very imaginative, Jlynn! 🙂

  14. connielpeters Avatar
    connielpeters

    People in this poem are fictional but not the floods.

    Helen’s Boast

    HELEN sits at her desk
    DRAWING ink landscapes.
    Her eyes a PURE PERIWINKLE blue
    sparkle as we beg her
    to tell us the story.

    Helen always began
    with a LAUGH and this BOAST,
    “The hail was big as BRUSSEL SPROUTS
    as I pedaled my BICYCLE down SHANNON CREEK ROAD
    about SEVEN on a summer evening in 1977.

    “I knew the gray clouds,
    dark, mean and low,
    could bring a storm as bad
    as any of the ones which caused
    the other two JOHNSTOWN FLOODS.

    “My muscles moved strong
    and rhythmic like a PANTHER,
    racing against the storm.
    The ice balls pummeled me,
    then came the hammering rain.

    “My friends JENNIFER and SYDNEY
    built their cabin unwittingly
    in the lowlands by the river.
    Halfway there I had to abandon my bike
    and run along the flooded road.

    “I made it to the cabin as the water
    reached their porch step.
    I banged on the door.
    They came out wondering
    if I had gone mad.

    “We fled in their Chevy.
    Eighty-six lives were lost that night.
    But not eighty-eight.
    Your grandparents made it.”
    “Thanks!” we say and run off to play.

    1. jlynn sheridan Avatar
      jlynn sheridan

      Connie, My family and I visited a dear friend in Johnstown who told us the story and took us up and down the inclined plane.

      1. connielpeters Avatar
        connielpeters

        I was eighteen and spent the summer with my sister in Cheyenne so I missed the whole thing, and came back to quite a different place.

    2. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      This is the second mention of Brussels sprouts I’ve read (working my way up). They’re going to get a complex! Nicely done, this. Amy

      1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
        Laurie Kolp

        Yep, Brussel Sprouts are definitely my least favorite vegetable.

    3. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      Loved: “…Helen always began/ with a laugh…”, and, “… My muscles moved strong/and rhythmic…”

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Excellent, Connie. So very descriptive and engaging.

      Marie Elena

    5. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      This is wonderful, Connie!

  15. sheryl kay oder Avatar
    sheryl kay oder

    This poem took more time than it was worth, but it was the best way I knew how to write it.

    My idea came from the second word I had chosen: junk. The only thing I could think of was the fact that Mother has many items in her bedroom, simply because there is little other space for her things in our house. I pictured her as having a disagreement with an unknown person who was appalled at what they considered her junk. Not every picture in the poem is sitting in her room, but they are old pictures we have somewhere in the house.

    I started with prose and then whittled words as much as I could. It seemed so prosaic, so I decided to rhyme two lines in each stanza. Some of it is a bit forced, but I did finish it. Hooray!

    Mildred’s Junk?

    PARDON me? These items are not JUNK.
    Books may collect dust, but it’s bunk
    not to appreciate the written word.

    The LEOPARD-spotted robe on my bed
    stays. And as I have often said,
    put those SCISSORS down.

    You will not cut pictures to bring
    your concept of order here. And that ring
    is a favorite of mine.

    See the picture of CHERYL over there?
    She stands on BROOK STREET where
    we lived when she and Sheryl Kay were young.

    Mike is wearing his uniform in that shot.
    It was during WORLD WAR II, and the spot
    where we met I’ll never forget.

    You might wonder why Michael looks so small
    next to that bridge. People are not all
    that is important in PHOTOGRAPHY.

    You want JUNK? You are welcome to eat
    those BRUSSELS SPROUTS. Take my seat
    at this table. Too bad they are a pretty GREEN.

    Now take your TRAIN back home.
    Then why don’t you simply roam
    around VENICE for a SEVEN-month tour.

    Just don’t bring home any souvenir JUNK.

    1. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      Love all the junk in this one – and unless they are roasted with olive oil and fingerling potatoes and onions and peppers, I am with you on the Brussels sprouts!! Amy

    2. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      What we think as junk is a treasure to someone.

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        OM Gee… absolutely… I have discontinued my usual habit of trying to throw away all of my folks’ J-WORD clutter… ha, ha, ha… 😀 !!

    3. jlynn sheridan Avatar
      jlynn sheridan

      Oh, this is my mother to the T. And I almost used brussel sprouts, too. ick.

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Love this:

      “You might wonder why Michael looks so small
      next to that bridge. People are not all
      that is important in PHOTOGRAPHY. ”

      Great write.

      Marie Elena

    5. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Gotta love all that junk!! 😀

  16. sheryl kay oder Avatar
    sheryl kay oder

    Walt, I love your poem, especially the last two lines.

  17. Andrew Kreider Avatar
    Andrew Kreider

    Love this prompt!

    Here’s my words: Eleanor, San Francisco, shark, braiding, U-boat, celery, seven, blue, Pearl Harbor, Katie, 8th Street, peach, Everest, hurricane lamp

    Eleanor’s Everest

    Even before war broke out, one could
    see it in her eyes. those early photographs,
    defiant in her boarding school blues,
    a runaway in the shadow of Everest.

    Pearl Harbor brought tragedy, displacement,
    seven months home, zigzagging troubled seas,
    while German U-boats lurked like sharks.
    There was danger in the depths, she learned that well.

    Unsettled, she became an alien on Eighth Street,
    braiding her hair in henna-flecked lines while curry
    cooked in the kitchen. The horizon was flat here,
    the people plain as celery. She ran from school again.

    Seventy years later, she is still running, matching every
    Midwestern storm with a hurricane lamp on the
    basement stairs, tracing the rows of peaches,
    the map of the world, the picture of Katie and me.

    All the mountains she has yet to climb.

    1. Andrew Kreider Avatar
      Andrew Kreider

      .. and of course, San Francisco fell off the map in some revision along the way. Too many Germans and Midwesterners running around!

      1. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
        Sharp Little Pencil

        I don’t know about the Germans, but Madison is officially feeling rather defensive. ha ha ha Nicely done, Andrew! But HOW could you forget SF? Where I come from that’s sacrilege, darling! Amy

        1. Andrew Kreider Avatar
          Andrew Kreider

          I just gotta go to SF, Amy. Then I will NEVER forget it again!

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      I really enjoy the visual in your closing stanza, Andrew and the way that you tied in your title with your last line! I can tell you loved this prompt! 🙂

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Oh, so do I! Wonderful poem, Andrew!

    3. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Such vivid images… I really like the 3rd stanza, Andrew.

    4. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      “…There was danger in the depths, she learned that well…” !!

    5. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      You had me at the title, Andrew. Nicely done!

      Marie Elena

  18. Jill’s Reservoir | Metaphors and Smiles Avatar
    Jill’s Reservoir | Metaphors and Smiles

    […] PUZZLE PIECES – PROMPT #111 […]

  19. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    I really enjoyed this!! I also REALLY enjoyed both of your examples, Walt and Marie…the humor in yours Walt and Marie…WOW…this is such rich writing!! I really love your prose style…your details and the tale itself are a fresh breath. Thank you both!
    ~
    Jill’s Reservoir
    ~
    Eleven green lima beans.
    She saved them from the day,
    the hour of the assassination of Abe.
    She stuffed them in her pocket,
    hopped on her bicycle and rode.
    She pedaled till she was ragged,
    sliding from the seat
    she rushed to the pebble speckled bank-
    named herself Christina,
    became a spotted leopard;
    camouflaged from the world,
    she was hidden from the planet
    that would allow such a tragedy.
    She devised a plan.
    She’d become an avid spelunker,
    mine Jade in the moonlight,
    (for lack of gold).
    She drew maps in the sand,
    counted copper pennies-
    placed them in a line,
    (heads up for good luck),
    tallied the days till she’d leave for Denver;
    she plotted deep dotted streaks
    these, for her Rocky ridge expedition.
    She was bound by blood,
    it would be her Robin-hood road days,
    she’d be a hero
    packing poignant words,
    those of her favored president:
    “Am I not destroying my enemies when I make friends of them?”
    She’d give them each a stone
    from her careful quarrying.
    She’d gift a gem to each of her enemies
    hoping to extinguish the flame of hatred,
    finally.
    ~
    Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2013
    ~
    These are my puzzle pieces:
    1. Jill
    2. Leopard
    3. Denver
    4. Spelunking
    5. Bicycle
    6. Lima Beans
    7. Eleven
    8. Green
    9. Appalachian reservoir jade
    10. Assassination of Abe
    11. Christina
    12. Robinhood Road
    ~
    Plus I used this quote: “Am I not destroying my enemies when I make friends of them?” – Abraham Lincoln

    I’ll be back my friends…it’s late here for me. Warm smiles 🙂

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      I had just returned to say my character wouldn’t have been eating lima beans at 10:25 at night when he was shot or at 7:25 in the morning when he actually passed…I did a little fact finding on the time of Abe’s death…my thought was more @ dinner-time…yeah, I’m being a little knit-picky but I was curious. 🙂

      1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
        Laurie Kolp

        I love this, Hannah.

        1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
          Henrietta Choplin

          Yes… !!

    2. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I think this is stunning. Excellent.

    3. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Thanks for your kind and generous comments, Sweet Hannah!

      What an imaginative and well penned piece. Wow … so many phrases that impress me. You never disappoint!!

      Marie

    4. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Love this! Especially those last two lines: marvelous! 🙂

  20. Nancy Posey Avatar
    Nancy Posey

    Okay: I got most of them in:
    1. Barbara
    2. coyote
    3. Austin
    4. pottery
    5. Bicycle
    6. Yam
    7. 27
    8. red
    9. dawn’s early light
    10. D Day
    11. Elaine
    12. Patsy Drive
    You can write in any form, meter and rhyme scheme.
    Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.

    Barbara Early

    Never one to sleep in, she slipped out of bed,
    walked out to the end of the driveway
    for the paper thrown from the window
    of a car with a noisy muffler,
    not a small boy on a bicycle
    as she remembered years ago
    collecting twenty-seven cents
    every Saturday morning.

    She sat reading at the kitchen table
    while the coffee brewed, hardly seeing
    the red sun rise over her shoulder,
    never even noticed the coyotes
    howling far beyond the fence line,
    lost in thoughts that over formed
    themselves into prayers of thanks,
    not for dreams that came true,
    but for blessings she never dreamed
    of asking before they arrived
    unbidden, the sorrows averted.

    These rare quiet moments alone
    were enough. She knew soon
    her phone would ring, her oldest,
    Elaine, calling to say good morning.
    A car in the drive or a knock
    on the backdoor would signal
    a visit, pleasant, thought unexpected,
    a chance to share the blessings.

    1. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
      Sharp Little Pencil

      A peach of a poem, Nancy. These “day in the life” pieces are soothing and fine. I loved the coyotes and the 27 cents! Amy

      1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        A “day in the life” piece … yes. Great way to put it, Amy. Love this, Nancy. It is absolutely seamless.

        Marie Elena

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Oh!! Nancy! I love this!! I love how you leave “hardly seeing” hanging there for a moment to be followed by that great ball of red and the coyotes! This is brilliant!

    3. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      Love this, Nancy… especially how you started it. Too bad she’s missing out on the rising sun and coyotes, though. I’d much prefer that over the newspaper.

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Oh, I agree!

    4. Andrew Kreider Avatar
      Andrew Kreider

      So beautifully crafted. This one gets completely out of the sense of being an exercise – it’s a keeper!

      1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Yes. Absolutely.

        ME

    5. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Very sweet, Nancy. It sounds a lovely morning.

  21. Moody Charlotte (true story, almost) | Sharp Little Pencil - Amy Barlow Liberatore Avatar
    Moody Charlotte (true story, almost) | Sharp Little Pencil – Amy Barlow Liberatore

    […] at Poetic Bloomings had some fun at our expense: Today, you are given random nudges, the replies to which will become […]

  22. Sharp Little Pencil Avatar
    Sharp Little Pencil

    Walt, this was a GENIUS prompt. Had me thinking about my wacky mom and her doings… It’s too long to post here, so please visit my blog:

    Moody Charlotte (true story, almost)

    Thanks, y’all. I even enjoyed reading the posted responses without a poem attached, but I went whole hog on this one!! Amy

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      Your piece was rivetting. “Vincent Price black” will never leave my mind, now.

    2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      … oh my…

    3. Andrew Kreider Avatar
      Andrew Kreider

      This one rocks, Amy. What a hoot. From the armadillos crossing the highway to the indignant bridge club. LOVE IT.

  23. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
    Erin Kay Hope

    Don’t even inquire as to where this came from, cause I don’t know. 😉

    Shannon’s Daring

    SHANNON tamed LIONS
    In SAN FRANCISCO,
    A frightful OCCUPATION,
    Much harder than CROCHET;
    Her friend HANNAH always said so,
    And she was an expert with her hook;
    Shannon kept eleven lions,
    Each as big as a bus;
    She fed them kale and GREEN BEANS,
    And tried to turn them VEGAN;
    Her plan almost worked too,
    But the SAN FRANCISCO EARTHQUAKE
    Carried her lions off,
    And Shannon moved to Washington,
    Miserable, with all her DARING quite destroyed.
    She lived on WALLER ROAD,
    Her house was painted a CORAL color,
    And she never ate green beans again.

    © Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2013

    1. Your mother’s name – Shannon
    2. A wild animal – lion
    3. A city you’ve never visited… – San Francisco
    4. A hobby – crochet
    5. A mode of transportation – bus
    6. Your least favorite vegetable – green beans (I have two)
    7. A “lucky” number – eleven
    8. Your favorite color – coral (I have two)
    9. Three random words – occupation, vegan, daring
    10. Historical event – San Francisco Earthquake
    11. A childhood friend – Hannah
    12. The street on which you grew up – Waller Road

    1. Laurie Kolp Avatar
      Laurie Kolp

      My daughter hates green beans, too.

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        I don’t mind them when they’re cooked, but can’t abide them raw.

    2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      ha, ha, ha… A BOOK, A BOOK… A CHILDREN’S BOOK!! Can you paint the illustrations? :D!!

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        Hehe, I probably could. That would be fun! Thank you, Hen! 🙂

    3. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      It’s supposed to be the San Francisco earthquake. I didn’t even realize I wrote hurricane…

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        It’s so interesting where our interpretations take us… My grandson had just finished reading “The Fantastic Flying Books of Mr. Morris Lessmore” to his little sister…

        1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
          Erin Kay Hope

          It is interesting. I also just realized that I didn’t even write hurricane. I reread it really early this morning and thought that I had! 😀

          1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
            Henrietta Choplin

            😀 !! hee, hee… I hear ya!!

    4. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Ha! We can never be quite sure where our muse will take us, can we? 😉

      Marie Elena

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        No, never. Thanks for reading and commenting, Marie. ❤

      2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        !! 🙂 !!

  24. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
    http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

    A wicked prompt. My cack-handed response is here: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2013/06/10/accidental-marion/

    1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
      http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

      Accidental Marion

      Moving house was a hobby for Mum,
      like horse riding, hot air ballooning or tiger shooting.
      The chance to live in Worcester Park or Sunnymeads,
      Old Park Ridings instead of Prague –
      haphazard choice of fate –
      led to numerous friends loved and left behind:
      Chris, the friend who’s a boy but not a boyfriend,
      or Pat, a bully until year six when we became best mates,
      or turnip-head Mike who made all the girls blue
      with his haughty ways and handsome face.

      The accidental geography of my life continued apace
      as marriage took me here and there –
      maybe it’s in my genes –
      until the revolution that brought us to France
      where we’ve stayed for twenty-plus years.
      Come to think of it, the moving doesn’t stop –
      we’ve lived in four different houses here,
      now preparing to move to a fifth.
      Rolling stones gathering no moss,
      we won’t die rich. I wonder where we’ll go.

      1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        … Oh Viv…

      2. Laurie Kolp Avatar
        Laurie Kolp

        “accidental geography of my life continued”… sounds like me in my 20s. I love this… especially the ending, Viv.

        1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com Avatar
          http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

          Thanks, Laurie. This prompt was a cheerer-upper.

        2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
          Poetic Bloomings

          Hear, hear! 🙂

          Marie Elena

      3. DebiSwim Avatar
        DebiSwim

        When I was young we moved many times but after I married (the second time) we built and have been here almost 33 years. I beginning to think it is time for a change- maybe.

        Love the poem and the knowing a little more about you.

      4. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        That last stanza is so beautiful/wistful…I love this, Viv!

  25. DebiSwim Avatar
    DebiSwim

    Oh, my goodness – I wasn’t even gonna try but I’m not a quitter (usually).

    Elizabeth (the) Queen

    Bear in mind, please, that cars used to be big
    submarines of the dry lands and mama
    drove an old ’59 De Sota like a queen.
    Elizabeth wore a filmy teal scarf on her head
    had long, rounded, fiery red fingernails
    that tapped a beat on the steering wheel
    while sipping Seven-up and smoking Virginia Slims
    “You’ve Come a long way baby’.

    My brother and sister and I would
    sit in the backseat driving her crazy
    on long trips with our civil war.
    We’d fuss and fight, cry and howl
    like Scottish warriors of the highlands,
    till mama reached in the backseat
    and started smacking willy-nilly.

    When I got older, I got the front seat –
    that’s written in stone – shot gun! –
    and read. I read so much mama said
    I was gonna turn into a mushroom.
    My friend, Carol, and I went to the movies
    every Saturday. We dreamed of Paris
    and of looking like Catherine Deneuve.

    Oh, the good old days!

    1. Your mother’s first name. Elizabeth
    2. A wild animal. bear
    3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to. Paris
    4. A hobby. reading
    5. A mode of transportation. De Sota
    6. Your least favorite vegetable. mushrooms
    7. A “lucky” number. seven
    8. Your favorite color. teal
    9. Three random words. crazy, queen, movies
    10. Historical event. Civil war
    11. A childhood friend. Carol
    12. The street on which you grew up. Highland

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      This made me forget the rules we were playing by, Debi. Nice work!

      Marie Elena

      1. DebiSwim Avatar
        DebiSwim

        Thanks, Marie. You and Walt put me on the rack with this one but being stretched is a good thing ; )

    2. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      “Driving her crazy with our civil war…” So well put! Great poem, Debi! 🙂

      1. DebiSwim Avatar
        DebiSwim

        Thanks, Erin. 🙂

      2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Oh! I smiled at that line too… Loved the whole, creative scene!!! 🙂 !!

  26. ejparsons Avatar
    ejparsons

    Greta’s Liberty

    Mama was so young and GREEN
    Back when she was NINE
    WWII, PEARL HARBOR seen
    She turned out just fine

    LIFE would not bring mama down
    She had lots of dreams
    She’d ride a MOTORCYCLE round
    Down HIGHWAY 1 she’d scream

    To SYDNEY she would go one day
    Eat OCRA from a jar
    With KANGAROOS and dingoes play
    And drive a left lane car

    When she returned she’d call HERB up
    To show him PHOTOGRAPHS
    Such HAPPINESS would fill her cup
    With endless smiles and laughs

    1. Your mother’s first name. Greta
    2. A wild animal. Kangaroo
    3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to. Sydney
    4. A hobby. Photography
    5. A mode of transportation. Motorcycle
    6. Your least favorite vegetable. Okra
    7. A “lucky” number. 9
    8. Your favorite color. Green
    9. Three random words. Life, liberty, happiness
    10. Historical event. Pearl Harbor
    11. A childhood friend. Herb
    12. The street on which you grew up. Highway 1 (Rural Northern Maine)

    You can write in any form, meter and rhyme scheme. 7/5 Trochee

    Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I love this. I’m learning to love your mother, too.

      1. ejparsons Avatar
        ejparsons

        Yeah. She kind of grows on you. lol

      2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
        Poetic Bloomings

        Me too, Earl. Love the way you present her to us.

        Marie Elena

    2. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Sounds like a blast! 🙂

    3. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      !! 😀 !!

  27. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Mine would not copy with color, underline or bold.

    Ruth Ages

    Turned seven on Rockaway Parkway,
    where the ‘L’ train ran. A few years
    later, I made a good friend named
    Ilene. Mom always let up help
    with baking, and I still enjoy
    the process. Mom is old now,
    and I wonder if she remembers
    how we all cheered when Nixon
    resigned, the time New York
    Magazine’s cover shot was of
    a purple eggplant that looked
    exactly like Nixon’s face,
    and how I always rooted out
    lima beans from my vegetable
    soup. Does she think back
    to the time I bought her
    a stuffed lion, her favorite
    animal, and she named him,
    Dreyfuss. Someday, If I get
    to visit Austin, where I have
    family I barely get to see,
    we will gather our memories
    of Mom together, and perhaps
    we will learn something.

    1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Awww! Such a tender tribute. Poignant, but promising. Excellent!

      Marie Elena

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Marie!

    2. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      So beautiful, Sara! I love how you portray your mom here.

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Erin!

    3. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      Oh, I just Love this, Sara… and, I do hope that you will get to visit Austin… (you may never want to leave that special city, tho :)!!)

      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        Thanks, Hen!

  28. Misky Avatar
    Misky

    Aleph’s Name

    There’s a photograph on the wall, framed
    in scrolled silver-plate, and the photo always
    falls askew, slips and tucks into the bottom
    white matt like the sinking of the Mary Rose.
    She refuses to sit, be still, be centred.

    She is my mother: Aleph.

    Her name is ancient, a glyph on walls, a mark
    by scribes on the stone lions of Babylon, inscribed
    on the eight towers of Ravenna. You’ll find
    her name where truth sprouts from sands,
    across deserts silently running as time races

    blind through Syria’s ruins, and you’ll find
    her name on temple columns that drink
    from the Blue Nile. Her name speaks of bridled
    oxen in Samarian, an ox’s head in Arabic.

    She is my mother, Aleph.

    Stubborn as the ox, refusing to be positioned
    within confines of silver. Aleph, in Hebrew –
    words spoken in truth, she – the silent one,
    she – who is sometimes first but never last.

    She is my mother, Aleph.

    Aleph, King of Breath. Aleph, air of the universe,
    and the lungs of one’s soul. Aleph, your name
    speaks of Oneness with God. My mother, Aleph,
    who’s off centre and slipping to the bottom of silver,
    a name that calls to her from beginning to end.

    She is my mother, Aleph.

    1. Aleph 2. Lions and oxen 3. Ancient Babylon 4. Photography 5. Running 6. Sprouts 7. Eight 8. Blue 9. Sand Name End 10. Sinking of the Mary Rose 11. Mary 12. Ravenna Blvd.

    1. William Preston Avatar
      William Preston

      I think this is utterly superb.

    2. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
      Poetic Bloomings

      Oh, Misk … wow …

      Marie Elena

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Many thanks to the both of you.

        1. William Preston Avatar
          William Preston

          This has the feeling of something a cantor would sing. I am not Jewish but have several friends who are, and the more eloquent of them have a palpably rhythmic sound in their speech. Your piece has that feel.

    3. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Oh my…I can’t even believe how beautiful this is! You did an amazing job putting all those random pieces together, Misky.

      1. Misky Avatar
        Misky

        Thanks, Erin.

      2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        Oh, I soo agree!!

  29. Aleph’s Name | The Chalk Hills Journal Avatar
    Aleph’s Name | The Chalk Hills Journal

    […] Poetic Bloomings #111, Puzzle Pieces […]

  30. Sara v Avatar
    Sara v

    Couldn’t resist this prompt! Couldn’t highlight and on my tablet so you’ll have to guess–apparently Walt and I share a fondness for tigers 🙂

    Jackie Sea

    From Sandhurst
    Jackie flies to Venice
    With a tiger, Erin
    Buckled beside her
    They stare out
    At a turquoise sea
    Where the sun paints
    Figure eights just to
    Please them
    No Berlin Wall exists
    Between her and
    Joy when she spies
    Hominy hues of
    The Venetian village
    Below

    1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
      Henrietta Choplin

      I was right there in your picture…!! Loved this!!

      1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
        Erin Kay Hope

        So was I! (or was that cause my name is in there? 😉 ) Lovely poem, Sara!

        1. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
          Henrietta Choplin

          hee, hee…

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      William Preston

      For me, this is a visual delight.

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    pmwanken

    BONNIE’S HEART

    Dirt road dreams
    of faraway places
    happy days,
    and cuddling
    polar bear faces.

    Blue sky wishes
    of walking on the moon,
    flying off to Paris,
    and writing
    poetry to make hearts swoon.

    Green grass reality
    isn’t quite that life;
    raising four kids,
    hating celery,
    but I love being Tommy’s wife.

    2013-06-13
    P. Wanken

    *Bonnie, polar bear, Paris, writing poetry, flying, celery, four, blue, dreams, heart, happy, walking on the moon, Tommy, dirt road

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      William Preston

      This reads like a story, and with such wistfulness and love. Wonderful.

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      Henrietta Choplin

      Yes, the wistfulness… and yet… the Love…

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    iaindouglaskemp

    A piece of prose.

    Marjorie Marsh

    MARJORIE MARSH aged SIX
    of FIR TREE AVENUE, SEATTLE,
    gifted her boyfriend, STEPHEN BRADLEY
    (he of the flowing red locks)
    a pound and a half of fresh BROAD BEANS
    delivered by BLUE BALLOON,
    across the hedge that divided their abodes
    and with a note attached urging her beloved
    (for so he was, despite his failings of which Marjorie kept a list).
    The aforementioned missive was replete
    with advice on how he might, should he still desire her heart,
    mend his ways and thus earn her respect and undying devotion.
    Amongst the many errors of his comportment that young Marjorie
    considered most heinous was his habit of dressing like Zorro
    at the FENCING club and calling himself “The RED PANDA”
    and not least his overly HIRSUTE back, which proper young ladies
    found unsightly, to say the very least.
    She admonished him further reminding her love, (kindly but firmly she thought)
    of how the Portuguese sinners were punished by G-d (she was careful like that!)
    on Easter Sunday in the LISBON EARTHQUAKE OF 1755.
    Marjorie waited and waited and waited for an earnest reply and finally
    with her considerable (she was certain) patience under too great a strain,
    she rang his doorbell with a finger that was already in a pointing and wagging frame of mind.
    Surprised when the door opened, to be greeted by a lady of whom she had no recall
    and astounded to be told that Steve (she did not approve of name shortening!)
    had moved to Canada with a hippy-chick called Tina in a 1964 VW bus that her (Tina’s) parents had been to Woodstock in.
    At first dismayed and angry, our heroine’s spirits soon rose when presented to the youngest
    member of this new household, to wit , Master Timothy, aged 7, who, it seemed to Marjorie Marsh, was overflowing with faults that would be deserving of her never-ending attention,
    not least the way he failed to sweep his overly long blonde fringe away from his eyes and the fact that one of his shoe laces was (it would soon become apparent) always undone.
    Marjorie sighed and went home to rest, she had a great deal to consider before instructing her wayward mother on the correct positioning of food groups on a young ladies luncheon plate.
    Next door Tim (that would have to stop and soon!) was running around with a stick for no truly fathomable reason, blissfully unaware that his for-no-fathomable-reason-days were very soon to end.

    Iain

    1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
      Erin Kay Hope

      Oh my goodness! Iain, this is hilarious! “…his for-no-fathomable-reason days were very soon to end.” That is such a great line! Love this poem, Iain. 🙂

      1. iaindouglaskemp Avatar
        iaindouglaskemp

        Thank you Erin. Whacky mood today… almost as nutty in my poem at Poetic Asides today. 🙂

        1. Erin Kay Hope Avatar
          Erin Kay Hope

          You’re welcome. I like nutty poems… 🙂

      2. Henrietta Choplin Avatar
        Henrietta Choplin

        !! :)!!

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