Today, you are given random nudges, the replies to which will become the pieces to your poetic puzzle.
1. Your mother’s first name.
2. A wild animal.
3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to.
4. A hobby.
5. A mode of transportation.
6. Your least favorite vegetable.
7. A “lucky” number.
8. Your favorite color.
9. Three random words.
10. Historical event.
11. A childhood friend.
12. The street on which you grew up.
You can write in any form, meter and rhyme scheme.
Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.
MAYBE MARIE:
Patricia’s Summer (a haibun)
Though it was November and quite chilly for the locals, its touch and texture was summer to Patricia as she walked the early morning beaches of Naples. She strolled leisurely, taking mental note of individual grains of sand as they caressed her toes. She considered the beached sea kale, noticing minute nuances of emerald tones. She bent to pick up a particularly lovely shade, when she spotted a baby seahorse — no longer alive, but perfectly formed. Patricia coddled her in her palm, contemplating whether or not to return her to the gulf of her birth. Instead, she wrapped her in sea kale, and placed her in her pocket with coquina and golden olive. She smiled as she recalled lessons learned on Belmont as a child – lessons of the Calusa “Shell Indians.” Her childhood friend, Summer, loved to learn and speak of early Indian tribes. She was the one who had introduced Patricia to this little-known tribe. Now here she was on their beaches, far from her northern roots — farther still in distant time and culture. Stroking the smooth shells in her pocket, she pondered these resourceful shell seekers, and mourned their extinction. Returning home, Patricia re-opened a letter from Summer, to which she had not taken time to respond. She reached for the ornate treasure box Summer had made for her years ago. In it, she placed her letter, the shells, kale, and seahorse, a dozen grains of beach sand, and her obituary. She placed the box on a sun-dappled shelf, and marked it “Forever Summer.” Branch beyond your roots Be mindful in the present Gather memories © Copyright Marie Elena Good – 2013SURELY WALT:
IRENE’S GARDEN
Roller skates without a key
were useless as anyone can see,
And Irene truly knew the score
(though she’s never been to Baltimore)
She planted butt upon the couch
but sat upon her tiger (ouch)
which gave the large cat cause to cry,
and a piece of Irene’s rhubarb pie.
Her friend Susie lived on Wood Street,
her house was Navy Blue
with fourteen pickets in her fence
(you could see right through).
Susie had a veggie garden
that she dug with a spoon,
to make a dish to go with fish,
to eat walking on the moon.
Irene and Susie were in tune,
in fact, they were connecting,
but were caught raiding mail boxes,
(they called it, stamp collecting!)
© Copyright Walter J. Wojtanik – 2013
Responses
I couldn’t decide what form to use, so this is just a little bit sloppy. 😉
Shannon’s Spell
She lay still in the soft, green grass,
Eyes wide open, DREAMILY absent;
And she imagined herself passing
Through the streets of DUBLIN,
At length finding herself standing
On the banks of the River SHANNON;
She’d often LONGED that she could be there;
She was in love with all things Irish.
Perhaps it was the interesting fact
That her name meant Ireland,
Or that her mother’s name was the same
As a river that ran its course through Ireland.
Or perhaps the mention of the place
Had cast a strange SPELL on her,
Maybe that explained it.
She wanted to soar like a BIRD,
FLYING over the AQUAMARINE of the Atlantic Ocean,
Landing peacefully next to the beautiful river,
Away from all hustle and bustle,
Far, far away from the familiar surroundings
Of WALLER ROAD, and her studies of
The interesting, but disappointing VIETNAM WAR;
And she would take AMY with her;
They’d fly together…
She blinked slowly seven times,
And woke up;
Green beans and CAULIFLOWER scented the air –
She was lying near the garden;
She was back to reality,
But she smiled as she remembered her daydream,
And picked up her camera to SNAP SOME PHOTOS…
© Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2013
Even though I like cauliflower, I can see how its smell would wake one up.
Ditto, Laurie…
My comment to you slipped down a bit. Technincompoop that I am!
I saw your comment. Thanks, Viv. 🙂
Yes, it has a very pungent odor. 😉 Thanks for reading, Laurie and Amy.
“Perhaps it was the interesting fact
That her name meant Ireland,
Or that her mother’s name was the same
As a river that ran its course through Ireland.”
I really like this portion…it stands out to me for some reason…I was thinking about name meanings, too…I never knew my mom’s name means young.
Great job, Erin!
Thank you so much, Hannah! I love to figure out name meanings. The name Erin has several, but I tend to prefer Ireland. Thanks for reading! ❤
“…Eyes wide open, DREAMILY absent…” :D!!! I can relate!!
Yes. I like this line as well. Very much.
Lovely job, Erin!
Marie Elena
Thank you, Marie, that means a lot. 🙂
Haha, thanks, Hen! Sometimes I find myself just staring up at the sky, completely lost in thought, or a daydream. 🙂
… yep … me too… 🙂 !!
Greta’s Brush
Such attention given to Snowball
Aptly named, a seven year old fur ball
A lion at heart
She’d tear you apart
Like the day the Third Reich did fall
Some say she came from Miami
Stowed away in an airplane belly
She made it somehow
Lives on Silver Street now
Knitting carpets with claws is her hobby
Greta gave Snowball a nice home
Keeps her clean with a brush and a comb
Snowball has a bed
Bright tomato red
Her friend Gina bought it in Rome
(C) 2013 Earl Parsons
Aww…
I used a plane and knitting, too.
and me. I liked the dream – a good way to incorporate the zany prompt words.
My above comment was meant for Erin!
I think your Greta’s Brush is wonderful.
Wow. Impressive that you managed such a great rhyme and cadence throughout, Earl. Fun stuff!
Marie Elena
Impressive, Earl. I love your rhyme scheme! 🙂
A BROUHAHA FOR ELIZABETH
Elizabeth, from Roxborough Road,
was frightened by a horny toad
upon a street in Tallahassee.
The toad was green and somewhat sassy;
round as eggplant, it boasted seven
brown-basted spots and warts, eleven.
So frightened was Liz, she called on Shirley
thinking that certainly Shirley surely
would leave her painting, hop on her bike,
and use her brains on the toady tyke.
Well, Shirley came, a great brouhaha
ensued, it could be heard in Baja;
the toad was bested, it lost the battle
and ribbeted out its last death rattle.
so Liz and Shirley’s personal Midway
was won on a Tallahassee skidway.
copyright 2013, William Preston
Enjoyed this!
Oh, my goodness! You used the words and put a rhyme at the end of each line. I’m impressed.
fun poem – clever to use rhyme. I like toads, though!
Oh my goodness. What a fun read!!
Marie Elena
Wow! Good one, William!
Marie, I did not want to go through that minefield again and attempt a haibun within the specifications of the prompt, but the form is intriguing. Apparently, it’s supposed to be a combination of a prose poem and a haiku. Can it also combine straight prose with haiku and/or senryu? I ask for two reasons: I have no idea what a “prose poem” is, and the latter part of your example looks more like senryu than haiku, as I understand (or, more likely, don’t understand) it.
Good morning William!
Prose poetry is written in prose, rather than verse. What makes it “poetry” is the increased poetic imagery/emotion. And you are absolutely right about my “haiku.” It would most definitely fit into the senryu category. Modern haiku very often crosses that line, or is even simply misnamed. Your understanding is spot on! 😉
Marie Elena
Thank you for the clarification. I will try a haibun, albeit not, as I said, with that minefield of prompts you and Walt doled out this time. That was tough, if fun; even so, I think I’d prefer a bath with Fels Naptha soap.
hahaha!
William, you caught me offguard with that remark, and I squirted coffee out my nose!!! Amy
I apologize for that mishap. It does remind me of what we used to call a “Danny Thomas take,” though.
Teehee! I totally understand. 😉
Marie Elena
Greta’s Restaurant
As children, Greta and Jill would often dream
Dream of what they’d like to do in the future
Future plans were made of a restaurant in red
Red doors and walls and thirteen white tables
Tables all arranged like the streets of a city
City scenes on the walls in life-like murals
Murals of Sydney, Shanghai, and Mexico City
City after city, all with a little history
History like Revolutions, Independence and more
More on each wall, all painted by Greta
Greta’s paintings and food would bring in the customers
Customers hungry like wolves at a feast
Feast your eyes on the magnificent veggie bar
Bar those black olives from my salad plate
Plate those meals at the Silver Street Diner
Diners drive there from hither and yon
© 2013 Earl Parsons
I don’t like olives either! You make a nice story poem.
I like it too, Earl. AND olives. 😉
Marie Elena
Nice!
Elaine’s Earworm
“Yeah, yeah, yeah.” On the evening of February 9, 1964,
the Beatles were on Ed Sullivan.
We lived on Tyrone Road back then
and Kathy lived next door.
If I could take the Tardis for a spin
I’d like to time travel back to London in the late 1800s
(or maybe just revisit Tyrone Road in 1964.)
I might even eat some broccoli if I could do this.
But I can’t time travel,
so I won’t eat broccoli
even ‘though my mom must have asked me to do so
at least a bazillion times.
“Yeah, yeah, yeah.” On the evening of February 9, 2013,
I sat and stared at my cell phone
whose phone case is in midnight blue
with a Nittany Lion logo stamped on the back. But I digress…
I thought about the phone conversation Mom and I just had.
Mom mentioned that she had spoken recently with Kathy’s mom
who told her that Kathy was still living in Berlin (or was it Brussels now?)
In any event, it was a long way from Tyrone Road.
But the thing is, years ago, I lost touch with Kathy
(and yes, I still won’t eat broccoli.)
Then, I put down my phone and picked up a pencil
and doodled a picture of two little girls who once were friends.
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Love this, RJ!
BTW…I forgot to give my answers, so here they are:
1. Your mother’s first name – Elaine;
2. A wild animal – Nittany Lions
3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to – Brussels
4. A hobby – doodling
5. A mode of transportation – Tardis
6. Your least favorite vegetable – Broccoli
7. A “lucky” number. – bazillion
8. Your favorite color – Midnight Blue
9. Three random words – Cell phone, Earworm, pencil
10. Historical event – The Beatles appeared on Ed Sullivan for the first time, February 9, 1964
11. A childhood friend – Kathy
12. The street on which you grew up – Tyrone Road
Thanks, Marie and Walt – and thank you, Laurie!
RJ, the repeated “Yeah, yeah, yeah” goes both ways… This was too much fun, though. And your take on broccoli is great, even though I love it almost as much as asparagus, or as we call it, asspergrass! Brill. Amy
Ditto! 😀
I love this. You could try Facebook or Friends Re-united to find Kathy. I hope you do.
…just had to go to Youtube to hear “…She Loves you, yeah, yeah, yeah…” :D!!
~ ❤ ~
Not too many poems include a Tardis sighting. Love this one!
You get me every time, RJ. EVERY stinkin’ time. 😀
Marie Elena
Kathleen’s Hiccup
Kathleen and Gabriela sipped
Mimosas on the plane, a girl’s only
trip to Savannah their weekend plans.
To their left, a man was knitting
while a baby slept in its mother’s lap
holding tight a stuffed cheetah.
One sip too many and a rank odor
filled the air, like Brussel Sprouts
or cabbage cooked too long, a smell
strong enough to sink the Titanic.
Kathleen squeezed Gabriela’s yellow
sleeve, a rush of bile in her throat,
her urge to vomit stronger than a hiccup,
faster than a grab of bag release.
I wish my colored text had shown up. Anyway, here are my answers:
1. Your mother’s first name. Kathleen
2. A wild animal. cheetah
3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to. Savannah
4. A hobby. knitting
5. A mode of transportation. plane
6. Your least favorite vegetable. Brussel Sprouts
7. A “lucky” number. One
8. Your favorite color. yellow
9. Three random words. sipped, hiccup, squeeze
10. Historical event. Titanic
11. A childhood friend. Gabriela
12. The street on which you grew up. Mimosa (Drive)
Great stuff. I really like your random words – how did you choose them?
Randomly… = )
Funnn-eee. A bit sickening but funnn-eee.
Thanks… I wasn’t completely awake when I wrote this…
Yikes, I just about ralphed when I read this, but it was from laughter, not nausea! Sometimes those just-woke-up bits are the best… Amy
Yikes!!
I was watching the man knitting and then suddenly felt my breakfast churning in my tummy. Stop the plane! Let me off! Fun poem!
Yes, yes, yes! And yikes, and fun! 😀
Marie Elena
Love how you drew this one in tightly, making that crazy grab-bag of words flow coherently!
Oh dear!
Fun prompt!
Amazing piece Marie! Walt, yours drew a hearty, much needed smile!
I rebel the form this week in honor of my Mother, who went home yesterday. Will return later to read everyone’s masterpieces. Following link shares some of what came to mind in the middle of the night as we watched her make the journey home. Also wrote/posted a piece for Mother’s day “Mom” which describes Mom to a T on the same Blog if you wish to see it, just scroll back.
Oh, so Beautiful, David… I am so sorry for your loss…
Thanks Henrietta
So sorry, David, for the loss of your mom.
Me too… Beautiful poem, David!
Well done, David. A fitting tribute.
Thank you Sheryl
[…] poem answered the Puzzle Piece challenge at Poetic Bloomings. I was given random prompts that all had to form the poem. Here they […]
Hazel Train
My best friend, ran so hard from here
as boys from artichokes.
He left as if a dog to steak
you’d never have to coax.
‘twas Market street he barreled down,
‘cause he saw it coming.
Like an army bound for Moscow
strongly was forthcoming.
It charged as if through fields of green,
an orient express,
Past lakes of blue and mountains tall,
while causing some distress.
A crazed hyena driving it,
conductor for the day.
In 50 blocks or just one more,
she’d surely find her prey.
Once you’re pinned beneath the wheel,
prepare to acquiesce.
There won’t be pain, though now you’ll hear
the Gettysburg Address.
Those lectures always packed a punch
like words that formed a bomb.
Next time skip the running down
and listen to your mom!
What an interesting and excellent piece! Glad to have you with us, Gene.
Marie Elena
Haha! Love the last stanza! 😀
(Mother’s first name, wild animal, city, hobby, mode of transport, ugly vegetable, lucky number, fav color, 3 random words, historical event,
friend, street where you grew up, Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.)
“Olga Origami”
OLGA was the name her mother gave her;
at birth she made a sound like caterwaul.
Wild and distant as the Bengal TIGER.
To MOZAMBIQUE; that place where’s she’s enthralled.
She flies by BROOM and carries in her purse
a coin mark`ed THIRTEEN; colored GOLD.
Her ORIGAMI hobby is a curse;
so, folded on the plate her OKRA cold.
At KITTY HAWK, she watches Orville fly
and screeching with the ugliest of glee
she motions with her POWERS fond goodbye
as trav`ling to her home she will now flee.
This tiger in the TANGLED-WOOD of night
is off to fold her paper into fright.
Jac, this is spooky and fun. Amy
Your first two sentences ROCK, Jackie!! You really ran with this challenge…I enjoyed this! 🙂
Love this!
This is SO very creative!!
Love the final line especially – putting a bow on the origami theme. Nicely done indeed.
Our queen of the sonnet reigns! Wow! And yes, your final couplet is AMAZING.
Marie Elena
This is great, Jacqueline! Spookily sweet. 😉
Thanks, all you guys, for your kind comments.
Fran’s Woven Glass
There is a tapestry of life
with distorted dreams
and chaotic threads
that pull one day
into the next.
First one, then two,
then a blurring of a thousand
oil stained slats
that form a fallen ladder
holding up the train
as it fills the blue sky
with blackened soot.
And all the rubbing inside
can’t clear the outside
nor bullet stop the frantic love
that drove Bonnie and Clyde
to lay upon the dust
of a desolate road
deep in the piney woods.
So little Polly and I
couldn’t know our path
as we made hollyhock dolls
and set them floating
in a kitchen platter dance
on Curry Street.
Sorry, I posted an earlier draft instead of the final version.
It should read:
Fran’s Woven Glass
There is a tapestry of life
with distorted dreams
and chaotic threads
that pull one day
into the next.
First one, then two,
then a blurring of a thousand
oil stained slats
that form a fallen ladder
holding up the train
as it fills the blue sky
with cheetah blackened soot.
And all the rubbing inside
can’t clear the outside
nor bullets stop the frantic love
that drove Bonnie and Clyde
to lie upon the dust
of a desolate road
deep in the piney woods.
So little Polly and I
couldn’t know our paths
as we made hollyhock dolls
and set them floating
first one, then two,
in a rutabaga platter dance
blurring a thousand dreams
of ours on Curry Street.
Words:
Fran, cheetah, woods, glass, train, rutabaga, two, blue, chaotic, distorted, woven, Bonnie and Clyde, Polly, Curry Street.
This feels so dream like and I love where you gather us in to…floating these dolls…really unique, Patricia!
Love this… especially the 3rd stanza.
Your title is very intriguing…
Beautiful writing.
I read this several times, Patricia. Each time, I get more and more out of it. It is so intriguing and beautifully written. Well done!
Marie Elena
Same here
Love this! Beautiful!
Mine’s a little sloppy, too.
MARIJEAN’S BELIEF
If you only charged into each day as if it were the Lewis and Clark expedition, you’d find all the adventure you could ever dream.
That was Marijean’s belief anyway.
So, one day Pat and I gave it go.
We bared our toes, packed a lunch of lima beans and cod,
hopped on our bikes and rode around London pretending we were we were our own corp of discovery–cougars on the prowl for a new horizon.
For seven months we dug up those trails chasing imaginary adventures, chasing away the monotony of clocks, chasing predators and prey and then one hot day we chased each other into a calligraphy shoppe on Vail Ave where we inked our names in indigo requesting the pleasure of your company at the expedition our nuptial knot.
Words: Marijean cougar London calligraphy bicycle lima beans 7 indigo charge belief toes Lewis and Clark expedition Pat Vail Ave.
Jlynn, this is fabulous. A runaway train of a piece, and rollicking good fun! Amy
Delightful and imaginative.
🙂 !!
I’m thrilled with the variety this prompt has inspired. This piece is so creative!
Marie Elena
Very imaginative, Jlynn! 🙂
People in this poem are fictional but not the floods.
Helen’s Boast
HELEN sits at her desk
DRAWING ink landscapes.
Her eyes a PURE PERIWINKLE blue
sparkle as we beg her
to tell us the story.
Helen always began
with a LAUGH and this BOAST,
“The hail was big as BRUSSEL SPROUTS
as I pedaled my BICYCLE down SHANNON CREEK ROAD
about SEVEN on a summer evening in 1977.
“I knew the gray clouds,
dark, mean and low,
could bring a storm as bad
as any of the ones which caused
the other two JOHNSTOWN FLOODS.
“My muscles moved strong
and rhythmic like a PANTHER,
racing against the storm.
The ice balls pummeled me,
then came the hammering rain.
“My friends JENNIFER and SYDNEY
built their cabin unwittingly
in the lowlands by the river.
Halfway there I had to abandon my bike
and run along the flooded road.
“I made it to the cabin as the water
reached their porch step.
I banged on the door.
They came out wondering
if I had gone mad.
“We fled in their Chevy.
Eighty-six lives were lost that night.
But not eighty-eight.
Your grandparents made it.”
“Thanks!” we say and run off to play.
Connie, My family and I visited a dear friend in Johnstown who told us the story and took us up and down the inclined plane.
I was eighteen and spent the summer with my sister in Cheyenne so I missed the whole thing, and came back to quite a different place.
This is the second mention of Brussels sprouts I’ve read (working my way up). They’re going to get a complex! Nicely done, this. Amy
Yep, Brussel Sprouts are definitely my least favorite vegetable.
Loved: “…Helen always began/ with a laugh…”, and, “… My muscles moved strong/and rhythmic…”
Excellent, Connie. So very descriptive and engaging.
Marie Elena
This is wonderful, Connie!
This poem took more time than it was worth, but it was the best way I knew how to write it.
My idea came from the second word I had chosen: junk. The only thing I could think of was the fact that Mother has many items in her bedroom, simply because there is little other space for her things in our house. I pictured her as having a disagreement with an unknown person who was appalled at what they considered her junk. Not every picture in the poem is sitting in her room, but they are old pictures we have somewhere in the house.
I started with prose and then whittled words as much as I could. It seemed so prosaic, so I decided to rhyme two lines in each stanza. Some of it is a bit forced, but I did finish it. Hooray!
Mildred’s Junk?
PARDON me? These items are not JUNK.
Books may collect dust, but it’s bunk
not to appreciate the written word.
The LEOPARD-spotted robe on my bed
stays. And as I have often said,
put those SCISSORS down.
You will not cut pictures to bring
your concept of order here. And that ring
is a favorite of mine.
See the picture of CHERYL over there?
She stands on BROOK STREET where
we lived when she and Sheryl Kay were young.
Mike is wearing his uniform in that shot.
It was during WORLD WAR II, and the spot
where we met I’ll never forget.
You might wonder why Michael looks so small
next to that bridge. People are not all
that is important in PHOTOGRAPHY.
You want JUNK? You are welcome to eat
those BRUSSELS SPROUTS. Take my seat
at this table. Too bad they are a pretty GREEN.
Now take your TRAIN back home.
Then why don’t you simply roam
around VENICE for a SEVEN-month tour.
Just don’t bring home any souvenir JUNK.
Love all the junk in this one – and unless they are roasted with olive oil and fingerling potatoes and onions and peppers, I am with you on the Brussels sprouts!! Amy
What we think as junk is a treasure to someone.
OM Gee… absolutely… I have discontinued my usual habit of trying to throw away all of my folks’ J-WORD clutter… ha, ha, ha… 😀 !!
Oh, this is my mother to the T. And I almost used brussel sprouts, too. ick.
Love this:
“You might wonder why Michael looks so small
next to that bridge. People are not all
that is important in PHOTOGRAPHY. ”
Great write.
Marie Elena
Gotta love all that junk!! 😀
Walt, I love your poem, especially the last two lines.
Love this prompt!
Here’s my words: Eleanor, San Francisco, shark, braiding, U-boat, celery, seven, blue, Pearl Harbor, Katie, 8th Street, peach, Everest, hurricane lamp
Eleanor’s Everest
Even before war broke out, one could
see it in her eyes. those early photographs,
defiant in her boarding school blues,
a runaway in the shadow of Everest.
Pearl Harbor brought tragedy, displacement,
seven months home, zigzagging troubled seas,
while German U-boats lurked like sharks.
There was danger in the depths, she learned that well.
Unsettled, she became an alien on Eighth Street,
braiding her hair in henna-flecked lines while curry
cooked in the kitchen. The horizon was flat here,
the people plain as celery. She ran from school again.
Seventy years later, she is still running, matching every
Midwestern storm with a hurricane lamp on the
basement stairs, tracing the rows of peaches,
the map of the world, the picture of Katie and me.
All the mountains she has yet to climb.
.. and of course, San Francisco fell off the map in some revision along the way. Too many Germans and Midwesterners running around!
I don’t know about the Germans, but Madison is officially feeling rather defensive. ha ha ha Nicely done, Andrew! But HOW could you forget SF? Where I come from that’s sacrilege, darling! Amy
I just gotta go to SF, Amy. Then I will NEVER forget it again!
I really enjoy the visual in your closing stanza, Andrew and the way that you tied in your title with your last line! I can tell you loved this prompt! 🙂
Oh, so do I! Wonderful poem, Andrew!
Such vivid images… I really like the 3rd stanza, Andrew.
“…There was danger in the depths, she learned that well…” !!
You had me at the title, Andrew. Nicely done!
Marie Elena
[…] PUZZLE PIECES – PROMPT #111 […]
I really enjoyed this!! I also REALLY enjoyed both of your examples, Walt and Marie…the humor in yours Walt and Marie…WOW…this is such rich writing!! I really love your prose style…your details and the tale itself are a fresh breath. Thank you both!
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Jill’s Reservoir
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Eleven green lima beans.
She saved them from the day,
the hour of the assassination of Abe.
She stuffed them in her pocket,
hopped on her bicycle and rode.
She pedaled till she was ragged,
sliding from the seat
she rushed to the pebble speckled bank-
named herself Christina,
became a spotted leopard;
camouflaged from the world,
she was hidden from the planet
that would allow such a tragedy.
She devised a plan.
She’d become an avid spelunker,
mine Jade in the moonlight,
(for lack of gold).
She drew maps in the sand,
counted copper pennies-
placed them in a line,
(heads up for good luck),
tallied the days till she’d leave for Denver;
she plotted deep dotted streaks
these, for her Rocky ridge expedition.
She was bound by blood,
it would be her Robin-hood road days,
she’d be a hero
packing poignant words,
those of her favored president:
“Am I not destroying my enemies when I make friends of them?”
She’d give them each a stone
from her careful quarrying.
She’d gift a gem to each of her enemies
hoping to extinguish the flame of hatred,
finally.
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Copyright © Hannah Gosselin 2013
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These are my puzzle pieces:
1. Jill
2. Leopard
3. Denver
4. Spelunking
5. Bicycle
6. Lima Beans
7. Eleven
8. Green
9. Appalachian reservoir jade
10. Assassination of Abe
11. Christina
12. Robinhood Road
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Plus I used this quote: “Am I not destroying my enemies when I make friends of them?” – Abraham Lincoln
I’ll be back my friends…it’s late here for me. Warm smiles 🙂
I had just returned to say my character wouldn’t have been eating lima beans at 10:25 at night when he was shot or at 7:25 in the morning when he actually passed…I did a little fact finding on the time of Abe’s death…my thought was more @ dinner-time…yeah, I’m being a little knit-picky but I was curious. 🙂
I love this, Hannah.
Yes… !!
I think this is stunning. Excellent.
Thanks for your kind and generous comments, Sweet Hannah!
What an imaginative and well penned piece. Wow … so many phrases that impress me. You never disappoint!!
Marie
Love this! Especially those last two lines: marvelous! 🙂
Okay: I got most of them in:
1. Barbara
2. coyote
3. Austin
4. pottery
5. Bicycle
6. Yam
7. 27
8. red
9. dawn’s early light
10. D Day
11. Elaine
12. Patsy Drive
You can write in any form, meter and rhyme scheme.
Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.
Barbara Early
Never one to sleep in, she slipped out of bed,
walked out to the end of the driveway
for the paper thrown from the window
of a car with a noisy muffler,
not a small boy on a bicycle
as she remembered years ago
collecting twenty-seven cents
every Saturday morning.
She sat reading at the kitchen table
while the coffee brewed, hardly seeing
the red sun rise over her shoulder,
never even noticed the coyotes
howling far beyond the fence line,
lost in thoughts that over formed
themselves into prayers of thanks,
not for dreams that came true,
but for blessings she never dreamed
of asking before they arrived
unbidden, the sorrows averted.
These rare quiet moments alone
were enough. She knew soon
her phone would ring, her oldest,
Elaine, calling to say good morning.
A car in the drive or a knock
on the backdoor would signal
a visit, pleasant, thought unexpected,
a chance to share the blessings.
A peach of a poem, Nancy. These “day in the life” pieces are soothing and fine. I loved the coyotes and the 27 cents! Amy
A “day in the life” piece … yes. Great way to put it, Amy. Love this, Nancy. It is absolutely seamless.
Marie Elena
Oh!! Nancy! I love this!! I love how you leave “hardly seeing” hanging there for a moment to be followed by that great ball of red and the coyotes! This is brilliant!
Love this, Nancy… especially how you started it. Too bad she’s missing out on the rising sun and coyotes, though. I’d much prefer that over the newspaper.
Oh, I agree!
So beautifully crafted. This one gets completely out of the sense of being an exercise – it’s a keeper!
Yes. Absolutely.
ME
Very sweet, Nancy. It sounds a lovely morning.
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Walt, this was a GENIUS prompt. Had me thinking about my wacky mom and her doings… It’s too long to post here, so please visit my blog:
Thanks, y’all. I even enjoyed reading the posted responses without a poem attached, but I went whole hog on this one!! Amy
Your piece was rivetting. “Vincent Price black” will never leave my mind, now.
… oh my…
This one rocks, Amy. What a hoot. From the armadillos crossing the highway to the indignant bridge club. LOVE IT.
Don’t even inquire as to where this came from, cause I don’t know. 😉
Shannon’s Daring
SHANNON tamed LIONS
In SAN FRANCISCO,
A frightful OCCUPATION,
Much harder than CROCHET;
Her friend HANNAH always said so,
And she was an expert with her hook;
Shannon kept eleven lions,
Each as big as a bus;
She fed them kale and GREEN BEANS,
And tried to turn them VEGAN;
Her plan almost worked too,
But the SAN FRANCISCO EARTHQUAKE
Carried her lions off,
And Shannon moved to Washington,
Miserable, with all her DARING quite destroyed.
She lived on WALLER ROAD,
Her house was painted a CORAL color,
And she never ate green beans again.
© Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2013
1. Your mother’s name – Shannon
2. A wild animal – lion
3. A city you’ve never visited… – San Francisco
4. A hobby – crochet
5. A mode of transportation – bus
6. Your least favorite vegetable – green beans (I have two)
7. A “lucky” number – eleven
8. Your favorite color – coral (I have two)
9. Three random words – occupation, vegan, daring
10. Historical event – San Francisco Earthquake
11. A childhood friend – Hannah
12. The street on which you grew up – Waller Road
My daughter hates green beans, too.
I don’t mind them when they’re cooked, but can’t abide them raw.
ha, ha, ha… A BOOK, A BOOK… A CHILDREN’S BOOK!! Can you paint the illustrations? :D!!
Hehe, I probably could. That would be fun! Thank you, Hen! 🙂
It’s supposed to be the San Francisco earthquake. I didn’t even realize I wrote hurricane…
It’s so interesting where our interpretations take us… My grandson had just finished reading “The Fantastic Flying Books of Mr. Morris Lessmore” to his little sister…
It is interesting. I also just realized that I didn’t even write hurricane. I reread it really early this morning and thought that I had! 😀
😀 !! hee, hee… I hear ya!!
Ha! We can never be quite sure where our muse will take us, can we? 😉
Marie Elena
No, never. Thanks for reading and commenting, Marie. ❤
!! 🙂 !!
A wicked prompt. My cack-handed response is here: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2013/06/10/accidental-marion/
Accidental Marion
Moving house was a hobby for Mum,
like horse riding, hot air ballooning or tiger shooting.
The chance to live in Worcester Park or Sunnymeads,
Old Park Ridings instead of Prague –
haphazard choice of fate –
led to numerous friends loved and left behind:
Chris, the friend who’s a boy but not a boyfriend,
or Pat, a bully until year six when we became best mates,
or turnip-head Mike who made all the girls blue
with his haughty ways and handsome face.
The accidental geography of my life continued apace
as marriage took me here and there –
maybe it’s in my genes –
until the revolution that brought us to France
where we’ve stayed for twenty-plus years.
Come to think of it, the moving doesn’t stop –
we’ve lived in four different houses here,
now preparing to move to a fifth.
Rolling stones gathering no moss,
we won’t die rich. I wonder where we’ll go.
… Oh Viv…
“accidental geography of my life continued”… sounds like me in my 20s. I love this… especially the ending, Viv.
Thanks, Laurie. This prompt was a cheerer-upper.
Hear, hear! 🙂
Marie Elena
When I was young we moved many times but after I married (the second time) we built and have been here almost 33 years. I beginning to think it is time for a change- maybe.
Love the poem and the knowing a little more about you.
That last stanza is so beautiful/wistful…I love this, Viv!
Oh, my goodness – I wasn’t even gonna try but I’m not a quitter (usually).
Elizabeth (the) Queen
Bear in mind, please, that cars used to be big
submarines of the dry lands and mama
drove an old ’59 De Sota like a queen.
Elizabeth wore a filmy teal scarf on her head
had long, rounded, fiery red fingernails
that tapped a beat on the steering wheel
while sipping Seven-up and smoking Virginia Slims
“You’ve Come a long way baby’.
My brother and sister and I would
sit in the backseat driving her crazy
on long trips with our civil war.
We’d fuss and fight, cry and howl
like Scottish warriors of the highlands,
till mama reached in the backseat
and started smacking willy-nilly.
When I got older, I got the front seat –
that’s written in stone – shot gun! –
and read. I read so much mama said
I was gonna turn into a mushroom.
My friend, Carol, and I went to the movies
every Saturday. We dreamed of Paris
and of looking like Catherine Deneuve.
Oh, the good old days!
1. Your mother’s first name. Elizabeth
2. A wild animal. bear
3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to. Paris
4. A hobby. reading
5. A mode of transportation. De Sota
6. Your least favorite vegetable. mushrooms
7. A “lucky” number. seven
8. Your favorite color. teal
9. Three random words. crazy, queen, movies
10. Historical event. Civil war
11. A childhood friend. Carol
12. The street on which you grew up. Highland
This made me forget the rules we were playing by, Debi. Nice work!
Marie Elena
Thanks, Marie. You and Walt put me on the rack with this one but being stretched is a good thing ; )
“Driving her crazy with our civil war…” So well put! Great poem, Debi! 🙂
Thanks, Erin. 🙂
Oh! I smiled at that line too… Loved the whole, creative scene!!! 🙂 !!
Greta’s Liberty
Mama was so young and GREEN
Back when she was NINE
WWII, PEARL HARBOR seen
She turned out just fine
LIFE would not bring mama down
She had lots of dreams
She’d ride a MOTORCYCLE round
Down HIGHWAY 1 she’d scream
To SYDNEY she would go one day
Eat OCRA from a jar
With KANGAROOS and dingoes play
And drive a left lane car
When she returned she’d call HERB up
To show him PHOTOGRAPHS
Such HAPPINESS would fill her cup
With endless smiles and laughs
1. Your mother’s first name. Greta
2. A wild animal. Kangaroo
3. A city you’ve never visited, but would like to. Sydney
4. A hobby. Photography
5. A mode of transportation. Motorcycle
6. Your least favorite vegetable. Okra
7. A “lucky” number. 9
8. Your favorite color. Green
9. Three random words. Life, liberty, happiness
10. Historical event. Pearl Harbor
11. A childhood friend. Herb
12. The street on which you grew up. Highway 1 (Rural Northern Maine)
You can write in any form, meter and rhyme scheme. 7/5 Trochee
Your title will be the answer to #1 + the second random word in #9.
I love this. I’m learning to love your mother, too.
Yeah. She kind of grows on you. lol
Me too, Earl. Love the way you present her to us.
Marie Elena
Sounds like a blast! 🙂
!! 😀 !!
Mine would not copy with color, underline or bold.
Ruth Ages
Turned seven on Rockaway Parkway,
where the ‘L’ train ran. A few years
later, I made a good friend named
Ilene. Mom always let up help
with baking, and I still enjoy
the process. Mom is old now,
and I wonder if she remembers
how we all cheered when Nixon
resigned, the time New York
Magazine’s cover shot was of
a purple eggplant that looked
exactly like Nixon’s face,
and how I always rooted out
lima beans from my vegetable
soup. Does she think back
to the time I bought her
a stuffed lion, her favorite
animal, and she named him,
Dreyfuss. Someday, If I get
to visit Austin, where I have
family I barely get to see,
we will gather our memories
of Mom together, and perhaps
we will learn something.
Awww! Such a tender tribute. Poignant, but promising. Excellent!
Marie Elena
Thanks, Marie!
So beautiful, Sara! I love how you portray your mom here.
Thanks, Erin!
Oh, I just Love this, Sara… and, I do hope that you will get to visit Austin… (you may never want to leave that special city, tho :)!!)
Thanks, Hen!
Aleph’s Name
There’s a photograph on the wall, framed
in scrolled silver-plate, and the photo always
falls askew, slips and tucks into the bottom
white matt like the sinking of the Mary Rose.
She refuses to sit, be still, be centred.
She is my mother: Aleph.
Her name is ancient, a glyph on walls, a mark
by scribes on the stone lions of Babylon, inscribed
on the eight towers of Ravenna. You’ll find
her name where truth sprouts from sands,
across deserts silently running as time races
blind through Syria’s ruins, and you’ll find
her name on temple columns that drink
from the Blue Nile. Her name speaks of bridled
oxen in Samarian, an ox’s head in Arabic.
She is my mother, Aleph.
Stubborn as the ox, refusing to be positioned
within confines of silver. Aleph, in Hebrew –
words spoken in truth, she – the silent one,
she – who is sometimes first but never last.
She is my mother, Aleph.
Aleph, King of Breath. Aleph, air of the universe,
and the lungs of one’s soul. Aleph, your name
speaks of Oneness with God. My mother, Aleph,
who’s off centre and slipping to the bottom of silver,
a name that calls to her from beginning to end.
She is my mother, Aleph.
1. Aleph 2. Lions and oxen 3. Ancient Babylon 4. Photography 5. Running 6. Sprouts 7. Eight 8. Blue 9. Sand Name End 10. Sinking of the Mary Rose 11. Mary 12. Ravenna Blvd.
I think this is utterly superb.
Oh, Misk … wow …
Marie Elena
Many thanks to the both of you.
This has the feeling of something a cantor would sing. I am not Jewish but have several friends who are, and the more eloquent of them have a palpably rhythmic sound in their speech. Your piece has that feel.
Oh my…I can’t even believe how beautiful this is! You did an amazing job putting all those random pieces together, Misky.
Thanks, Erin.
Oh, I soo agree!!
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Couldn’t resist this prompt! Couldn’t highlight and on my tablet so you’ll have to guess–apparently Walt and I share a fondness for tigers 🙂
Jackie Sea
From Sandhurst
Jackie flies to Venice
With a tiger, Erin
Buckled beside her
They stare out
At a turquoise sea
Where the sun paints
Figure eights just to
Please them
No Berlin Wall exists
Between her and
Joy when she spies
Hominy hues of
The Venetian village
Below
I was right there in your picture…!! Loved this!!
So was I! (or was that cause my name is in there? 😉 ) Lovely poem, Sara!
hee, hee…
For me, this is a visual delight.
BONNIE’S HEART
Dirt road dreams
of faraway places
happy days,
and cuddling
polar bear faces.
Blue sky wishes
of walking on the moon,
flying off to Paris,
and writing
poetry to make hearts swoon.
Green grass reality
isn’t quite that life;
raising four kids,
hating celery,
but I love being Tommy’s wife.
2013-06-13
P. Wanken
*Bonnie, polar bear, Paris, writing poetry, flying, celery, four, blue, dreams, heart, happy, walking on the moon, Tommy, dirt road
This reads like a story, and with such wistfulness and love. Wonderful.
Yes, the wistfulness… and yet… the Love…
[…] Written for Poetic Bloomings #111: Puzzle Pieces. […]
A piece of prose.
Marjorie Marsh
MARJORIE MARSH aged SIX
of FIR TREE AVENUE, SEATTLE,
gifted her boyfriend, STEPHEN BRADLEY
(he of the flowing red locks)
a pound and a half of fresh BROAD BEANS
delivered by BLUE BALLOON,
across the hedge that divided their abodes
and with a note attached urging her beloved
(for so he was, despite his failings of which Marjorie kept a list).
The aforementioned missive was replete
with advice on how he might, should he still desire her heart,
mend his ways and thus earn her respect and undying devotion.
Amongst the many errors of his comportment that young Marjorie
considered most heinous was his habit of dressing like Zorro
at the FENCING club and calling himself “The RED PANDA”
and not least his overly HIRSUTE back, which proper young ladies
found unsightly, to say the very least.
She admonished him further reminding her love, (kindly but firmly she thought)
of how the Portuguese sinners were punished by G-d (she was careful like that!)
on Easter Sunday in the LISBON EARTHQUAKE OF 1755.
Marjorie waited and waited and waited for an earnest reply and finally
with her considerable (she was certain) patience under too great a strain,
she rang his doorbell with a finger that was already in a pointing and wagging frame of mind.
Surprised when the door opened, to be greeted by a lady of whom she had no recall
and astounded to be told that Steve (she did not approve of name shortening!)
had moved to Canada with a hippy-chick called Tina in a 1964 VW bus that her (Tina’s) parents had been to Woodstock in.
At first dismayed and angry, our heroine’s spirits soon rose when presented to the youngest
member of this new household, to wit , Master Timothy, aged 7, who, it seemed to Marjorie Marsh, was overflowing with faults that would be deserving of her never-ending attention,
not least the way he failed to sweep his overly long blonde fringe away from his eyes and the fact that one of his shoe laces was (it would soon become apparent) always undone.
Marjorie sighed and went home to rest, she had a great deal to consider before instructing her wayward mother on the correct positioning of food groups on a young ladies luncheon plate.
Next door Tim (that would have to stop and soon!) was running around with a stick for no truly fathomable reason, blissfully unaware that his for-no-fathomable-reason-days were very soon to end.
Iain
Oh my goodness! Iain, this is hilarious! “…his for-no-fathomable-reason days were very soon to end.” That is such a great line! Love this poem, Iain. 🙂
Thank you Erin. Whacky mood today… almost as nutty in my poem at Poetic Asides today. 🙂
You’re welcome. I like nutty poems… 🙂
!! :)!!
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