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BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS – PROMPT #108

Bad, bad, bad. That’s what we headed out to write. But As we found, trying to write badly is not easy. Our poetic discipline kicks in and we still write a good poem. We learn that there is no “bad” poem.

The bad news is, I am flying solo today as Marie is away from her computer and internet connection this week. She will be back ASAP, but until then I’ll be holding the fort.

It’s not all bad news. The wedding of my daughter went off wonderfully and the reception was quite a celebration. She was glowing and my new son (in-law) is everything I would have imagined for my daughter. They’re off on the right foot.

But… we were writing “bad”. And you were all wonderfully “bad”. So my lone task is this: Pick a BEAUTIFUL BLOOM, and so…

WALT’S CHOICE:

This selection is a good “bad” poem rife with imagery and loaded with humor, That’s NOT what makes it bad, and that’s the problem with most of the poems submitted. David’s piece below just jumped out at me,  and receives my BLOOM.

COUNTRY LOVE : New Version ; by David De Jong

I love you bigger, than the back side of my horse.
I can’t wait to see you, so I hurry with the chores.
My love for you is so strong, let me show you how,
Stronger than my tractor, pulling that big old plow.

Holdin’ your hand comes normal, puts me at ease.
While you’re standin there; could you hand me that grease?
You’re just like the spare tire on my old truck,
You help me get goin’ whenever I get stuck.

Won’t never forget the first time you caught my eye,
There at the county fair, when it plopped in your pie.
You licked it; and slicked it; wiped it all clean,
You is the prettiest my eye ever seen.

No one can fix an old rooster the way you do,
How you kill an’ butcher em, fixin’ that fine stew.
They don’t know what hit em when you whack em dead,
Their legs runnin’, chassin’ crazy, lookin’ for their head.

I know how they feel, tryin’ to recollect their hinds,
Love for you drives me loco, the only thing on my mind.
I’ll be thinking on you, while I watch the cows graze,
Like green grass, I’ll be lovin’ you, rest of my days.

 

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12 thoughts on “BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS – PROMPT #108

  1. Wonderfully bad, indeed!!

    Congratulations, Walt and all the best to Marie…

    Warm smiles to all in the garden!

  2. Marjory MT on said:

    OH, YES, WONDERFUL piece of fun. Not sure how many times I stopped back to re-read it. Thanks, Walt and Marie for such a delightful week. (and I think we surpassed any former count for number of poems and comments ion one prompt.)

  3. DebiSwim on said:

    Somehow this made me think of a Red Green quote, “If the women don’t find you handsome, they should at least find you handy”… with a bad poem : ) Good job.

    Walt, glad the stress is off and everything went well. Any more daughters to marry off?

  4. sheryl kay oder on said:

    This was one of my favorites. it kept me laughing.

  5. Nice! Um…bad. I mean, nicely bad. 😀

  6. Thanks Walt! (I think – it’s a conundrum – to be happy or sad it was picked). Mom said I was good at being bad.
    Fun prompt – had fun reading everyone’s and glad this made folks laugh. Gave my lovely wife a disclaimer before she read it – “please do not take it personal”. She had fun with it too. Thanks again all.

  7. Henrietta Choplin on said:

    Ha, ha, ha… Congratulations, David, this was such a fun prompt!

  8. William Preston on said:

    Wonderful choice; made me think of the songs on the old Hee Haw show.

  9. Well, I think it’s better to be loved ‘like an old spare tire’ than not loved at all…

  10. My husband doesn’t enjoy poetry, but I think he’ll really get in to this one (He’s a farmer at heart.)

  11. janeshlensky on said:

    Congrats, David. Great one!

  12. Congratulations David–that eye in the pie was definitely inspired 😉 A most excellent “bad” poem–great choice Walt! And congratulations on your daughter’s marriage, glad that everything went off without a hitch 😉

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