The Rubáiyát is a Persian form made of several quatrains. Its name derives from the Arabic plural of the word for “quatrain.” This, in turn, comes from the Arabic Rubá, meaning “four.”
This Persian form of poetry is an unlimited series of rhymed quatrains. In each quatrain, all lines rhyme except the third, leading to this pattern:
a
a – 2nd line rhymes with the first.
b
a – 4th line rhymes with the first and second
Example
These are some of the favorite quatrains from the Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyam translated by Edward Fitzgerald:
Wake! For the Sun who scattered into flight
The Stars before him from the Field of Night,
Drives Night along with them from Heaven and Strikes
The Sultan’s Turret with a Shaft of Light.
[Stanza 1]
Come, fill the Cup, and in the fire of Spring
The Winter garment of Repentance fling;
The Bird of Time has but a little way
To fly – and Lo! the Bird is on the Wing.
[Stanza 7, 1st edition]
A Book of Verses underneath the Bough,
A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread — and Thou
Beside me singing in the Wilderness —
Oh, Wilderness were Paradise enow!
[Stanza 12]
The Moving Finger writes; and having writ,
Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it.
[Stanza 71]
For more information see: Rubiyat
MARIE ELENA’S Rubáiyát:
Rosie’s Book of Monster Love (a Rubáiyát for little ones)
On a page where monsters lurked, Underpaid and overworked, Unacknowledged, unasked-for, Feeling useless, sad, and irked There amongst the story’s snooty Characters of empty beauty Overvalued, charmless types Moral character off-duty Lived delightful little Rosie – Chatty, she, and very nosey. She transformed the monsters’ page, Made it colorful and cozy, Summoned monsters, large and small, Left out not-a-one at all, Made them tea and cakes to savor Oh, those monsters had a ball! Rosie held each monster tight, Loved “so much,” and took delight Being cuddle-loved by ogres On the page devised for fright! Rosie spread her arms out wide, “All friends here!” she beamed with pride. As each page turned eagerly, Rosie’s love spread story-wide. © Copyright Marie Elena Good – 2013 (In honor of my just-turned-two granddaughter Sophie [aka “Rose” and “Rosie”]. When she loves a toy, she squeezes tight and says “SO much! SOOOOO much!” She also often spreads her arms wide as described in my poem, as if to pull all of us in the room into her arms, and exclaims, “All friends, here!” while she just beams with delight. We have no idea where she gets this stuff. 😉 The love of our lives, for sure!)WALT’S ATTEMPT:
DARKNESS IN THE WESTERN SKY
A lurking sense of animus
for one who once was amorous,
descends upon a heart so torn
leaving love less glamorous.
Surrendered heart left mangled
from a tethered heart so dangled,
a soul in distant shadows lives
in memories deeply tangled.
When eyes are closed one’s vision clears
and in the whistling wind one hears
the sounds of life harmonious,
although separated by the years.
The softness of her hand still lingers
in the tactile stroking of her fingers;
a touch to play inside your heart
like the song of celestial singers.
And in the West her body rests,
with hands held folded across her chest,
and perpetual night remains descended
clutched against her tranquil breast.
How can this love in memory lie
long after reasons for it dies?
Do souls get punished for misgivings
to assure that we the living cry?
© Copyright Walter J. Wojtanik – 2013
Responses
Marie, this is such a fun poem! Your little Sophie sounds like such a cutie pie! She must get that “all friends here” attitude from you…cause who couldn’t become friends with you? 🙂
Walt, this is absolutely beautiful! I love the way you write!
I find if interesting that both of your poems are six stanzas. 🙂
Aww! Thanks Erin! She sure is a cutie pie, and SOOO much fun!
Marie Elena
Marie, I saw the birthday video you put up. Your daughter is precious. I loved how she loved her little pig to the exclusion of nearly everything else. So sweet. I can see her in your poem.
Walt – those last lines are thought provoking.Nice
How sweet you are! Thank you Debi!
Marie Elena
Fleeting Moments
In darkness, by the lamp’s pale light,
I sit and wonder what to write;
My mind has drawn a blank, and so
I sigh and sit there, clothed in night.
The clock ticks softly, moments slide
Away, scarce noticed as my mind
Has drawn a blank, and as I sit
The minutes pass, the hours fly;
Fleeting moments, gone for good, and
Soft stored in sea and yellow sand,
Earth’s hourglass of memories,
In vast blue sky, and rolling land.
© Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2013
Oh… I Loved: “…Soft stored in sea and yellow sand,/Earth’s hourglass of memories,…”
Thank you, Hen! I’m so glad you liked it! That was definitely my favorite part to write. 🙂
Yes, that last verse is esp. lovely
Thanks, Debi!
Oh how often have I felt like that!
Yeah, me too. Thanks for reading, Viv!
Erin, yours flows so nicely. I have a tough time with forms that have an odd rhyme scheme such as this one. Especially your first and last stanzas gracefully float right through. Beautiful, and very fine example!
Marie Elena
Thank you so much, Marie! I have a hard time with most rhyme schemes, this one no less. But I’ve had an idea for a poem in my head for a while and this form have me the chance to write it. Thanks, again, for reading and for your wonderful comment!
Lovely, Erin. Well done.
‘clothed in night’ so serene! Really enjoyed the melancholy flavor and imagery in this poem.
Thank you, Claudsy and Janet!!
Interesting post, thank you for sharing this. 🙂
I read Rubaiyyat by Omar Kayyam, and I must say I like the Arabic version better than the English translation. One the problems of translating structured poem like Rubbaiyyat is the adherence to form that often hinders the meaning. The same thing applies to Rumi’s mathnawi. That is why his free poetry is much more popular than Mathnawi, and a lot of people are just taking from Mathnawi anyway, without necessarily paying much attention to the form being displayed.
Welcome, Subhan, and thank you so much for your input. I’m sure you’re absolutely correct about the adherence to form often hindering meaning when translated.
I hope you will write one of your own for us here, or post one you have previously penned. You are more than welcome to join in!
Again, thank you so much for your additional information!
Marie Elena
Meg… Just Delightful; I could almost see Maurice Sendak’s illustrations!! Grandchildren are just absolutely Precious!!!
Walt… such beauty in your memories/words of your special person…!
Wow … thank you, Hen!
Marie Elena
🙂 !
Walt’s first, because this is serious poetry: gorgeous, skilled, romantic and lovely – any more adjectives I can think of.
Marie, yours is so sweet, and leaves a happy cozy feeling after reading it.
I was given the Rubayat of Omar Kayam when I was about ten, and didn’t understand it, but treasured it for the beautiful binding and for the giver of the gift. I wish I still had it.
Thanks Viv! And yes, Walt’s is truly gorgeous, skilled, romantic, and lovely – like so very much of what he writes.
Marie Elena
[…] Poetic Bloomings has set us the task of writing a Rubàiyàt This sample verse from the Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyam translated by Edward Fitzgerald leapt out at me: […]
My poem is on my blog: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2013/02/27/winter-rubiyt/
It’s a bit of and I should edit it a bit.
I commented on site, Viv. LOVELY! You make me wish for spring. 😉
Marie Elena
Love that last line, Viv!
a bit of a draft! My laptop keeps jumping about and missing words and putting words in the wrong places…..
Here in WV we are “Four Seasons Country” and I am thankful to be here. I do get tired of winter near the end but I agree that it is an introspective time of the year, for me more so than any other time. It is a cocooning time for me.
I love your thoughts on the seasons.
RUBAIYAT IS WHAT YOU GET
Today I take my pen and try to write
a Persian kind of poem that Omar liked
to fiddle with when he would meditate
in deepest thought the meaning of one’s life.
I must admit my work can never rate
beside the Rubaiyat that clinched his fate
but still I take the risk and write some lines:
iambically I stand up to the plate.
Oh, dear readers, I hope you will be kind
and not consider that I’ve lost my mind
for thinking I can rattle off in verse
what Omar wrote of women, song, and wine.
I tried the rubaiyat––things could be worse.
It’s not like I’m open to Omar’s curse.
If I fail, dear friends, I did my best.
At least I kept this relatively terse.
#
But you didn’t fail – this is splendid, rhythmically powerful and highly inventive!
Hear, hear! Great job, Sal!
Marie Elena
This is great! You most certainly did NOT fail!
Commented onsite, Viv. I love poems about nature and the seasons.
My first comment should have gone to Viv and placed itself here, so don’t feel confused, dear Sal. As I’ve thought of all the rest,, would that my attempt becomes no nest, of vipers wriggling to score a strike against my next test.
Oddly enough, I have no idea why I just did that. It just poured out. Loved your poem, Sal.
As usual, Sal. Wonderful
Well done. Salvatore!
Oh, those transition words stayed true to form, Sal!
I was caught off-guard when reading your rubaiyat examples. I taught this form at Mindful Poetry a couple years ago and understood the guidelines differently.
Well, I looked the form up elsewhere to discover that your examples were as described! I had *always* thought rubaiyat was an interlocking poem like the terza rima. But that’s not always true as both of your examples demonstrate.
Thanks for teaching me something new today, fellow poets!
I taught the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam for years with Asian Studies students who gave the form a try as well. The instructions we were to follow suggested that the final line must be “a fingernail to the heart”–a line that drives home the point of the other lines. It’s harder to do than it looks.
It amazes me to learn that two of you have taught this form. How exciting! Please do chime in with whatever knowledge/examples you have to offer. That’s what we are all about here — helping one another learn and grow.
Marie Elena
Walt, Marie, I read your poems and I was hooked on this form! I will return to read more later. the kids home today due to weather.
Mercy-song
The music of life’s fervent flow
Is bittersweet; now swift, now slow
The rise and fall of centuries
Surging, to melt like streams of snow
Hail, moment-tear, why do you rush
To tune the sphere of midnight’s hush?
I pause to hear your subtle sigh
Sparkle on daybreak’s dew-drenched brush
The virgin gleam of morning-spire
Throbs, a requiem of new desire
Replenishing our flagging vim
In cadences from heaven’s choir
Ah, agony of moment-mirth
Of shadows spilling on dusk’s girth
Where soon the dawn provokes the dark
And splashes grace across the earth
We lift our cups up, brave and high
To taste life’s honey from the sky
For soon its dripping melody
Will sweep in languid lullaby
The music of life’s second chance
Inspires us to dream and dance
Forsaking yesterday’s lament
To revel in hope’s moment-glance
Mercy and grace do not keep score
Kissing our failures through Time’s door
They tune their harps with renewed zest
And beckon us to sing once more
This is lovely, Janet. Flows well and naturally for me. Good job.
Thank-you Claudsy. Between teaching my son Matt how to make donuts, (he thinks it’s a domestic miracle;) then discovering that one daughter may have chicken-pox, between trying to decide which college to choose for another daughter I was still determined to try this form, It intrigues me immensely and I find it quite evocative. It’s been challenging of late to stay connected, but lounging here in this garden tonight is such a reprieve from life’s heavier hours.
That is so true, Janet. I don’t envy you the turmoil and disruption in a domestic sense, but I understand the intrigue of this form. As I say to myself, “Try it, you might like it.” Good luck. I can hardly wait to see what you come up with.
And good luck with that Chicken pox scare.
You nailed it, Janet. You inspired me.
Jane, thank-you so much. I was awed by the words of Omar, wooed by the words of Marie and dumb-struck by the words of Walt and through it all, inspired. I appreciate your affirmation.
*sigh* Oh, to write with such elegance …
Marie Elena
Marie, you always give me confidence not to quit. Thank-you:) I’ve missed my strolls here, but sometimes life requires us to shuffle our priorities for a little while. It’s nice to see some newbies here too!
We understand priorities, Janet, and are always THRILLED when you return.
Marie Elena
Gosh, this is so beautiful! Left me breathless, Janet. I love it!!
Yes… just beautiful!
[…] IN-FORM POET WEDNESDAY – RUBÁIYÁT | POETIC BLOOMINGS. […]
I must admit to trepidation when I saw this prompt. You’re talking about one of my ever favorite poets here and his signature piece. But, I chose to face the dragon and do battle. Only you all can tell me whether I pulled it off or not.
Retreat
Cloud breezes carry your song
To fill my heart with such strong
Desires that secrets must be guarded
From prying eyes that would think them wrong.
Bird song pierces forest’s dark,
Strengthening my yearning, a stark
Reminder of how lonely life becomes
When I cannot hold onto your vivid life spark.
That I find life here with you bold
Speaks to those who look and scold
Me for taking myself from comforts new
To squirrel myself away in virgin forest’s gold.
Solitude within green hills console
My spirit, trade joy for works long toll,
Bending me, remolding me, refreshing me,
Withdrawing only at day’s end, leaving me whole.
A lovely retreat, Clauds. I especially find rest and solace in your final quatrain. Lovely.
Marie Elena
“Solitude within green hills console” beautiful
Thank you so much, Marie. I’m glad it didn’t wander too far along its path.
Lovely!
Thank you, Erin. Glad you liked it.
Oh yes… that last stanza… I feel refreshed!
Aw, bless you, Henrietta.
And you, my friend…
Oh, what a beautiful piece of heaven. Thank you for taking me there!
[…] In-form Poet Wednesday – Rubáiyát (poeticbloomings.com) […]
Cheers
Chablis, merlot, and cabernet,
And you beside me, come what may
Riesling, pinot, and maybe cheeses
Whatever pleases us, just stay.
Sauvignon blanc, perhaps Champagnes,
We’ll sample red and rose strains,
Aperitif or dessert fare
What wondrous choices tickle brains.
On cushions lush, we’ll rest and splay
And sleep entwined until the day
Then we’ll take Advil—two or three—
And pray the headache goes away.
Enjoying the playful feel of this, Jane, and the bit of internal rhyme. Thanks for the smiles!
Marie Elena
Fun poem – “just stay” “entwine until the day” Love those thoughts
A nice red Merlot for me please;) but not on an empty stomach! Enjoyed this. Yes, cheers! In one month its only 4 days til April!
“…and sleep entwined…”
LOL White Zen for me. This was a fun read!
Grammar Lesson #17
Misunderstood superlatives
may feel like irksome relatives
for tongues can’t handle EST’s
on multi-syllabic adjectives.
Add “most” to multiply abuse
and soon you’ll hurt yourself to use
“most beautifulest” to describe
a swan as if it were a goose.
Of course, comparatives can bleed
just as superlatives; we plead
“more knowledgeabler” as an ample
example of words that won’t succeed.
Why torture our descriptions so?
Perhaps we want the world to know
that positives are not enough
compared to worlds of tell and show.
The most playfullest and learnabler one of the bunch!
Marie Elena
Don’t she speak Goodly?
Walt
Marie can only speak Good-ly, nyoknyoknyok.
Ha, ha, ha… Thanks for the outburst, Walt!
Ha! You two wags! One of the sweetest compliments I had as a teacher was from a young man with severe limitations who proclaimed that I was “the bestest” and that day’s class was “gooder’n anythin’”. It didn’t make me look like the best English teacher, but I always remember him and that most heart-feltest comment.
Hahaha! Love it! On a similarish note: we had a Chinese graduate student by the name of Tao in our department at U. Toledo one year. He was grateful to our chairman for a glowing reference letter, and expressed in this way, “Thank you, Dr. Freimer. You are valueless!” I just about lost it. I knew he meant “priceless,” and really – what’s the big difference, right? Oh English, you are the bestest kind of language there is.
Marie Elena
:0 LOVED the poem and this little story. We are having grammar lessons at our writer’s group and I am enjoying them immensely. Grade 8 feels like a long time ago:)
Hehe! This is great, Jane! My mom is my English teacher so I’m not allowed to make mistakes…at least, they don’t go unnoticed. Although, sometimes I sneak in a favoritest or bestest or something. 😉
!! 😀 !!
Sweet Spring
Indolent breezes gently waft perfume,
eau de lilac, from mauve clusters of bloom
that float on spring’s congenial currents
like silk threads woven on a fairy loom
I raise my windows and open the door
as fierce neural pleasures tingle my core
while breathing in great fragrant draughts of scent
that rivals any famous sultry shore.
Oh spring, spring, with sweet Syringa flower
the dismal winter you over power
in purple paroxysm you chide Jack Frost
this undoubtedly your finest hour.
“indolent breezes”
“spring’s congenial currents”
“silk threads woven on a fairy loom”
“sultry shore”
Sweet, indeed!
Marie Elena
Thank you Marie. I don’t think I could have done as many stanzas as you and Walt. Wow.
I’m normally more of a short poem type as well, Debi. Walt has said of me that poetry comes in blips and bursts (or something like that, lol!). And he is right. 😉
Marie Elena
Blips and Blurbs. Now that’s Good poetry!
Walt
Heyhey! I was close. 😉
Marie Elena
LOVED the whimsical nature of this poem. So many great lines but tis one stood out to me, ‘in purple paroxysm you chide Jack Frost’ Beautiful!
Beautiful, Debi! Spring is one of my favorite topics to write about. 🙂
Loved: “…silk threads woven on a fairy loom…” Magical…
Having a Little Fun
We skip along a wide and shady street
Make slapping noises with our sandaled feet
We laugh and wave to people passing by
It’s something we like often to repeat
Pretending to fly high up in a plane
Or zip along the ground in speeding train
We honk our horns or make sounds like the wind
Folks watching us might think we’ve gone insane
We say the sky is green and grass is blue
Or slosh about as if the street is goo
Or grope around as if we cannot see
The neighbors do make comments, quite a few
At time we make our voices sound so low
And then pretend we only can go slow
We act like we’re one-hundred-twenty-three
Or play we’re wearing snowshoes in the snow
Imagination is a friend of ours
Together, we have great super powers
We can be just anything we want as
We all perform and carry on for hours
Already partial to poetry for children, this one warmed my heart, Connie!
Marie Elena
Thank-you for using your imagination to make us smile…I hope a part of me remains forever ‘the child’!
Yes… me too!!
Love this! Imagination is one of God’s most spectacular gifts to mankind, I truly believe. Well done, Connie!
In the Rubaiyat, that fourth line of each quatrain really does zap the message home of that segment. That must mean that the first two lines set up a premise which the third line either illuminates or refutes and the final line stabs the message home (though usually seeing life as a training ground for learning love of the divine and seeing life as little more than a doorway). Anyway, here’s my attempt at writing final lines that “puncture”
Fingernail to the Heart
Carpe Diem inspires in every Spring
a need to bloom, enlivening everything,
but every cycle proves that beauty fleets
and what we seize today is withering.
A picture of ourselves when we were young
smiling and lovely, honey on our tongue,
reveals how little we knew of the cost
of expectations, moments come unstrung.
Life is untenable, tenacious, frail,
a battered boundless ship facing a gale,
and everything we think we know as true
becomes a distant beacon doomed to fail.
And yet, there’s worth in every beating heart
that waits for morning, flirting with the dark;
we seek salvation using our time well
and long for Spring as buds bloom and depart.
Yes, good title…
Picture of Self
Looking in the glass I see
Myself standing on a beach, the sea
Pounding on the golden sand,
The sea breeze slapping, clawing at me,
The waves keening their mournful
Dirge, forcing rocks to blend in painful
Harmony; my face is turned
Away from the dawn, set in scornful,
Bitter sneer, my hands holding
Tight to the thick blackness surrounding
Me; I will not let it go,
Cloak of darkness, around me wrapping.
I watch myself standing there;
A single tear falls, I cannot bear
It. The dawn is coming! Turn!
And still, proud and hard, I’m standing there.
I watch in horror, and fear
As the sun rises, a red sun, near;
But, with ever tigh’ning grip,
I keep the midnight there, dark and drear.
Suddenly, the picture fades,
I’m still sitting at the mirror, shades
Of evening circling me;
All is still, night approaches, dark parades.
And I see, it dawns on me,
What I had witnessed, me as surely
I would be, if He hadn’t
Called, saved me by His grace, forgiven me with His mercy.
© Copyright Erin Kay Hope – 2013
Powerful images, Erin!!
Thank you so much, Hen! I am so very grateful for His wonderful love and mercy everyday!
Yes!
NORTHERN RESPITE
I hold you all in high esteem
while you are nestled in your dreams
of peace on earth and sugarplums
and chocolate butter crèmes.
While I, here in this Northern place,
this jolly, happy tranquil space,
am matching names upon my list
to each and every hopeful face.
The busy little people here
are always full of Christmas cheer,
whistling Merry Christmas tunes
365 days of the year.
And Mama and the lady elves
are restocking all the pantry shelves,
ingredients for cookie baking,
the very best (if they say so themselves).
In the workshop, where I work with the boys,
building and planning the hottest new toys.
We’re getting the hype machine rolling quite quickly,
to stir the excitement (without all the noise).
I reflect for a moment, I know that I should
get a second glimpse of the ones that are good,
and keep a trained eye on the names that are naughty,
and hope to reform them. I think that I could.
Out near the stables where the reindeer by name,
get themselves ready for the next reindeer games,
a grand exhibition of brawn, might and flight,
the very first leg on their journey to fame.
In Caribou Corners (where the North Pole Stands),
the townsfolk gear up for the season’s demands,
the hustle and bustle here never escapes them,
or falls from their warm mitten’d hands.
Now the wind, it whistles through the pines,
a familiar sound; it whirs and whines,
keeping the temperatures quite cold
for the icicles to shine.
And me? I’m sitting in my chair,
my mug of hot cocoa steaming there,
with peaks of whipped cream, all snowy white,
‘tis a cup beyond all compare.
It’s here that I like to take my pause
to contemplate this Christmas cause,
a mantle which I accept with pride
for I am Santa Claus.
Why hello, Santa! Thank you for the update from the North Pole! It sure sounds cozy and busy and fun!
You have such awesome talent, Walt… I can just see these images and taste the hot cocoa!! 🙂
City Trees
Along each side-street, in a row
Planted by those who did not know
That roots dig deep and branches spread
A tree needs plenty of room to grow.
The trees have grown, some dwarfed, deformed
Yet early on every cold spring morn
Birds will rise to sing their songs
praising the day that is newly born.
Gently, a swishing summer breeze
A leafy ripple passes to tease
Away the pounding, afternoon sun
And sets to dancing the highest leaves.
“Widen the streets” the dreaded order comes
from city hall and soon the chain-saws hum,
toppling the trees – the streets are naked, bare…
Fireplace smoke rises to greet the winter sun.
Oh, how sad! The poor trees! I feel sorry for them… 😦
!! 😦 !
Really like this form!
High Atop
Where towers of the mighty rose,
inhabitants wore well made clothes,
segregated from the hoi polloi, had
breakfast in bed when they arose.
How they partied, drank, and danced
with never a backward glance,
or fear that things could instantly change
in the speakeasies they financed.
Uneasy murmurs of dwindling cash
where lives changed in flash,
surely was not true, they said,
until the papers proclaimed, CRASH!
That most have been so scary! One of the darkest times in American history… Very well expressed, Sara!
!!!
What a good way to relay a piece of history. I enjoyed reading this and at first guessing event the poem portrayed.
I started mine… was it yesterday, or the day before that…? Hmmm…. well, it is a difficult form for me…
Running Away?
I find myself needing to run
Get out about and have some fun
Just clear my mind, yes this will do
Run free, hair flying in the sun…
Then in a puddle go the shoes
The sun is lost, the rain’s come due
Now here I go with soaking feet
And now I think my toes are blue.
Despite that noise, yes now they squeak
Loud up and down the trailing peak
Still Love the freedom of a run
Tho’ with that irksome sound, I creak.
I have felt this way before; the need to run away.I have not had the desire to actually “run” though. LOL I will just walk (fast) away. This gave me a smile thinking of the creak. I definitely relate to that.
!! 😀 !! Thank you, Judy, hee, hee, yes, always my first inclination is to “move away quick” when my mind gets outa sorts — thank goodness that I Love to run!!
Rubaiyat
If I were to write a rubaiyat
what would be my first thought?
I’ve never heard of this form before,
certainly I was never taught.
I’d sit down right here, right now
tell myself – no fear,
write to the form, then rearrange,
that’s right, now get it in gear!
🙂 !!
Rubaiyat Morn
The morning sun invades like wing`ed gull;
white, fluttered light will mutter mid the lull.
Against my wall and blinking at the light_
my eyes; my lashes stuttering to full.
My yawn is cavernous and widely spent;
it breaks this solemn scene of sunlit tint.
So groaning in my bones, I twist and stretch;
my feet now firmly hit the floor thus rent.
Oh, hopeless is that death not soon to come!
Ah, here it is; another gleaming sun!
Another day thus won to work within;
Enlightened is this morn that’s now begun.
Awake! and grab the shades of life before
her sun, so high it races ‘yon your door!
Stand up! and seek the brilliance of today
Before that kiss of light will be no more!
(Form: Rubaiyat form: a,a,b,a (quatrains) iambic pentameter)
“…and seek the brilliance of today…” Yes!!
[…] In-form Poet Wednesday – Rubáiyát […]
http://roslynrosssmallstones.blogspot.com/2014/08/dream.html
[…] http://poeticbloomings.com/2013/02/27/in-form-poet-wednesday-rubaiyat […]