POETIC BLOOMINGS

POETIC BLOOMINGS is a Phoenix Rising Poetry Guild site established in May 2011 to nurture and inspire the creative spirit.

BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS – PROMPT #83

Our earliest friends in life, lived in the room across the hall. In my case, the four boys shared a large bedroom with a bunk bed (two up, two down) and we couldn’t have been closer than that. These “friend/brothers/sisters” have stayed with us in some special way. Today, we fete that connection. To our siblings, we dedicate these BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS:

MARIE ELENA’S CHOICE

It pains me to leave out-of-mention poems that were obvious labors of love; several with amazing stories behind them. However, my “Bloom” this week is enthusiastically offered to Nancy Posy for her poem simply titled “Sisters.” Nancy begins with “Amy appears in my earliest memory…,” a phrase that introduces and precisely articulates the profound effect a sibling has on our own personal world. Another phrase that grabbed me in its eloquent simplicity is, “whenever we assemble, a full set.” Nancy, you mentioned that you wish you could include a photo. If you would like to send me one, I’d be more than happy to post it here with your well-earned “Beautiful Bloom.”

Nancy Posey and sisters

Nancy Posey and sisters

Sisters (by Nancy Posey)

Amy appears in my earliest memory—
at least the idea of her—as I sit,
in the car, just days past turning two,
waiting as my mother is rolled
down the ramp, Daddy walking
beside her, Amy swaddled in her lap.

Becky arrives in 1963, the same fall
the President is shot—both events
tied in my memory to the schoolyard
where I heard one bit of news
and shared the other.

By the time Jeannie arrives—
another girl—we know to be amused,
like Rosencrantz or Guildenstern
playing heads or tails and landing
on heads time after time.

Emily’s arrival prompts barbs
from well-meaning jokers,
certain they were “trying
for a boy,” a notion Daddy
denies–in writing saved until
she is old enough to ask.

Spread farther apart by miles
than years now, we celebrate
whenever we assemble, a full set,
posing for our sister picture,
lined up in order, always singing
“Chestnuts Roasting on an Open Fire,”
our silly tradition, even on the Fourth
of July, making our husbands groan.

WALT’S CHOICE:

My selection touched a chord in that I too had lived with the loss of a sibling. Joesph, who would have been my oldest sib, lived all of eight hours of life. I wonder about his influence had he lived. I visit the grave on occasion, knowing the void was being filled by my other five siblings. I feel your emotion,as much as I feel my own, so SHERYL KAY ODER, I offer my BLOOM as small recompense, and thank you for this work.

Michael David by Sheryl Kay Oder

Squirreled away in the documents file
are the statistics of your life. You were
born and died on the same day.

Even though my bold footprints were small
—2 7/8″ by 1½”, yours were barely visible
and smaller still—2″ by ¾”.

Once I stepped over where they buried you,
but there is no headstone. The cemetery
told us where they laid your remains.

Mother never saw you; they said it would
be better that way. Those who did told her
the two of us looked alike at birth.

It took my own son to create a hole in both
our hearts. As I see my children’s connection
I now know what I have missed.

Congratulations Nancy and Sheryl on your BEAUTIFUL BLOOM selection!

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15 thoughts on “BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS – PROMPT #83

  1. I love your sisters poem Nancy. My sisters and I, too, are “Spread farther apart by miles than years now”, A wonderful expression of your love. And as I said before, Sheryl, your poem about the relationship never fulfilled with your brother is heartbreakingly lovely.

  2. SUCH beautiful-touching blooms indeed!! Well done pickers and congratulations planters on your well deserved blooms!! 🙂

  3. Henrietta Choplin on said:

    Beautiful choices!! Congratulations, Nancy and Sheryl !!

  4. Oh — lovely, both! Excellent choices, as always, Walt & Marie! Nancy – ‘Sisters’ made me smile (being one of a set of three, myself) — especially the chestnuts. 🙂 Sheryl, ‘Michael David’ – poignantly beautiful.

  5. claudsy on said:

    Such amazing and touching choices, Marie and Walt. I agree. These two touched places within me, one who had but one brother, never lost any–though that came close several times–and gained sisters only when I was old enough to claim a few from among friends.

    Nancy, you told your story with such love and humor. None could fail to appreciate the specialness of that relationship of yours or feel a bit left out if they don’t possess one like it.

    And Sheryl, I have cousins who’ve gone through the loss of one they never saw, but who visit the grave regularly, even after decades of life.

    You both wrote lovely tributes to your siblings. Thank you for sharing them with all of us.

  6. Marie and Walt, thanks for the honor. Sheryl, I’m proud to be here with you. I love your poem.

  7. Beautiful bloom choices once more – congrats Nancy and Sheryl … lovely poems both

  8. Marie and I are proud to have had you all accept the invitation to plant your seeds of inspired words here week after week. And that includes the beautiful flowers that are the poets writing the poems as well as the pieces themselves. You all bring joy to these two lives around the Lake here. Thank you! W.

  9. Oh, the embarrassment of doing something quickly! While I like this poem I wrote, I managed to use the wrong symbol for inches. It looks as if our feet were measured in feet, not inches. I am so glad for the opportunity to change this later.

  10. Beautiful! Excellent poems and blooms 🙂 Congratulations Nancy and Sheryl! Nancy, my sister was born that year too.

  11. Beautiful blooms! Congrats to Nancy and Sheryl, and of course, Marie and Walt for their picks and prompts.

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