POETIC BLOOMINGS

POETIC BLOOMINGS is a Phoenix Rising Poetry Guild site established in May 2011 to nurture and inspire the creative spirit.

BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS – PROMPT #44

No matter the destination, a place, a person, an emotion – hitting the road brings great adventure. We are only bound by our imaginations, and as always, our poets have shown there are no limits when the “traveling blues” kick in. And so we present our BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS:

MARIE ELENA’S CHOICE:

What a ride this week has been!  Your poetry took us to so many destinations, complete with scenery and vision, scent and emotion.  As usual, it is very difficult to choose just one poem to highlight.  I finally settled on Sara McNulty’s “Vacation Roadie.”  Who wouldn’t fall in love with a trip that begins on the Yellow Brick Road, and ends at the ocean?  Beautifully done, Sara.  Thank you for this trip through your life’s journey.

Vacation Roadie by Sara McNulty (purpleinportland)

As a child, the yellow
brick road beckoned;
I coveted the ruby slippers,
Toto, and the assorted
adventurers of steel, straw,
and lion fur.

The yellow road was paved
over with concrete; cement steps
leading to work. Sandwiched
in those early adult years, I basked
in the jazz, gumbo, and wrought
iron railings of New Orleans.
Followed up with the Waikiki
weather soaking the white beaches,
and frangipani of Hawaii.

In my fifties, I left part of my heart
in Venice, as we moved on
to Florence, Naples, Rome,
and the beauty and simplicity
of Ischia, strolling from one end
to the other, each block a treasure
of old churches, markets, and food.

Roads have been rough,
smooth, and sometimes
tarred and flat. May all
my roads lead always
to oceans.

WALT’S SELECTION:

This piece moved many people (as evidenced by the comments posted). I was no less stirred by its passion. And it is heartening to have a poem make a great impression with a first bloom. Iris Deurmyer’s “Pursuit” is a journey always worth taking.So, welcome Iris and please accept this BEAUTIFUL BLOOM.

Pursuit by Iris Deurmyer

I followed you relentlessly for I desired to possess you.
You tantalized my dreams and pervaded my thoughts.
Such a breathtaking vision, you seemingly flitted from path to path.
You were as elusive as a butterfly and I lost my direction in pursuit of you.
Dusk came and I wearily paused from my arduous and unfruitful journey.
My lethargy caused me to rest amidst the fragrant moonflowers.
I reflected in the solitude of the panoramic twilight sky.
Perceiving that you had paused in your flight too, I embraced you.
Running I could not capture you, but upon meditation you were mine.
Oh Wisdom, you are unexcelled in beauty, and I regret I hurried so long.

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19 thoughts on “BEAUTIFUL BLOOMS – PROMPT #44

  1. Congratulations Sara and Iris! Two beautiful poetic journeys 🙂

  2. Henrietta Choplin on said:

    Oh my goodness, I LOVE your selections!!!!! Congratulations Sara and Iris!!! Hen

  3. I love your descriptions of New Orleans, Sara and I’m in agreement with your last line. Beautifully written!!

    Striking images leading us down your path to wisdom, Iris, this is crafted so wisely. So enjoyed.

    Congratulations to both of you bright, shining blooms!

    Good picking, Marie and Walt! Smiles! 🙂

  4. Congratulations Sara and Iris! Enjoyed your poems very much.
    Thank you for the wonderful prompt, Walt and Marie.

  5. Because of comment chaos I read more than commented this past week. These were two of my fav’s ! Congratulations Sara and Iris. Great choices, Walt and Marie!

  6. Beautiful choices!

  7. Thank you Walt! I am stunned to be chosen among such a list of wonderful artists and clever contributions to your prompt. Overjoyed, I must be dreaming!!! I would curtsy but cannot find it in emoticons.

    I salute you Sara. “MAY ALL MY ROADS LEAD ALWAYS TO OCEANS” is a perfect finish to a lovely journey. Good choice Marie.

  8. Wonderful choices! 🙂

    Sara, I loved taking your life’s journey with you, and I echo your last line in my own life. Oceans, always.

    Iris, we are reading Proverbs with our kids, and your poem rings so clear, and so true. Loved this ethereal journey.

  9. Perfect choices!

  10. claudsy on said:

    Ah, girls, you both deserve kudos. Beautifully written and well worth remembering and reading again later.

    Sara, your descriptions place the reader beside you on the road. Iris, you write for all of us who ignore the need to pause long enough to catch up with what we’re looking for.

    Wonderful choices Marie and Walt. Great job, all.

  11. How do Walt and M.E.do it? They always get it right. Beautiful pieces, for sure.

  12. Both wonderful! Congrats, ladies.

  13. Excellent choices! Congratulations to Sara & Iris !!

  14. Yes, great choices! Congratulations to Sara and Iris.

  15. What a happy surprise to wake up to. Thank you all for your continued support and congratulations to you, Iris, for a stunning piece of work.

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