DO NOT OPEN ‘TIL CHRISTMAS – PROMPT #35

Christmas morning. Visions of sugar plums take a seat from all that dancing. The mice are starting to stir, and St. Nicholas visited over night. All else is silent and still. Soon, the excitement will fill the air as wishes are expressed and gifts are opened. But who gets what? Check the tags… For this Christmas morning and the week that follows, write a short poem that could fit on a gift tag. Write it to someone, for something, or a wish you want to express. Merry Christmas…and what’d you get me?

Marie Elena’s Gift:

For Santa Wojtanik

Enjoy the milk and cookies –

I baked them all myself.

Be good to little Sophie,

Love,

Marie Elena Elf

 

Walt’s Tagline:

For Marie:

Poetry comes to you
in blips and blurbs,
the ‘burbs of Toledo
are brighter for the gift
of words you give to the world.

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Responses

  1. Poetic Bloomings Avatar
    Poetic Bloomings

    Walt, thank you so much for the sweet sentiment! Merry Christmas to you, and to our Poetic Bloomings family!!

    Marie Elena Elf

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Love yours Marie, so sweet and I’m in total agreement with Walt. A VERY Merry Christmas to you both (and being New Year’s Eve today), Happy New Year! Warm “Hannah,” smiles all @!

  2. The Happy Amateur Avatar
    The Happy Amateur

    To Poetic Bloomings.

    A happy family,
    My poetic loomings
    Have led my path to thee.

    May poems by the dozen
    Bloom, nurtured from within!

    With love,
    your distant cousin.

    P.S. May I come in?

  3. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
    Henreitta Katie Choplin

    (I have not yet learned proper poetic form)

    Christmas Gift

    A silent night in
    a mystical, magical air
    of depth and darkness,
    Where,
    A star twinkled in
    a mystical, magical air
    of warmth and brightness,
    And,
    I felt him there in
    a mystical, magical air
    of Love and lightness…..

  4. pmwanken Avatar
    pmwanken

    a piku for all…

    God’s Gift

    a baby
    born
    to give you life

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Beautiful, yes.

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Graceful truth. ❤

  5. God’s Gift (a Christmas piku) « echoes from the silence Avatar
    God’s Gift (a Christmas piku) « echoes from the silence

    […] for Poetic Bloomings “Do Not Open ‘Til Christmas” Prompt, to write a poem that would fit on a […]

  6. Ellenelizabeth Cernek Avatar
    Ellenelizabeth Cernek

    Lune

    crimson golden glass
    lifted high
    toasting peace on earth

  7. Linda H. Avatar
    Linda H.

    To my loving daughter

    I have so many gifts to give you but
    how does one wrap guidance and care?
    How does one put ribbons and bows on love?
    I can’t gift box time or thoughts or prayers.

    Each day your breath, voice, and laughter
    are glorious God-given gifts, music to my ears.
    I want to give you the world this Christmas day,
    wisdom in all its forms, but it appears

    you are more interested in the Bruno Mars cd
    so here it is wrapped in red with a golden star–
    when you play it, please remember that I, too,
    love you “just the way you are”.

    1. Linda H. Avatar
      Linda H.

      I hope that isn’t too long.

    2. Linda H. Avatar
      Linda H.

      please change last line to: think you’re amazing just the way you are.

      Thanks!

    3. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Sweet tribute.

      1. Linda H. Avatar
        Linda H.

        Thanks. When she forgets she is a teenager, she is still my sweet little girl 😉

    4. Shannon Smith Lockard Avatar
      Shannon Smith Lockard

      My daughter is eleven tomorrow…I can relate. Lovely.

    5. vivinfrance Avatar
      vivinfrance

      Heartfelt sincerity shines through this poem.

    6. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      That is so sweet, Linda. She’s so lucky to have such a loving and grateful mother. Blessings to you!

  8. Dyson McIllwain Avatar
    Dyson McIllwain

    The gift of love presented
    in the presence of hearts,
    no matter the distance
    a treasure in every instance.

    Happy Christmas to all!

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Beautiful, Merry Christmas to you and yours!

  9. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Some Holiday Tags

    No need to wonder
    who the attached gift is from.
    Note botched wrapping job.
    —————————————–

    To: Freddy
    From: Aunt Pat
    Here’s your present,
    you little brat.
    —————————————-

    Handle this package
    carefully–
    delicate
    crystal nestled in silver
    to be worn as heart.

    Sara

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Lol, and lovely.

    2. Linda H. Avatar
      Linda H.

      I love your first one 🙂

  10. MiskMask Avatar
    MiskMask

    Dear
    Santa,
    All these treats
    are just for you.
    Minced meats, sourdough,
    and custard bread to keep
    you jolly, fat and well fed.
    With love and good cheer we have
    apples for the reindeer,
    and inside the flask
    warm spicy nog
    will warm you
    all night
    long.

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Your Santa is well loved!

  11. Connie Peters Avatar
    Connie Peters

    Poets, I give to you encouragement
    To reveal life by providing poetic clues
    To give wisdom wrapped in word packages
    To inspire by letting your imagery candles shine

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Oh, so sweet!

    2. Linda H. Avatar
      Linda H.

      Nice one, Connie.

    3. Shannon Smith Lockard Avatar
      Shannon Smith Lockard

      wonderful

    4. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      Such a sweet sentiment and gift, Connie! Thank you!

  12. Linda H. Avatar
    Linda H.

    To: Self

    Here is a decorative Christmas tin to place fears, doubts and worries in.
    (yeah, I know…it wasn’t good to eat all the cookies to empty the tin
    but tis far better to experience a one-day sugar high and temporary caloric upheaval
    than an entire year of stress. Stress is by far the greater evil.)

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Yes, desserts is stressed spelled backwards!

      1. vivinfrance Avatar
        vivinfrance

        in othe rwords, it’s good to eat pud.

    2. Shannon Smith Lockard Avatar
      Shannon Smith Lockard

      Love!

  13. Linda H. Avatar
    Linda H.

    Dear Mailman,
    Please accept this gift of gratitude
    for braving the elements to bring my mail.
    I think you are just great (and thanks for
    not being like that Fed Ex delivery man
    who just throws computers over the gate.

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Me too!

    2. Shannon Smith Lockard Avatar
      Shannon Smith Lockard

      LOL and I too am grateful for the mailman.

  14. Shannon Smith Lockard Avatar
    Shannon Smith Lockard

    Best present I received
    wasn’t under the tree
    or in a sock
    but unwrapped and filled
    with glee,
    four smiling faces
    embraced
    thankfully.

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      Precious!

    2. Linda H. Avatar
      Linda H.

      awwww…very sweet

  15. Shannon Smith Lockard Avatar
    Shannon Smith Lockard

    For Ashlyn

    Wishing for days to pass like hours
    hours to pass like minutes
    minutes to pass like seconds
    so you could meet the world.
    Eleven years later I
    wish for days to pass like years
    hours to pass like months
    minutes to pass like days
    seconds to pass like hours
    so I can keep you in our little world.

    1. Henreitta Katie Choplin Avatar
      Henreitta Katie Choplin

      So sweet; they grow up sooo quickly…

    2. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      I’m so with you, Shannon, my heart feels this one.

  16. Mary Mansfield Avatar
    Mary Mansfield

    A Gift of Perspective

    A lesson
    Taught mother to child:
    A world view
    Through softer
    Eyes, to see the poetry
    Where others cannot.

    1. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
      Hannah Gosselin

      I love the gentleness of this poem, Mary. If I might, this reminds me of my husbands sweet grandmother who is so encouraging to my expression through poetry. She suggested that I see things that others don’t. Thank you for bringing her to mind this morning with your lovely poem. Smiles~

  17. markwindham Avatar
    markwindham

    To: My Wife

    Boxes, paper, ribbons and bows,
    Gifts inside designed for bringing cheer.
    Though none enough to ever truly show
    The love felt today and throughout the year.

    To: My Son

    No longer a boy with childish likes
    For toys, trains and make believe things.
    The love felt for the adorable, growing tike
    Burgeons with pride at what the man will bring.

    To: My Daughter

    Still young enough to be my ‘baby girl’,
    Full of magic, joy and Christmas excitement.
    Innocence bundled in every dancing twirl,
    Which I cling to with tearful amazement.

    1. Linda H. Avatar
      Linda H.

      these are all nice but the first one is my favorite

  18. janeshlensky Avatar
    janeshlensky

    Tardy on this one. I wrote it but forgot to post it. Merry Hoho’s to all.

    From Santa’s Ghost-shopper,

    This is the gift that I got you to give me,
    wrapped and bowed, lovingly selected
    with me in mind for you. Thank you
    for such sweet thoughts.

  19. vivinfrance Avatar
    vivinfrance

    Thank you hosts for all your prompts
    and care for our poetic souls.
    My gift to you is these poor words
    to express my gratitude.

  20. seingraham Avatar
    seingraham

    A belated gift for all here, especially Walt and Marie Elena, words and feelings too difficult to wrap but none-the-less heartfelt and sincere just the same – thankfulness for all you do, for being here, for accepting me as part of this warm and comforting community … gifts beyond price or compare … blessings. Thank you.

  21. mikegrove7 Avatar
    mikegrove7

    Tag, You’re It

    A promise made in spirit of the season.
    I’ll won’t betray or perform acts of treason.
    I will commit,
    ‘cause, “Tag, You’re It”
    You give me purpose, love, hope, rhyme and reason.

    by Michael Grove

  22. mikegrove7 Avatar
    mikegrove7

    Eggnog

    A small glass of delicious eggnog please,
    to help us set our weary minds at ease.
    Let’s add a dash of nutmeg right on top,
    and celebrate our love that will not stop.

    By Michael Grove

  23. Hannah Gosselin Avatar
    Hannah Gosselin

    ~SOULMATE~

    After all is done
    My most valuable present
    Is surely your heart.